托福独立写作没写总结 第1篇

通过上面的原文介绍我们可以清晰地看到，托福综合写作的评分主要从以下三方面进行评估。

1. 内容：

5分标准在内容上一点折扣都不能打，必须完整又正确地写出听力部分的所有细节，并且要把听力和阅读的逻辑关系理清。4分文章要求稍微低一些，但仍需要将听力中的内容较大程度地呈现到文章中，可以有一些细节上的问题，比如内容细微的遗漏、模糊不清、不完全精准等。3分的要求就更低了，换言之内容上欠缺的更多，如听力反驳阅读的三个点中，有一个大点完全没有听到或听懂，文章中的信息大多是不准确的、不完整的、不细致的。

2. 结构：

综合写作的结构从大方向上来说是没有问题和难度的，一般采用4段式，第一段Introduction, 接下来三段分别写出听力反驳阅读的三个方面。那么难度在哪里呢?同学们务必要有的意识是段落和段落之间的过度和衔接是否有效，是否正确，是否容易让人理解。这就需要同学们把连接词或者写作模版提前准备好，使句和句，段与段之间的关系有逻辑地清晰地表达出来。

3. 语言：

托福写作模板：独立写作29分模板

29分托福独立写作模板：

支持段落1

支持段落2

(支持段落3、可省)

让步段落 +重申自己坚持原观点

开头：

Perhaps no issue in this world is as significant to (ex:people's success) as (ex: education).Despite various responses people may have on the topic that ( ex:which thing should the education aim at).I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that for careers should have primary consideration.)

Asked what...will do to ..., some (ex:teachers) may answer: . Admittedly, plays a vital part in (ex:person’s success and happiness).But actually, I think that...

适用于agree or disagree的问题 。

Adj(Marvelous) as it looks at first sight, (ex：modern technology) does not (ex:help students learn information at a greater speed and with higher efficiency ) in most cases; or it could work towards the opposite direction which led (ex:students to lose their initiative to learn and explore.)

一上来直接问题的转述：(ex：Can we know a person through the types of friends he has)?

当然，可以转述为 Asked ,

Different people will give different answers to this question from their own characters, emotional concerns and even educational , when it comes to me, I firmly believe that...

这个适用于所有问题。。观点对比型(live in small town or live in big city?)

甚至来个简单的， I support the idea that...

以上都、最后一句来一个：

+To better illustrate my point of view, I list several reasons as follows.

中间部分：

支持段落1：To begin with,.... 中间需要举例一下：For instance，

支持段落2：Furthermore,... 中间有需要的话再举例一下 There is no better illustration than the example of...

支持段落3,：没有让步段落了就 Last but not the least, 有让步段落就 In addition,...

让步段落：Admittedly, Granted, I tend to agree(concede) that: in some cases(conditions), it may be true that....These cases, however, are rare and therefore are too weak to convince me to walk away from my position .

(When the advantages and disadvantages of X and Y are carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that…… ) I still firmly believe that.

结尾：

All in all, for the reasons listed above, we can safely conclude that...

托福备考之写作中的加分词句

托福写作相对于雅思写作以及其他国外考试的写作来说，要有章可循得多。之所以这么说，是因为托福写作的评分标准可以给考生提供一个比较可模仿的范式。要想得到较高的托福写作高分，字，句，段，篇四个部分一点都不能放松。今天，我们主要学习一些“亮点”的托福写作中可以使用的字词。

在此之前，大家可以和我一起看一个比较有意思的写作调侃，内容如下：

越来越多的人开始骑自行车。

学沫版： More and more people begin to ridebicycle.

学渣版： A growing number of people begin tocycle.

伪学霸： Cycling attracts more and more people.

学霸版： Cycling is adding its appeal for manycitizens.

学神版： Cycling gains its popularity.

给自己定位完毕，我们来学习今天的几个词语。

1. Spawn v. 产卵，滋生

2. Attribute v.归因于

3. Draw on 借鉴

4. End up doing something 最终会...

5. Reflect on 认真思考

想必以上几个词很多同学都认识，可是，下面的几句写作常用句中，你知道如何使用以上的词汇吗?

