托福满分范文 第1篇

Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughouttheir lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer:staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples tosupport your opinion.

托福写作满分作文范文：

Even though I have lived in the same house, in the same neighborhood, in the same city my entirelife, I know I would be happy living in a variety of places. Moving would expose me to newpeople, new weather, and new housing.

Even if I were to move to another part of my city, I would encounter new people. Eachneighborhood has a distinct personality. When I move to that neighborhood, I would meet theshopkeepers and residents that shape that personality. I may even adopt part of their manner asmy own so I could be recognized as part of that community.

If I want to encounter different weather patterns, I would have to move beyond my city. Where Ilive now, it is the same temperature all year. I would like to go to a place where there are fourseasons so I can experience really cold temperatures. I would like to walk in the snow and perhapsgo skiing. I could learn winter sports if I lived in the north.

Now, of course, I live with my parents in their home. It is a one story house built around acourtyard where our family spends a lot of time. If I were to move, I would like to live in an apartment on a very high floor so I could see all around me. I could also meet my neighbors in the elevator and we could get together for coffee in my apartment.

The more I move the more I would experience change. I would meet new people in everyplace Ilived; I could move to sample countries with four seasons or even a continent like Antarcticawhich only has two. Wherever I lived, I would experience living in housing particular to that area.I would then be a citizen of the world, wouldn't I? Could you call me a foreigner if I calledeveryplace my home?

托福满分范文 第2篇

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

作文范文：

Although students stay with their classmates all time in school, parents are a more importantinfluence on a child’s success. I disagree with the statement that classmates are a more importantinfluence on a child’s success in school, because of the reasons as follows.

First of all, parents are the people who understand their own children best. They know thechildren’s good sides and bad habits. They can correct the children’s bad idea and make them giverid of the bad habits. So children can found a good base to get success in school. But classmatescan not do these work.

The other reason is that parents have experiences on a lot of matters. If children have problems,parents can give them their experiences to help them solve problems. If parents have no similarexperiences, they still can give their children some advice and make them avoid the wrong

directions. Classmates can also give children some help, but they do not have more experiencesthan parents. So their influence is less than that of parents.

Parents also have other important influence on their children’s success in school. Parents mayanalyze something in different ways and have different opinions from children. Classmates alsocan have different opinions on one thing, but they are at the same conditions with each other,their opinions may be similar or narrow. Children can learn more comprehensive knowledge abouton thing from their parents.

So, based on the above discussion, I think it is clear that parents are a more important influencethan classmates on a child’s success in school.

托福满分范文 第3篇

写作中最主要的三种句型：因果论证句、比较对比句和假设条件句。下面就来看一下因果论证句具体该怎么写!

因果论证句

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

There's no need for the government to help those who can help themselves.

One of the major reasons why some individuals are reluctant to seek help from the government is that people have formed the impression that the officials are too busy to care about their private matters.

why后面是结果，一个完整的句子.

People will reduce car use in 20 years.

One of the reasons why the use of private cars can and will be reduced in 20 years time is that diversified measures a being taken by the government to limit the use of cars.

Today's parents do not understand their children as well as parents did 50 years ago.

The complexity and diversity in the modern world may be a major contributor to generation gaps.

托福独立写作“无话可说”怎么办

当我们开始准备托福独立写作的时候，很多考生会面临着一个问题，就是“无话可说”，特别是如果遇到一个自己不熟悉的题目，加之时间又紧，头脑就一片空白了，想到的也只是空泛的东西。在这种情况下，即使是中文也难以写好，更谈何用英语去表达呢。

对此办法就是要善于联想到一些具体的事实、具体的例证以及具体的现象。那么问题来了，具体的事实、具体的例证以及具体的现象到底有哪些呢?考生们的内心是崩溃的，人生过于平淡，阅历太少，书到用时方恨少，那么考生们该如何来准备这些具体的例子呢?

我们就拿《北极星》教材为例，来给大家分析一下如何从平常的阅读中积累托福写作素材～

写作真题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years’ time, people will lead a more leisurely life.

写作思路

Main point: Disagree

Sub point1:工作压力比现在更大。

Sub point2:环境问题更为严重。

Sub point3:任何事物更新换代的速度更快，意味着20年之后我们需要不断的学习，更加努力的去适应时代的发展，不被时代所淘汰，所以不是更休闲了，而是更累了。

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第三版北极星4 Unit5 ----Longevity: Too Much of a Good Thing?

A doubled lifespan

If scientists could create a pill that let you live twice as long while remaining free of infirmities, would you take it?

