高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第一篇

书面表达是高中英语教学的一项重要内容，也是师生共同关注并亟待提高的一个课题。本文想从如下几个方面进行阐述。

一、学生习作的书面表达中常见问题分析

从高考英语书面表达江西考区试卷分析中，我们得知，学生平均得12分(本题25分)。可见我省学生写作水平普遍偏低，从中也可反映出书面表达教学的难度。学生常出现的错误主要有两方面：文章空洞，为达到字数要求而采用拼凑方式，添加与文章主题无关的内容;观点不鲜明，行文逻辑混乱，不能形成统一整体;用词错误、语法句型错误、句子结构混乱(单句、并列句、复合句不分)、乱用标点符号、不会用英语思维等。

二、提高英语写作水平的途径

1.通过多背、多读，夯实基础。

单词是英语写作的基础，让学生扩大词汇量，最传统、最简单的方法就是记忆和背诵。北京四中外语教学的一个传统就是“背诵”。该校从高一到高三年级的学生要背诵80篇小短文(《新概念英语》第二册)。高一背30篇，高二背30篇，高三背20篇。背多了，语感自然就出来了。

2.讲究方法，利用范文。

每次具体写作前，教师最好先提供优秀范文，再指导审题的思路，然后师生一起从结构、人称、时态、单词、承接等方面的进行讨论，使学生能欣赏、领会到其可取之处;接着再布置一篇类似的作文。这样做可以边学边用，由领会式掌握自然转化为实用式掌握。

3.注重写作形式，提高写作兴趣。

写作最忌讳的是每次给出一个题目，让学生冥思苦想地去“憋”作文。这样做，浪费时间不说，学生还会对英语写作产生畏难、厌烦情绪，影响对英语的学习兴趣。因此，笔者认为可适时采用不同的写作形式，降低难度，提高兴趣。如改写、仿写、缩写、续写等。

三、写作训练的策略

写作训练是项系统工程，应根据英语教学大纲分阶段实施。第一阶段应进行基础单词、基本句型、连贯词应用的强化训练，注意培养学生良好的写作习惯，如打草稿和修改等。第二阶段进行格式化训练，各式文体一类的练习。第三阶段要进行限时限量的写作强化训练，要求学生在规定的时间内，当堂上交，提高学生的写作速度。

从上面分析可知，写要经过由简到繁、由易到难的逐步训练，即需要由词、句到段、篇的系列化训练，而且要与视、说、听、读结合起来。同时写又是一个需要长期积累、持之以恒的过程。总之只要训练得法，我们一定能够越过写作困难这个鸿沟。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二篇

乡村的秋天 Autumn in Countryside

Autumn in Countryside

It gradually turns cool. The sunlight is no longer so strong and the cicadas have stopped crying. The hot summer went by at last. The favorite season in the year is coming.

Everywhere we can see the scene of bumper crops: on the fields is golden rice,on the trees are ripe fruits. The farmers faces are full of smiles. They are now expecting a good harvest through a summer's hard work.

The autumn evening is especially beautiful. When the setting sun goes slowly down to the west, the sky over the mountains is covered with red rays of evening sunlight, which shines upon the blue sky and floating clouds, just as the maple leaves fall onto the sky.

It is getting cool at dusk. The wind blows, the moonlight shines on the ground,the frogs croak and insects chirp in the fields. Such a situation will make you forget all the unhappy things in the daytime.

I love the beautiful season.

乡村的秋天

天气逐渐变冷了，阳光也不那么强烈，蝉也停止了呜叫，炎热的夏天终于过去了。一年之中人们最喜爱的季节已经来临。

到处都可以看到一派丰收的景象：田野里是金黄的水稻，树枝上挂满成熟的果实，农民的脸上洋溢着微笑。经过;个夏天的辛勤劳作，他们都期望有一个好收成。

秋天的夜晚格外美丽，当夕阳从西方缓缓落下时，山顶上方的天空布满了红色的霞;宛如枫叶飘上了天空。

黄昏时分，天气越来越凉爽，微风轻拂，月光轻洒在地面上。青蛙呱呱的叫声，和田间昆虫啾唧之声混合在一起。置身于这样的环境之中，会使你忘却白日里的所有不快。

我喜欢这个美丽的季节。

高考英语满分作文不要浪费水资源 Don't waste water.

请看下面的这幅漫画，再联想实际生活，写一篇短文，词数120左右。题目：Don’t Waste Water

A man is washing his clothes ,regardless of the notice above _Save the Water Please._

一个男人正在洗衣服，不管上面的通知“请保存水。”

As we see ,water is the source of life. But there is very limited available water resources in our world. So we shouldn't waste it. Of course, we have to use it to drink, cook, wash, clean and etc. But we must remember not to use it extravagantly. If we didn't stop such wasteful habits, we would cut off the development of the world and the human life.

正如我们所看到的，水是生命的源泉。但在我们的世界中，有非常有限的可用水资源。所以我们不应该浪费它。当然，我们要用它来喝，做饭，洗，清洁等，但我们必须记住不要使用它历。如果我们不停止这种浪费的习惯，我们就会切断世界的发展和人类的生活。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三篇

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.

The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.

All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作解析】

这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。

首先要进行自我介绍，简要交代写作背景，阐明写信目的。

第二段是文章的主题，要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来，文章用First of all，What’s more, The most important factor is that 等过渡性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。

最后需要使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第四篇

People always say to students that their main duty is to study and they should not spend time on other things except for study. However, most boys are born to love exercise, especially ball exercises. Thus, they are always blamed to spend time on playing balls, instead of spending all time on study. In my opinion, the idea is wrong. Proper exercise is good for study. Exercise can help students relax their mind and body. After a long time study, they need it very much. After relaxing, they can have a good state to study, which will improve their study efficiency. Besides, students always can sleep better after exercise. If they sleep well, they can have more energy on study. It promotes study. But spending too much time on exercise may have bad influence on study.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第五篇

They looked like a real football team — with snarling coach included. But the 10 men arrested at theweekend in Spain’s southern province of Cadiz were not going to play a match, despite their yellow and blue kit. They were drug traffickers who used their footballs, knapsacks and club strips, emblazoned with the team name of a local town, Guillen Moreno CF, as a ruse to fool border police as they passed from the Spanish enclave of Ceuta, in North Africa, to Algeciras, on the southern Spanish mainland, a police spokesman in Cadiz said.

The fake team would usually cross the Straits of Gibraltar into the province of Cadiz on Saturday afternoons with the hash tucked beneath their jerseys and stage a drama to enhance their credibility before border agents. The supposed manager, 49, would carry a roster in his hand and continuously bark at the young men “Everybody pay attention, everybody stay right here!” and “Come on, follow me!”.

The players would cross back to Ceuta on Sundays after the fictional match and actual drug sales in Spain. Police do not know how long the fake season lasted before a tip spurred an investigation. The game ended when officers stopped their cars in Cadiz and found a total of 16kg of hash hidden beneath the men’s strips in little pellets taped to their bodies.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第六篇

Many people, especially those who think they are not as talented as others, tend to give up in their undertakings and thus complain about life. Such people will certainly end up getting nowhere. Notice that most successful people are not unlike us. What makes them stand out is their devotedness to the job they are doing, which is typical of the story of Li Dahua, a neighbor of mine.

Dahua was brought up in a poor family. Since he didn't do well in school, he joined his father in collecting garbage for a living soon after he graduated from elementary school. His neighbors shook their heads whenever they saw him, thinking that this boy would by no means carve out a bright future. Years passed by, and Dahua kept collecting garbage, but he took one step further. Through books he knew how to sort out the waste he had collected and have it recycled. You know what? He has set up a recycling factory and become the richest man in town! His success proves the ancient Chinese saying: _There must be a use for my talent._

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第七篇

beginnings are apt to be shadowy， and so it is with the beginnings of that great mother of life， the sea. many people have debated how and when the earth got its ocean， and it is not surprising that their eplanations do not always agree.

for the plain and inescapable truth is that no one was there to see， and in the absence of eyewitness accounts there is bound to be a certain amount of disagreement. so if i tell here a story of how the young planet earth acquired an ocean， it must be a story pieced together from many sources and containing many whole chapters the details of which we can only imagine. the story is founded on the testimony of the earths most ancient rocks， which were young when the earth was young;on other evidence written on the face of the earths satellite， the moon; and on hints contained in the history of the sun and whole universe of star-filled space.

for although no man was there to witness this cosmic birth， the stars and the moon and the rocks were there，and， indeed， had much to do with the fact that there is an ocean.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第八篇

A teacher just likes a shining

A teacher just likes a shining star to students. Miss Fu, one of my English teacher, is a shining star in my life.

