英语读后续写范文含题目 第1篇

goodmorning / afternoon, my dear teachers

my nameis wu yixuan. i am 11 years old, and i am a fifth grade student.

i have many hobbies. i like drawing and i can drawvery well, which get a lot of praise from my teachers and friends. i likesports, such as dancing, skating, biking and playing badminton. i often play badmintonwith my sisters and we have a great fun together. i love music, especially thepop music, which makes me feel relax. i love english, too. i hope i can travelall over the world one day.

i have manyfriends. i often study and play with ke jingqi and zhu si huai. sometimes, wego to bookstore or supermarket together. we are so happy when we are together. ilove my friends and they love me, too.

that'sall! thank you for your attention.

译文：

老师上午好!(下午好)

我叫吴奕萱，我今年11岁，我是小学五年级学生。

我的爱好很多。我喜欢画画，我画的画可捧了，大家都夸我画得好。我喜欢体育运动，如跳舞、溜冰、骑自行车、打羽毛球。我经常和姐姐们一起打羽毛球，我们都非常开心。我喜欢音乐，尤其是流行音乐，它让我觉得很放松。我喜欢英语，我希望有一天我能到世界各地去旅游。

我有很多朋友。我经常和柯婧琪、祝思怀她们一起学习、玩耍。我们还一起逛书店、逛超市，我们在一起非常开心。我爱我的朋友们，她们也爱我!

我的演讲完毕，谢谢大家!

英语读后续写范文含题目 第2篇

taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that… 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……

taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that … 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……

hence/therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that …

因此,我们最好得出这样的结论……

there is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.

all in all, we cannot live without … but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.

总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.

高考英语作文万能句子

引出话题句子

recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern. 最近，……问题已引起人们的关注.

英语读后续写范文含题目 第3篇

2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

4分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

6分：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，有一些是严重错误。 8分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

10分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

（注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分，字数不足应酌情扣分。）

一、审题要清

看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

二、要点明确

要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。

三、列出提纲

为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。

四、写顺全文

写短文时要做到五个方面：

1、避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。

2、段落分明，层次清晰，文章宁可平平淡淡，也不要漏洞百出。

3、多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等复杂的句型。

4、注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误；主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致；注意冠词用法，例如：it takes tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a；注意拼写，例如：fourteen，forty，ninth等不要写成forteen，fourty，nineth等；注意标点符号和大小写。

5、描写人物时，要生动具体，可以选择使用下列词汇，例如：外形：tall，short，fat，thin，>尊敬的学校领导：

首先请允许我发自肺腑地说一声“对不起”。

此时我怀着万分愧疚和懊悔的心来写这份检讨书。真的很惭愧，我不仅把我自己的一生搭进去了，还有家人的殷切期盼跟学校的光辉形象。

对不起，把我当孩子一样培养了四年的母校和孜孜不倦谆谆教诲我的老师。学生无比的愧疚，毫无脸面来面对。不敢奢求原谅，恳请接受我真诚的歉意。两个月前我就知错了，但不敢面对如此严重的事件。我一直忐忑不安深深追悔的活着。一想到我的未来，如同世界末日。

还有三个月我就要毕业了，每当想到我很有可能无法和同学们一起毕业，心如刀割般的疼痛。每天睁开眼睛，第一时间就是告诉自己要坚强的走下去，我的日子还没到尽头，我是得勇敢的接受自己所造成的一切。我很懊悔，我不知道我那时在想什么，为什么会鬼使神差般地没把电话放到昨天放得好好的地方而是揣在兜里，临近考研结束要去上厕所，还把电话开了下机。我一年多的辛辛苦苦的复习白费了且搭上自己的一生，更是给学校造成十分严重的形象损坏，还有我的家庭，我日夜辛勤打工挣钱的父母。我是一个彻彻底底的罪人，我也无法原谅我自己，更不奢求别人的原谅。

在之前我从来不认为违纪违规的事情会和自己沾边，不去认真对待，总觉得无所谓，这次我总算意识到自己所犯的错误有多严重了。对于这件事，我深刻的剖析了自己的错误，我深知问题的严重性，影响的广泛性和对学校的负面影响深度，现在我将我的认识和体会向学校做一个汇报，恳求能在我认知和反省错误的同时，给予我帮助和支持，给我一个改过自新的机会，让我能在以后的学习和工作生活中，摒弃恶习，遵纪守纪，做一个对社会有用的人。