1. 这样的做法会产生很多社会问题。

2. 成功很多情况下是由于团队的共同努力。

3. 借鉴历史的教训十分重要。

4. 如果不保护环境，人类最终会灭绝。

5. 认真思考过后我发现这个观点是不成立的。

我们来看看建议的5个句子：

1. This conduct would spawn a lot ofsocietal problems/

2. Success, in most cases, can beattributed to the team’s concerted efforts.

3. It counts to draw on history.

4. Human beings would end up being extinctif they did not protect environment

5. Reflecting on this statement carefully,I found it unconvincing.

托福写作范文：环境的破坏

托福写作真题题目：

Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

托福写作范文：

While the past few centuries have witnessed increasingly better quality of human life, human activity is doing more and more harm to the Earth. Natural resources are being depleted and pollution is being created as a result of development of technology. Natural areas are being damaged as a result of urban expansion to populate more people.

First, we harm the Earth by using more and more natural resources. If we fell too many trees at one time to build

houses and make paper, or if we cut down trees before they grow to maturity, they can hardly grow back in time. As worrisome as overcutting of trees is overfishing. With improved technology and greater drive for money, fish of all kinds are being over hunted, reducing the biomass of some fish to the verge of extinction. Whaling seems a most irksome issue. While most countries argue against it, some countries go whaling to extremes. We often take it for granted that we have unlimited natural resources and use them in a wasteful manner, bringing about great losses.

Second, we damage the Earth by producing pollution in all forms. Factories pollute water and the air. Vehicles pollute the air. Nuclear-related and electronic products are playing an increasingly big role in polluting the air, especially when we dispose of related waste carelessly. We take it for granted that Nature can help clean everything, but it can not.

Third, expanding towns and cities are taking up more and more land. As populations flood to cities, new houses and stores have to be built to accommodate their needs. Land that was good for farming has now become factories and apartment buildings. We seem to take it for granted that we have unlimited land, but we do not.

In summary, human activity seems to be going at the expense of the Earth in various ways. However, our survival depends on the Earth, including natural areas and natural resources, so we have to venerate the Earth.

托福独立写作没写总结 第2篇

所谓的一边倒指的是我们明确的支持题目当中的某一方，通常的文章结构就是三个理由或者两个理由一个让步。而让步既可以承认我们支持的观点的不足，也可以承认我们不支持的观点有好处，但是最后一定要回到我们支持的观点更好上来。如果大家更喜欢一边倒的写法的话，我建议最好采用两个理由或者两个理由加让步的形式。

很多同学比较纠结开头的写法，有的可能是不太确定写啥，还有的可能是特别想写的很出彩，不敢轻易下笔。其实开头最重要的就是要亮明自己的立场，别的都是次要的，所以我们一定要在考前准备好现成的开头，并且搞清楚如何针对不同的题目进行调整，保证不论见到任何题目都能够在2-3分钟之内把开头准确的砸上去。千万不要担心开头背一个通用的模板会影响自己的成绩。根据以往的出分来看，可以放心的告诉大家，考30分的同学开头也是使用的模板，而且并不复杂。

下面是2020年10月14日实考的满分作文中使用的开头模板，基本分为四大块儿：背景+争议+观点+过渡

In this day and age, the issue whether [1] has caused a hot debate, dividing people into two camps with opposite opinions. Despite the fact that some people tend to hold a positive attitude, arguing that [2], others view it differently. Weighing both sides of the argument, however, I find it hard to escape the conclusion that [3]. Reasons and examples that could explain my stance are as follows.

尽管这个开头看起来非常套路，但是既然可以拿到满分，而且只有三个空，其实可以只剩两个空，还是非常值得学习的。下面我们结合2020年10月14日的考题来具体填一下：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In modern times, grandparents cannot give their grandchildren useful advice because the world of today and the world of 50 years ago are too different. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

看到题目之后，我的建议是先一边看题一边把模板打上去。如果到空的地方没有想好，可以打完再填。但是如果想好了可以顺道填上。

In this day and age, the issue whether grandparents can still offer their grandchildren valuable advice has caused a hot debate, dividing people into two camps with opposite opinions. Despite the fact that some people tend to hold a positive attitude, arguing that basic principles of life hardly change, others view it differently. Weighing both sides of the argument, however, I find it hard to escape the conclusion that grandparents can still give us some useful advice. Reasons and examples that could explain my stance are as follows.

