BEC商务英语email范文 第1篇

邮件的开头

Thank you for contacting us.

如果有人写信来询问公司的服务，就可以使用这句句子开头。向他们对公司的兴趣表示感谢。

Thank you for your prompt reply.来自

当一个客户或是同事很快就回复了你的邮件，一定记得要感谢他们。如果回复并不及时，只要将“prompt”除去即可，你还可以说，“Thank you for getting back to me.”

Thank you for providing the requested information.

如果你询问某人一些信息，他们花了点时间才发送给你，那就用这句句子表示你仍然对他们的付出表示感激。

Thank you for all your assistance.

如果有人给了你特别的帮助，那一定要感谢他们!如果你想对他们表示特别的感激，就用这个句子，“I truly appreciate … your help in resolving the problem.”Thank you raising your concerns.

就算某个客户或是经理写邮件给你对你的工作提出了一定的质疑，你还是要感谢他们。这样你能表现出你对他们的认真态度表示尊重及感激。同时，你也可以使用，“Thank you for your feedback.”

BEC商务英语email范文 第2篇

在邮件的结尾

在邮件开头表示感谢一般是表示对对方过去付出的感谢，而在邮件结尾处表示感谢是对将来的帮助表示感谢。事先表示感谢，能让对方在行动时更主动更乐意。

Thank you for your kind cooperation.

如果你需要读者帮助你做某事，那就先得表示感谢。

Thank you for your attention to this matter.

与以上的类似，本句包含了你对对方将来可能的帮助表示感谢。

Thank you for your understanding.

如果你写到任何会对读者产生负面影响的内容那就使用这句句子吧。

Thank you for your consideration.

如果您是在寻求机会或是福利，例如你在求职的话，就用这封邮件结尾。

Thank you again for everything you've done.

这句句子可以用在结尾，和以上有所不同。如果你在邮件开头已经谢过了读者，你就可以使用这句话，但是因为他们的帮助，你可以着重再次感谢你们的付出。

BEC商务英语email范文 第3篇

Declaring A Visit

宣布访问

Declaring A Visit

Dear Mr. / Ms,

Mr. William Taylor, President of our Corporation and Mr. James Rogers, Marketing Manager, would like to visit Beijing to continue our discussions on a joint venture. They plan to leave in the second half of April and stay in China about a week. Please let us know if the planned visit is convenient for you and what itinerary you would suggest. If the time of their visit is agreeable, will you kindly request your Embassy here to issue the necessary visa?

Yours faithfully

BEC商务英语email范文 第4篇

运输Transportation

INDIGO CMPANY LIMITED

85 Victory Street, Manila

The Philippiness

13 June 200#

Mr. Li Mingyang

Export Manager

Unitech M & T Co. Ltd

963 Tianmu Road, 14th Floor

Shanghai 20xx70

China

Dear Mr. Li：

Our order ： 50 Electric Drills

As it is now more than two months since we opened a letter of credit in your favor, We should like to know exactly when you could arrange shipment of the goods. Your prompt response will be highly appreciated.

Sincerely.

Marco Fillmore

Managing Director

BEC商务英语email范文 第5篇

复函与报价

RepliesandQuotations

Macer

24th November 20xx

Foshan Sweethome Installations Ltd.

2 Xiyue Street

Foshan, Guangdong

China

Dear sirs,

In reply to your letter of 21st Novermber, We have pleasure in enclosing a detailed quotation for bathroom showers.

Besides those advertised in the Builers' Joural , our illustrated catalogue also encolsed shows various types of bathroom fittings and the sizes available. Most types can be supplied from stock. 45-60 days should be allowed for delivery of those marked with an asterisk.

Building contractors in Hong Kong and Chinese Taiwan have found our equipment easy to install and attractive in apperance. Naturally all parts are replacable. and our quotation includes prices of spare parts. We can allow a 2% discount on all orders of US$6,000 in value and overf, and a 3%on orders exceeding US$20,000.

Any orders you place with us will be processed promptly.

yours faithfully.

Francesco Marani

Sales Manager

Via , 24/a

Castellon Spain

Tel：(964) 560001 Fax (964) 560002

BEC商务英语email范文 第6篇

商务英语考试教你如何写邮件(1)

邮件的开头

Thank you for contacting us.

如果有人写信来询问公司的服务，就可以使用这句句子开头。向他们对公司的兴趣表示感谢。

Thank you for your prompt reply.来自

当一个客户或是同事很快就回复了你的邮件，一定记得要感谢他们。如果回复并不及时，只要将“prompt”除去即可，你还可以说，“Thank you for getting back to me.”

