高考英语作文改错模板范文 第一篇

【示例一】

①There are many cases/examples to explain ________(主题句). ②Take ________ as a typical example./The first example is that ________ (阐述例子), ________(可进一步阐述). ③The second example is that/In addition/Here is a counter example./Opposite case in point is that/On the contrary ________(第二个例子的内容或举一个反面例子). ④Therefore,/Only ________can ________(总结主题句/段落总结句).

【示例二】

① ________ (观点句). It can be best/well illustrated in/explained by(例子). ② ________(阐述例子). ③________(进一步阐述例子). ④Therefore, ________(段落总结句：进一步总结观点句的必要性和重要性).

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第二篇

【示例一】

①Recently the issue of whether or not ________(讨论话题)has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. ②There are two major arguments that can be made for. ③For one thing, ________can bring ________to________(优点一). ④For another, it is widely hold that people usually ________when ________(优点二). ⑤But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to ________ , among which are ________(列举缺点). ⑥For instance, it can be ________to ________(举例说明). ⑦In addition, many people find it ________(形容词)to ________(第二个缺点).

【示例二】

①Some people are in favor of the idea of doing ________(主题). ②They point out the fact that ________(支持的.第一个原因). ③They also argue that ________(支持的另一个原因).④There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. ⑤However, other people stand on a different ground. ⑥They consider it harmful to do ________. ⑦They firmly point out that ________(反对的理由).

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第三篇

The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题。 The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明)。

We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词_ing 细节一中的第一个变化， the动词_ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述)。

Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论)。 The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因)。 / It is high time that we (发出倡议)。

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第四篇

Every year, there are tens of thousands of people looking for a job. For a successful job search, job interview is the most important part. But how to prepare for the job interview? Here are some important tips.

Firstly, find a company you want to work for. Then, your understanding of the company will make the interviewers know that you value this opportunity so much and let them employ you. Secondly, review your resume and imagine what the interviews may ask you.

Then think about how you should answer the questions. Thirdly, carefully pick out what to wear. Since the job interview is the only time to sell yourself, you ought to make a good impression on the interviewers. Wear tidy suits and keep your shoes clean. Last, have a good sleep before the night of the job interview, because no interviewers will like an interviewee who looks tired and exhausted.

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第五篇

1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain);

2. 活动的过程;

3. 你对于这次活动的评论。

注意： 1. 词数120左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.

It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第六篇

讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为

40％的同学认为

1．不应该收门票

2公园是公众休闲的地方

3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象

1．应收门票，但票价不要太高

2．支付园林工人工资

3．购新花木

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。

2．词数：100左右。

3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee

Dear editor

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第七篇

Dear_______,

I am . (自我介绍) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(总体介绍). In the first

place,_________(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition,____________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感觉) to ___________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).

I appreciate it very much if you could________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第八篇

There is no consensus of opinions among people about whether young people should live with their parents.

Some people are for the view that they prefer to live with their parents. While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that they need independent life. As far as I am concerned, the latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.

First of all, we should make a living by ourselves and live independently.

Furthermore, we can seek greater freedom and get a place of our own, in which we can do whatever we want. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, we have enough chances to face the society by ourselves, no matter what kind of experience we will have.

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that living alone is necessary.

【译文】

关于年轻人是否应该与父母一起生活的观点，人们没有达成一致。

有些人持更喜欢与父母一起生活的观点。然而还有一些人持有相反的观点，坚定认为他们需要独立的生活。就我而言，后者的观点从多种意义上来说更可取一些。理由很明显。 首先，我们应该独立谋生，独自生活。另外，我们可以获取更大的自由并拥有我们自己的空间，做自己想做的事情。在所有的支持论据中，有一个是最有力的。那就是我们可以有足够的机会来独自面对社会，不管我们会拥有什么样的经历。

根据以上所述很自然得出结论，那就是独立生活是有必要的。 2015年高考英语写作答题模板及范文——提纲作文

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第九篇

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. Thetruth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to begoing wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn tocontrol your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Hereare three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way ofletting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoorsand play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective wayto get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such apositive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第十篇

A new park for children has been set up to welcome' the coming of Children's Day,

The park is in the south of our city, covering an area of 500 mu. Entering the park you can see statues of children in different races, hand in hand,which is the symbol of the world peace. In the middle is a lake, around Which are all kinds of trees and flowers. There are many boats on the take and some children are boating happily, To the south of the lake is a hill with a lot of monkeys on it. The Children's Pa]ace lies to the east, in which all kinds of exhibitions are on show. To the west of the lake is a place for children to play, where there are many recreational facilities.

I'm sure the children in our city will have a happy festival this year

【译文】

一个新的儿童公园已经成立，欢迎'的儿童节的到来，

该公园是在我们的城市南部，占地500亩。走进公园，你可以看到来自不同种族的儿童雕像，手挽着手，这是世界和平的象征。在中间有一个湖，周围是各种树木和花卉。上有需要，有些孩子愉快地划船，要在湖的南方许多船只是一个有很多山猴子上。儿童的王牌在于东部，其中各种展览展出的。为了在湖的西面是儿童玩的地方，那里有许多娱乐设施。

我敢肯定，在我们城市的孩子有一个快乐的节日!

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第十一篇

Different Job Outlooks

Nowadays university graduates have different job outlooks. For most of them, to find a job with satisfactory pay is their most important wish while majority want to be self – employed. However, a certain number of graduates are not in a hurry to hunt for jobs. They are just waiting for better chances.

Toward this point of view, some experts warn that it is not wise to be just waiting. They advise that graduates should find a regular, full-time job as quickly as possible so that they can earn money to support themselves and get working experience, which will help to find a better position later. Moreover, it might be more difficult to find a satisfactory job next year.

【译文】

不同的工作观

如今大学毕业生的`就业前景不同。对于大部分孩子来说，要找到一个令人满意的支付工作是他们最重要的希望，而多数是希望能够自我-就业。但是，一定数量的毕业生不急于寻找就业机会。他们只是在等待更好的机会。对这一观点，一些专家警告说，这是不明智的只是等待。他们提醒毕业生应该找到一个正规，全，兼职工作，以便尽可能快that they可以挣钱来支持自己和get工作经验，这将有助于找到更好的位置，以更高。此外，它可能更难以找到一份称心如意的工作明年。

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第十二篇

对比观点型

_____ is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say ____ is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ____. What is more,_____。Moreover,______.

While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,_____. Secondly (besides),______. Thirdly (finally),_____.

From my point of view, I think _____. The reason is that _____. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.

话题型

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _. It is estimated that ___. Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.

The first one is ______. Besides,_____. The third one is _____. To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing,_____. For another thing, _____. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.

书信型

Your addressMonth, Date, year

Receiver’s addressDear ...,

I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

Best regards for your health and success.

Sincerely yours,

图标型

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. In one hand, the other hand, _____ is due to the

fact that addition, ______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

高考英语作文改错模板范文 第十三篇

Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her.

With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done.

I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.