独立写作对于主体段展开部分的最重要的要求就是要有逻辑性。这也是很多同学做的不好的地方。究其原因就是同学们平时没有总结出比较通用的展开的结构并且把这种结构落实到纸上，形成具体的模板。于是到了考试的时候时间一紧张就只能瞎写，自然就没有逻辑，或者是写的字数很少，或者写了很多但是不知道写的是啥。可见掌握套路是多么的重要。

根据上面的结构，我们主体段的模板可以参考下面的：

It is important or beneficial for sb. to do A in order to X. This is because A 对于 X 的重要性或者好处。Conversely, 如果不做 A 对于 X 的坏处。A good case in point is Eg1's experience. 2-3 句阐述例子。The story of Eg1 perfectly illustrates the importance of A.

当然了，这只是一个非常理想的情况，如果由于某些原因不能保证正反说理和例子同时存在，可以酌情去掉。比如没有例子可以只有正反说理，只不过各说 2-3 句即可。类似的，如果没有反面说理，可以例子或者正面的说理多说一句。极端情况下，主题句和说理都不会写，那直接上例子呗。

下面我们结合一个题目来展示一下如何使用上面的主体段的模板：

Agree or disagree, it is better for children to choose the jobs of their parents.

It is important for us to choose a job that suits our interest in order to distinguish ourselves in a particular field. This is because not only can we have much higher work efficiency by devoting ourselves to a job that interests us，but we are also more likely to come up with innovative ideas. Conversely, following in the footsteps of our parents without thinking of what fascinates us is likely to lead us to nothing but mediocre life. A good case in point is Kobe, a shooting guard who plays for the Los Angeles Lakers of the National Basketball Association. He is one of the most influential basketball players in the history of NBA, not solely for his success in leading the Lakers to three consecutive NBA championships, but for his courage to choose a career that he is obsessed with. The story of Kobe perfectly illustrates the importance of personal interest in one's career development.

following in the footstep of sb

他是一名医生，希望他的儿子能步他的后尘。 He is a doctor and expects his son to follow in his footsteps.

她步她父亲的后尘,在电视台工作。 She works in television, following in her father's footsteps.

distinguish

他很小时就在英国戏剧界崭露头角。 He distinguished himself in British theatre at a very early age.

作为运动员她已享有盛名。 She has already distinguished herself as an athlete.

重点句式

相信很多同学目前在写独立写作的时候采用的依然是经典的五段式，中间两个理由段外加一个让步。让步的作用说的直白一点就是在我们找不到第三个理由没话写的时候帮我们凑字的，毕竟每个题目都找三个理由真的不是那么容易。到头来很多同学都是瞎凑。当然，有一个让步也显得我们的文章的论证更加完整一些。

让步的结构就是过渡+我们的立场的不足/反方立场的优势+重申我们的立场的优势并且强调我们的选择更好。根据这个结构，我们可以写出下面的模板：

I recognize that there are some people who may still be reluctant to take my side after reading my reasons and examples above. There are some of my detractors who may say that [1]. However, I insist that [2], so this argument does not weaken my point.

下面我们结合2020年12月13日实考的满分范文来看一下如何应用这个模板

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Educating young people about healthy food is important and should not be the job of families alone; it should also be the responsibility of schools to teach their students about healthy eating. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I recognize that there are some people who may still be reluctant to take my side after reading my reasons and examples above. There are some of my detractors who may say that it is the school's responsibility to impart knowledge to students, not to teach them to develop healthy eating habits. However, I insist that only when students have a proper diet can they have enough energy to study, so this argument does not weaken my point.