I happened to be in Miss Fu's class when I began my high school years. At that time, I dared not speak English aloud in public, for I was shy and my pronunciation and intonation were poor. Afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer the questions Miss Fu raised in class, even if I had some good answers to them. For a time, I even lost interest in practising spoken English. When Miss Fu found out the reason, she encouraged me to speak. First she bought me some English tapes and told me to listen to them carefully, and try to recite them. In class, I was often asked questions and given a lot of chances to practise by little, I became brave enough to speak, and was not afraid to speak English before others. Miss Fu smiled sweetly when she heard the news that I had been chosen to take part in an important oral English contest.

Whenever I look at the stars in the sky, I recognize the brightest one ---- the symbol of Miss Fu in my heart. Miss Fu will always be a shining star in my life!

【译文】

老师就像璀璨明星

老师对学生而言就像一个耀眼的明星。傅小姐，我的英语老师之一，是我生命中的一颗璀璨明星。

我恰好在傅小姐的阶级被当我开始我的高中年。当时，我不敢大声说话公共英语，因为我很害羞，我的发音和语调①较差。怕别人笑，我从来没有把我的`手傅小姐回答的问题在课堂上提出的，即使我已经给他们一些好的答案。一时间，我什至失去了练习英语口语的兴趣。当傅小姐发现了原因，她鼓励我发言。首先，她给我买了一些英语磁带，叫我仔细听取他们的意见，并尝试把它们背出来。在课堂上，我经常问的问题，并给了很多机会练习一点点，我就敢于说话，而不是害怕别人之前发言英语。傅小姐甜美微笑的时候，她听到了我被选中参加一个重要的英语口语比赛②部分消息。

每当我在看天上的星星，我承认在我心中最亮的一----陆富的象征。傅小姐将永远是我生命中的一颗璀璨明星!

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第九篇

Dear Tom,

It’s a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here.

I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer. I think the chance is of great importance for me. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile , I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. I also hope that the great effort I am making will pay off.

You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I can’t wait to see you again!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第十篇

A month ago, my parents asked me what present did I want for my birthday, then I told them that I wanted to raise a dog. I thought they would refuse me because they did it all the time, but this time they said yes. I was so surprised. My parents believed that I have grown up enough and could take care of this puppy. Indeed, I took charge of my little dog's daily life, even including her shits. I was so happy I had someone to accompany. The moment when I got home, she would run to me and sway her tail. What a lovely scene. I treat her as my close friend. Before I sleep, I will play with her and share my secret. Now I not only can take care of myself, but also learn to look after other people.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第十一篇

新丰县第一中学

听说读写四项技能中，写作能力是相对较难的，它能够体现英语学习者的英语表达能力和思维能力。培养学生的笔头交际能力是高中英语教学目的之一。然而现状却不容乐观，很多学生惧怕写作，存在着“学生说到写作心烦，教师见到学生的习作头痛”的现象。广州市教研室的黄子成老师在四月的广州一模分析会上说：广东NMET的书面表达平均分仅为十二分，由此可见学生写作之差。学生写作上的问题主要表现在用汉语思维方式造句、语法错误多、谋篇布局与衔接能力弱。针对以上问题，笔者认为高中英语写作教学应注意以下问题。

一、 注重写作教学中循序渐进的原则

英语属于结构语言。几乎所有英语句子都是五种基本句型的扩展、延伸或变化。因此，训练学生“写”就要进行五种基本句型的训练。五种基本句型是：S+V; S+V+O; S+V+O+O; S+V+P; S+V+O+C。练习的形式可以结合学生周围的人或事进行翻译或造句。1-2周后，再对学生进行由简单句发展到并列句及复杂句的翻译、造句、句型扩写及句型合并、转换的训练。

二、 注重写作训练形式的多样化

听说读写四种技能是相辅相成的。写作是一种语言输出形式，只有语言输入大于语言输出，语言输出才有可能；只有积累了一定的思想感受和大量的语言素材，写作能力才有可能进行，写作才有可能写好。因此，在平时的教学中要注重写作训练的多样性。

1、写作训练与对话教学相结合。

在dialogue的教学中，除了听录音、对话、表演、编对话外，还可要求学生把对话改写成一段短文。改写时要注意时态、语态、人称和前后的逻辑关系。如SEFC Book 2A Lesson 13的对话可在教师给出key words的情况下让学生改写成一篇小短文：1) a look at China Daily 2)What’s on this weekend? 3) performance at the People’s Theatre 4)when and where to meet

2.写作训练与阅读教学相结合

古人云“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”。阅读是写作的基础，阅读不仅能帮助学生积累思想，也能帮助他们积累语言写作素材。因此在平时的课文教学中，除了培养学生阅读能力外，还要对学生进行多种形式的写作技能训练，培养学生初步用英语进行笔头交际的能力。在课文教学中需要培养学生以下能力：

1） 听写能力 A.用英语记课堂笔记的能力；B.听写课文精彩句型、段落的能力

2）造句能力 运用所学的短语、词汇造句的能力

3) 运用checkpoints 的key words写一段话的能力。如SEFC Book2A Unit 1中，学生用in the hope of , lose heart等编了以下一段话：

I am fond of English. But at the beginning of Senior One I was’nt good at it. I often failed in the exams. Luckily, My English teacher was strict with us. She gave us a lecture on how to learn English. I followed her instruction day after day. In this way I’ve made a lot of progress…….

4）复述能力 教师可利用图表、数字、关键词和简笔画等让学生复述课文，随后再要求其写下来。如学完Charlie Chaplin之后，可要求学生根据以下几组数字简述Chaplin的一生:1889, 5, 8, 17, 1912, 13, 69, 1977

S: Charlie Chaplin was born in London in 1889. When he was five, he acted for the first time. At the age of eight, he joined a group of child actors. As a boy of seventeen he set off for the US. In 1912 Chaplin got his first part in the US.

In all his life, Chaplin acted in 13 films, wrote and directed 69 films. He died in 1977 in Switzerland.

复述之前，学生必须熟读课文，了解其主要内容和脉络，然后根据自己的理解改组课文，用自己的语言表述课文的内容。它能够很好地提高学生的口语及语言的精练度，是语言知识和语言能力的很好结合点。

5）仿写能力

模仿课文进行写作能提高学生遣词造句、谋篇布局以及衔接上下文的能力，仿写是提高学生写作能力的有效途径。如学了Canada一课之后笔者让学生按以下项目去咨询县志办的同志，收集新丰县的资料并将此以一个导游的身份写成短文。

A. Location: Northeast of Guangdong

B. Size: .2 square kilometers (cover)

C. Population: 25,000

D. Town: 10 towns

E. Language: Hakka（客家话）

F. History: move from the north of China (over 400 years ago)

G. Weather: neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer

H. Energy: water , forests (be rich in)

I. Native goods: clogs , dried sweet potatoes , dried mushrooms (be famous for)3.写作训练与听、说训练相结合 语言学家Britton指出：“学生口语的句型结构和表达方式往往是他们写作的基础”。而语言学家Tough则不仅强调口头表达能力和写作水平之间的重要联系，并且还指出：“教师必须在教授写作的同时，帮助学生提高和丰富其口头表达的技能，因为口头形式往往包含了大量近似书面语的结构和措辞”。教师可以通过以下途径将口语训练和写作训练结合起来。

A. 教师可用课前三分钟让学生围绕着一个主题进行Free talk口语训练。学生通过互相交流、讨论，共同构思内容和语篇结构。这种训练可帮助学生在一种轻松愉快的气氛中缩短构思时间，尽快进入主题，同时又有效地提高他们的口头表达能力。然后让学生在课外时间再落实到笔头的写作上。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第十二篇

In recent years, extravagance and waste have become increasingly serious in some of the university campus. We can see that papers, bottles and cans are thrown away after use; food is wasted just because of its poor taste; clothes are discarded simply owing to their old fashion. As a consequence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on creating a green campus.

There are at least two criteria to distinguish what is green campus. On the one hand, natural resources must be conserved and made full use of, for example, we, as college students, should take the wise use of papers and second-hand textbooks into account. On the other hand, education to build up thrift habits must be promoted by relevant departments and professionals at various levels.

