托福独立写作总结句 第1篇

不论哪一种写法，最终我们都需要把理由展开成一段话，而展开的时候我们往往需要举例子。我们当然也可以编造例子，这也是很多同学会采用的方法，毕竟对于大部分学生来说，由于备考时间很短，平时又没有太多的积累，编例子是更加现实的做法。但是如果我们想平时多积累一些写作素材的话，我们也可以从下面几个方面入手。

很多同学一看到小说就觉得压力很大，毕竟读一本小说，尤其是英文小说还是十分吃力的，更别提把小说的情节应用到写作中了。但其实我们并不需要读整本小说，我们也可以采取看书籍摘要的形式。这种摘要各种视频平台都有很多人在做，一本经典书籍5-10分钟就可以搞定。可谓是投入小、产出高。下面我来列出几段我的真实出分的满分范文的主体段，这些主体段展开的时候都使用了经典的小说。当然，我们在写的时候不一定做到面面俱到。如果有些内容记不清了可以写的含糊一些。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

这是一个典型的今昔对比题，这种题目我一般会从经济、科技等角度来写现在比过去有哪些进步，以及这些进步是如何影响结论的。我的立场是现在比过去更容易保持健康。第一个理由就从经济角度来写过去人们生活太惨了，很难保证健康。展开的时候我突然想到了日本著名作家芥川龙之介的小说《罗生门》里面的情节，因为正好看了这个故事的总结。

这个小说主要写的是在一个战争年代，人们食不果腹，尸横遍野。一个被主人赶出来的仆人饥肠辘辘。他正巧走到一个到处都堆满死尸的地方，这个地方就是罗生门。

他壮起胆子，想进去找到一些财物。结果他竟然发现有一个衣衫褴褛的老妇人正在从一个年轻女子的死尸头上拔头发。强烈的道德感让他对老妇人的行为充满了鄙视。老太婆解释说她只是想用这些头发做个头套谋生罢了，而且辩解道被她拔头发的女人活着的时候为了生存也没少骗人。于是，在道德和生存之间摇摆的仆人大悟。既然是为了生存，还有什么不能干的呢？然后他就抢了老太婆的衣服逃走了。通过这个故事我们可以看出，在社会动荡的时候，人们连口饭都吃不上，何谈健康呢？

看美剧真的对提高英语水平有特别大的帮助。我们既可以通过美剧提高口语、听力，如果我们够用心的话，也可以从中积累大量的口语和写作素材。所以我强烈推荐想要出国学习的同学们把部分刷国内的很多没有营养的电视剧的时间用来认真看一些经典的美剧。下面我会跟大家分享几个我在真实考试中使用过的美剧的情节。

Imagine you have two friends who deal with problems in very different ways. One of your friends believes that laughter and taking things lightly (not too seriously) is the best way to find a solution for most problems. Your other friend believes that it is better to be serious and not take things lightly, even when dealing with very small problems. Which approach do you prefer? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

看到这个题我立刻想到了我最喜欢的美剧《硅谷》。这部美剧真的是十分经典。最打动我的地方就是这群年轻人的执着和乐观。理查德真的很有企业家的精神，不论遇到什么困难，都没有想过放弃，投资人抛弃他、竞争对手打击他、队友离开他、不理解他都没有让他变得悲观。反而，总能以一种戏谑的方式挺过去。

I insist that an optimistic attitude can make a person more creative. On the contrary, if we can't always smile when we encounter a problem, then it is likely that even if we can think of a solution, it is only after a very painful struggle. In this case, even if the problem is eventually solved, it will have a huge negative impact on our physical and mental health. I would like to use a classic American drama as an example to prove this point. One of my favorite American shows is Silicon Valley, which tells the story of a group of young entrepreneurs who started a business in an incubator in Silicon Valley. Although these young people are very talented and exceptionally good at product development, they encountered a variety of problems in the process of starting their business due to fierce competition, lack of investors, and endless lawsuits. But no matter what difficulties they encountered, these young people were able to face them with an optimistic attitude, and in the end they solved every problem with ease. Without this optimistic attitude, they could not have successfully started their own company and developed a new generation of Internet to bring great convenience to people's lives.

如果大家觉得美剧有太多季感觉浪费时间的话，也可以在各种视频平台去看博主的讲解视频。尤其是当我们看情节比较复杂的剧集的时候，看讲解还是很有必要的。光靠我们自己看既费时间，也很难保证我们能够看懂。一般影视剧博主讲解的时候都是每集挑精华讲几分钟，这对我们来说也足够总结例子了。对于美剧的爱好者来说，也可以把台词都下载下来，然后一边看视频，一边认真的学习台词，甚至是跟读，把不懂的词和表达都收集起来。这样不仅能增加我们的词汇量，还能让我们在写总结的时候写的更加地道。

毫无疑问，电影也是很好的收集写作素材的渠道，因为每一部经典的电影背后都是一个很好的故事。如果我们能够通过看电影都了解一些故事，我们自然在输出的时候会更有话说。

Imagine you have two friends who deal with problems in very different ways. One of your friends believes that laughter and taking things lightly (not too seriously) is the best way to find a solution for most problems. Your other friend believes that it is better to be serious and not take things lightly, even when dealing with very small problems. Which approach do you prefer? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

