托福独立写作范文(篇一)

The writer and the speaker have a debate on feeding bird during the winter. The writer believes it has negative influences on birds, which is opposed by the following lecture.

First, the writer claims that birds gather easily, thus spreading diseases. While the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle, according to him/her, the diseases that spread in Hinch are always group-by-group. It has nothing to do with humans.

Secondly, the passage states that bad weather results in shortage of food supply. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that if humans feed birds, extra nutrition will make them stronger and healthier, enhancing the speed of reproduction. The number of new-born birds will be larger than the number of dead birds.

Last, the writer argues that it will influence birds’ migration pattern. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. It will not disturb the pattern of natural migration, because birds will depend on shortened sunlight to decide the migration time.

托福独立写作范文(篇二)

I eat healthy and exercise. When I am not busy, I’d go online and check out healthy diet. The information on the internet helps me understand the body and nutrition better and it is really helpful for me to choose and prepare healthy food. What’s more, sports are another way for me to stay robust. I swim and run in my spare time and do pushups and situps to keep healthy and strong. Occasionally, I will play basketball with my friends and classmates. Games make you forget about time and you don’t feel exhausted when you play for a long time. It is kind of exciting to do so.(109)

托福口语范文10

I enjoy listening to jazz. It is nice and easy to listen to. When you pour yourself a cup of tea in a cozy afternoon and sit in front of the table with a book open, jazz is exactly the kind of music you should be looking for. It tastes good along with the sunshine. All the pressures and troubles seem to disappear after a dose of it. Works are better than drugs. I especially love a Chinese jazz musician called Wang Ruolin. Her version of the jazz is particularly relaxing for me and it is her who makes me fall in love with this type of music. (107)

通过以上的10个托福独立口语的范文，希望大家能从中总结出规律，进而应用到自己的托福独立口语的练习中，使自己能在有限的时间内尽量表达出想要表达的东西，取得好成绩。

托福独立写作范文(篇三)

Task 1

内容回忆

Do you prefer a job that deals with different tasks or one that deals with the same task everyday?

参考答案

Sample answer:

For me, this is a fairly easy one to answer. A job that allows me to handle different sorts of tasks would apparently better meet my expectation for a meaningful career life. To say the least, one gets to improve more abilities and skills in such a position, and his social circle will inevitably enlarge in this process. Let’s say you work with a team in a news agency. That means you will need to choose the right stories, carry out investigations, and organize different types of reports. A lot can be learned during these activities, and you also would have to maintain good relations with your sources. That’s something you’ll never experience in a repetitive job.

Task 2

阅读

学校要在新生宿舍楼下搞library information desk，

帮他们解决很多他们可能会遇到的问题。

听力

态度：同意阅读，

原因一：省时间，

原因二：图书馆楼层太多，设施太多很多新生不知道怎么用，所以这样做很好

Task 3

阅读

阅读概念: sweeping generalization（一概而论），

定义: 错误地把一个principle用到所有的情况中的错误做法

听力

听力例子: 教授举例shouting at others，自己有一次在咖啡馆丢了包，15分钟以后发现包没拿，又回去拿包，原来坐在他旁边的女的还在那儿，说本来想提醒的，但是咖啡馆人太多太吵了，她不想shout，因为shout不好，所以没提醒

Task 4

话题

背景：阿尔卑斯山那边的环境很差，风大，水少，但是还是有很多植物survive下来了，它们有两种适应环境的方式，

听力

方式一：长得很矮，就能扛过high wind，

方式二：有种berry叶子表面有蜡，可以锁水，减少水分流失

2021年5月8日托福写作回忆和解析

环球教育武汉学校

龚朝辉整理点评

综合点评

这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中。

综合写作重复 2016年12月11日的题目,独立写作重复2016年12月10日和2019年1月12日旧题。

综合写作

话题分类

动物保护

考题回忆

总论点

话题：迁徙犀牛对保护该物种是否有效。

背景：犀牛角非常的珍贵，使得一些偷猎者大量猎杀犀牛，从而对犀牛的种群数量造成了严重的影响。为保护犀牛，人们提出要把犀牛运到别的栖息地(relocation plan)，以防止偷猎者的捕杀。

阅读部分

阅读：relocation对保护犀牛没有用。

分论点一：犀牛在relocation的过程中有5%的死亡率。运输过程中造成犀牛（濒危物种）死亡，做法不靠谱。

分论点二：犀牛有紧密的种族社会关系。如果把犀牛迁徙到别处，就会造成公犀牛和母犀牛的数量失衡，影响繁殖; 此外，它们的种族纽带也会被切断。

分论点三： relocation不能完全防止偷猎者猎杀犀牛，因为犀牛角的价值很高，所以就算把迁徙犀牛迁徙到另外的地方，偷猎者还是会紧跟，因此不能从根本上解决问题。

听力部分

听力：relocation可以很好地保护犀牛种群.