Accordingly, it is necessary for us to take effective steps. For one thing, university authorities should respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of our natural resources, such as water, electricity, and so on. For another, we should enhance the awareness of college students that creating a green campus is of utmost significance to both our society and ourselves.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第十三篇

Boys and girls,

I’m the chairman of Student Union, Li Hua, and I have big news for you. To enrich our life on campus and improve our English, we, Student Union, set up an English club. Obviously, besides study, there are also other things beneficial to us. It is believed that the club can make our campus life colorful and rewarding. There goes the plan.

It is arranged that we will see English films in the auditorium on Tuesday evening. Apart from that, there is going to be an English debate or discussion on Saturday evening; yet, the specific topics haven’t been settled. If you have wonderful ideas and suggestions, please let us know.

I’ll highly appreciate it if you are actively involved in the club. You will never regret joining us. So, just do it.

Student Union

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第十四篇

Like every young girl, I pay attention to make myself look pretty, because if I get more attention from others, I will be very happy. So I start to follow the models and the movies stars' dressing style, then I find that compare to their skinny bodies, I look like a fat girl. So I have made up my mind to lose weight. As my body is in the growth period, my parents always ask me to eat more. When they find me start to eat less, they think I am sick. I tell them that I want to look beautiful, then my mother says that I am beautiful in her eyes. If I don't eat, I will look old. I search the Internet. The pictures of skinny girls scare me, so I give up losing weight. My annoyance is gone, and I am happy again.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第十五篇

I have heard a beautiful poetry, written by a novelist, Amy Cheung. With a little adjustment, it can vividly depict the alienation among people in reality - _The further distance in the world is not between life and death.

But when I stand in front of you, your eyes turn to your smartphone; don’t know that I love you._

The smartphone has been gaining a great popularity, becoming a toxic compulsion.

It has invaded our lives and occupied all our interstitial time. It is so commonly seen that the smartphone addicts attend to their phone, ignoring everything.

Even meeting with friends, they often pull out the phone in order to take a photo, check a message or even play with a game.

Seeming connected with the whole world, they have actually fiddled the conversation and done harm to the relationship.

It is high time that we threw away the phone and raised our heads up.

Do cherish the ones around us and appreciate the splendid scenery ahead of us.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第十六篇

October 1st is the national day of our country. This year, we have a golden week holiday for eight days. Besides, according to the new rules, all highways of our country are free of charge during the eight-day holiday. Therefore, many people choose self-driving tour, which expects to save much money. However, during these days we can see that the situation is not as good as expected.

Because of the huge traffic flow, tens of thousands of people catch traffic jam in highways, which rarely happened in the past. Besides, when they get to the destination, they find that they are crowed with people, which makes their trip worse. From TV or Internet, we can see that visitors of most famous scenic spots are far more than the maximum capacity.

Some people even fight with others. In addition, from this holiday, we can see many issues existing in the management of scenic spot. The managers do not do good preparation of this holiday, and their attitude towards visitors should be changed, especially those famous tourist attraction.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第十七篇

Recently, Chairman Xi attached the great importance of keeping the original mind, which was the source for us to fight for. When people get much farther, they will forget about the things that are important to them. In the movies, there always have the scene that pictures a man’s history of fighting. When he becomes successful, he first enjoys the fame and money, but later he feels somethings are missing in his life. The loss of family and close friends make him lost himself and doesn't feel happy. Looking back on his original life, he has the ambition to fight for the family with friends, but once he gets success, he starts to forget the early aim. No matter where we are, we need to remember our first thought. It is the light in the dark, leading us to the place we want.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第十八篇

Health is our most important possession, so we should do our best to maintain it. As we all know, good health is necessary to happiness and success. On the contrary, people who are in poor health are often pessimistic or depressed. As a rule, bad health means misery and failure.

As far as I'm concerned , there are three principal suggestions for us to follow. First of all, we should adopt a scientific diet, which provides the necessities for your body. The second one is that we are supposed to persist in taking physical exercise , especially the people working indoors. Last but not least, we are supposed to stay in a cheerful mood.

As for me, in order to keep fit, I force myself to keep away from the _junk food_ although it usually tastes good. Moreover, I even form good habits of doing morning exercises, listening to beautiful music and reading good books, which always cheer me up.

All in all, only by carefully obeying the laws of health can we keep ourselves healthy.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第十九篇

中学阶段对书面表达的要求是通过一定的资料提示，让学生用英语来阐述人物、事件并阐述一下自己对事件的想法、见解和主张。主要考查学生对所学英语知识进行综合运用的能力，需具备一定的观察、分析、语言组织能力和一定的写作技巧。从历年的高考答题的情况来看，书面表达是学生的薄弱环节，如何提高学生的写作能力是广大英语教师所面临的重要难题。

书面表达是实现交际的重要途径之一。书面表达需要坚实的基础，需要从早抓起，循序渐进，坚持不懈，它是一项长期的工作，蕴含在每天的教学中。这就要求教师在指导和训练学生写作上要有计划。只要持之以恒，循序渐进，学生的英语水平就一定会大幅度提高。

一、夯实基础，强化训练

书面表达的基本要求不能忽视。书面表达的质量既反映在表达内容上，又反映在书面形式上。因此，对学生提出规范而整洁的卷面要求非常必要，要有目的地对学生进行写作强化训练，对学生进行由写单词到写短语，由写短语到写句型的基本功训练，从易到难逐步深入，并让学生熟练掌握单词、短语、句型的多种表达方式，这才是培养学生书面表达能力的有效方法，才能为学生进一步学习写作打下良好的基础。

1.从大小写、格式、标点、卷面开始，教育学生养成良好的书写习惯

要强调句子的首字母要大写，段落的首句要缩进，英语的句号写法等。规范的大小写、标点符号和整洁的卷面是书面表达的基本要求，要让学生加以重视，这也是培养学生严谨的学习态度的一个方法。

2.认真过好单词关

单词是构成句子的基本单位。单词的拼写和用法是学生学习的重点。教师要花点时间教导学生如何记忆单词，利用音标、音节的方法是比较有效的。在高中英语单词教学中，教会学生用音标、分音节记单词，在句子中记单词，学生就会觉得记单词不可怕，准确性也提高了。

3.由单词过渡到句子

打好了词汇的基础，就要开始句子的训练了。短文是由句子组成的，简单句是句子的基础，要写好简单句，首先要让学生掌握英语的五种句型，教师要要求学生学会用其简单描述人和事。新课标要求高中学生具有初步的书面表达能力。

4.解析典型错误，这是在教学中常用的`提高学生书面表达能力的有效方法之一

在教学过程中，教师应不断强调每个句子有一个时态和语态变化的动词谓语。学生的书面表达作业中单词拼写和动词用法错误最多，各占错误中的百分之二十左右。动词是句子的灵魂，不少学生常常会错用英语的时态和语态。在批改作业时，将学生所犯错误记录下来，强调普遍问题，然后在讲评时将这样的错误句，写在黑板上带领学生讨论、分析并纠正。

二、把握技巧，提高作文档次

1.认真审题立意，确定写作中心

找出根据这个中心能够扩展的材料有哪些，要避免写那些与中心内容无关紧要的细节。

2.围绕中心，列出写作提纲

提纲一定要包含所提供的情景、要点，同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。把要点列成提纲，根据所给的信息与要点，实行信息的重组与整合，统筹安排布局，使其条理化，有序化，避免逐条翻译。

3.积累连接词和过渡语

书面表达不仅要求学生能写出好句子，而且要求学生能组句成段，组段成篇。因此，学生还应积累一些连接词和过渡语，使其衔接自然，意思连贯。中学阶段经常用到的连接词和过渡语有： first of all，besides，but，however，on the contrary，meanwhile，on the other hand… in my opinion，in my view，in fac等。上面提到的这些连接词和过渡语虽然看上去简单，语义明了，但要做到写作时恰当运用却不是一件容易的事。因此要求学生在平时的训练中有意识地加以运用，以达到在考场上信手拈来的熟练程度。

三、提高英语写作能力的策略

1.平时重视积累，加强阅读

写作是信息的输出，而阅读则是信息的输入，阅读不仅能帮助学生积累思想，也能帮助他们积累语言素材。

2.布置写作任务，明确写作要求、要点以及字数等

3.模仿范文，拓展写作思路

各种语言都有其约定俗成的习惯用法，因此，模仿是提高书面表达技能极其有效的方法，在范文的基础上，添加自己的内容，开拓写作思路。

4.规范文体格式，提升写作档次

英语写作有严格的文体格式，所以在训练学生写作时只注重指导他们写出合乎语法规则的语句是远远不够的。

总之，写作能力的培养和提高，有赖于扎实的基础，写作技巧和大量的写作实践。只要我们从这点出发，充分调动学生的学习积极性，以学生为中心，创造良好的课内外语言环境，定能有效促进学生写作能力的形成，改变目前学生写作能力弱的现状，推动英语写作教学再上新台阶。新课程标准对于高中英语书面表达教学提出了更高的要求，同时，新教材的使用也为高中英语书面表达教学提供了契机，这就迫切要求我们高中英语教师在书面表达教学中有所突破。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二十篇

It has been estimated that smokers have made up half of the population in China. And the smokers are becoming younger and younger, even ineluding some middle school students.