英语读后续写范文含题目 第4篇

尊敬的学校领导：

首先请允许我发自肺腑地说一声对不起。

此时我怀着万分愧疚和懊悔的心来写这份检讨书。真的很惭愧，我不仅把我自己的一生搭进去了，还有家人的殷切期盼跟学校的光辉形象。

对不起，把我当孩子一样培养了四年的母校和孜孜不倦谆谆教诲我的老师。学生无比的愧疚，毫无脸面来面对。不敢奢求原谅，恳请接受我真诚的歉意。两个月前我就知错了，但不敢面对如此严重的事件。我一直忐忑不安深深追悔的活着。一想到我的未来，如同世界末日。

还有三个月我就要毕业了，每当想到我很有可能无法和同学们一起毕业，心如刀割般的疼痛。每天睁开眼睛，第一时间就是告诉自己要坚强的走下去，我的日子还没到尽头，我是得勇敢的接受自己所造成的一切。我很懊悔，我不知道我那时在想什么，为什么会鬼使神差般地没把电话放到昨天放得好好的地方而是揣在兜里，临近考研结束要去上厕所，还把电话开了下机。我一年多的辛辛苦苦的复习白费了且搭上自己的一生，更是给学校造成十分严重的形象损坏，还有我的家庭，我日夜辛勤打工挣钱的父母。我是一个彻彻底底的罪人，我也无法原谅我自己，更不奢求别人的原谅。

在之前我从来不认为违纪违规的事情会和自己沾边，不去认真对待，总觉得无所谓，这次我总算意识到自己所犯的错误有多严重了。对于这件事，我深刻的剖析了自己的错误，我深知问题的严重性，影响的广泛性和对学校的负面影响深度，现在我将我的认识和体会向学校做一个汇报，恳求能在我认知和反省错误的同时，给予我帮助和支持，给我一个改过自新的机会，让我能在以后的学习和工作生活中，摒弃恶习，遵纪守纪，做一个对社会有用的人。

临近我的考研结束不到半小时，我也把试卷检查一遍了，就坐在座位上玩笔。突然想到去厕所，于是举手请求上厕所。在进厕所前，监考老师好心的问过我今天怎么不见我的手机。我突然想到带手机进考场是违纪，我不敢交出来，就说今天没带。在厕所里我习惯性的掏出手机，我竟然还开了下机，并且有条之前没发出去的短信（可能是之前我的信号不好或者他那边信号不好）嗖了下给发出去了。我当时害怕了，立马关机出了厕所。期间不到两分钟。可这两分钟足够毁掉一切。

监考老师应该是监测到电波了，他让你我交出手机，我给了他，让他搜了我的所有口袋。我以为没事的，毕竟我没有作弊的事实。过了会保安把我带到审讯室，我当时就崩溃了，我极度害怕，因为我知道我这么一瞎折腾对不起的人实在太多了。糊里糊涂签了字，签的竟然是考试作弊。我之后有过想去申辩。可我又反复想想，不管怎么样都成这样了，于事无补了，我的这辈子已没戏了。

我不敢跟任何人讲。三天后我去找考研招生办的年老师了，顺便把我的手机和其他东西拿回来。我问她我的事情怎么处理，她人很好，一而再的告诫我赶紧写份深刻的检讨给院领导，可我真无脸面去面对。我问她我的事情的严重性，她说已构成违纪，不会太简单处理的。让我做好思想准备。我告诉我正在广东务工的父母，我见他们只是哽咽着一味的安慰我要坚强的走下去，他们支持我走下去，我的心跟那皲裂了的文具袋一样，那是我辛辛苦苦劳作只求我有点出息的父母。我很对不起他们。

已经过去两个月了，我和我家人也折磨两个月了。我渐渐懂得了这其中的严重性了，能想到后果我都反反复复想过了，我没什么脸面寻求宽恕，只求学校给我一个改过自新机会，让我可以像个正常人一样的工作生活，回报我父母，回报社会。对学校形象的抹黑，我深知自己无法弥补，我只能一辈子遭受良心的谴责，愧对培育了我四年的母校，对不起。

