英语改错范文赏析 第一篇

How do students like playing computer games in your class?

Is it good or bad for health if they spend much time in the computer room? Why?

Would you give your kind advice to them?

Most boys in our class like playing computer games. Some of them even think computer game is a part of their life. They play computers games not only on weekends but also after school. But as we all know, it is bad for their health if they spend much time in their computer room. Generally their eyesight is much worse than others'。 The air in the computer room is also not very clean and fresh. And they must feel tired if they play computer games for a long time. All those are harmful to their health 。So please give up playing computer games. Try to spend more time on school work. Students can read books or play football instead. It is much more important for them to study hard and keep healthy.

英语改错范文赏析 第二篇

My best friend is xx. He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons.

He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong.

He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well, He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him.

英语改错范文赏析 第三篇

My dream neighborhood is in the center of city. Its a great place to live. Because if offers us a convenient life which everybody dreams of. Its a very busy and clean area. There are lots of cars on Center Street, especially in the morning and evening. Because most people travel at those two time periods. And there also is a tube station named Center Street Tube Station near my house which is a really convenient transportation for the neighbourhood. In addition, there is a big supermarket near my house where I can buy almost everthing I need in my daily life. Besides, some restaurants are located by my house,in which I can eat different types of food anytime I want. Morevoer, there is a service centre, where you can post letters, withdraw money, etc. Next to the cetre is a gym and there is a swimming poor inside it. I can work out in my spare time. Its a really great neighborhood. If you want to go and visit it, the best choice is taking a tube to Center Street Tube Station and then my house will be on your right hand side.

Welcome to my dream neighbourhood.。

英语改错范文赏析 第四篇

My best friend is Mary. She lives in a tall building. She lives on the fifth floor. Everyday she takes the lift up and down. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair，two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her. We are in the same class. I like to read books but she likes playing games. She likes to eat popcorn and ice creams. I like them，too. Her favourite food is fish，so she is clever. She loves her cat. She often plays with her. The cat likes Mary，too. They are cute.

这篇是讲述我的好朋友玛丽。介绍她的住址，她住在一幢高楼里。她住在五楼。她的年龄，她十二岁。她的外貌，她又高又瘦。她有短的黑色的头发，两只大眼睛和一个小嘴巴。

Last summer holiday, I learned to swim. It was very unforgettable and interesting. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But father said it doesn’t matter and he would protect me. Then I began to swim, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then father told me how to move, how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly, I could move a little. In fact, it was not that easy. I learned it for almost half a month. I was excited when father told me I made it.

这篇内容是关于回忆的初中英语作文，讲述的是暑假去学游泳，我和爸爸去游泳池，他叫我怎么游的故事。

According to the report that most children in the family don’t have to the housework, because their parents have done all the work for them. When students go to middle school, it means they are not the little girls and little boys anymore, they have grown up and it is time for them to learn to be independent. Doing the housework and reducing the parents’ burden help the children to be mature, what’s more, the parents should not overprotect their kids all the time, they can give some jobs to the children and lead them to be independent. Doing the housework is not a big deal, but it is the attitude to life.

据报道,大多数孩子在家里不用做家务,因为他们的父母为他们做了所有的工作。当学生进入中学,这意味着他们不是小女孩和小男孩,他们已经长大了,是时候让他们学会独立。做家务和减少父母的负担帮助孩子成熟,更重要的是,父母不应该过度保护他们的孩子,他们可以给孩子们一些工作,让他们独立。做家务不是一个大问题,但它是一种对生活的态度。

As a middle school student, I learn many subjects, I study so hard every day. When I get home, I will do my homework and then go over the book. But when holiday comes, I feel a little confused, because I don’t want to study and do something new. Then I don’t know what to do, my mind get blank. I decide to develop my interest. Some day, I happened to see a tennis match and I couldn’t stop watching, then I fell in love with tennis. So I started to learn playing tennis, I felt so happy. Now tennis is my favorite sport, I find a way to relax myself.

People always say that we are lacking of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can’t agree with it anymore. Last week, I woke up very early in the morning, so I decided to take a walk. The street was very quiet and there were many old people dancing in the square. Without many cars, I realized the city looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops decorates so well, which attrated my eyes. The city was coverd by the green trees, which made it a green city. I liked this feeling so much. At this moment, I found the city was so lovely, I just ingored its beauty usually.