Nowadays more and more people have realized smoking can do harm to peopleshealth. However, some people still enjoy smoking. Why? Because some of them think it is a kind of fashion, some think it is of great fun and others, think that smoking can refresh themselves.

In fact, smoking is a bad habit. It can cause a lot of diseases. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.

Smoking is harmful and it is not only bad for smokers themselves, but also bad for non-smokers.

Therefore, I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二十一篇

I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy and his eyes shine with wisdom.

I have known him since Senior One. We are both interested in English. Once both of us entered for an English contest. How eagerly I expected to get a prize! On hearing that I had failed in the contest, I could hardly hold back my tears. “What a pity!” I murmured to myself over and over again. I felt that the world had become cold and everyone seemed to be laughing at love English and have gone all out to study it since my first day in the junior middle school. I have even dreamed of entering a foreign language institute. So I felt very sad.

Just at this time, I received a short letter in English, saying, “Failure is the mother of success. Cheer up! Don't lose confidence. Keep on your study and you will succeed!” I knew it was from the good friend of words encouraged me greatly. I forgot all my sadness. From then on, I studied English even harder. In the next English contest, I got the first prize. Of course, he was delighted with my success.

【译文】

我有一个很好的朋友。他是一个英俊的男孩，有着智慧光芒的眼睛。

我从高一年级起就认识他了。我们都对英语感兴趣。我们曾一起进入了一个英语比赛。我特别期望自己能赢!一听说我比赛失败后，我几乎不能阻止我的眼泪。 “真可惜!”我喃喃地对自己一遍又一遍。我认为，世界变得寒冷，每个人都似乎在笑我，我爱英语，并全力研究，自从我进入初中第一天。我曾梦想进入一个外语学院。因此，我感到非常难过。

就在这个时候，我收到了简短的英文信，说：“失败是成功之母。振作起来!不要失去信心。继续你的学习，你就会成功!”我知道它来自我的好朋友。他的话让我非常鼓舞。我忘了我所有的悲伤。从此，我更加努力学习英语。在接下来的英语竞赛，我获得了第一名。当然，他很高兴我的成功。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二十二篇

There are four people in my family, my parents, my sister and I. My father is very strict to us. When we make mistakes, he educates us. But my mother is very gentle. When my father is angry, she always consoles my sister and I then says good words about my father. Though sometimes we have arguments, the family atmosphere is very harmonious. For parents, one must play the strict role while the other plays the gentle role. My parents educate us in the classic way. My sister and I have grown up, and we are from naughty girls to responsible adults. Now we are brave and polite. When people speak highly of us, my parents will be very happy, because it owes to their education. I am lucky to born in a harmonious family.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二十三篇

【题目要求】

假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：

1. 比赛信息;

2. 赛前准备;

3. 表达期待。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【满分优秀范文】

Dear Chris,

How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.

As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition. Additionally, not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. What will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. Therefore, we must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as we can.

So excited am I that I can’t wait to join in about you? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作指导】

本题要求：作为排球队队长李华，给队友Chris写一封邮件告知他近期球队将参加比赛，主要的要点包含三项，分别是：比赛信息、赛前准备、表达期待。字数要求100左右，考生应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。作文的难度不大，可以灵活运用学过的高级短语和句型，例如定语从句;名词性从句;非谓语动词;倒装句等等。另外要注意衔接词汇的使用以使行文连贯;高级词汇的使用以提升作品的档次。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二十四篇

No one will deny that human beings have benefited a lot from the invention of television. It makes people learn the latest news and allows them to follow the latest development in politics and science. Many of the TV programs are both instructive and stimulating. People can almost travel throughout the world and acquaint themselves with the strangest customs while staying in their sitting room. Radio programs might provide the similar service， but on television screen everything is much more vivid， much more real.

However， people also have different opinions on television and have argued heartedly about its advantages and disadvantages since its invention. Some even relate it to the negative influence on our children and the increasing crime rate. One anxious mother said， TV is really a nuisance to my son. He spends so much time watching TV that he doesnt do well in studying. He needs to stop! According to the police， the number of young criminals is increasing rapidly， which results in the TV programs. They said some programs were full of violence and obscenity. They have bad influences on children.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二十五篇

初中英语书面表达探讨

英语书面表达是学生笔头交际的一个重要方式。但是我通过对新课程改革后的115名级学生的跟踪调查与分析，得出了目前初中生英语写作能力较差，总体上呈现下滑趋势的结论。那么如何提高学生的写作水平呢？我认为需从以下两方面入手。

一、了解学生英语书面表达存在的问题

老师要帮助学生提高英语书面表达的水平，就要先看看学生在英语书面表达上主要存在哪些问题，这样才能确定教学的方向和目标，以下列出了扬州市这几年中考英语书面表达学生失分的情况：

（一）内容要点的完整性。

内容要点齐全，这是中考书面表达的首要要求。评卷时，阅卷老师先根据考生的内容要点初步确定作文的档次。若缺少一个要点，往往要降低一个档次，也就是要减少2分。

（二）语言表达的准确性。

准确性是指要求写出语法正确的句子，包括时态、语态、用词和句法等，但是不少考生受汉语思维习惯的影响，在写作时不自觉产生不规范的表达，比方：“有很多学生正在操场上玩耍。”学生会这样译：“There are many students are playing on the playground.”要做到准确、地道地表达文章，首先必须牢记掌握一些常用的句型或习惯表达，避免中文式英语，在实践中不断总结中英表达差异，养成用英语思维写作的习惯。

（三）语篇结合的连贯性。

连贯性是指根据整篇文章意思的需要，有效采用不同的连接手段，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。关联词就是常用的连接手段之一。这些表示逻辑关系的关联词语，使文章前后连贯，结合紧凑，过渡自然，如表示顺序的first，then，finally；表示时间的in the past，now at present in the future；表示转折的but，however等。

（四）文章的层次感要强。

不少学生从上向下一气呵成，没有开头的提出话题，主体的细节描述，文章结尾的归纳总结。其中还含有很多次重点的构建，这是对学生思维能力的挑战。

（五）篇幅在允许的词数范围之内。

文章词数的多少直接影响对文章的评分。这是一个很容易让考生忽视的问题，所以考生在写作时要确保文章词数在题目要求的范围之内。

二、加强书面表达能力的培养

（一）夯实基础，培养能力。

1.过好词汇关，踏实词汇与短语。英国语言学家说：“我们不能接受语法比词汇更重要的说法，没有语法，人们表达的事物寥寥无几，而没有词汇，人们则无法表达任何东西。”一定的词汇量是学生发展语言能力的必要基础，而听写是促使学生掌握单词和短语拼写的有效方式。江苏省丰县第二中学周兴东提出的“”效果很不错，每节课进行8分钟的听写，他主张听写内容有三：单词与词组、单句、段落；听写难度有三：基础、中档、高档各占30%，以及听写形式、听写作业的布置批改等。听写的内容尽量以学生们的兴趣、爱好或熟知为出发点。

2.加强语法训练。熟悉语法规则是英语写作得以顺利进行的条件。学习语法可帮助学生更准确地理解语言现象并表达思想感情，使学生在写作时少走弯路，少出错误，提高正确运用语言的自觉性，降低盲目性。