此刻，我在医院实习的办公室里写这份检讨书，我不知道我写的是否真诚，但我说的全是心声。这两个月来，唯一能让我暂时不去想处分的事情且积极向上生活着的就是在这紧紧张张兢兢业业的实习工作。我现能想到的也仅是在这勤奋的工作积极表现，来填补我内心的深深愧疚。

我所犯错误的影响很坏。在考场上就直接造成不尊重同学、不尊重老师、不尊重父母的恶劣影响。本来，老师是对我很器重的，同学们对我的考研也充满期待。然而，我的错误深深地伤害了他们的心；我真诚地接受批评及其处分。对于这一切我将对我的人生做进一步深入的总结和深刻反省。敬望学校领导相信我能够吸取教训、改正错误，把今后的事情加倍努力干好。同时也真诚地恳求学校能认我这个不争气的学生，继续关心和教诲我，并对我的问题酌情从轻处理。

对不起，学校、老师、同学还有我的家人。罪人在这向你们真诚的致歉。

检讨人：

英语读后续写范文含题目 第5篇

原文

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

There is a farm not far from the belongs to a man called couldn't do everything by himself on the needed to hire one man to help him run the one worked on his farm for ？Because the work was too the farm is near the sea,there are often storms from the sea that strike his a storm comes,Tom and the man he hired have to get up quickly and try to reduce the losses caused by the one liked working had to look for people to work for him all the time.

One day,a man called Henry read the poster that Tom had put up and then came to his farm.

“Sir, I can work for you ,” said Henry.

Tom looked at Henry. This young man was neither strong nor tall.

“Are you sure?”asked Tom.

“Yes, sir. I can do the work well. But you must pay me twice what you paid others before,” said that young man.

Tom was surprised. He didn't really believe such a man could do the work well. But it was really hard for him to find someone else to work for him. At last, he decided to give Henry a , before hiring him, he said,“Can you really be a good helper？The work on the farm is hard and tiring. And there are often storms.”

Henry smiled and said,“Don’t can be a good helper .You'll see. And storms won't be a won't even disturb our sleep. We can sleep very well even on stormy nights.”

And then Henry stayed on the farm. To Tom's joy, Henry worked hard and did his work well. It was obvious that he hadn't lied.

However, one night, there was a big storm. Tom was woken up by the strong wind. He was worried that the storm would cause great losses for his farm. And he saw his helper nowhere.

范文

Paragraph 1

Tom thought Henry must still be anxious was he that he knocked at the door of Henry’s room Tom’s astonishment,Henry was still lying in his was extremely evident that Henry didn’t realize how serious the situation with rage,Tom shouted, “Get up!There is a big must work right now.” Calm and peaceful,Henry responded,“Sir,have you forgotten I told you that storms wouldn’t disturb our sleep?Why not just go back to sleep?” Hearing the words, a wide disappointment took hold of Tom.

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Tom thought he had hired the wrong helpless,he rushed out to work on his sooner had he gone outside than an unexpected scene came into his sight,all the roofs covered and all his chicken,horses and cows was seized by a strong sense of relief,tears streaming down his was Henry that did all the work well in advance before the storm realized he had hired the best man.

英语读后续写范文含题目 第6篇

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage inthetable(graph/picture/pie/chart)， ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases)，significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. from the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.

accounting for ______. ontheonehand, ________. ontheotherhand,_______ isduetothefactthat tion, ________ isresponsiblefor arecommonly convincing.

asfarasiamconcerned,i hold the point of view that _______. -grounded.

中考英语作文万能模板：现象说明文

recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.

there are many reasons main reason is____________________.

what is a result_______________.

considering all there, one thing_____________________,for another________

conclusion____________________.

英语读后续写范文含题目 第7篇

 Susan’s unhappiness, Rose secretly suggested making a crown with flowers to please her.

 the family walked to the door to leave, the mother came running back, gave me a hug and whispered, “Thanks for being our angels today.”

 familiar with the voice, she turns round and saw…

 small smile may make a big difference.

 was this unique experience t hat made me understand whatever difficulty (= no matter what difficulty) we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn’t give up our hope.

 happened today made me realize that f orgiveness is a kind of virtue.

 explained that her mother was badly ill last night, which contributed to her fault.

 will treasure/value our friendship forever.

