英语读后续写范文 第1篇

1.从原文中整理出3～5个小的情节，从中推理出续写的主要情节。情节不能自己读后凭空想象，按自己看过的小说、电视剧情节适当推理。

2.根据两个段首语来推理情节。段首语往往决定着这一整段话的走向，不可衔接不当。

3.根据关键词来推理情节发展。原文中关键词一般会在十个左右，也并不是都能用上的。有一部分关键词对于预测下面的情节是很有导向意义的，因而会在后文中用的到。

4.根据故事需要，丰富、有条理地增加一些次要的情节。比如人物的表情、动作、心理活动，细节描写等。

5.根据生活常识或者社会经验，丰富文章的细节。不可闹出不合常理的笑话，成为改卷老师紧张时期改卷期间的谈资。

英语读后续写范文 第2篇

脚部动作：

1. Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.

2. Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.

3. She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.

4. Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.

5. The shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived at the factory.

6. Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.

7. Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door.

8. Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.

9. Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears.

10. And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless.

手上动作：

1. Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an awward way.

2. Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.

3. The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly.

4. The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben's hand.

5. Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.

6. He parked down the street from Bobby's house, and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement.

7. The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and placed the parcel in Reuben's hands.

8. Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision.

9. Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.

10. She didn't say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly

情感描写：

1.喜悦

①The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。

②A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。

③A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。

④Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。

⑤His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。

⑥A wild gaiety took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。

⑦Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。

⑧I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。

⑨I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。

⑩She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。

2.愤怒：

①I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。

②He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。

③His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。

④He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。

⑤He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。

⑥His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。

⑦He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。

⑧He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。

⑨He flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。

⑩His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。

3.悲伤烦恼：

①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。

②I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。

③Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。

④Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。

⑤She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。

⑥ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。

⑦I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼里充满了泪水。

⑧A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。

⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。⑩The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。

4.害怕：

①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。

②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。

③She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧…

④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。

⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。

⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 / 恐惧淹没了他。

⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。

⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。

5. 感动：

①Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动，我们…

②Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。

③With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，...

英语读后续写范文 第3篇

I'm writing to tell you about our discussion about whether parks should be charged. On this issue, opinions are not correct. The students objected to the idea of admission fees.

They think the park should be free. People need a place to rest and enjoy. Free access will undoubtedly deter some people.

More importantly, it is necessary to build city gates and walls, which are harmful to the development of the city. On the other hand, people think that it should be free of charge, because you need to pay for gardeners and other projects, and buy the plants and saplings they suggest, but the cost should be Lower it.

中文翻译：

我写这封信是想告诉你我们关于公园是否应该收费的讨论。在这个问题上，意见是不正确的。学生们反对入场费的想法。

他们认为公园应该是免费的。人们需要一个可以休息和享受的地方，免费进入无疑会让一些人望而却步，更重要的是，有必要修建城门和城墙，这对城市的发展是有害的另一方面，人们认为应该免费收费，因为你需要支付园丁和其他工程的费用，并他们建议的植物和幼树，但是，费用应该低一些。

英语读后续写范文 第4篇

1.通读全文，读懂原文

通读全文首先要解决好五个W和一个H的问题，即理清人物who、地点where、时间when、事件what、原因why及怎样发展how。

2.构思情节，谋篇布局

按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性，构思好情节发展，这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑。因为这不是写科幻小说，不是写神话，因此应该符合现实发生的真实性。所以这个环节的主要任务是谋篇布局。布局谋篇最关键应利用好两方面的信息：十个标有下划线的关键词语。

3、高级词汇怎么放？

读后续写的词汇得分点除了一般的名词、形容词、副词之外，最重要的是高级动词！因为续写侧重叙事，里面涉及到的人的动作是非常多的，比如cry，这就过于简单，要侧重细节描写，to show, not to tell, 高分作文一般就会写，With shoulders shivering, her tears cannot help streaming down her face.她的双肩哆哆嗦嗦，眼泪情不自禁的从她脸上流下来。所以类似表现喜怒哀乐的情况，都要事先做好准备（注意，两三句即可，但这两三句一定要是最佳句，如句式，高级词汇都要是最好的，熟记于心，一直用即可），侧重刻画描写，脸，手，眼睛都可以描写。

4、关于情节，提倡一波两折。

虽说读后续写没有字数限制，但是考虑到字的大小与整体篇幅限制，一般两个波折即可，如事态变坏一个转折，最后事态好转一个转折即可。侧重人物矛盾与心理冲突，比如两人之间的猜忌，后重归于好，类似小学生作文。

英语读后续写范文 第5篇

Captain Henry, a one-year-old retired American fisherman, became a writer for the first time. After learning to read at the age of, he wrote and published his autobiography in Fisherman's language. For most of Mr.

Henry's life, not even his closest family knew he was illiterate. He was forced to drop out of school in third grade to do odd jobs. Job kept the secret in his chest and told only his late wife.

Henry's granddaughter told reporters how he avoided the problem by waiting for others to order in the restaurant first. One family said in his SSHE that he longed for education. He signed a document he couldn't read about where he was going to live, Marissa said.

Starting with his name, he eventually moved on to ABC and children's books. After his wife fell ill, he put the books down.

中文翻译：

“亨利船长”xx岁的退休渔夫成为第一次作家。他在岁时学会阅读后，用渔民的语言写并出版了他的自传。亨利先生一生中的大部分时间甚至连他最亲近的家人都不知道他是文盲。

他在xx年级时退学去读零工乔布把这个秘密藏在胸前，只告诉了他已故的妻子。亨利的孙女告诉记者，他是如何利用等别人先在餐厅点菜的伎俩来避免这个问题的。一个家庭在他的sshe中说他渴望受教育。

他签署了一份他无法阅读的关于他将要住在哪里的文件马莉萨说。从他的名字开始，他最终转到了ABC和儿童读物。在他妻子病倒后，他把这些书放下。