结尾段我们只要简单的总结一下文章中的理由就可以了。具体写多长可以根据所剩的时间来决定。如果时间不够，我们完全可以只写一句话，再次声明自己的立场就成了。如果时间比较充足，当然可以总结一下正文中的理由。如果写完还有时间的话，不妨发起一个倡议或者引用一个名人名言之类的。具体如何安排，得看自己的实力了。

我们一起来看一个简洁明了的结尾模板：

In conclusion, based on my reasons and examples, we can clearly see that [1].

下面我们结合2021年11月17日的满分范文来看一下这个模板该如何使用(这个题目真的很长)：

Foods and drinks that contain high levels of sugar, salt, or fats have harmful health effects when consumed in great quantities. Some people believe that governments should make these unhealthy foods and drinks more expensive by taxing them. The tax (money paid to the government) would discourage consumption of unhealthy foods and drinks and raise money for future health-care costs. Other people believe that consumers buying foods or drinks should not pay any additional tax, even if the food or drinks are unhealthy. Which viewpoint do you agree with, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

In conclusion, based on my reasons and examples, we can clearly see that a government has every reason to tax unhealthy foods and beverages.

have every reason to do sth这个短语大家可以常用，其实也可以加入到结尾模板中来，这个短语还是很地道的。

到此为止，我把托福独立写作一边倒写法的每一段的结构、模板都讲清楚了。但是我希望大家更重视结构，开始练习的时候可以多使用模板，但是随着水平的提高争取慢慢摆脱模板的束缚，或者最少自己学会个性化自己的模板。千万不要生硬的套用模板，到最后弄巧成拙。

思路分析(1-3分钟)

见到这个题很多同学想要同意，但是同意并不好写。比如，有的学生给的理由是医疗技术已经足够先进了，而且现在也不像过去那样有那么多残酷的战争了。但是这些理由对于大部分学生来说都很难展开成150字左右的一段话。在选思路的时候，千万不要轴，尤其是那些自认为有一些基础的同学。千万要记住，正着不行就反着想。毕竟找现在社会的问题还是很容易的，随便一找就一大堆。比如，现在人压力很大，这是影响人们生活质量的很重要的因素；其次，现在环境污染很严重，这也极大的影响了人们的生活。这两个东西我相信写起来要容易很多。

主题句(1-3分钟)

第2段–压力的段子

第3段–环境的段子

开头(1-3分钟)

开头=背景+争议+观点+过渡

其实开头部分对于大部分同学来说完全可以直接背个模板，这样考试的时候能节省很多时间。如果实在不想背但是又写不多的话，可以只留下表达自己立场的那个句子就行。这样可以把主要时间都集中在主体段的写作上。

主体段第1段(10分钟)

本段虽然看起来有200字左右，但是其实前一半都是现成的。如果我们平时自己没有积累过类似的段子，那最好不要像这一段一样一直说理，最好1个主题句+2句解释然后尽快开始例子，否则很可能会写的十分啰嗦。而且也不一定非要写200字，一个主体段写150左右其实就够了。总之一定要量力而为。既然这个使用了段子的文章能拿到满分就证明段子的质量肯定是没问题的，而且使用段子这种方法也是可以的。并不会像很多同学担心的那样会被判低分，甚至不给出分。当然前提是我们得自己会扣题。

其实大家仔细读的话这段的人称有点乱，我一会儿用第三人称一会儿又回到第一人称，不过没影响得分。大家最好能统一一下。

I firmly believe that with the advancement of technology, especially artificial intelligence, many of the jobs we do now will be replaced by machines, so people will gradually become less stressed. At that time, people will naturally have more time and energy to focus on their health, which means that it is unreasonable to claim that the most essential improvement on people's quality of life has already taken place.