3.日常教学细思量，写作意识长培养。培养写作能力不是一蹴而就的事情，日积月累才有质的飞跃。牛津初中英语教材每个单元分有八个板块，在每单元Main Task板块要求学生习作。自初一起，我就加强对十级学生书面表达能力的培养。初一学生笔头作文刚起步，于是我总是让学生仿写。随着知识积累的增加，到初二时，就逐渐地和学生分析研究话题文章的结构，总体上有三部分：Introduction，Main body，Conclusion，并在平时的教学中不断为学生创设新的情境，让他们拓展想象的空间，发散思维，学生的综合运用能力在老师的一次次点拨中就无形地提高了。比方：我市多家中小学响应市政府的倡议“家在扬州・文明餐桌行动”，展开相关“光盘行动”的活动。请以“Against Food Waste”为题，用英语写一篇短文。我和同学们就此话题进行讨论，列举同学们展开光盘行动的一些实际做法。

（二）掌握技巧，训练提高。

虽然英语书面表达形式灵活多变，但万变不离其宗，把握完成书面表达的基本方法和技巧是关键。

1.审题。根据题目所提供的信息，分析、判断出题意图，明确文章体裁与时态。不同的题材对应不同的时态。现将几种常用时态及所用体裁总结如下：

2.谋篇。围绕题目给出的信息，编排文章的体系：开头如何交代所发生的事情，主体部分如何对话题进行阐述补充，结尾如何对文章总结归纳。并要考虑好句与句之间的.过渡衔接，拓展性的地方的合理发挥，简洁扼要的结尾归纳。比方说：4月20日雅安发生重大地震，人员伤亡很大，针对该话题我和同学们展开小组讨论。经过热烈的讨论，大家达成这样的共识：在第一段介绍这次地震的时间、地点及后果。在第二段阐述地震后各地人们及政府都积极采取行动。第三段提出对雅安人民的祝福。

3.认真誊写，卷面美化。“见文如见人”，“文如其人”，所以誊写过程要求整洁美观，字体要端正清晰。

（三）当场展示，明白得失。

对学生的写作要做到有问题必究，以及让学生欣赏优美文章是如何写的，这就需要老师做作文后的诊断，收集问题作文进行归类探究，挑选高质量的优秀作文学习。在不断的探讨中，学生的作文会有很大的改变。下面是一篇学生的习作：

There was an earthquake happened in Ya’an at about 8 o’clock on 4 20，.Many houses fell people were died and more than10，000 people hurt. The doctors，nurses，firemen and volunteers from all over the country hurried to the scene and tried to cure the businesses raised many things such as clothes，food，water and medicine to the local pop stars organized charity shows to raise local government took action actively to search more lost people and helped them.

I hope the rest people stand people can help them.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二十六篇

The world will be stunned by China's opening ceremony of the Olympic Games on August 8 in Beijing, The Sydney Morning Herald said on Friday.?

In a story about the rehearsal of the Olympic opening ceremony on Wednesday night, the paper quoted Ric Birch, a chief adviser to the director of the ceremony Zhang Yimou, as saying that _The world can expect, of course, to be gobsmacked._?

Birch, an Australian, has been involved in all the opening ceremonies since he cemented his reputation as a creative guru at the Los Angeles Olympics in 1984.?

The story said the extravagant light show of the rehearsal also featured the inner shell of Beijing National Stadium, known as the Bird's Nest, lit in a vibrant red.?

It added that Zhang Yimou has been trying to fit 5,000 years of Chinese culture into 50 minutes during the grand opening ceremony. However, weather is another challenge for the ceremony, the paper added.?

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二十七篇

As the economy develops, most people have the incomes. For some children, their parents can provide them all the things they want. When people start to chase for more amusement, some of them cross the limited line and do the criminal things. Many young people have been reported to take drug in group. The bad guys try to control these young people, so they seduce them to take drugs to make more profit. It is very dangerous to have a taste of drug. Once people try, it is hard for them to get rid of it. The drugs only brings negative sides to people's life, some even to die for it. So a wise person will say no to drugs and the government has taken strict laws to control drugs.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二十八篇

【题目要求】

假如你是李华Li Hua，你的英国朋友Peter给你发来微信，想了解一下你的家乡自“十九大(the 19th National Congress of the Communist Party of China)”以来所发生的变化，请你用英文给他回复。

内容如下：1. 精准扶贫(targeted poverty reduction)，效果良好;2. 环境保护得到了明显改善。

注意：1. 词数100 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【优秀范文】

Dear Peter,

I’m glad that you are caring about the development of my hometown. Now I will tell you something about it.

Great changes have taken place since the19th National Congress of the Communist Party of China. The targeted poverty reduction has reached its ideal aims. Many poor families have got effective help from local government and have improved their life greatly. Many old houses are replaced by new tall buildings which are surrounded with green trees and colourful flowers. The rivers that had been polluted seriously before are getting clearer and clearer. Besides, all kinds of fishes return the rivers. The sky is filled with white and cleaner clouds.

Please come to visit my hometown in the near future.

Yours,

Li Hua

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第二十九篇

Title: Want a second-hand bicycle? Here it is!

Content:

内容：

Since I am going to graduate, the bicycle that I have ridden for three years is of no use any more. So I want to exchange it with whoever needs it.

自从我毕业后，我已经骑了三年的自行车不再使用了。所以我想和任何需要的人交换它。

The bike is in plain black and easy to ride. Though it’s designed for racing, you can use it for everyday life as well. With a lock behind the seat, it can be locked anywhere you like, removing the trouble of parking. Old as it, the bike functions well. And I’m sure you will love it at the first sight.

这辆自行车很黑，很容易骑。虽然它的设计，赛车，你可以使用它的日常生活，以及。有了一个锁在座位后面，它可以被锁在任何你喜欢的地方，消除了停车的麻烦。老了，自行车功能很好。我敢肯定你会爱上它的第一眼。

If you have a MP4 player and don’t want to keep it, you can exchange it with me. Anyone who has the intention please leave a message here, and I will contact you later.

如果你有一个MP4播放器，不想要它，你可以和我交换。有意者请在这里留言，稍后我会联系你的。

Thanks.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三十篇

Dear Peter,

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan send your photos to .

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

Lihua

译文：

我们学校摄影俱乐部将举办国际高中学生摄影展。主题的展示是环保。它将从6月15日开始，持续三周。有兴趣的学生参加。我知道你拍了好的照片，你总是想做一些环保的事。我记得你告诉我，你上一次主题的一些照片visitedour学校。这无疑是一个很好的机会让更多的人看到他们。如果你想加入，你可以发送你的照片。

希望不久能收到你的来信。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三十一篇

Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【写作指导】

今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。

首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。

第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。

第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三十二篇

【题目】

假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣。他想请你介绍你最喜欢的一个节日，如中秋节、端午节、春节等，你通常是怎么庆祝的，以及你喜欢这个节日的原因。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：eat, get together, share, happy, special

【范文】

Hi! Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.

My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It usually comes in September or October. On that day, our family members usually get together and have a nice meal. After that, I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families.

I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes. They are in the shape of a full moon. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love and miss.

In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a day of pleasure and happiness. I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三十三篇

信的内容写一封回信，帮他出出主意。字数约为100左右。

Dear Editor,

My physics teacher is very strict with us. I often feel nervous in his classes because we are punished by being made to stand for a few minutes if we can't answer his questions. It's embarrassing (尴尬) to be made to stand in class, so I hate physics classes. However, I really want to do well in physics. What should I do?

Yours sincerely

Zhang Ying

Dear Zhang Ying,

I am sorry you are having difficulty with your physics classes. Teachers have many different ways of encouraging students to put in more effort — it seems as though your physics teacher thinks fear is the best way! He does it because he thinks it will produce results. If you feel that it is stopping you from doing your best then you should tell him. You say you want to do well in physics and if your teacher knows this, he will be pleased. It is only when students are not trying as hard as they can that a teacher is forced to take action. If he is aware of your worries, perhaps he will suggest other ways of helping you improve your work.