If one considers only the personal benefits that longer life would bring, the answer might seem like a no-brainer : People could spend more quality time with loved ones; watch future generations grow up; learn new languages; master new musical instruments; try different careers or travel the world.

The workplace

For most people, living longer will inevitably mean more time spent working. Careers will necessarily become longer, and the retirement age will have to be pushed back, not only so individuals can support themselves, but to avoid overtaxing a nation’s social security system.

But such changes would carry their own set of dangers, critics say. Competition for jobs would become fiercer as “mid-life re-trainees” beginning new careers vie with young workers for a limited number of entry-level positions. Especially worrisome is the problem of workplace mobility, Callahan said. “If you have people staying in their jobs for 100 years, that is going to make it really tough for young people to move in and get ahead,” Callahan explained.

讲解如何运用

同学们注意，以上内容给了我们非常好的素材(尤其是标绿部分)。当我们要证明sub point1. 工作压力比现在更大。你能想到用什么方法来有效的论证呢?Maybe你会说以后大家都是高学历者(well-educated)，那么工作的竞争压力自然会更大。这个理由大部分同学都能想得到，那么怎么让你的素材比较novel? 赶紧学学以上段落吧!!!

20年后我们会变得更加长寿，这就意味着我们的退休年龄push back了，在这种年轻人不断进入职场，而年长者延迟退休的情况下，是不是竞争压力要更大了呢?同时篇章中许多expressions是我们都可以学习的，eg. mid-life re-trainees人到中年再就业者;a limited number of entry-level positions有限的招聘岗位;

写作真题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is a waste of money for government to fund space travel and exploration.

写作思路

Main point: Disagree

Sub point1: 目前地球存在的问题：环境污染越发严重，能源日益减少，人口激增等。所以我们有必要去探索宇宙，找到新的居住地，发现新能源。

Sub point2: Space exploration是非常practical的一项投资，不能说是a waste of money.

Sub point3: 诚然当今社会还有很多没有解决的问题需要政府来处理。这些问题可能比宇宙探索、旅行迫切多了，但是这并不意味着政府做这件事情就是浪费钱。因为如果政府不做就没有人有这个能力了。

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第四版北极星3 Unit3----Exploring the Red Planet

MARS: OUR NEW HOME?

If you think you’d like to live on Mars, you may have that possibility by 2023. A Dutch company called Mars One will soon advertise for people interested in colonizing Mars. If you have all the necessary skills—and there are a lot—you could be one of the first colonists to Mars. Are you ready for the challenge?

As a future colonist in one of the six teams, you will go through years of training. If your team is the first team to travel to Mars, your main responsibility when you get there will be to build a place where humans can live. The atmosphere on Mars does not have enough oxygen for humans, and the land is not good enough to grow food. Colonists will have to create an artificial environment on Mars where there is air to breathe and land to farm. Scientists know Earth-like conditions can be simulated on Mars because something similar has already been done in Antarctica, where humans cannot survive outside the created environment.(对火星环境的具体描述&科学家们如何将其改造的适合人类居住。)

Humans may have another problem in space as well. It takes nearly a year to get to Mars, so travelers would be without the Earth’s gravity for a long time. In addition, Mars One astronauts will not return to Earth. Their mission is to start a colony that can support itself. So, the colonists will live the rest of their lives there. When a human lives in an environment without gravity or with low gravity for a long time, the systems in the body weaken. For example, muscles and bones lose strength. The heart also gets weaker. The blood in the body gets thicker, and it becomes more difficult for the heart to push blood through the body. Luckily, spinning the spaceship can create artificial gravity, and artificial gravity can ease these problems.(针对情况：我们的身体可能会遇到挑战，例如失重。)

It also will be difficult for Mars colonists to be isolated, far from home, living in small spaces, and seeing the same people over and over. It is important to come up with solutions to possible problems before anyone actually goes on a Mars mission. Colonists with depression could put the mission in danger. Fortunately, a few years ago, a joint Russian and European project called the Mars500 Mission took place. It studied people’s reactions to long-term space travel by following six astronauts in a Mars-like environment. The astronauts spent 520 days in this environment and only had contact with their bosses and their families. The six astronauts “returned” to the Earth in good physical condition—and still talking to each other. Scientists viewed the Mars500 Mission as a great success because they were able to see how the astronauts handle emotional and physical stresses. Surprisingly, the greatest emotional problem was boredom. The greatest physical problems were not getting enough sleep and gaining too much weight. (针对情况：在太空中我们的心理可能会遇到什么挑战，会不会出现心理疾病呢…)

讲解如何运用

关于这个话题，同学们脑海中应该会浮现中一幅幅宇宙探索的画面，例如近期的《火星救援》(The Martian)相信大家在这个话题上比较能达成共识，那就是政府花钱探索宇宙并非浪费钱的一种行为。

但是如何解释清楚呢?思路已经给大家了。现在我们回到[Sub point2: Space exploration是非常practical的一项投资，不能说是a waste of money.]