人们总是说我们缺乏发现实现生活中的美丽的眼睛。我十分同意。上周,我早上很早就醒了,所以我决定出去散步。街上很安静,有很多老人在广场上跳舞。街上没有了很多小车,我意识到这个城市看起来那么干净和漂亮。一些咖啡店装修很好,吸引了我的眼球。这座城市被绿色的树木覆盖着,这是一个绿化放的城市。我很喜欢这种感觉。这时,我发现这个城市是如此的可爱,平常我忽略了它的美。

英语改错范文赏析 第五篇

I like autumn. I love the falling leaves in autumn. They cover the ground with golden yellow. When you walk on them, they rustle beneath your feet, just as if they are singing to you. I know trees get ready for their next year s rebirth by doing this, so I enjoy them without any sad feelings. The fields in autumn are fruity. People are easy to have good mood in a harvest season. So can t autumn sights bring happiness to us as well?

英语改错范文赏析 第六篇

My name is Wang Bing, yesterday was my birthday, and talking part in the volunteer activities might be my most meaningful birthday gift.

It was a fine day yesterday. I got up early so that I could reach the Children’s Hospital on time. I had a quick breakfast and called up my friends. Then we took a bus and arrived at the hospital at 8:30. To my surprise, all of the young patients had beautiful faces full of sadness. so we decided to do something to cheer them up. We took out the presents that we prepared for them before, not expensive but filled with encouragement. We sang and danced, played games, and when they were tired, we told stories to them. Before long, they were happy again. That made us pleased and got a sense of achievement. After that, we left with happiness.

I came back home at 15:30, I was tired but happy, so helping others is my biggest pleasure.

英语改错范文赏析 第七篇

星期天我不用去上学。前天我完成了作业，于是我决定帮妈妈做家务。我起床后洗了几件衣服，然后我拿着篮子去购物。我在市场上买了一些肉、鸡蛋和蔬菜。回来后，我开始为全家人做饭。晚上，我坐在桌旁开始在笔记本上记下我一天所干的事。

It was Sunday and I didn t have to go to school. I finished my homework the day before. So I decided to help mother do housework. I washed some clothes after I got up. Then I went shopping with a basket. I bought some meat, eggs and some vegetables in the market. After I came back, I started to cook dinner for the whole family. In the evening, I sat at the table and began to write down on my notebook what I had done during the day.

英语改错范文赏析 第八篇

There was a dog got sick badly, the master decided to help him ended his life and made him rest in peace.

Before mercy killing, the master did many things for the dog in his last day. He held the dog to hang around and saw the scenery and then made the delicious food. The master was very sad and he couldn’t help crying when he saw the dog got injection. Thinking about the illness, he thought he made the right choice for the dog.

The relationship between people and animal is always deep and loyal, many movies about this relationship have moved the audience. Every pet should be treated as friend.

有一只小狗病得很严重,主人决定帮助他结束了自己的生命,让他安息吧。

安乐死之前,狗狗的主人在他的最后一天做了很多事。他把狗狗带出出去闲逛,看看风景,然后给他做了美味的食物。主人非常伤心,他忍不住哭泣,当他看到狗接受注射时。考虑到疾病,他认为为小狗做出了正确的选择。

人与动物之间的关系总是那么的深和忠诚,许多关于这种关系的电影感动了观众。每一个宠物都应该被视为朋友。

英语改错范文赏析 第九篇

Many people, sometimes myself included, tend to judge a person by his appearances.

I was afraid of my uncle who has a scared tattoo on his arm till my mother told me a “story”。 When I was a three-year-old naught boy, I always ran around the neighborhood with my toy saber. Unfortunately, one day I hit a wild dog by accident. The dog became crazy and tried to bite me. It was that time my uncle appeared and protected me with his strong arm. However, this accident left a scar on his arm. My uncle went to get a tattoo in order to cover up the scars. From that moment, he is my hero in stead of a bad looking uncle.

So we need to go beyond people's looks and focus on more internal spirits in order to truly judge a person.

英语改错范文赏析 第十篇

It is very important for us to keep healthy.

There are many ways to be healthy. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. We should exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest , so it is important to go to bed early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn’t drink wine or smoke, They are bad for our health. We should also stay away from junk food.

英语改错范文赏析 第十一篇

Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my family. I had a very good time there and it was the most unforgettable holiday I’ve ever had.

The weather there was quite different from that in Beijing. The sky was crystal clear and we could see all kinds of birds flying in the sky. The temperature was neither too high nor too low. During the vacation, what I like best was the day when we went to the beach. Almost all day we walked on the beach and I picked up many shells while my parents were taking photos of the beautiful sea. Later in the afternoon, we sat down on the beach and watched the sunset. “How beautiful it is!” I put myself and the beauty of mature together in my mobile phone. During those days, we also went to buy some traditional food and gifts. Finally, we left with the deep love of Qingdao.

This trip is the one that I’ll never forget. Although time goes by, the sweet memory will be carefully kept in my mind forever.