Editor

亲爱的张颖，

我很抱歉你在物理课上遇到了困难。老师们有许多不同的方式鼓励学生投入更多的精力，这似乎是你的物理老师认为恐惧是最好的方式！他这样做是因为他认为这会产生结果。如果你觉得这是阻止你做你最好的，那么你应该告诉他。你说你想在物理方面做得很好，如果你的老师知道这一点，他会很高兴的。只有当学生没有尽可能地努力，他们可以教师被迫采取行动。如果他知道你的担心，也许他会建议其他的方法来帮助你改善工作。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三十四篇

一、考点聚焦

书面表达题旨在测试考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。从历年高考试卷来看，书面表达是指导性写作，即按照题目所给的目的、时间、对象、地点、内容、长度等条件去完成写作。它不同于命题作文，可以随意发挥；也不是简单的句子翻译。必须做到行文切题，紧扣中心思想，不漏要点，并且意思连贯，文理通顺，语言准确、得当。

二、应试技巧点拨

1.首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。

2.列题纲使用要点条理化，序化，统筹安排布局。

3.勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。

4.要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。

5.遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。

6.注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。

7.注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。

8.最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。

三、精典范例

例1 （NMET ）

假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。

周末活动（减负前） 周末活动（减负后）

白天：上课、做作业 白天：参观博物馆，学习电脑、绘画等

晚上：做作业 晚上：看新闻、读书、看报

就寝时间：11:30 就寝时间：10:30

注意：1.词数100左右。2.开头已为你写好。

生词：reduce learning load减轻学习负担

Dear Dick,

How nice to hear from you again.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

NMET 2001 年高考书面表达试题要求考生根据以表格的形式提供的情景用英语写一篇100个单词左右的书信，给澳大利亚朋友Dicl介绍减负给自己学习和生活带来的变化。写作过程中所需要的生词已给出，短文的开头也已经为考生写好。

写作过程：

1.认真审题，明确要求。

①由汉语提示可知，应用第一人称完成短文；

②在写作过程中，要突出减负给学习生活带来的便利；

③在写作过程中，要根据表格中的中文提示，写成一篇行文连贯、条理清楚的文章而不宜将表格中的中文直译成英语。

2.审视表格，列出要点。

①过去忙于上课、做作业；

②现在有时间看新闻、参观博物馆等；

③现在有时间看新闻、读报纸；

④不必再熬夜。

3.依据要点，编拟提纲。

① I used to have to do endless homework and attend classes even

at weekends.

②Now I have more free time to read books, visit museums even

and so on.

③In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers.④I can go to bed earlier.

4.按照文体，组织语篇。

One possible version:

Dear Dick,

How nice to hear from you again. You want to known what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time, I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三十五篇

After the college entrance examination or college graduation, some students will choose to go abroad to for further study. For this behavior, some people support it and some against it. In fact, going abroad not only needs a lot of money but also requires the students have a good foundation of English. If the students have the condition to study abroad, I suggest they choose to go. After all, knowledge is no boundary and the more they learn the better they will be. But the students who are not having those conditions, I don’t think they should go abroad, because the stress for them is too large. No matter domain education or abroad education can educate them well. Besides, maybe they still need to consider their own character situation. In a word, whether a person should go abroad or not depends on their own situation.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三十六篇

英语书面表达题思路点拨

1.认真审题，明确要求

1)审文体。首先要弄清写何种体裁的文章。体裁有记叙文，应用文，议论文等。应用文又包括书信，通知，日记，便条等。

2)审人称。即要弄清书面表达要用第一人称，第二人称，还是第三人称。

3)审时态。记叙文尤其日记多以一般过去时为主，说明文和议论文多以一般现在时为主。

2.紧扣主题，组织要点

书面表达评分的主要依据是内容，因此在认真审题，弄清题意的基础上，要逐个地完整无缺地把内容要点列出来，对于以图画或图表为内容的提示，更要仔细观察。写作时必要的细节要紧扣主题，发挥要适度，不要太随意。

3.选词造句，表达准确

一篇好的文章，要尽可能使用较多的词语和句式结构，如：从句、非谓语动词结构、插入语、谚语、倒装句、强调句、被动结构和其他常见句型。如：1>.Many people believe that we should keep our own tradition不如换成It is widely believed that we should keep our own tradition. 2>.This is the best hotel you can find here可以改为You can’t find a better hotel here或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel. 3>.We can solve the problem only when everybody takes action不如改为：Only when everybody takes action can we solve the problem会更好。

4.整理成篇，行文连贯

一篇好的书面表达要有合理的段落层次，让人感觉条理清新，易得高分。每一段落要有一个主题句和几个支撑句。一般文章有三段：主题段------提出问题或论点;发展段-------围绕主题讨论、论据或列举;结尾段-------得出结论，即论证。

为了使文章结构紧凑，自然流畅，段落之间要使用适当的过度语;句子之间要使用合理的逻辑衔接词。如：It was very noisy, I could hardly go to sleep.这句话可以修改为：It was so noisy that I could hardly go to sleep / I could hardly go to sleep because it was very noisy / As a result of the noise, I could hardly go to sleep / With so much noise, I could hardly go to sleep等等。

5.书面表达注意事项：

卷面要干净，字迹要工整。阅卷者首先是凭印象归档，看你的作文够得上什么等级，所以第一印象最为重要，正所谓先入为主，因此开头几句和结尾几句显得特别重要：阅卷者大多是大学老师和高中老师，因此他们往往注重语言的地道程度，一两句Chinglish可能会使你的作文大打折扣，至少会引起他查找更多错误的意向。

直接切题，不宜过多发挥

书面表达不同于翻译。遇到生词、难句要善于换个角度思考，绕道而行。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三十七篇

We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.

When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.

范文2

The person I respect

For me, the most respectable person round me is my best friend, Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in my class, who is crazy about reading, learning and helping other people.

There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him. First and foremost, needless to say, he is good at English, for he has lived in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student. Additionally, no one can deny he gets along well with all our classmates, enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and is always ready to help others. Last but certainly not least, he has a lot of life experience, considering that he has been serving as vice monitor for many years.

Hopefully, I could become an outstanding person like Li Hua. I have the confidence that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.

范文3

The person I respect

There are many respectable people around us. Take my neighbor Uncle Li for is a volunteer who works as a gate guard in our community during the epidemic of COVID-19, and his main duty is to measure body temperature and check the passes for exit and entry.

Regardless of the risk of getting infected,Uncle Li is responsible and devoted to his job. Even in terrible weather, he still sticks to his post and leaves no one unchecked. Thanks to his efforts in epidemic prevention and control, our neighborhood has been in a good state.

Actually, there are many people like Uncle Li around us, and they well deserve our respect.

范文4

The person I respect

There are many respectable people around us. And the person I respect most is my physics teacher. She's of medium height, with long and blonde hair. She is so patient with each student that we all like her. It's her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her. When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently on the shoulder and gave me great encouragement.

She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person. Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect.

范文5

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三十八篇

The early bird will catch worms

An old saying _The early bird will catch worms_ reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.

For example, the Chinese athletes' excellent performance in 2010 Olympic Winter Games in Vancouver is definitely the result of their early planning and hard training. If they don' t set the aim and word work, even though they have the best talents, they can't compete with others and get more medals.

Another case in point is my learning experience. I was good at English, but I couldn't pass the exam, for I wasn't prepared well before the examination. I had many things to solve at that time. As I met the complex things, I was at a loss. The reason was that I had no plan and involved in many things and didn't study more hard, so I failed.

In short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第三十九篇

I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy and his eyes shine with wisdom.

I have known him since Senior One. We are both interested in English. Once both of us entered for an English contest. How eagerly I expected to get a prize! On hearing that I had failed in the contest, I could hardly hold back my tears. _What a pity!_ I murmured to myself over and over again. I felt that the world had become cold and everyone seemed to be laughing at love English and have gone all out to study it since my first day in the junior middle school. I have even dreamed of entering a foreign language institute. So I felt very sad.

Just at this time, I received a short letter in English, saying, _Failure is the mother of success. Cheer up! Dont lose confidence. Keep on your study and you will succeed!_ I knew it was from the good friend of words encouraged me greatly. I forgot all my sadness. From then on, I studied English even harder. In the next English contest, I got the first prize. Of course, he was delighted with my success.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第四十篇

实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

注意：

1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone.

大家下午好。

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

今天我演讲的题目是“做一个好听众”。

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

善于倾听，能表现出尊重，增进理解，增进人际关系。

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

许多人认为父母应该多听他们的孩子，这样他们就会更好地理解他们，并发现很容易缩小代沟；教师应该多听他们的学生，然后他们可以满足他们的需要更好，并把自己在一个良好的关系，学生，学生应该多听他们的同学，从而他们将帮助和相互学习，和友谊可能会形成。

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

我想强调的是，我们每个人都应该听从别人的要求。表现出你的尊重，从不停止别人的谈话，表明你对一个支持性的沉默或是一个微笑的微笑很感兴趣；对不同意见的人持开放态度，即使你不喜欢他们。用一个词，好的听力可以使我们彼此接近。

Thank you for your listening!

谢谢你的聆听！

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第四十一篇

上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，

内容包括：1.农场情况;

2.采摘过程;

3.个人感受。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.题目已为你写好。

题目：My Weekend

My weekendLast weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is.