同学们想一下，当我们要证明宇宙探索的实效性、是有前景的，是不是应该展现给考官一个画面：在探索宇宙的过程中政府正在克服一个个unavoidable 困难，政府正在为寻找下一个家园而努力着，所以怎么能叫浪费钱呢?!

想清楚这点之后，不够哦!接下来怎么写呢?探索宇宙过程中具体会遇到什么难题呢?又是如何去解决的呢?英文要怎么表述啊?感觉好多专业术语不会讲，怎么办? !!!

同学们，那么请再仔细看看以上篇章中标绿的部分，是不是心中豁然开朗了呢，这篇文章简直就是为托福写作量身定做的!

520 days in this environment and only had contact with their bosses and their families. The six astronauts “returned” to the Earth in good physical condition—and still talking to each other. Scientists viewed the Mars500 Mission as a great success because they were able to see how the astronauts handle emotional and physical stresses. Surprisingly, the greatest emotional problem was boredom. The greatest physical problems were not getting enough sleep and gaining too much weight. (针对情况：在太空中我们的心理可能会遇到什么挑战，会不会出现心理疾病呢…)

写作真题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In the past people were more friendly than they are today.

写作思路

Main point: Agree

Sub point1: 现在人生活节奏快，每天都非常忙碌，没什么时间关注他人，自然不如以前的人friendly。

Sub point2:当今社会诈骗行为很多，加上媒体的曝光，人们的防范心理很强，对陌生人极其警惕;而以前人们对陌生人是比较友善的。

Sub point3:当然不能否认当今社会中依然有很多friendly 的行为举措，很多人也极其warm-hearted.但是整体来说是以前的人比较friendly。其中有个比较重要的因素是现代人相对selfish,尤其在中国 One-Child Policy的影响下,独身子女相对会比较自私。

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第四版北极星3 Unit2----The Consequences of Fraud

(如下篇章内容围绕思路中的sub point2展开)

TYPES OF FRAUD

(注意：本文通篇可用，就不标注重点内容)

The telephone is also used by con men and women who try to impress people with amazing prizes and offers. Sometimes they will call and ask for your banking information so that they can put prize money into your account. If you do not trust a person contacting you by phone, ask for his or her name, business phone number, and company address. You can then contact the company yourself to learn whether or not you have reason to be suspicious.(电话诈骗有碰到过吗?在我们的日常生活中是不是很常见?这是不是让你不再那么相信陌生人了呢?“骗子”这个词可以用con men and women来表达，了解吗?所以本段内容也可以作为素材。)

Modern communications technology has made it easier for people to trick you with fake deals and requests for information. When you go online, you find many websites offering products and services such as medical treatment and legal advice. How can you know if something is real? Fortunately, there are many organizations that can help you make sure that companies and individuals are treating you with honesty. If you believe that you are involved in a case of fraud, be sure to report it and ask for help.

讲解如何运用

写作真题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The more money a person has, the more he or she should give away to the charities

写作思路

Main point: Disagree

Sub point1: Money越多在一定程度上意味着能帮助越多的人，而当今社会还有很多人温饱问题都解决不了，所以应该出更多的钱给慈善机构。可以用Bill Gates的例子。

Sub point2:对自身也有好处，自己在帮助他人的过程中可以更好的认识自己，变得更加快乐，更加自信，更加知道生命的意义。

Sub point3:可以让这个世界更加美好。许多问题的出现都是因为贫富差距过大导致的，如果富了之后会拿更多的钱出来帮助他人，那么这个世界必将更加美好。

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第三版北极星4 -Unit6----Give and Learn

This 1979 Nobel Peace Prize winner spent many years working with the extremely poor in India. Though not a rich person, Mother Teresa was able to personally help thousands of people. disagree with the following statement? The more money a person has, the more he or she should give away to the charities.

This business person is one of the richest people in the world. Bill Gates is also a very generous philanthropist and has created a foundation focusing on education and healthcare.

This movie star is reported to give away 1/3 of his/her income to several charities. Angelina Jolie is also the Goodwill Ambassador for the United Nations High Commission for Refugees.

This wealthy talk show host has created a foundation “to support the education and empowerment of women, children and families”. Oprah Winfrey has also established a school for girls in South Africa.