’s sleepy eyes opened wide and her face wore a smile that brightened up the whole room.

 understood that her daughter meant much more than anything else in the world.

 cleared his throat and said in a serious voice, “….”

 it could be sent to one who badly needed it.

 that time, you were badly in need of money to pay the fee and you had to….Then why didn’t you keep it for yourself?

 I don’t have much money, I can live happily; but if I lose honesty, I won’t be happy any  a long run, I will be a loser.

 kept avoiding eye contact with him, ….

 made up my mind to find out/figure out how to fit in with them/how to get along with them.

 teacher is paying particular/close attention to Mary, who is constantly putting forward questions in class in order to rank among the best pupils.

 took her great courage to tell dad that….

 will be a great financial sacrifice for her parents who have already been paying for her college.

 left the site in  a split second the drunk driver had torn the passer-by into pieces.

英语读后续写范文含题目 第8篇

We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. “ David, you are an ambitious young man full of enthusiasm and vitality.” I held his hands tightly, “ Just look at my eyes. Trust me!” David stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. “ Miss, with the brain disease, I had thought I did not practise well enough to participate in the competition so that I am afraid of being laughed at.” David felt frustrated and hopeless. I was absolutely understanding what he felt in his mind. “ Boy, you have done well and your future is very promising.” David looked at me, with his eyes twinkled with excitement, and stood up just like a superman in front of me.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. As the bell rang, David ran as fast as he could like a wild horse running in the filed. In the first round, David fell behind others about 5 meters. But bathed in a competitive atmosphere, he was in high spirits and felt a sudden strength inside him. In the last 50 meters, seeing David try his best to rush for the finishing line, I was nervous and had my heart in my mouth. When the host announced that David won the 3d prize, he was wild with delight, waving to me with joy and sweetness.

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. His head stooped spiritlessly and he seemed to be know the team needs you, don't you, David?”my words broke the silence.“I don't want to let them down, sir. I couldn't live with myself,_ he whispered, still hanging his head in know that by not running you will disappoint them all? Don't you want to run?”I asked.“More than anything but the conditions are so difficult and the forest so dense that I'm afraid I won't make it,”he answered, still looking at the ground.“You’ll never know unless you try!_ David stood up and walked away still without looking at me, a determined look on his face.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The starting gun fired, and they were off. All the runners contested for the lead, just with David struggling to keep up. Unluckily, he slipped over. Without hesitation, he picked himself up and plodded off after the others into the forest waited at the finishing line. All the runners raced in but no sign of David. One of the boys said David had fallen a couple of times. After a long time, David emerged from the forest, mud-splattered, bruised and clearly suffering. He refused any help and made his way to the finish line. To his astonishment all the other runners had waited and applauded and cheered him. Then for the first time that day his big toothy smile broke across his mud-streaked face as he was surrounded by his team.

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We sat next to each other, but David wouldn’ t look at me. He buried his head into his arms and couldn’ t help sobbing. “ Come on, you can do it.” I whispered to her in a soft voice and patted his shoulder gently. “ Really ? “ he suddenly jumped to his feet and shouted in a trembling voice. His eyes were shining with hope. At that moment, I showed the photo in my cellphone with her. In the photo, he was running as fast as he could with all the other boys on the playground. The bright smiles, the loud cheers ,the sweaty face as well as the determination to win victory suddenly crowded into his mind. Without hesitation, he wiped away the tears and struggled to his feet to embrace the challenge.

I watched as David moved up to the Starting line with the other runners. I yelled with a sense of pride. In the distance , David was running as fast as his disabled leg could carry him. The gentle breeze and singing birds seem to cheer for him. Unfortunately, David tripped over by a stone. “ Oh, my God’ I signed and hurried to him. To my surprise, my dear friend gritted his teeth, ignored the bleeding knee and gathered all his strength to stand up and dashed to the finishing line. “ What a brave boy” ! I signed and hugged him tightly with teary eyes.