Thank you for providing the requested information.

如果你询问某人一些信息，他们花了点时间才发送给你，那就用这句句子表示你仍然对他们的付出表示感激。

Thank you for all your assistance.

如果有人给了你特别的帮助，那一定要感谢他们!如果你想对他们表示特别的感激，就用这个句子，“I truly appreciate … your help in resolving the problem.”Thank you raising your concerns.

就算某个客户或是经理写邮件给你对你的工作提出了一定的质疑，你还是要感谢他们。这样你能表现出你对他们的认真态度表示尊重及感激。同时，你也可以使用，“Thank you for your feedback.”

商务英语考试教你如何写邮件(2)

在邮件的结尾

在邮件开头表示感谢一般是表示对对方过去付出的感谢，而在邮件结尾处表示感谢是对将来的帮助表示感谢。事先表示感谢，能让对方在行动时更主动更乐意。

Thank you for your kind cooperation.

如果你需要读者帮助你做某事，那就先得表示感谢。

Thank you for your attention to this matter.

与以上的类似，本句包含了你对对方将来可能的帮助表示感谢。

Thank you for your understanding.

如果你写到任何会对读者产生负面影响的内容那就使用这句句子吧。

Thank you for your consideration.

如果您是在寻求机会或是福利，例如你在求职的话，就用这封邮件结尾。

Thank you again for everything you've done.

这句句子可以用在结尾，和以上有所不同。如果你在邮件开头已经谢过了读者，你就可以使用这句话，但是因为他们的帮助，你可以着重再次感谢你们的付出。

商务英语考试教你如何写邮件(3)

十种场合的表达

1. Greeting message 祝福

Hope you have a good trip back.

祝旅途愉快。

How is the project going?

项目进行顺利吗?

2. Initiate a meeting 发起会议，

I suggest we have a call tonight at 9:30pm (China Time) with you and Brown. Please let me know if the time is okay for you and Ben.

我建议我们今晚九点半和Brown小聚一下，你和Ben有没有空?

I would like to hold a meeting in the afternoon about our development planning for the project A.

今天下午我建议我们就A项目的发展计划开会讨论一下。

We’d like to have the meeting on Thu Oct 30. Same time.

十月三十号(周四)，老时间，开会。

BEC商务英语email范文 第7篇

信用证付款PaymentByL/C

International Sports Equipment Ltd. 375 Jiefang Street, Tianjing 30000, China

Tel： (020) 20xx00 Fax： 20xx001

September 12, 200#

Norseman Vehicle Building Ltd.

12 Nobel Street

Stockholm, Sweden

Dear Sirs：

We spoke to your representative, Mr. Bergman, at the international Automobile Expo in Tokyo last week, and he showed us a number of snowmobiles which you produce, and informed us of your terms and conditions.

We were impressed with the vehicles, and have decided to place a trial order for ten of them, your Cat. No SM18. The enclosed order, , is for prompt dilivery as the winter season is only a few weeks away.

As Mr. Bergman assured us that you could meet any order from stock, we have instructed our bank, Bank of China, Tianjing Branch, to open a confirmed irrevocable letter of credit for USD 108,000 in your favor, valid until December 1, 200#.

Our bank informs us that credit will be confirmed by their agents, Scandinavian Bank, Strindberg Street, Stockholm, once you have contacted them, and they will also supply us with a certificate of quality once you have informed them that the order has been made up and they have checked it.

You may draw on the agents for the full amount of the invoice at 60 days, and your draft should be presented with the following documents：

Six copiesof the bill of lading

Five copies of the commercial invoice, c,i,f. Tianjin

Insurance Certificate for USD 118,800(A. R.)

Certificate of origin

Certificate of quality}

The credit will cover the invoices, discounting, and any other bank charges. Please fax us confirming that the order has been accepted and the vehicles can be delivered within the next six weeks.

Yours faithfully

QIAN Jin( Mr. )

Purchase Department

Encl.

BEC商务英语email范文 第8篇

you call me at my cell phone number(+86-137 ..-..)

for your reference/information… 供参考

sum up… 总结如下…

discuss the above schedule and let us know the results请检讨以上计划并把结果告诉我们

review and advise with any comment 请检讨，如果有意见请回复

is most/very important.

and thanks for reminding. 知道了，谢谢提醒。

see the attached pictures first 请先看附件的照片

see the attached technical data. 请看附件的技术数据

below with thanks.