We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第四十二篇

Today's students complain: _it's too stressful!_ _How come so much pressure?_ And I think we should be thankful for the stress.

For example, take me to say: very not easy summer vacation, I really want to relax greatly, but father and mother give me pressure, want me to practice sports, to finish the homework. And I, at the request, had completed the task carefully, and now suddenly I found my body strong, with perseverance, and my writing improved. So I thought, if my parents didn't give me the pressure to do it seriously, and let me manage myself, I'm afraid there wouldn't be any progress.

Stress not only leads to progress, but there is also a goal of stress, and there is an incentive to move forward, and everything will be done better and faster.

In times of stress, try to turn the stress into motivation, instead of cutting corners.

Stress limits us, sets goals and gives us the motivation to get things done. It can be said that stress makes our task better, faster and more efficient!

So, stress is not necessarily a bad thing. We need to change the pressure for motivation and the goal. To be honest, I think pressure gives us efficiency and success. Isn't it?

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第四十三篇

On the afternoon of Labor Day holiday, our family went out to play together. Colorful flowers welcome us with a smile; The grass tigers stretched out their small heads and waved to us. We enjoyed the beautiful scenery while hiking.

Along the way, the Yo Yo dog jumped playfully into the water hole, and others splashed mud and water. We came to a rock and saw beautiful and fragrant honeysuckle all over the field. Cousin and cousin couldn't wait to pick up the stolen honeysuckle. Pick, I was mixed with honeysuckle and a little cane, slipped under my feet and fell to the ground. If I hold the honeysuckle vine tightly, I may catch its fragments. After picking flowers, my mother asked us, _do you know the benefits of honeysuckle?_ Cousin said, _honeysuckle is Shannon._ Cousin said, _honeysuckle can clear away heat, reduce fire and cause disease._ I said, _honeysuckle can also reduce summer heat._ Her mother said, _you're right, but the best place of honeysuckle is native. She doesn't appreciate other people's life._

After watching the play, I not only enjoyed the beautiful scenery, but also understood the true meaning of life. Ah, I really gained a lot.

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第四十四篇

第一，写好句子

1) 熟悉并掌握形成完整句子的基本框架结构。我们知道，单词、语法是学习、掌握和运用语言的基础，然而只靠它们拼凑句子是远远不够的，耗时费力不说，拼凑出来的也多是汉语式的英语，很不地道。因此，考生平时必须牢记所学过的“固定搭配”及“词组句型”，并会活用。写句子要注意以下几点：（1）主谓要一致；（2）正确使用动词的时态、语态、语气；（3）名词的格要与代词的格一致；（4)句子结构成分完整，特别注意不要漏掉或添加成分。

2)一个句子一个重心，句意清楚，合乎逻辑。

3)句子开头首字母要大字，句末要使用正确的英语标点符号。

第二．组句成文

一般说来，文章可以通过句子的进展和句子之间的各种结合来构成。

1)熟悉并掌握表示并列、递进、转折等关系的过渡词(transitional words)。例如：

并列关系：and, as well as, also…

递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more…

转折关系：but, yet, however, although, otherwise, or, in spite of, despite, instead of, in the end…

时间顺序：while, when, soon after, before, afterward, finally, first, then, next, as soon as …

比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand…

总结 in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all,

generally speaking…

进一步阐述：in other words, that is to say, for example, for instance, such as …

因果关系：as a result, so, thus, therefore…

2) 明确表达文章主题，内容要点全面，不要节外生枝。

3) 要点安排得当，使之文通字顺，合乎逻辑,层次清晰。

4) 注意养成写完后自我检查的习惯，应重点检查：

a, 要点有无遗漏； b. 句法、词法有没有问题；

c. 单词拼写有无错误； d. 大小写、标点符号有无问题；

e. 字数是否在题目要求范围之内。

二、高考英语写作高分秘诀

1．句式要有变化

① 复杂句、并列句

② 倒装句

（1）虚拟语气中if省略； （2）only+状语置于句首

（3）否定词置于句首 （4）地点副词置于句首

③ 强调句型

It is ……that (who)…

④ 非谓语动词。

⑤ 虚拟语气

⑥ 固定句型结构

too…to… so…that… such a…that… not only…but also… neither…nor… such as… not …until… so that… either…or…

⑦直接引语与间接引语

多种时态，动名词、不定式，并列结构

2．要使用高等级词汇及短语

① 使用高等级词汇 ② 使用短语 ③ 使用谚语

④ 使用表强调的词，如alone, just, single, only, not…at all; on the earth; the very; on earth等

⑤ 使用修辞手法:明喻， 暗喻，夸张，头韵，拟人等

as busy as a bee; as proud as a peacock; as blind as a bat.

3. 使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，一气呵成。

1） 用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

above before me here on the left

across below in the distance on the right

beyond nearby opposite to over

also further next to on top of

up down close to beneath

under around near to along

2) 用于按时间顺序展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

soon, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early,

this morning /year, now, after, at present, later, afterwards finally, at last, all of a sudden , at noon ,

in the morning/afternoon/evening

3) 用于按分析法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

first, second, etc. now for this purpose

but as a result furthermore

finally at last moreover

also therefore likewise

another for example next

yet for instance on the contrary

once in addition in summary

such in this case on the other hand

then otherwise in conclusion

thus in closing

4) 用于按比较法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

another moreover in addition (to)

equally important too, also at the same time

besides then in the same way

in fact like, similarly

5) 用于按对比法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

on the contrary different from on the other hand in contrast to despite in spite of

yet, but unlike nevertheless

not only…but also here…there this…that

years ago…today the former…the latter then…now the first…whereas the second

some…others one…the other once…now

on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面…另一方面)

6)逻辑关系

递进: then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)

转折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the country(相反)， after all(毕竟)

总结: finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(总之)，

in conclusion(最后)。强调: indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， surely(确定)， above all(尤其)。对比: in the same way(同样地)，

just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand

三、书面表达常用句型及短语

1、学校生活及学习成绩

I’m getting on well with one’s study

take several courses at school

have English (Chinese, Physics…) every (other )day work hard at …

put one’s heart into…

be interested in …

like chemistry best be tired of … be good at …;

be poor at …; do well in …; be weak in …

make progress in …; improve oneself in …; fail in …

pass the examination; give sb. a passing grade;

He has the best record in school. 他的成绩最棒。

get a doctor’s degree 获得博士学位

(English is) more interesting to sb.

learn about; succeed in…; be active in class (work);

take an active part in …; learn… by heart;

work out a (maths) problem;

get 90 marks for (English); get an “A” in the exam;

have a good command of…

lay a good foundation in (language study)

won the first prize/ got the first place in the competition

the first/top three winners(前三名)

2、师生关系

get on well with sb; like to be with students;

be gentle with us; be kind to sb;

be a strict teacher; be strict with one’s pupils;

be strict in work be satisfied with …

We think of him (her) as …; help sb with sth;

praise sb for sth …; blame sb for sth..

give advice on …; question sb on …

correct the students’ homework carefully and prepare for the next day;

give sb a lot of work; try to teach sb good study habits;

make one’s lessons lively and interesting;

teach sb. sth.; teach sb to do sth.

devote all one’s time to work;

admire () his devotion to the cause of education

佩服他对于教育事业的献身精神。

3、课余活动及周末生活

spend one’s time in many different ways;

enjoy doing things by oneself; go swimming;

go for an outing/ a picnic; have an outing at (the seashore);

see the sights of Beijing; play the piano (violin);

play chess (basketball); have a swim;

have dances on weekends; have a picnic over the weekend;

go to the cinema; have a party; hold a sports meeting;

do some reading; help sb do sth; enjoy a family trip;

get everything ready for;

ride one’s bike with (the park);

There are a lot of activities at (the beach).

We enjoy a change from our busy life in the city.

She would like to bring sth. to the picnic.

It was a very relaxing Sunday.

There are good programmes on TV on weekends.