英语改错范文赏析 第十二篇

On July 6th, 20xx, I went Xiao Meisha with my fellows to spend a nice seaside holiday. On our arriving at Xiao Meisha, we were all filled with excitement, since this was our first trip to the seaside.

Xiao Meisha was an excellent seaside resort indeed. There the sky was clean and bright, the wind was mild and pleasant, the sandy beach was soft and comfortable, and the sea was so magnificent.

We felt refreshed at that moment. It seemed as if we traveled in the heaven.

We did many kinds of activities at the seaside. Some of us went swimming in the sea; some went surfing; some dived underwater; some had a walk along the sea; some played sports on the beach. But I just took some photos of the beautiful sea scenery.

All of us had a happy time.

英语改错范文赏析 第十三篇

I like to make friends and I have a lot of friends. We always play togetherand we make up the small group, so even though my parents are very busy, I amnot feeling lonely.

Besides my parents, friendship is the most precious thingfor me. When I have annoyance, my friends will come to comfort me, we talk a lotand they always find a way to make me forget my sadness.

I am so lucky to havethose friends. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. No matter how faraway I am, I will cherish our friendship. Time will not apart us if we keep intouch.

英语改错范文赏析 第十四篇

A guy from America made a small test in the street. He wanted to see howpeople reacted when they saw someone was bullied. The test showed that more than90 percent of people would help the weak guy and criticized the one who bulliedthe others.

I was so moved by the people who gave their hands. The weak guypretended to be a nerd, and did something looking so stupid.

But everyone arguedfor him that he was doing the great thing and looked so cool. We should notjudge people because of their difference. Everyone is special and they can doanything if they haven't bothered others.

英语改错范文赏析 第十五篇

Mom, please don't believe me again until I make those stupid mistakes. My mother always believes in me. She regards me as an honest child, but I can't have her trust any more.

I regret lying to her. This is a stupid mistake I made. I failed my math exam, but I lied to my mother that I got a high score.

She believed me at the beginning. But a few days later, she told me the truth from my teacher. I made several similar mistakes.

Since then, my mother told me that it's OK to make mistakes, but it's really important to admit and correct them. I vowed to correct my bad behavior, but it seems that my mother will never trust me as before. How I wish my mother could trust me again.

中文翻译：

妈妈，在我犯那些愚蠢的错误之前，请不要再相信我，妈妈一直相信我，她把我当作一个诚实的孩子，但我再也不能拥有她的信任了。我后悔对她撒谎，这是我犯过的一个愚蠢的错误，我数学考试不及格，但我骗妈妈说我得了高分，她一开始就相信我，但几天后，她从我老师口中说出了，我犯了几次类似的错误，从那时起，母亲告诉我，犯错误不要紧，但承认和改正错误确实很重要。我发誓要改正我的恶行，但看来妈妈永远不会像以前那样信任我了，我多么希望妈妈能再次信任我。

英语改错范文赏析 第十六篇

I will never forget the views there. The sunshine was bright and it seemed that the sea was shiny, too. The sky was blue and so was the sea. There were no clouds in the sky and the sea was calm. What a beautiful picture it looked! I was a little afraid of the water. Thus, I was only lying on the beach. A gentle wind blew, I felt peaceful.

However, when I heard the laughter of the people in the sea, I couldn’t help joining them and we played with the water happily. Of course, my fear about the sea was fading. Soon, laughter surrounded the beach…

At last, we took a walk along the sea when the sun was setting. I found that when I was close to nature, nothing was more beautiful than it.

Our trip was a great success. Time goes by, but the sweet memory will be carefully kept in my mind.

英语改错范文赏析 第十七篇

Many people like traveling. They just feel happy when traveling. But notmany people will think the meaning of travel.

What is the meaning of travel?Actually, one of the meanings is to find happiness. Putting aside all thetrouble to enjoy themselves usually makes people happy. There is anotherimportant meaning. It is to learn things. To go out for a visit can enlargepeople's vision. People can learn a lot from it.

Therefore, sometimes we willfind that some people will be different after they return home from travel. Itis because they learn the true meaning of travel.

英语改错范文赏析 第十八篇

When I see the girls dance in the movie, I will be very jealous of their elegant temperament.

I wish I am one of them, especially when my mother speaks highly of these dancing girls. Actually, my mother once had tried to send me to learn ballet, but I was too small and couldn’t enjoy the class. I always skipped the class and then went to play with my friends. Later my mother found the truth and she had gave up asking me to learn ballet. Now I feel regretful, if I insist, I could be the girl that let my parents be proud of.

The lucky thing is that I have find the things I am interested in and I will not give up.