其实扣题也就是扣了两个句子，但是这两个句子至关重要。实在不会扣题的就想着最后重复一下题目。

主体段第2段(10分钟)

这一段也是类似，前一大半都是环境的段子，最后加上结合题目的连接。

I believe that as society develops further and people's living standards continue to improve, more and more governments will focus on people's health(这里强调将来改进的空间), rather than just emphasizing economic development. And in the future, economic development will no longer be at the expense of the environment, but will rely on the constant innovation of high-tech companies. So, in this respect, it is hard to say that the most important improvements have already taken place. （扣题）

重点表达

Contaminate: to make something less pure or make it poisonous

大部分海岸已受到核废料污染。

Much of the coast has been contaminated by nuclear waste.

Discharge: to send out a substance, especially waste liquid or gas

这个工厂每天排放大量危险的废物。

Large amounts of dangerous waste are discharged daily by the factory.

Outrage: to cause someone to feel very angry, shocked or upset

当地人对轰炸感到非常愤怒。

Local people were outraged at the bombing.

Bow: to do what someone else wants you to do, usually unwillingly

最终政府屈从于公众的压力，被迫对税收进行改革。

Eventually the government was forced to bow to public pressure and reform the tax.

结尾(1-2分钟)

结尾基本就是个模板，把题目直接融合进去就行了。模板部分如下：

To sum up, based on my previous reasons and examples, there is every reason to argue that 这里融合题目, which greatly weakens the given statement.

我感觉现在的托福写作考题越来越具体了。问题问的越来越细。我其实不太喜欢这样的题目，因为问的越具体，我们在写的时候受到的限制就越多。当然，有的同学可能会觉得问的具体的东西比较好写。这就看个人喜好了。这个题我看到的时候没有想到任何一方特别好的2-3个理由，所以就来了个a坏b好的结构。这个写法的优势就是两个东西都能写，而且每一段都可以写不止一个坏处或者好处。这样一来我们能写的东西就多了，也就不用担心没话说得凑字了。之前对这个结构有所担心的同学或者老师们可以放心的去用。虽然这个结构逻辑上不是那么严谨，但是并不影响拿满分。

开头段(108 words)

背景+争议+立场+过渡 开头基本都是这个套路。虽然看起来很low，但并不影响我们拿满分。

第一个理由(201 words)

我上来就抛出了one-week orientation的三个坏处：时间短无法很好的了解大学、针对性不够强、有些学生人多的场合不敢提问。这几个点写完之后实在是没啥话说了，我就编了个例子。其实大家能看出来这个文章写的挺仓促的。很多老师在讲课的时候一般是不推荐同一个主体段给出多个理由的。但是如果真的遇到了没啥特别好的想法的题目，这么写也是不错的选择。多写几个理由又不用展开能很好地减少我们的压力。

另外，这个例子其实也可以更加具体一些。我其实没有写一系列的活动都包括啥活动，也没有明确的说我遇到的问题都是什么。明显就是编的。最后我还很假的说了一个很多其他同学有跟我类似的经历。这其实也是套路，增加字数的同时也能增加说服力。

第二个理由(202 words)

上一段我说了a不好，这一段我就得写b好了。我主要写了两个点：定期的和高年级的学长碰面可以收到有效的反馈、不断的解决新的问题。我现在再回来看这个文章就觉得写的太潦草了。大家仔细看句子的话就发现重复其实特别明显，光if的句式就连着出现了好几次。但是这个确实是30分的文章。我也没必要优化一下再发出来。那样的话可能会影响大家对于评分的理解。

说完好处之后我又回到上一段编的例子。例子的最后又是有个套路。所有例子的结尾我们既可以像上一段那样说我的经历不是孤立的，也可以像这一段一样，来一个跟过去相反的虚拟。因为我们支持的是b,那我们就可以说如果当时我做b的话，我就会更成功。或者如果当时我没做b的话我不可能这么成功。最后一个句子应该是少了一个had，因为跟过去相反的是主句would have done从句had done的结构。偶尔有个错看来是不影响满分的，别太多就行。

结尾段(32 words)

结尾就没啥说的，还是跟开头一样，套一个模板把题目填进去就行了：

Based on the above reasons and examples, it is clear that 这里重申立场.