Enjoy myself/ourselves; have a wonderful time

4、彼此沟通信息

take a message for sb; send a message to sb;

hear from sb; talk about/of sth;

tell/ask sb to do sth; get information about…;

express one’s idea (feelings) in English;

Write sb a letter saying…; apologize to sb for …;

make a speech t at the meeting; thank you for …;

explain sth to s; look upon sb as …;

think sb to be …; take sb’s side

5、事件中人的态度

would like to do; allow sb to do;

force sb to do; call on sb to do;

fee like doing; insist on doing;

drive sb. off; speak highly of sb;

speak ill of sb; think highly of sb;

be afraid to do (be afraid of …)； offer to do;

refuse to do; agree to do;

prefer to do A rather than do B; had better do/ not do ;

regret doing; would rather (not) do.

keep sb from doing prevent/stop sb. (from) doing);

6、事情过程

have the habit of doing…; have no trouble doing;

make up one’s mind to do; prepare sb/oneself for …;

give up doing…; do sth as usual; sb is prepared for/to do

do what he wants us to do; set about doing;/set out to do

try/do one’s best to do…=go all out to do;

get into trouble; help sb out;

do one’s bit for the country ; do some good deeds to people;

wait for sb to do; find a way to do;

make friends with sb;

show (tell) sb. how to do…; take (send) sb to …;

pass the time doing; feel a little excited about doing…;

can’t help doing…; be prepared for more hard work;

Some are (doing ), others are (doing ), and still others are doing (sth C)

7、感观活动与思维活动

look around for …; look up (down) at …; catch sight of …;

take a look at …; hear sb do (doing); take notice of …;

take view of …; have a good understanding of …;

consider sb (sth) to be …; come to know…;

realize that …; know that +从句

welcome/welcomed sb at/in front of the gate

Everyone is welcome to attend the lecture/activity

8、情感与欲望

be pleased with …; be delighted in doing…;

take a pleasure in doing; be worried about;

feel surprised at … be sorry for …;

be angry with sb for sth; be angry about …(为某事生气)；

look forward to doing…; wish to do;

expect to do; long for (long to do);

be sick for one’s home; have a strong desire to do …;

9、健康状况及治疗

be in good shape; be in good (poor )health;

feel weak (well, terrible, sick); have got a high (slight ) fever;

have a slight (bad) cold; take one’s temperature;

have got a pain in …; be good (bad) for one’s health(eyes);

It’s nothing serious. stay in bed until…;

save one’s life

10、其它

It (take)sb. some time to do…; It is said that …;

be fit for; be short of; be well dressed;

miss the lecture (train); change…into…;

waste/ spend time doing; be busy doing;

have no choice but to do; I can’t help it.

be in need of…; be mistaken about …;

fall behind…; catch up with;

take sth by mistake (错拿) have trouble (in) doing sth.

on behalf of; instead of; be welcome to do…;

Running, biking and swimming are popular in summer.

Skiing and skating are my favorite winter sports.

Say goodbye to sb. See sb off

11、信件常用语

You letter came to me this morning.

I (have received)/ am glad to receive your letter of July the 20th.

I’m writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday.

I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.

How time flies! It’s three months since I saw you last.

Thank you for your letter.

In reply to your letter about (the exhibition this year)…;

Let me tell you that…

Best wishes,

Look forward to( your coming)/ receiving your letter

12、问路和应答

Go down this street

Turn night/left at the first crossroads

It’s about…metres from here

You can’t miss it

In front of behind at/a the corner(不用in)

Pass two blocks

四、 句子练习

改写下列各句，把短语变为并列句、复合句或带有分词短语、介词短语或其他短语的句子：

1. Xu comes from a working-class family.

He enrolled in college last fall.

2. The dean issued a bulletin.

It said the library would remain open at weekends.

3. We have made some progress.

We still have a long way to go.

4. The sky was cloudless.

The sun was shining brightly.

were over two hundred passengers on board the plane.

About one third of them were foreigners.

6. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.

Her mother was a famous pianist.

7. Napoleon was born in 1769.

At that time Corsica had just been acquired by France.

appeared on the stage.

A stormy applause broke forth.

9. He heard that his father was ill.

He was anxious to go home to see him.

He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.

五：高考书面表达预测题

(1)电视的发展

某英文报纸发起了关于电视的发展的征文活动。电视的发展日新月异，有它的优点，但是也有缺点。请根据下表有关电视的两张表格，写一篇英文应征。

十年前 现在

价格 昂贵 便宜

家庭拥有量 40% 98%

节目 节目和内容少，新闻，文艺，教育体育，趣味性低 涌现大量电视台，节目多，大多数很精彩。卫星电视全天播放。

收视率 15%左右 40%左右

优缺点 画面声音质量差。导致很多人成为近视眼。 由于技术进步，画面声音的质量大大提高。保护视力。看电视成为一种享受。

人们之间交流多。业余的时间主要被用于读书和学习。 大量的时间都被浪费再看电视上，交流越来越少，没有时间读书。

要求：1、不要逐字翻译2、字迹工整 3、字数80~120

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（2）西部开发

假设你是某报社记者，请根据下表提供的信息写一篇英文稿，简要地报道中国开发中西部的有关情况。

主要概况 范围：9个省、自治区（autonomous regions），1个直辖市（municipality）；

面积：540万平方公里；

人口：亿；

实施要点 交通建设：修建多条公路、铁路；

环境保护：退耕还林；防治污染；

资源利用：开发利用其丰富的天然资源（resource）；

人才引进：广纳各类专家、技术人员。

短文的开头与结尾已经给出；

New Development for Central and Western China

The Chinese government has recently decided to develop central and western China.

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We have every reason to believe that the development will be a great success. As a result of the great project , central and western regions of China will surely achieve better and faster development in the new century. The people will have a better life and China will surely be richer and stronger.

参考答案：This part of China includes 8 provinces and autonomous regions and one municipality, covering an area of million square kilometers with a population of 285 million.

The government will pay special attention to its transportation. Some highways and railways will be built. To protect the nature, farmers will return farmland to forest. Also, measures should be taken to prevent pollution. Western China is rich in natural resources, which can be exploited and made full use of. To meet the need of the development, all kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.

（3）交通状况

青山村的变化：人口500，坐落在大山脚下。

过去 现在

作物 主要种植玉米， 各种适合山区气候的经济作物。

环境治理 大量的树木被砍伐，经常发生山洪，造成极大损失 植树造林，水土不再流失，没有山洪，生命财产得到保护。

交通 只有一条小路通向山外，出行困难。 修建了一条宽阔的马路，交通旅行多很方便，经济得到促进。

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（4）商业发展：假如你组在一个小镇里，近几年小镇里的商店发生了巨大变化，试根据下表写一篇短文，介绍情况。

过去 现在

数量 只有大小5家商店 大小15家商店

商店种类 一个大商场 商场、超市、便利店大中小各种商店

便利 商店离家远，购物不方便 住的旁边就有一家超市，购物非常方便

商品种类 商品种类不多， 应有尽有，

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（5）环境状况：人们的卫生意识不断增强，下表是莫请谋市近年来的环境改变情况，请你写一篇短文。

过去 现在

人们习惯 人们随地吐痰 没有人随地吐痰

街道上灰尘很多，很脏 街道上总是打扫得很干净。

街道 街道两边树木稀少。 街道上绿树成荫，所有的空地上都有绿草覆盖

污染 工厂随意排放大量烟雾、废水，空气和水受到严重污染。 工厂严禁排放有毒废气、废水，环境得到改善。

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（6）通信业今昔对比

过去 现在

通信方式 人们主要通过书信，电报、电话联系。 人们通过电子邮件、电话、传真（fax）联系。

通信质量 联系不方便。 通过电子邮件、手机（mobile phone），方便快捷。

购买价格 电脑、手机太贵，用不起 现在电脑、手机价格便宜，手机成为人们必备的通信工具。

高考英语优秀书面表达范文 第四十五篇

Word came that a reading festival would be held by our school and there is a need for a picture for advertisement and I am writing to give my opinion. From my perspective , I am in favor of the picture in the top right corner.

As is vividly depicted in that picture, around the table sit three kids with a couple of books in their hands, having a heated discussion about the contents and sharing their thoughts for the themes, which shows their dedication and passion for reading.

Basically, several reasons are listed for my preference. First, nothing is more attractive than a proper and realistic picture. This picture serves as an epitome of our daily reading scene in the school and it is apt to let students recall the joy and harvest while reading.

Second, this picture stands for the fun of sharing and exchanging ideas. With regard to reading, there is a saying that there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes. After reading, bits and pieces of thoughts will appear in our mind, so it is beneficial to have a better understanding after comparing notes about what we have read.

From what is mentioned above, I, undoubtedly, approve of the picture in the top right corner. Thus, I would appreciate it if you could take my proposal into consideration and I wish this festival a complete success.