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’ t look at me. I asked him, “ Why not run?” He stuttered, “ I-I don’ t know, looking at the crowds. A few seconds later, several words came out of his mouth, “ Maybe afraid of being laughed .” “ But you have practiced so hard recently” , I blurt out, “ Think about the efforts you have made. But of course, it’ s your choice. Guess what? I don’ t think it is a good reason. You know, there are always someone who don’ t like us. The point is whether you want to do it yourself. Just think about it.” It was silence again between us. David was biting his mouth, looking at the distance again. A few minutes later, he stood up and uttered the words, “ I would like to run.” I nodded smilingly. So, he has made up his mind.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other began his running with the starting signal. I was a bit excited when suddenly a shadowy figure fell over. My heart sank. Seeing the small figure, I knew it was David. I ran to him and shouted, “ Get up and run!” The audience around him were also calling, “ Come on ! You can do it.” A few seconds later, he rose and ran again. He disappeared in the distance in no time. I went to the finishing line, waiting eagerly. When the first person crossed the line, lots of other runners finished their running. But no David. I was wondering what might have happened to him when the small shadowy figure appeared again in the distance. “ Well done!” I said to myself. He was approaching the finishing line when I saw the mud in his clothes. He must have gone through a lot all the way. Crossing the line, his usual big smile was there as that sunny day.

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. He hung his head, trying to avoid eye contact with me. It was a tricky moment, calling for a good choice of words. Having thought it over,I mentioned some events which won people's praise for his determination and face began to added that even the judges thumbed up at him. The whistle went off and the competitors began to take their places. To my joy, David slowly rose to his feet.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. David stood firmly in his position, ignoring anything forward without balance, he was left behind. However, when he came into sight, the spectators burst into thunderous cheers and by the enthusiasm and encouragement, David quickened his pace in high spirits. It turned out that he achieved his best record ever. Seeing his confident smiles,I sighed in relief. With the power to conquer himself, he can conquer anything on the way to a promising future.

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. A flood of sympathy and sadness emerged in my heart. I tapped him on the shoulder and pulled him into my arm. At that moment, David's classmates approached him and said, _Let's run David saw them, memories of playing and exercising with them flashed into his mind. There is no denying that they all regard David as their friend. David looked up at us, a pleasurable and relaxing smile appeared at the corners of his mouth.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other rwnners. As the gun rang out, David and other runners began to run. His small body rocked from side to side as he swung his feet forward. His legs were trembling and drops of sweat were running down his cheeks. He held his fists, gritted his teeth and kept running. When he finished, everyone cheered for him and expressed their respect. Never had I expected that my acts could make such a difference to lamp is lighted and my heart is warmed as well.

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. He buriedhis face in his arms and began to a split second of pause,I put one hand on his shoulder gently, reached the other out to him and said in an inspiring voice,_You can make it, David! We are all looking forward to your raised his head, looking at me with confidence in his eyes. For a moment he hesitated, but the idea of beating himself made him gather all his courage to take my hand. Then I nodded to him, giving him a bigbright smile.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. He took a deep breath and calmed himself soon as the event began, everyone rushed to the head of the team, leaving David's small figure behind, who swung his body side to side. Eventually, he gathered all his strength and struggled his way to the finishing line. At that moment, all his classmates and even other schools' students ran to embrace him and cheered for him. Seeing what was happening in front of him, he flashed that familiar big toothy smile again. Needless to say, David was filled with so much encouragement and his heart was actually lit up by this event.

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. Depression hung over him like a heavy dark cloud and tears welled up in his eyes. I patted him on the shoulder gently, gave him an encouraging look and ventured in a soft voice, _You are a regular boy, David. Maybe you were born with some physical defects, but your strong determination will cover the After a split second of pause, David nodded slightly, tears giving way to the usual big toothy smile. Then he got to his feet. It wasn't long before the race began.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other rwnners. David took the first step, slowly but firmly. My eyes kept on him from the very beginning to the end. Like each previous practice, though he finished his run long after others, he did complete it. He ran rockily towards me with his confident smile. It was his willpower that enabled him to make such a running miracle. For others, it was just a simple cross-country run. But for David,it was a symbol of strong determination and self-breakthrough.