52. Please review and advise 请检讨并回复

all below with thanks!

review and confirm by reply/return. 请检讨并回复确认

note and (proceed) accordingly 请相应照办

would like to proceed as follows 所以，我们想按下列计划进行

confirm you understand. 请确认你能理解

on this information, I need the following to happen:基于这一点，我需要以下事情能做到

is a very urgent matter-please make sure the above happens.这是非常急迫的事情--请确认以上能做到

you very much for you assistance(支持)

is good news-thanks for the help with regards to this matter

comment.请评价

and best regards,

64.缩写

LPG=液化气

LNG=液化天然气

Rgds=regards

IMT=同时

BP=商业计划

MOQ=最小的订购批量

BEC商务英语email范文 第9篇

询价Inquiries

cathay Business Machines Import & Export Corporation

20xx Century Boulevard Pudong, Shanghai 20xx06, China

Tel： Fax：

September 5, 20xx

Universal Software, Inc.

2468 Oak Street

San Francisco CA94105

Ladies/Gentlemen：

From the latest issue of Computer World we have learned about your Business Guide software package for IBM-compatible PCs. We would like to find out more information about the package because we think it might be appropriate to the needs of our customers.

Would you mind answering the following questions?

1. Is the program an integrated package, or does it come in several modules?

2. Can the user swith from function to funtion without down-loading?

3. Can the user customize the billing periods?

4. Is there any provision for security?

5. What is the price of the software?

If you have a brochure that describes the package, we would appreciate you sending it along.

Sincerely yours.

SHEN Husheng(Mr.)

Import Manager

BEC商务英语email范文 第10篇

包装Packing

Forward Bicycle Co. Ltd

987 Jiangnan Road, Kunshan, Jiangsu, China

Tel： (0520) 500000 Fax ： (0520) 500001 Zip Code： 215300

February 1, 199#

Gulf Commercial Center

P. O. Box 376

Abu Dhabi

U. A. E

Attention ： Mr. Y. Mohammed

Dear sirs,

The 12,000 cycles you ordered will be ready for dispatch by 17th December. Since you require them for onward shipment to Bahrain, Kuwait, Oman and Qatar, we are arranging for them to be packed in seaworthy containers.

Each bicycle is enclosed in a corrugated cardboard pack, and 20 are banned together and wrapped in sheet plastic. A container holds 240 cycles; the whole cargo would therefore comprise 50 containers, each weighing 8 tons. Dispatch can be made from our works by rail to be forwarded from Shanghai harbour. The freight charges from works to Shanghai are US$80 per container, totally US$ for this cnsignment, excluding container hire, which will be charged to your account.

Please let us have your delivery instruction.

Yours faithfully,

Kang Zhuang

General Manager

BEC商务英语email范文 第11篇

一、内容的清晰性

发送商务信函的目的在于建立商务往来关系，就某一细节进行商讨，努力达成共识，以便促进一项商务活动的开展。要达到这些目的，首先必须保证阅读者能够清楚了解写信人的意图，迂回或闪烁其辞的话语会让读信人产生不信任，甚至会怀疑对方的语言表达能力，对进一步开展商务活动很不利。模棱两可的话轻则阻碍读信人对信函意思的理解，重则会对发函方造成不必要的损失。例如: As to the steamers sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco，we have bimonthly direct services. 此处bimonthly 有歧义，可以是twice a month 或者once two month.故读信人就迷惑了，可以改写为We have two direct sailings every month from Hong Kong to San Francisco.

翻译要保留原文的清晰度相当重要。由于在较为正式的场合中，为了将一概念定义完整和清楚，英文常常用关联词将几个短句并在一起形成一个长句，而中文无法照样只用一句话来翻译，即使这样译了也很难达到通顺和自然。这时，我们就采取将长句按特定的事情发展的顺序拆分成两个或两个以上的小句子的方式来翻译。必要时还要增加或省略一些词语，让整段文字结构更合理、内容更清楚。例如: The prices stated are based on current freight rates，any increase or decrease in freight rates at time of shipment is to be the benefit of the buyer，with the seller assuming the payment of all transportation charges to the point or place of delivery.例句中以一个介词with 来分界，译为“合同价格是以运费计算，装运时运费的增减均属买方。卖方则承担至交货地的全部运费”。在原文中with 分句是一个状语，翻译时采用中国人平铺直叙的思维方式，用分述的方式把这个句子拆成两句，清楚地表达了原文的语言信息。

是不是一封书信只要包含了全部关键信息就可以成为一封好的书信了呢? 拟信人还应注意语言组织的条理性，或按事情发展的先后顺序，或按各要素的重要性排序编写。东扯一句，西扯一句的写法必定会影响文章的清晰度。