这是一个典型的今昔对比题，这种题目我们一般会从经济、科技等角度来写现在比过去有哪些进步，以及这些进步是如何影响结论的。

第1段

开头段还是老套路：背景+争议+观点+过渡。尽管看起来不是很花哨，但是确实能拿满分。

第2段

第一个理由从经济角度来写，强调现在人的生活质量有很大的改善，所以更容易保持健康。然后最好和过去的情况对比一下。

展开的时候我突然想到了日本著名作家芥川龙之介的小说《罗生门》。

这个小说主要写的是在一个战争年代，人们食不果腹，尸横遍野。一个被主人赶出来的仆人饥肠辘辘。他正巧走到一个到处都堆满死尸的地方，这个地方就是罗生门。

他壮起胆子，想进去找到一些财物。结果他竟然发现有一个衣衫褴褛的老妇人正在从一个年轻女子的死尸头上拔头发。强烈的道德感让他对老妇人的行为充满了鄙视。老太婆解释说她只是想用这些头发做个头套谋生罢了，而且辩解道被她拔头发的女人活着的时候为了生存也没少骗人。于是，在道德和生存之间摇摆的仆人大悟。既然是为了生存，还有什么不能干的呢？然后他就抢了老太婆的衣服逃走了。通过这个故事我们可以看出，在社会动荡的时候，人们连口饭都吃不上，何谈健康呢？

第3段

第二个理由我们可以从科技的角度来对现在和过去做比较。跟健康有关的最直接的就是医疗技术了。所以我们可以重点强调现在的医疗条件比过去好很多，所以现在人更容易保持健康。

西班牙大流感的爆发可以作为很好的例子。尽管名字是西班牙大流感，但是源头有可能是美国的军营。只是因为西班牙是中立国，没有对媒体进行管制，所以最早从西班牙的媒体报出来。那次大流感的死亡人数可能达到五千万人，甚至更多。由于当时医疗条件很落后，一旦感染只能等待死亡。根本不可能像现在这样，新冠病毒出现不久就搞出了疫苗。对比两次的疫情，我们可以发现，现在确实比过去更容易保持健康。

第4段

结尾段我们就直接一句话套个模板然后复述一下题目就行了：

托福独立写作没写总结 第3篇

谢邀~我托福首考写作才考了14分，之后在两个月的备考时间内我成功将写作分数提升至了28分，对这个问题算是比较有发言权了。个人认为，如果大家参考一下我接下来的方法总结和经验分享的话，写作实现大幅提分问题不大~

一．独立写作的基本概念

独立写作是指在考试中，首先会给出一个具体的观点，之后你需要对这个观点结合自己的想法进行论述，写一篇议论文。独立写作的官方字数要求是300 words 以上，写作时间是30分钟。

就考试内容而言，独立写作大家更为熟悉，是大家从初中就开始写的议论文。但是想要在短时间内用英文对一个观点在有限字数内进行深入地论述很不容易。但相较于GRE写作而言，托福独立写作的难度低了不少，不需要逻辑性非常强的论述过程。

ETS对托福独立写作评分标准也有说明，但是依旧处于模棱两可的状态。个人总结下来，无外乎包括以下几个部分：首先，需要严谨的扣题；其次，需要清晰的行文逻辑和文章发展顺序；还有，需要良好的语言表达能力和丰富的句法多样性。如果能做到以上几点，独立写作高分就很容易了。

其实大家在正式报课学习托福写作之前，也可以充分利用网上的免费备考资源，先对托福写作备考建立一个清晰的认识。但是网络上的备考资源质量参差不齐，要想找到干货满满的免费福利，确实很难。所以在这里给大家推荐一下，当时我在备考的时候，薅到的免费羊毛。当时我报名免费参加了托福110+全科核心冲刺训练营，针对托福独立写作这一块，会有专业的老师跟大家谈如何迅速形成自己的写作思路，以及提高自己的打字速度。同时，在活动中大家还可以免费领取各种备考资料，包括高分范文和对应表达语料，都是大家提升写作水平很好的素材。有这么难得的免费福利，大家还不快快行动起来！报名的链接我粘在下方了，大家有需要的可以戳一戳报名呀！