讲解如何运用

本文的展开需要有大量的实例来说明做慈善是必要的，本单元中的Angelina Jolie, Oprah Winfrey, Bill Gates, Mother Teresa都是慈善的好例子。

托福写作时“无话可说”乃是因为平时缺乏素材积累，输入太少呐。对于素材，同学们要注意以下几点：一是素材最好是英文表达，不然考试时，即使心中满满的例子写的时候却发现好多意思不知怎样用英文表达;二是素材在表达上不宜太难，否则难以理解和记忆。三是好的素材要熟悉到位，同学们面对好的素材不能只是记在本子上或是存在电脑中，一定要记在脑子里!如何确定已经记在脑子里了呢?找个一起考托福的小伙伴，把例子用英文讲一遍给他/她听;或者找张纸，写一遍。当你说完或者写完，对方听了或者看了惊叹你的表达或者例子好棒时，说明你是真的掌握了这个例子!不然没有记在脑子里，再好的素材也是枉然~

托福满分范文 第4篇

考试流程介绍

通常托福写作考试是接在托福口语考试后面，口语考试考完以后，会进入写作考试的界面。托福写作可分成两部分，即综合写作和独立写作：托福写作首先是综合写作20min，然后是独立写作30min。

考需要了解的问题：

综合托福写作的界面是什么?

独立托福写作的界面又是如何的?

左侧是给出的论述题目，右侧的空格输入内容，限时30分钟，300词，若提前答完并且检查无误以后，可以交卷。

考试注意事项介绍

综合写作

输入过程：

1.输入阅读部分

提升快速阅读能力，

首先文章主干(文章观点+论点)，其次理解阅读细节部分，

阅读技巧：开头段快速看背景，有利于理解文章观点，中间段看论点后细节部分，帮助更好理解文章论点

2.听力能力

捕捉听力文章主干(容易)，捕捉听力反驳细节(难度)，尽量的听到每一句反驳细节(更大难度)

3.输出文章

描述阅读和听力对应关系，描述听力内容，熟悉模版。描述过程中总结精炼阅读内容。

托福满分范文 第5篇

Some people believe that educatingchildren alt**ether will benefit them. Others think intelligent children shouldbe taught separately and given special courses. Discuss both views and giveyour own opinion.

写作就像盖房子一样，关键词与句式只是钢筋结构，起着框架性的作用，换句话说，光掌握关键词与句式是不够的——要想在托福独立写作中取得高分，准确的用词、过硬的语法基础都是不可或缺的，希望大家能够在平时多加积累与练习，为备战托福打下坚实的基础。

托福满分范文 第6篇

In the reading passage, the author raises that reading less literature has caused unfortunate effects on the reading public, the cultural general and literature itself. On the contrary, the professor strongly contradicts with it.

To begin with, according to the reading passage, the author mainly talks about reading less literature cannot provide readers with intellectual stimulation. By contrast, the lecturer disagrees with it and she reasons that a book doesn’t have to be literature to be intellectually stimulating. Science books, history and political analysis aren’t literature but they are often of high quality and some of those books are just as creative and well-written as novels and poems. So don’t assume that someone who isn’t reading literature isn’t reading a good book.

To be followed, the reading passage indicates that the culture is in decline. However, the speaker holds the opposite opinion and she says that people are not just spending less time in literature and they are spending less time with books in general. However, today, there are many culturally valuable material that isn’t written such as a brilliant song and good movie. People are not wasting their time when they listen to good songs and watch good movies. Those non-literal activities will not lower the culture. Even some of those creative forms can speak more directly to contemporary concerns than literature does.

Lastly, the writer in the reading part says that it is the readers’ fault to lead to the less support for literature. By comparison, the listening material presents a totally different opinion that it is the authors’ fault because today’s literature is intended to be difficult to understand. So don’t assume the earlier’s generations of readers would read a lot modern literature today.

满分托福综合写作范文

In 1990, new rules and guidelines were adopted in the United Kingdom that has changed the whole field of Archaeology in that country. The new guidelines improved the situation in all there areas discussed in the passage.

First, the new guidelines state that before any construction project can start, the construction site has to be examined by archaeologists to see whether the site is of archaeological interest or value. If the site is of archaeological interest, the next step is for the builders, archaeologists and local government officials to get together and make a plan for preserving the archaeological artifacts, either by building around them or by excavating and documenting them properly before the construction is allowed to proceed.

Second, an important part of the new guidelines is a rule that any archaeological work done on the construction site will be paid for by the construction company not by the government. The construction company has to pay for the initial examination of the site, and then for all the work carried out under the preservation plan. This is a whole new source of financial support. The funding from construction companies has allowed researchers to study a far greater range of archaeological sites than they could in the past.