二、表达的简洁性

简洁就是用最精炼的语言来表达意思，在商务信函中言简意赅就是为了方便高效率沟通与工作。能用一个字表达的不用一个词组，能一个词组讲清的事就不用讲成一句话。商务信函不用因顾及礼貌而开头就说“I hope you are well”( 近日可好?) ，天气也从不在此中提及。我们用“now”不用“at the same time”; 用“though”而不用“in spite of the fact that”……。形容词虽然可以表达友好、满意、歉意等感情，但只是在十分必要的情况下才出现。中国人在写英文信函时经常会出现一些不必要的重复，比如: “true facts”、“next time in the future”这样的词语读者能懂，但是会对这种不地道的说法嗤之以鼻。

中文就简洁这一点在很多情况下具有优势，商务信函中最能体现这一优势的是一些客套而必要的敬语，比如: “we are looking forward to your early reply”，翻译成中文就五个字: “盼早日回复”; “with all kind regards，I remain”，中文为“祝好”。像“regards”、“wishes”这一类词，都不用按照原意翻译，祝好的英文句子大多用中文的俗语代替。

三 、词语的专业性

BEC商务英语email范文 第12篇

其他付款方式OtherModesofPayment

K oppermann GmbH

Schubert strasse 16, K-2618, Hamburg, Germany

Telefon： 1 41 61 00 00 Telefax： 0 41 61 00 01

2 April 200#

Ms Ni Minzhi

3W Co. Ltd.

3B Guihua Road

Shanghai 20xx33

China

Dear Ms Ni,

Order No. 9953

Thank you for your order which has been completed and is being sent to your today.

As agreed we have forwarded our bill, No, 2782 for with the documents to your bank , Industrial & Commercial Bank of China, Caohejing Branch, Shanghai. The Draft has been made out for payment 30 days after sight, and the documents will be handed to you on acceptance.

Yours sincerely

H. Koppermann

Managing Director

BEC商务英语email范文 第13篇

定购与确认OrdersandAcknowledgment

Glory THE GLORY GLASS CO. LTD.

108 Laoshan Road Qingdao Shangdong China

Tel： (0532) 500 000 Fax： (0532) 500 001 Zip： 266000

September 30, 200#

Hamzza A. Sesay

Managing Director

The Sesays' International Co. Ltd.

101 Long Street

Capetown

South Africa

Dear Mr. Sesay：

We thand you for your fax of September 27, together with your orders and . has been added to your Christmas order and is being made ready for immediate dispatch. We regret that we are still unable to supply ^v^Luxury^v^ champagne glasses, but we are sending you ^v^Bliss^v^, the alternative marked on your order.

We were very gratified to learn of the success you are having with our glassware , and we shall be pleased to discuss your reques for more favourable terms. When our representative, Mr. Zhao, calls on you in the new year, he will make you an offer which we feel sure will meet with your approval.

we send you our warmest congratulations on your increased business with us and look forward to further increases to our mutual benefit.

Yours faithfully

Rui Xuezhen

Sales Manager

BEC商务英语email范文 第14篇

保险insurance

GLOBAL INSURANCE(ASIN)LTD.

5th Floor, 600 Xinshiji Boulevard, Pudong, Shanghai 20xx20

The People's Republic of China

Tel： Fax：

24 November 200#

Miss. Liao Wen

Liaison Office

Ganjiang Potteries Ltd.

Shanghai Representative Office

444 Jingling Road #202

Dear Miss Liao：

I am sending the claims form you requested in your fax of 23 November 199- and we will consider the matter once we have full details.

I think I ought to point out that this is the fourth time you have claimed on a shipment. Thought I appreciate that your products are fragile, and that in each case the goods have been shipped clean, it would be in your interest to consider new methods of packing. I agree that the claims have been comparatively small, but in future you will have to ask your customers to hold consignments for our inspection to determine the cause of damage. I should also mention that further claims affect your premium when the policy is renewed.

Yours sincerely

Daniel Cooke

Greater China. Region

BEC商务英语email范文 第15篇

十种场合的表达

1. Greeting message 祝福

Hope you have a good trip back.

祝旅途愉快。

How is the project going?

项目进行顺利吗?

2. Initiate a meeting 发起会议，

I suggest we have a call tonight at 9:30pm (China Time) with you and Brown. Please let me know if the time is okay for you and Ben.

我建议我们今晚九点半和Brown小聚一下，你和Ben有没有空?

I would like to hold a meeting in the afternoon about our development planning for the project A.

今天下午我建议我们就A项目的发展计划开会讨论一下。

We’d like to have the meeting on Thu Oct 30. Same time.

十月三十号(周四)，老时间，开会。