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We sat dowm next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. He loweredhis head and rubbed his don't want to give up,do you?_I asked in a soft voice. He nodded with tears in his eyes but still hesitated. Then I showed him some photos, some showing him running every day, and some laughing with hisclassmates. His face lit up and that David, hard-working, determined, full of positive energy,came alive. He looked up at me, promising to find his true self again.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. He looked back at me and I responded with a bright smile. With the cheers of everyone present, the competition began. At first, students from otherschools whispered and pointed at him. But as time went by, they were overcome by his tough spirit. David finally finished the running, gasping for breath. Despite the last one to reach the finish line, he still earned him admiration and thunderous applause. Everyone is like a flower,some having fragrance,but some long as you bloom, there will be bees and butterflies.

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. He loweredhis head and rubbed his hands. Obviously, he was stuck between a rock anda hard place. Trying to break the silence, I tapped him on the shoulder are special, but that's your uniqueness. Today, you're here to show that uniqueness with all your diligence and determination_, I ventured in an encouraging voice. My simple words, spoken from the heart, found their way straight into his. He raised his head and stared into my eyes. I sensed that his dilemma gave way to trust in me, with his eyes twinkling with determination and hope. That familiar David, hard-working,determined, full of positive energy, came back.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. I clenched my fist and waved at him. He gave me a determined look, as if to say that he would not change his mind. He took a deep breath to calm himself down, then toed the line, ready to run. With a bang, every runner shot like an first, everyone's attention was focused on the winner. But as David, the last one,made it to the finishing line, time seemed to stand still. Thunderous applause broke out, with the name David echoing again and again. Maybe if we knew what other people were thinking, we'd know that no one's we all deserve a standing ovation at least once in our lives.

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We sat down next to euch other, but David wouldn't look at me. Depressedand low-spirited, David sat silently with his head dropping. And from time to time, he stole a glance at me as if he had something to say. Noticing this scene,I patted him on the shoulder and said with patience and eagerness, _It's been a long time since you started to prepare for the big cross-country run. You really want to let it go?Just try it!?_While he didn't say a word, I knew there was a decision in his heart.

I watched as Duvid moved up to the starting line with the other a whistle, everyone rushed held on for a while and then he dragged his legs with inner firmness. What was alarming was that he fell down. Gasping with pain,he forced himself to his feet and with slow,shaky steps, began to silence came a storm of applause. Even if David didn't get a good place, he was still happy. I nodded with satisfaction anda little bit more effortsthumbed up at him. Such is the key to_success_—and determination will create a little bit more miracles.

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. It was apparent that he was still hesitant whether he should have a try in running with others. Spotting this, I approached him gradually and told him he was no different from other normal students in my opinion and that doubtlessly he could make it without much difficulty. With my words of encouragement David stood up firmly and went to the join the other runners.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other the very beginning he lagged behind others for his strange running style. However, he didn’t lose heart and quit. On the contrary, he sped up little by little and much to the audience’s surprise he was among the first runners who arrived at the finishing line early. Not only were the audience and other students impressed by the fact that David eventually made it in finishing the race, but also they admired him very much for his great determination.

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We sat down next to euch other, but David wouldn't look at me. I knew he was upset. Out of concern, I comforted him with warm words,_You are the very person that is determined and optimistic. Keep it on however challenging the situation is. Do your best instead of caring about others' my inspiring words, David could see the silver lining in the cloud. His longing for success eventually overcame his fear.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other breathed deeply and then rushed out with all his courage and strength without thinking twice. However, he was still left behind by other students. To us audience's surprise, he didn't give up half way. Exhausted as he was, he still rushed to the finishing line. Applause and cheers broke out as if he was a winner. David felt a sense of achievement welling up in his heart. _Everyone deserves a better version of themselves,_ as the old saying goes.

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. It was I who broke the silence first. “David, I think it’s not reasonable to quit right now. Do you remember the days when you spent so much time and effort in practicing?” It seemed that my words worked. He lost himself in thought and then turned to me. “Yes, you’re right. What I should focus on is myself not others’ views.” He replied. Meanwhile, the run was going to start soon. David took a deep breath and stood up.

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. Then with the whistle blowing, the run began. Although David couldn’t run as fast as others, he kept a steady speed. Five minutes later, there was a long distance between David and other runners. However, looking at his body rocking from side to side, no one laughed at him. Instead, kids along the road clapped their hands to encourage David. Finally, with strong determination, he reached the finish line. I went over to hug him and everyone present gave him a thumbs-up. How great to see his big toothy smile again!

