最近热门新闻英语作文范文 第一篇

2015年高考英语满分作文赏析

一. 用词准确;表达地道

【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文(20分)

美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff,

I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

【安徽卷高考英语】【试题回放】

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—column Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩

【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】情景作文

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【名师点评】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】开放作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

【名师点评】

本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。

三. 复合句为写作增色

【全国卷高考英语】 【试题回放】

哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 例文：

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：

1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 adj.欣喜的，快乐的 v.表达 birth to v.产生，生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。

【高考英语全国卷II】【试题回放】

1.地点：距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。 注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

【名师点评】

本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。

评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

【重庆卷高考英语】 【试题回放】

据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括： 自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

注意：

1. 信的格式已为你写好

2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3. 词数100左右。

4. 请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Amy,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

积累卡片

好词 v.意识到 v.允诺 v.捐赠

好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain. 我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

好处：which引导限制性定语从句。

2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!

好处：掷地有声，语言准确。

四. 结构清晰,句式准确

【江苏卷高考英语】 【试题回放】

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生：

u 每天锻炼一小时

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。年全国1卷英语满分作文。

3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,

The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10： April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名师点评】

积累卡片

好词 v.发动 v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡

好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。

评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。

好句2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. 如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

评析：虚拟语气。

最近热门新闻英语作文范文 第二篇

Reading---A good Habit

Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.

Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.

Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!

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Hello everyone, my name is, I'm glad that the heavy rain hit the whole city this morning, bringing flood. Early in the morning, it was raining cats and dogs on the way to work. The rain came so suddenly that many people were trapped in the rain.

All the wet streets and roads were flooded, including many shops and markets. Due to the heavy rain, many factories had to stop production. It is believed that food and vegetable prices will rise tomorrow.

According to reports, the rain is the biggest in the past five years, causing huge economic losses.

中文翻译：

大家好，我的名字是，我很高兴今天早上大雨袭击了整个城市，带来了洪水。一大早，人们正在上班的路上下着倾盆大雨。雨来得太突然了，许多人都被困在雨里，所有的潮湿的街道和道路都被洪水淹没了，包括许多商店和市场由于大雨，许多工厂不得不停产。

据信，明天食品和蔬菜的价格将上涨。据报道，这场雨是过去五年来最大的一次，造成了巨大的经济损失。

最近热门新闻英语作文范文 第四篇

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下来呢？我就根据自己的经验对考验作文的复习介绍一下吧！

大纲首先要明确，这是应试作文,所以我们的中心目的就是拿到高分!只要能够达到这个目的,其它的我们可以暂时不要去管。应试作文的特点非常明显,他给你的作文会有很多的限制,具体来说会有时间限制文体限制内容限制,所以说呢，很多时候是我们思想里的东西是不能随心发挥的,若是你可以在较短的时间内能够作出切合题意的文章就就是很不错的好文章了。 我们猜您可能喜欢以下文章： 加拿大留学 高考生申请留学的两种方式英国高考 A-Level考试是一边学习一边参加考试英国留学 高考生申请留学前应做的准备出国留学 盘点高考后申请留学的最佳方案美国留学 高考后申请留学双录取是最好的选择出国留学 高考后如何申请留学加拿大留学 高考后申请留学的热点问题美国留学 20xx高考生如何规划留学美国留学法国 国内高考分数须在专科线以上如何看待留学这个后高考时代的新问题 20xx年英语:提高考研英语作文的复习技巧

至于复习方面呢？我就说说短时间里的作文突击训练吧！可分为两个方面来说：

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最近热门新闻英语作文范文 第五篇

Mexico City, Mexico, April 4 (reporter Yao Jian) - Mexican Ministry of health official Jose Cordoba reported on the evening of April 21 that a total of people in Mexico died of swine influenza virus infection, and suspected cases were as many as nationwide. Mexican people spent a lot of police and soldiers from the 6 million masks distributed to the public to help prevent swine flu, while establishing in Mexico City Many anti influenza information stations have been set up and brochures have been distributed to tell people the correct preventive measures. Since January, many citizens in Mexico City and Mexico have to wear protective clothing and masks.

Some companies also require employees to wear masks to set up special isolation areas for influenza patients in major hospitals. Many citizens have been vaccinated against influenza as soon as possible in front of some clinics there for a long time. Recently, Mexico found that people who had been infected with swine influenza A (H1N1) virus were killed in Mexico City, as well as a state of emergency.