分论点一： 虽然犀牛在运输途中可能到发生伤亡，但是死亡的犀牛数量比较小。尤其是把运输导致的犀牛死亡率和盗猎导致的犀牛死亡率做对比时，会发现运输途中犀牛死亡数量远低于盗猎者猎杀犀牛的数量。两项比较，还是relocation更好一些.

分论点二：犀牛性别失衡的问题可以在relocation之前就避免。保护者会挑选合适数量的公犀牛和母犀牛，保持比例平衡。另外，带着幼崽的母犀牛不会进行迁徙,因此不会拆散它们的社会关系。

分论点三：把犀牛运到别的地方，那里地域广阔，犀牛活动空间很大, 盗猎者在大面积的犀牛栖息地发现犀牛很困。而且，有些地方人很难通过，偷猎者无法到达。

解题思路

1. 确定听力与阅读的关系（反驳）

2. 灵活使用写作模板，点对点比较

参考范文

范文:

The reading casts doubt on the effectiveness of the relocation plan designed to preserve rhinoceros species (which are in danger of becoming extinct), while the lecturer argues the problems mentioned in the reading about the relocation plan are not convincing, and that the plan is beneficial to the preservation of rhinos.

First, the reading points out that there is a death rate of 5% for rhinos during the relocation process. The lecturer, however, dismisses this concern, claiming that compared with the number of killings committed by poachers, the number of deaths during relocation is relatively small.

Second, the reading passage states that the relocation plan will disrupt not only the bonds between members of the rhino species but also the gender balance between male and female rhinos. However, the lecture contradicts this, pointing out that the right percentage of male and female rhinos will be chosen to keep gender balance before the relocation begins. Furthermore, those rhinos that have offspring to care for will not be transported to other places, so the bond between mothers and infants will not be affected.

Finally, the reading says that given the enormous profits hunters can gain, the relocation method will not prevent poachers from hunting rhinos. The lecturer, however, argues that the designated habitats for relocated rhinos are huge, making it difficult for hunters to locate/find rhinos. Furthermore, some places are not even accessible to potential hunters. (234 words)

独立写作

话题分类

生活类话题，重复2016年12月10日/2019年1月12日

考题回忆

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is better to travel abroad to visit foreign countries/travel abroad when you are younger rather than when you are older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

解题思路

写作思路：

本题是二选一，可以选择一边倒。话题比较个人化，观点不难想。本题探讨出国旅行对人的影响，可以从人生观形成（对不同文化的理解）、学业发展、外语技能、职业发展等方面去分析。还可以考虑身体健康/体能因素。这里选择几个容易写的观点。

总论点：年轻的时候出国旅行更好。

分论点一：年轻时候出国有利于外语提升。

分论点二：年轻时候出国有利于职业发展。

分论点三：年轻时出国更能应对旅行的挑战（如应对紧急情况的能力）。（篇幅所限，可以不写）

参考范文

范文：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is better to travel abroad to visit different/foreign countries when you are younger rather than when you are older. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In this highly interconnected world, it is quite common for people to travel overseas, and this is partly due to the availability of efficient transportation vehicles such as airplanes and high-speed trains. Faced with the choice between traveling abroad at a younger age and traveling overseas an older age, I prefer to travel abroad when I am younger.

First, traveling to foreign countries when I am younger helps to improve my foreign language skills. An overseas trip not only creates a pressing need for people to improve foreign language skills prior to the trip but also creates plenty of opportunities for them to hone language skills by using the foreign language while visiting a different country. For example, a few years ago when I was making the plan of traveling to the UK, I realized that I needed to significantly improve my English skills to reduce the risk of potential language-induced misunderstandings, so I spent more time every day on English learning. Furthermore, improvements in my English (particularly in listening and speaking) also occurred when I was using the English language to communicate with local people in everyday situations. Although this linguistic benefit that comes with overseas trips applies to virtually all people regardless of age, the benefit is probably greater for younger people who need better language skills for utilitarian purposes (. landing a job at a multinational corporation) than older people.

Second, traveling to different countries at a younger age may generate career advancement opportunities that we can take advantage of later in life. For example, in my country many people have become highly successful business owners because their earlier overseas experiences afforded them the opportunity to find a niche in the market that they filled later. My friend Vivian is particularly good case in point. She visited a number of countries in her twenties on vacation trips, and during her stay in those countries, she realized, incidentally, that a large number of local people were interested in Chinese–style jewelry and that she could profit from promoting jewelry products with traditional Chinese cultural flavor to cater for the customers’ needs. After returning to China, she quit her stable job at a large state-owned enterprise and set up her own jewelry trade company, which is now thriving. Had she chosen to travel abroad at a later time, she might not have retained the compelling drive and stamina needed for starting her own business.