二．独立写作的题型及对应写作思路

托福独立写作没写总结 第4篇

①条件

②结果

③影响

因果推论法高分模板

（主题句）Admittedly, it is not advisable for children to be overly obsessed with computer games.（条件） If children are overly exposed to the appealing elements of the computer games, including true-to-life visual and sound effects, smartly-designed plots and fascinating game modes, they would grab every opportunity to experience the magical power of the electonic world.（结果）Owing to these superior characteristics, most computer games are able to tie an addicted youngster to the chair before the computer screen for a long time.（影响）Without doubt, it will not only do harm to a child’s health and schoolwork, but also waste much valuable time that could be spent engaging in more meaningful activities.

平心而论，写作提分并没有大家想象中的那么难，其实只要掌握诀窍，辅以大量的练习，相较于口语和听力而言，写作提分是很容易的。希望以上的分享能够对大家备考托福写作有所帮助。大家如果对写作部分还有其他的疑问，也可以私信我哈，我会尽量帮助大家解决问题。祝大家都能早日拿到写作高分，成功杀托！！！！！！

托福独立写作没写总结 第5篇

托福口语评分标准详细解读

1.意思是否明白。解释：考察托福考生所表达的口语内容是否能够被明白地理解，还是表面上很流利，而实际上语义含糊、不知所云。

2.中心是否切题。解释：考察托福考生所表达的口语内容是否完整、准确地回答了题目的要求。考察重点在于考生是否能够准确理解题意和准确迎合题意两个层次。

3发音是否清楚。解释：考察托福考生的发音是否能够做到纯正、清晰。起码理解起来并不因为口音的问题存在障碍。

4语法是否正确。解释：考察托福考生是否能够熟练的使用较复杂的句子结构表达思想，同时尽量避免错误。环球英语网校。

5结构是否严密。解释：考察托福考生是否有能力将口语用严密的结构和逻辑表达出来，还是缺乏层次，信马由缰。

6表达是否连贯。解释：考察托福考生口语的语流是否有停顿，这包括思维停顿和表达停顿两方面的原因或表现。但此标准并未对考生的口语表达速度作硬性的要求。

7词汇是否熟练。解释：考察托福考生是否可以掌握足够的英语词汇进行表达，考察重点在熟练度和准确度两个方面。但此标准并未对考生的用词难度作硬性的要求。

从上文的内容中我们看到，托福口语主要考察大家的逻辑性、语言表述和语言能力。这就首先要求学生在较短的准备时间里迅速审清题目要求，然后在头脑中形成一个清晰的纲要。这样可以使自己的叙述内容清晰而有条理。评分标准里并没有对语速有硬性要求。但建议考生语速保持在中速的水平上，因为过慢会使得信息量小，让考官怀疑你的语言能力，而过快又会容易出错，不易让自己有思考的时间。

托福独立口语范文:处理朋友矛盾

Describe the best way for you to deal with disagreement with your friend.

托福口语范文:

No matter how close two friends are, there is a chance to have a disagreement on some issues. I believe the best way to solve the problem is to have a direct communication with each other. For me, when I have different ideas with my best friend Alisa like where to have dinner, which movie to watch, or maybe just a math problem. I would choose to ask her reasons beyond her opinion. If she had sufficient reasons to support her idea I would forget my opinion and follow her suggestion. If not, I would insist mine. Without a timely communication, the misunderstanding can lead to further disagreement, and that will finally ruin our friendship.

托福独立口语范文:学生使用智能手机的功能

Which of the following functions of smart phones most beneficial to students?

1)taking photos

2) listening to the music

3)recording lectures

托福口语范文：

Sample answer:

In my point of view, listening to music is most beneficial to students when they use their smart phones. Because first, listening to the music is an effective way for students to relax themselves. It is the fact that nowadays students are quite busy with their schoolwork for nearly whole week. So in their limited spare time, many students tend to listen to some sweet music on their phones to release their stress from study, which allows them to forget their heavy study tasks for a little while. Besides, music can please almost everyone, but not all the students like taking photos and it’s unnecessary for most of them to record lectures with their smart phones.