这个题真的和《Life is beautiful》这个电影十分契合。面对巨大的苦难，这部电影的男主剧却能够让自己的孩子相信纳碎集中营是一场游戏。这种乐观的态度真的不是一般人能有的。虽然他最终死在了黎明之前，他的乐观让他的孩子成功的活了下来，并且没有蒙上巨大的童年阴影。

First of all, no one can deny that laughter and optimism are contagious, so if we can laugh when we encounter problems, we can naturally bring a lot of joy and inspiration to those around us. I would like to use a very classic movie about World War II to explain this point. Two years ago I watched a movie called Life is Beautiful, which won three awards at the 71st Academy Awards, including the Best Actor Award. The hero of the film was an Italian Jew. Although he had many difficulties in his life, he always kept a smile on his face and looked at all his problems with optimism. Fortunately, he succeeded in solving one problem after another and found a beautiful wife, who gave birth to their son. But since the hero was a Jew, he was taken to a concentration camp by the Nazis. Even in the inhumane concentration camp, the hero tried to take care of his child by all means and lied to his son that the concentration camp was just a game and that those who follow the rules of the game would eventually win a tank. His son naively believed everything his father said. In the end, due to the hero's optimistic attitude, his son managed to get out of the camp, while he was brutally murdered before the Germans surrendered. Imagine if the hero had not been able to look at everything he experienced with a smile and an optimistic attitude, his son and many others around him would have died in the camp and not lasted until the Nazis failed. (270 Words)

这段字数比较多，主要是因为展开的时候给出了很多电影的细节。如果我们也想在考试的时候能够写出细节，平时就要多看评分高的电影，然后尝试去用英语总结情节概要。其实满分作文语言上的要求并不高。大家从这段话能拿满分也能看的出来。所以我们在总结的时候不用追求辞藻华丽，应该多去注意细节和逻辑。

平时我们在看新闻的时候也可以多积累一些名人的故事，或者我们也可以看一些名人的传记。当然，更快速的方法是直接在视频平台找名人的生平总结。如果觉得英文的看起来比较吃力，可以搜索中文的内容，然后自己先把汉语的总结写好，最后再翻译成英文。

Foods and drinks that contain high levels of sugar, salt, or fats have harmful health effects when consumed in great quantities. Some people believe that governments should make these unhealthy foods and drinks more expensive by taxing them. The tax (money paid to the government) would discourage consumption of unhealthy foods and drinks and raise money for future health-care costs. Other people believe that consumers buying foods or drinks should not pay any additional tax, even if the food or drinks are unhealthy. Which viewpoint do you agree with, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

写这个题的时候我立刻就想到了巴菲特的例子，因为我刚好看过巴菲特的访谈里面讲到了他特别喜欢吃汉堡、喝可乐。他每天早上上班都会在家附近的快餐店买同样的快餐，每天还要喝可乐。甚至每年开股东大会的时候桌子上也得放着可乐。毕竟是是可口可乐的股东。对于这样的有钱人来说，无论这些不健康的食物的价格如何上涨，他们的饮食习惯都不会受到任何影响的，所以对于不健康的食物加税对于富人来说没有意义。

For the rich, their choice to eat foods with a lot of sugar, salt and fat is in many cases a matter of personal preference. Even though affluent people can financially choose whatever they want to eat, there are still many rich people who are particularly fond of fast food. For them, even a government tax on unhealthy food will not affect their eating habits in any way, because the fluctuation of food prices will have no effect on them. They simply do not care to spend thousands of dollars a month or more on food, which means raising taxes on unhealthy food will not have the same effect on the rich as the government is trying to achieve. I'd like to use the example of Warren Buffett to prove this point. He is the most successful value investor in the world and was the richest man in the world many times. In terms of wealth, he can eat any delicious food he wants in the world, but he insists on buying a burger and a bottle of Coke on his way to work every morning. In fact, he has kept this habit for decades. He even drinks Coke every time he hosts a Berkshire Hathaway shareholder meeting. This example is a good illustration of how taxing unhealthy foods makes absolutely no sense. (223 Words)

这段带上主题句和解释的部分是223词，例子的引出、例子内容、例子总结共104词。主要是我在写的时候例子的细节给的不够多，所以不得不在解释上多加了一点儿。如果我们实在不想说理的话可以多给一些细节。或者最后加一些假设。我们可以用虚拟语气来写即使政府对于不健康的食物征税了，巴菲特也不可能因此改变习惯的。像他这样的有钱人不可能因为汉堡可乐的价格上涨了一些就改掉坚持了几十年的习惯。

我们平时在练习的时候要多去搜索重大历史事件的新闻或者百科，然后把细节整理起来后写成英文的总结。更重要的是整理好之后，我们要想清楚我们整理的历史事件的总结能够跟哪些话题的文章可以结合。最好再找几个题目进行结合练习，防止我们平时总结的很好，但是考场上完全想不起来用。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