In summary, while there are certainly benefits that people can gain from traveling overseas when they are older, it seems to be me that traveling abroad at a younger age is more advisable. This is because by doing so, I can gain enormous benefits such as boosting foreign language proficiency and improving career prospects. (459 words)

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托福独立写作范文(篇四)

常常会有同学抱怨，三十分钟的时间，连上构思和动笔，根本就不够用，会认为周围的人都能写得完，自己却异常拖沓。实际上这一般是因为自己从根本的思路上不够的问题。

如何解释呐？就是我们所认为的打字慢和脑子转得慢其实就是因为对于话题没有产生那么多的共鸣，导致你就算怎么想，都是没有办法想出来适合写的内容的。

比方说说这两个话题的对比吧：

当我们看到第一个话题的时候，别说三分钟了，给你30秒都能想到三个能用于怼那些想没收你手机或者阻止你使用电脑的老师和家长的理由了，因为你具备很多生活当中息息相关的经历和概念。

但是对于第二个题目，说实话，我作为一个托福自居高分的人都没有办法去合理解释这个观点是不是“对的”，因为大部分处于我和广大托福考生年龄的人都还未曾考虑国家未来和买房生活的问题。这背后是个很大的格局，甚至许多专家都没有办法给出来合适的答案。

然而，托福可不会迁就我们的年龄，该考什么一样不少，这就需要我们去多关注新闻等可以获取相关情报的地方，来长期积累一些案例。因为托福独立写作就是要看看你是如何运用自身经历来构筑自己观点的，如果脑子当中有个现实反映的例子，那么很容易想到这个段落应该去怎么展开，并且知道如何细说。

托福独立写作范文(篇五)

不知大伙儿是否关注过如何取悦考官这方面的技巧，因为众所周知托福考官的阅卷量十分巨大，往往分配到个人的时间也就2到3分钟，那么怎么样才能让考官在这么短的时间内关注到你的亮点就变得尤为重要。

我们来看这样两篇作文：

大家可以通过换位思考来看看，如果你是考官的话，给你3分钟时限批改，你会更想批哪一篇文章？

第一眼望去就会发现，自然是第二篇。原因如下：

1. 结构和分层

首先，考官和机器不一样，看到整洁文章的时候心里会敞亮很多，段落的结构更方便看出来也更省时间，我们可以通过规范的段落格式来突出这一点：段落结束后，空一整行，然后顶头开始下一段的叙述。这是一个能够看出来你写作水准以及态度的一个细节，利于考官一眼看出你的结构和分层合理性。

2. 文章均衡性

很多同学拥有一段叙述内容偏多，一段叙述内容偏少的情况（开头和结尾不算在内）。这些会侧面反映出来你的文章规划能力的缺乏，因为本身每个观点都是同样重要的，如果一些观点的叙述相比较其他论述段落偏少了，那文章就会失衡，相比较于那些规规整整的文章，考官看着会费劲很多，自然留给找“亮点”的时间也会减少。

3. 逻辑推理词

作为段落的开头，逻辑顺序词如：First of all，Secondly，Moreover，Last but not the least等等，这些词虽然看似可有可无，却可以加强你文章的逻辑性，如同口语当中的My first reason is…My second reason is…会帮助考官快速找到那种层层递进的逻辑推理，是一个托福关键的考察点。

4. 开头和结尾

开头和结尾向来是受到冷落的两个段落，但是它们的作用可不只是我们人为的表明观点以及总结全文，我们分别来讲讲。

一个好的开头能让考官认识到你知识面的广阔，让他眼前一亮：在表明自己的观点之前加上一些叙述时代背景的描述，运用当今很火的话题（其实托福独立写作话题都是与时俱进的热议）来引入到我们自己支持的观点上。我们很顺理成章地就转述了过来，一点也不突兀。

结尾则是更容易被忽略的地方，我们往往一笔带过，比方说一个典型的反例：

All in all，we should read books since they can broaden our knowledge，fulfill our imagination and help us gain experience.

单纯地就是总结，同样结束得很突兀，结尾段落也就相当于浪费了。可是我们要是加上点升华，对于不远的将来的眺望（如同写语文作文那样），就可以帮助我们的文章增添一些内涵：

All in all，we should read books since they can broaden our knowledge，fulfill our imagination and help us gain experience。In our lives books often play an essential role ，and everyone has something to learn from them。They will only become more important in the future.

以上便是我们独立写作当中比较常见的问题，现在大家应该有了比较清晰的认识。

不过罗马毕竟不是一天建成的，我们距离成功的写作差的不仅仅是这些概念上的完善，还有我们的语言基础，我们的底子。拥有丰富的生活阅历，雄厚的词库储备，还有自信，地道的表达都是满分写作都是必不可少的元素。

相信同学们通过积累并分析自己现今阶段所存在的问题，都能够逐步构成一篇属于自己的满分范文。

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