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. Looking directly at him, I firmly said, “David, it’s your rights to pull out of the competition if you don’t want to run today. But it’s not good enough to do so only because you fear the worst for possible sarcastic comments. There are people like doing these mean things. The real matter is whether you let these few people stop you from pursuing your passion for running. If you want to run, David, then you run.” Several minutes after his taking my words, David said with fierce determination, “I’m gonna run.”

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. After the starting pistol exploded, all the runners sprang into action and ran forwardonly to find David fell on the track from time to time. Then, the small bold figure picked himself up and started again and again. I knew he would with the rhythm of his run, he finally crossed the finish line long after other children. There, he gave me his typical toothy smile, saying, “That was easy!”

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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at eyes deliberately avoided mine, and his smile also disappeared on the face, with his limbs shaking as weak as leaves. “It” s not the real you, David”, I broke the silence, walked to his front, holding his shoulders and continued, “Listen, David, you have prepared so much for this running, if you want to quit, I will be for you.” David burst into tears. Suddenly ，a group of kids emerged around us. The came up to David, and embraced him and shouted “Cheer up. David, you can do it !” David stopped crying and his face lit up by their encouragement. Turing around, he gave me a smile and walked to the starting line where other kids were ready to start. (124)

I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. Start ！All the kids disappeared swiftly like lightening into the forest, leaving David staggering and struggling his steps his body was uncontrollable, soon his heels were bleeding, because his shoes were worn out. After a long time, David was still 100 meters away from the finishing line. The path was lined with the coach and other kids in tears, who were informed of the poor body condition of David. No one laughed at him, but cheered up and clapped for him. David was touched and he was stepping forward when he was tripped by a big rock. “ He is bleeding!” cried the other kids. “David! David!David!” the voice became louder and louder until David dragged his leg surpassing the terminal. He did it, with his belief and encouragement and love from everyone present. It was a miracle. His usual big toothy smile would not be absent forever. (150)

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We sat down together on some steps, but David wouldn’t look at me. ( 开始第一段续写处)I quietly said, “David, if you don’t want to run today, no one is going to make you. But if you’re not running because you’re afraid someone is going to laugh, that’s not a good enough reason. There will always be someone who will laugh and say mean things. There are people like that, and that’s just the way it is. The real question is whether you are going to let those few people stop you from doing something you really want to do. Are you going to let them get in your way? If you really want to run, David, then you run!”I held my breath as David took this in. Then he looked at the field and said with a fierce but quiet determination, “I’m gonna run.”

I stood on the sidelines with the excited crowd as David moved up to the starting line. （开始第二段续写）The starter’s gun sounded, and David lurched forward with the other children. But he had only gone a few metres before he tripped and fell flat on the ground. My heart sank. As I started to shout encouragement, other voices around me took up the call. “Come on David, you can do it!” I knew without even looking that these voices were not just those of his schoolmates. They came from parents, teachers and kids from other schools, who quickly understood the courage it took David to attempt this picked himself up and started again. All the other runners had disappeared over the hill. But it didn’t matter. This was David’s run. He had worked for it, and he wouldn’t give up! As long as he was in sight, David heard people calling his waited anxiously by the finish line as the first runners completed the two-and-a-half kilometres of forest trails. Soon all of the other runners had come in and another race had begun. Still no David! I started to feel sick. Had I done the wrong thing? He hadn’t checked out the trail with the other runners. Could he have become lost? Finally, a small figure emerged from the forest. With heels kicking out to the side and his body rocking with the rhythm of his run, David plodded toward the home stretch. He raised his arms in triumph as he crossed the finish line to wild cheers and , when David’s coach slapped him on the back and said proudly, “Good job, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a toothy grin and said, “That was easy!”At the end of the year, the track coach asked the class to nominate one of their classmates for the athletic award for their grade. Without hesitation the whole class voted for David, saying that no one had worked harder for that award than was an amazing moment at our year-end assembly. The auditorium resounded with cheering and applause when David came forward and received his award for outstanding athletic achievement—from his beaming coach.