既然今昔对比的题目要去比较现在和过去的不同，我看到这个题目的时候就想去写现在比过去的医疗技术更加先进，所以有大型传染病爆发的时候，现在人才更有可能保持健康。然而，在医疗技术极其落后的过去，遇到类似的事件的话，人们不可能保持健康。结合2020年的新冠病毒，我想到了100年前的大流感。那场流感人们几乎没有任何反击的能力，也没有引起政府的足够重视，再加上医疗技术落后，几千万人因此而丧生。

The second reason to support my view is that with the continuous improvement of medical technology, people's health is now better guaranteed. In contrast, in the past, due to the backwardness of technology, it was very likely that people could not get timely and effective treatment when they got sick, so they could not maintain their health. A good example is the Great Influenza caused by World War I in 1918. This influenza originated in a military camp in Kansas, because a cook in the camp first contracted the virus from contact with poultry. Because this virus was not taken seriously by the . government, it quickly spread from Kansas to the east coast of the United States and eventually to France, from where it then spread throughout Europe. Although the 1918 flu was known as the Spanish flu, that flu actually killed many people all over the world. According to media reports, the number of deaths around the world may have reached 50 million, which is more than the number of deaths in World War I. The main reason behind this is that the medical technology at that time was so backward that the virus could not be effectively controlled after it spread. Now, on the contrary, although the new coronavirus was rampant around the world in 2020, it was quickly and effectively controlled because medical workers now have enough advanced technology to develop a variety of vaccines to control the spread of the virus in a short period of time. As a result, people are now also more likely to stay healthy. (264 Words)

托福独立写作总结句 第2篇

bare one’s heart 袒露心迹

share ups and downs 分享事迹

facilitate communication 促进交流

harmonious relationship form an emotional tie/emotional attachment

和谐的关系是一种情感纽带/情感依恋

Harmony spurs efficiency. 和谐激发效率

By emotion, I refer to joy, sensitivity, pleasure, anger and so on. If people can share emotions, they can form an emotional tie among them, which will link their feelings. This emotional attachment is beneficial to harmonious relationship as well as to the fulfillment of a project. For example, my good friend and I are on good emotional terms. We share sorrow and happiness. As a result, our lives become happier and more enjoyable.

托福独立写作总结句 第3篇

A willing ox 任劳任怨的人

selfless contribution the stat of being recognized a sense of belonging provide satisfaction motivation for further improvement

无私的贡献被认为是一种归属感，为进一步改进提供了充足的动力。

By acknowledgement, I mean the state of being recognized. When we are recognized by our company (school/ college/ group/ community or society), we can experience a sense of belonging. The feeling of being recognized provides satisfaction and motivation for further improvement. Hence, when a person can be identified by others, the subsequent outcome can be beyond imagination. Bill Gates, through luck, diligence, and team spirit leads Microsoft to splendor. And he distributes his wealth generously, which won him a name: the greatest philanthropist around the world. His success is acknowledged by our society. And his satisfaction index can be higher than that of any other peers.

托福独立写作总结句 第4篇

crave for/long for/yearn for/pine for creatures of desire 欲望之物

meet our needs to one’s heart’s content 尽情享受

fulfill one’s dream satisfy one’s vanity 满足虚荣心

Desire refers to our hope or inclination. We are all creatures of desires. We try our best/endeavor to satisfy our desire and vanity: the desire to relax to our heart’s content; the desire to gain more knowledge; the desire to earn big money and the desire to be loved. To meet one’s desire is to enjoy a happy life. Hence, we are all willing to sacrifice our time and efforts to make our heart’s desire fulfilled.

托福独立写作总结句 第5篇

be protected against failure 防止失败

damage a sense of security 破坏安全感

facilitate the harmony of society Safety is the top priority.

促进社会安全和谐是重中之重

Safety refers to the condition of being protected against failure, damage, error, accidents, harm, et cetera. Safety is usually our main concern.

托福独立写作总结句 第6篇

undergo ordeal 经受磨难

first-hand experience 亲身体验

accumulation of knowledge 知识积累

Experience is wealth. 经验是财富

Experience is a helmsman guiding our voyage. 经验是指导我们航行的舵手

Other people’s experience can be of help. 它山之石可以攻玉

The proof of the pudding is in the eating. 事物的好坏需要经过实践检验

Experience refers to the accumulation of knowledge or skill that result from direct participation in events or activities. Our experience is a wealth that can enrich our life. When we enjoy modern educational facilities and indulge in the prestigious academic atmosphere, we can harvest valuable educational experience. When we undergo the training of expertise experiences serve as an enlightenment brightening our career path.

托福独立写作总结句 第7篇

money- conscious 重金钱的

cut down the price steady development Waste not, and want not. 不浪费，不短缺

Husband energy, and cut emission. 节能减排

To save is to earn Our society is economy-driven.节约型社会

A penny saved is a penny earned. 积水可以成河

Being economical means using the minimum of time or resources necessary for effectiveness. Being economical or money- saving is vital to people as an English proverb puts it that “ a penny saved is a penny earned”. When we achieve economy in expenditure, we are in fact making money work for us. When we bargain and cut down the price, we are money-conscious; when we take bus instead of driving our own cars, we are reducing the cost for petrol.