当我看到电影里的女孩跳舞,我会很嫉妒他们的优雅气质。

我希望我是其中一员,特别是当我的母亲很崇敬这些跳舞的女孩时。实际上,母亲曾经试图送我学习芭蕾,但是我太小了,不懂得享受这个课程。我总是旷课,然后去和我的朋友去玩。后来妈妈发现了真相,她放弃了让我学习芭蕾。现在我后悔了,如果我坚持,我可以成为让我的父母感到骄傲的女孩。

幸运的是,我已经找到了我感兴趣的事情,不会放弃。

英语改错范文赏析 第十九篇

In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after final exam.

在我学校，我们班主任会在一个本本上给每个学生一些评语每次期末后。

And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of mid-term exam and final exam on it.

然后我要把它给我父母看。我们班主任会把我们期中考试和期末考试的成绩写在上面。

And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct.

然后他会写一些关于我们在学校的表现，以及他觉得我值得表扬的事情以及我需要改正的地方。

In order to have a good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy.

为了过一个愉快的寒假，我得让我的.父母开心。

So I always try my best to earn a good evaluation from my head teacher.

所以我总是努力尽量从班主任那里获得好的评价。

In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a nice remark.

在他面前，我一直都是个好男孩。所以，我总是可以得到优秀的评语。

英语改错范文赏析 第二十篇

I went for a pleasant outing on Saturday with some friends from school.

Wewent to a lovely lake about a hundred kilometres north of here. We left by busat seven o'clock in the morning and arrived at the lake at eight thirty. Wespent the morning swimming and rowing small boats. Then we had lunch in a smallrestaurant by the lake.

After lunch we climbed a large hill behind the lake andenjoyed the beautiful view from the top. We got back to the bus at around fouro'clock and then we came back to town. We had a wonderful time.

英语改错范文赏析 第二十一篇

On New Year's Eve，our class had a party. The atmosphere was good. It was out of the ordinary from the very begining. The boy student from one bedroom gave an unusual performance. We saw a boy named Li Xinmin turn off all the lights in a sudden snap. Then with three resounding（响亮的） crow of a cock echoing in the hall，the hall was again brightly lit in a snap.

Then，the representative of the bedroom Zhu Guozhang asked us to guess a line of a poem related to the above situation. He added that Li Xinmin alone was born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the chicken. They left us all in confusion. And it was our monitor who was quickwitted（机智的）。 He shouted our“The day breaks as the cock crows three times at dawn.” The hall After that，they had another item. This time Li Xinmin was placed in the middle of the circle. While he was standing there，the other three stood around him，each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. It was an idiom. This time I got it right：“The dog stands out among a group of chickens.”

英语改错范文赏析 第二十二篇

Love is the most beautiful language in the world. We can wipe our tears away when we cry. It can bring happiness to us when we feel lonely. It can even give us confidence when we have problems. I often listen to some pop songs, and most of them are about love. The singers sing these songs loudly. I think that’s very real. They express their feelings directly. It shows that they love.

The happiness of loving and being loved is very wonderful. Let’s try to love each other so that the world will be full of love.

英语改错范文赏析 第二十三篇

My best friend. Her voice, gestures, like flipping the stain, lingering inmy mind.

She is plain, is always dressed in a white sportswear. Her name ismeaningful because she likes to eat _is green didn't eat, eat is red, spit itout is black, watermelon._ As a result, her name is chancy.

She studies very well. An enviable, many people because the wrestled withher. Read English in a cram school teacher roll call to let her. She picked upthe English book from the table, straightened up, use the read out loud gracefully, articulate, read smoothly, their English. Chancy not only a goodknowledge of English, mathematics or envy letting a person. The test, I got astep careless, at sixes and sevens. And she is easily captured the first. Classis to encourage me, help me solve problems you do not understand. Gradually, weboth became best friends. Play together, study together, talk together. Thesunset is always our shadows lengthen.

英语改错范文赏析 第二十四篇

It is known to all that Newton got the great inspiration from the fallingapple as he was walking pass a tree. This apple changed and promoted the socialcivilization. Many people play the joke that if the apple hits on their heads,maybe they can be the next Newton. Actually, apple is just the stimulation tohelp Newton to figure out his thoughts. If it hits on other people's heads, itis just the ordinary incident and nothing special. The meaning of life is tokeep searching. Everyone can make a difference if they keep thinking, andinspiration will come sooner or later. At that time, the success will be athand.

英语改错范文赏析 第二十五篇

Dusk is coming. It s time for the sunset. Look, the sky is getting dim gradually. The setting sun is covering the earth with golden rays. Not only the sky and water surface but also I myseff am turning into golden yellow. Several white birds are flying freely above the water. Willows are dancing in the breeze gracefully. Soon, the sun has buried itself in the thick clouds. But I still can see the beautiful scene in the sunset. It will be always in my mind. I love sunset.