Last, the new guidelines provide a lot of paid work for archaeologists, work that didn’t exist before. Expert archaeologists are now hired at all stages of the process to examine the site for archaeological value, then to help draw up the preservation plan to do the research in a professional scientific manner and finally to process the date and write reports and articles. The increased job and career opportunities in Archaeology have increased the number of professional archaeologists in Britain, which is now the highest it’s ever been.

托福满分范文 第7篇

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students tolearn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

托福写作满分作文范文：

Many people in the world share a belief that grades make students work hard. I agree with theabove statement because I believe that high grades are more helpful in getting a bright future.

One of benefits of the high grade is that it promotes a learner's interest. Interest is the bestmotivation to encourage students to learn. If a learner has a good score in English, he will find thatEnglish is a beautiful language. For example I love to learn math, because it brings me happinesswhen I get a high score in a math exam. When I went to university, I select mach as my second reason is that schools give us a chance to learn knowledge, why not try our best to getit. In our lives these knowledge has important effect on our mind which need be wise by an by. Inaddition, self-credit may be instruct by good marks. It is also important to our life.

A further solid argument for the high grade is that it means a good future career. Many companieswould rather hire students who are with high grades.

As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that there are main reasons why I support thatgrades encourage students to learn. Firstly, high scores spring learner' interests. Secondly, studentsget self-credit through it. Furthermore, A good job may wait these students who have high marks.

托福满分范文 第8篇

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specificexamples to support our answer.

作文范文：

Some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time, can laterbecome valuable experiences. I cannot agree with them more. There are numerous reasons why Ihold confidence on this opinion, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

Difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In the course of our life, we are going to facenumerous difficulties and obstacles, and each difficulty will help us grow up, and become avaluable lesson for the future. A toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows howto walk, and a child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. In addition,only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. We will never appreciateanything that comes so easy. Difficulties can make us feel stronger and be more confident for the future obstacles.

Furthermore, difficulties in our work can help us gain more experience and knowledge. Most ofthe times we can gain knowledge and experiences faster through experiencing difficulties in ourlife and trying to find a solutions to the perplexities that we face. There is a famous saying, nopain, no gain. For example, when we take on a new job that we do not have much experience in,the first few weeks can be extremely painful and we may feel enormous pressure and difficulties.

And we will try our best to adjust, to learn and to think, how to do this job better. The moredifficulties we feel, the harder we try to acquire the skills and knowledge to overcome it. Learningand this stage is extremely efficient and our problem-solving skills well increase. After weovercome more and more problems, we can become an experienced worker in this field and willbe able to take on more challenges. We will never fear that we will face the same kind of problemagain. This means that we have accumulated valuable experiences for the future.

In a word, a difficult experience is a gift that life gives us. We should appreciate it and take it as aprecious opportunity to gain knowledge and experience about our study, work and life.

托福满分范文 第9篇

Task:“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

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It is universally acknowledged that hard work is indispensable to success. Scientists toil for years before they make a major discovery. Students study for years before they are accepted by a top university. Self-make people work for a long time, even all their life before they make a fortune. However, less well-known is the essential role that luck plays in achieving one's goals. It is often luck that turns years of hard work into success: people discover and invent things with the help of luck, and so do they become famous and find jobs.

First, luck has helped a great number of people invent and discover things. Sir Alexander Fleming experimented with antibacterial substances for nine years before he discovered penicillin. He went through laborious trial and error, but it was on account of luck that he looked at the mold on a piece of cheese and got the idea for penicillin there and then. Benjamin Franklin had been trying to prove his idea that lightning and electricity is the same thing, but it was only in flying a kite that he proved it and the concept of a lightning rod happened to strike him.

Also, luck helps people become famous. Let us consider young authors. Many work hard to learn to write. For example, they take writing classes. Besides, they work at menial jobs so as to survive and gain experience. Then one day a lucky writer may have piece of writing published and attract public attention. Or the writer meets an editor at the right time and place. Years of continuous writing brings the writer to the door of success, but one lucky chance, like the shot in soccer, eventually helps him or her reap success.

Finally, luck has helped many people secure jobs. One may spend much time writing and sending resumes, reading recruiting ads, and going to job interviews. One may pond the pavement for a long time before getting a job. However, it is with luck that a job hunter meets the person who will offer a position to him or her, or learns of a vacancy that is not advertised. Being at the right place at the right time often helps one land a job, and this has all to do with luck. One can hardly succeed without hard work, but hard work without luck often leads to nothing. Luck has a great number of people find success. In fact, luck goes hand in hand with hard work.