All schools were required to inform the Ministry of health to stop teaching in order to prevent more students from contracting the virus. The World Health Organization (who) paid close attention to the current situation of Mexico / h1nok.

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最近热门新闻英语作文范文 第六篇

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1)describe the drawing briefly.

2)explain its intended meaning, and

3)give you comments.

As is vividly revealed in the photograph, two players with masks are playing fencing with tenacity and quickness. We are informed that “It is opportunity as well as challenges”. Some people believe that opportunities are the result of coincidence or random chance, others argue that they exist all around us and that our attitudes determine whether we exploit an opportunity or forfeit it.

One factor that plays a role in determining our opportunities in life is random chance. Some people are born with certain opportunities. For example, Prince William would not be second in line to the British throne if his father had been anyone other than Prince Charles. In addition to the element of chance, a large part of opportunitystems from individual attitudes and mindsets. Opportunitiesoften exist all around us, waiting for those with the courage and enterprise to seize them. Finally, many of our opportunities are the result of hard work and perseverance. While utilizing one’s natural endowments and taking advantage of existing chances is important, new opportunities can only be created through effort and action.

In sum, I believe that the number of opportunities each of us has depends on a combination of factors, including random chance, individual mindset, and the degree of one’s perseverance. To make the most of our lives, we must capitalize on chance, maintain an optimistic attitude, and work hard to achieve our goals.

最近热门新闻英语作文范文 第七篇

I like to travel so much. When holiday comes, I will make travel plans. My friends like travel, too. So we make up the group. Travel means a lot to me. On the one hand, I can broaden my vision. Every city has its own feature and lifestyle, so I can experience different lifestyles. Books can provide us theorical knowledge, but if we go to the place to witness the real scenery, then what we learn from the book will be useful. On the other hand, travel can bring me the new mood. If I live in the same place for a long time and do the same thing every day, my life will be boring. But travel can help me to refresh my mood. When I come back, I am full of energy again.

我喜欢旅游。一到假期，我就会制定旅游计划。我的朋友也喜欢旅游，所以我们会组队一起去玩。旅行对我来说有很大的意义。一方面，我可以拓宽我的视野。每个城市都有自己的特点和生活方式，我可以体验不同的生活方式。书本可以给我们提供理论知识，但是如果我们去那些地方见证真正的风景，我们从书本上学习到的才是真正有用的。另一方面，旅游可以给我带来新心情。如果我很长一段时间一直住在同一个地方，每天做着同样的事情，我的生活就会很无聊。但是旅行能帮我重塑好心情。当我回来时，我就又充满活力了。

高考高分英语作文范文10

At the coming of the new year, it is also the time for one of the biggest tennis matches, the Australian Open. Since Li Na won her second grand slam here, more Chinese people fall in love with tennis. One of the popular male players, Roger Federer, who is more than 30, but he is still in the top level. The fans hope their hero can enjoy the match and they didn’t expect the next grand slam. But Roger made it happen again. He defeated his great rival, Nadal and won Australian Open. The world was cheering for him, and they witnessed this great man to make his career successful at the old age. If we have dreams, it is never too late to pursue. People always take the age as the excuse, actually, they lack of persistence, which differs them from successful men.

最近热门新闻英语作文范文 第八篇

根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词语供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.

世界上已有许多国家发现了新型流感病毒( flu virus)病例.据了解，人感染该病毒后会出现咳嗽、发烧、疲劳等症状.为了加强同学们的预防意识，(21世纪中学生英语报>正在举办征文活动，请你给该报投稿，描述感染该病毒的症状并谈一谈为了预防该病毒我们该怎么做，最后表达我们能战胜病毒的信心.提示词：cough, have a fever, feel tired, prevent, wash, exercise, sleep, believe

Nowadays, many countries in the world have found cases of the new flu virus. It’s said that people with flu virus will cough, have a fever and feel tired. To prevent the virus, we can do many things. Firstly, we’d better not go to places where there are many people. Secondly, we need to wash our hands often with soap and water, especially after we cough or sneeze. It's also a good habit for us to exercise regularly. It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness. And having a good sleep is important, too. People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily. And then, eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves fit and strong. Last but not least, open the window and keep the air in the room fresh. If we all do these things, we will prevent the virus. So there is no need to be worried. I believe we will win through in the end.