外教雅思写作范文要求 第一篇

-- (1) Introduction --

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question:

Some people believe that = There are those that think

university education = universities

focus on = concentrateon

the skills of employment for the future = preparing students for the labor market

they = these institutions

only = exclusively

universities = post-secondary academic institutes

Standard Phrase for the “Discuss and Opinion” type of essay:

There are those that think

; whereas, others feel

In my opinion, I believe

In equal measure 同等的；同样的

Words showing Cohesion (C&C):

; whereas

外教雅思写作范文要求 第二篇

In conclusion, going abroad to seek better prospects may be ideal for the person who has the confidence to adapt to a new society, but for many, remaining in a familiar environment still allows for work and lifestyle opportunities void of the confusion a foreign country poses; however, in my opinion, regardless where one resides, opportunities are ever-present, with the reward being a lifestyle of choice rather than one of circumstance.

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：

Vocabulary and Collocations高分地道词汇和短语：

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

外教雅思写作范文要求 第三篇

要点一：涵盖题目所有要求

因此，考生在复习备考阶段不要盲目地练写文章，要多训练提高信息归类和概括能力。

要点二：结构清楚合理

结构清楚，从文章整体来说是讲一篇文章起码要有开头、中间和结尾，每个中间段要有一句主题句总领整段，下面依次展开，最后有一句话收尾。结构合理则是指文章的论证结构合理，特别是高分作文，立场要非常清晰。

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最新公布的留学类第二篇作文的题目是有关于对儿童兼职的不同看法。在写这篇文章时，考生首先就要鲜明地提出自己是否支持儿童做兼职，之后在过渡段里提及与自己意见不同的论点，说明理由是什么，其后放主要的笔墨论证自己的观点，可以结合亲身经历或了解到的实例来证明观点的正确性，最后进行总结陈述，进一步确认对于儿童应不应该做兼职的观点和意见。

在备考雅思时，考生要注意文章结构的建立，力求做到结构清楚、论证比例合理。

要点三：词汇运用丰富、灵活

新评分标准最大的改变是把老评分标准的第三方面“词汇和语法”分解成词汇和语法两个细则。这样一来，词汇和语法、任务完成或任务反应、连贯与衔接在评分时的权重是一样的。所以，要获得雅思作文高分，同时也要在词汇上狠下功夫才行。

在词汇的准备方面，要注意宽度和难度两方面的训练。词汇的宽度是指在一篇要求字数的文章内，能用不同的语言表达同一个内容，避免重复，如用grow、goup、increase、rise、raise、boost等不同词汇表达“上升”这个意思。词汇的难度，是指在文章中是选用比较幼稚的词汇，还是有一定文体标准、适合于学术场景表达的词汇。大多数中国考生都会普遍使用at the same time来表示“与此同时”，但是在正式文体里，表达此意的词应为mean while或in the meantime。

外教雅思写作范文要求 第四篇

1、基础词汇

对于写作单项目标6分的考生，需要5000左右的词汇量。对于离这个目标尚有一定距离的，基础相对比较薄弱的考生，就一定在考前要集中突击背诵单词了。

对于总体词汇量偏低的考生来说，直接背诵“写作分类词汇”是不可取的。因为这些词汇都是建立在一定的基础词汇量基础上的，没有这个基础，所谓的分类词汇只能是空中楼阁。

背诵单词前，一定要注意选择适合自己水平的词汇表，不要盲目求全、求快。收词量如果远远大于考生自身的词汇量，会使考生受挫，从而厌倦背单词，因此要注意循序渐进。

建议基础较薄弱的考生从高考词汇表开始背起，高中毕业生可以选择大学英语四、六级词汇。

2、场景词汇

除了上述基础词汇之外，雅思写作的一些话题还需要很多专业的词汇。

例如在动物与环境保护类话题中，会出现大量的专门词汇，如生物多样性biodiversity，生态系统ecosystem，生态平衡ecological balance，动物保护animal conservation，全球变暖global warming，温室效应greenhouse effect，一次性产品disposable products，滥伐森林deforestation，水土流失soil erosion等。

再例如，某些话题，如很多科技类、健康类、工作类等话题，都能从健康角度去展开论点，这时就能用上很多与疾病相关的词汇。

生理上的疾病有近视眼myopia，肥胖症obesity，糖尿病diabetes，高血压hypertension，心血管疾病cardiovascular disease等，心理上的疾病有抑郁症depression，失眠insomnia，健忘症amnesia等。

如果能熟练掌握这些常见的场景词汇，那么考生在接触到相关话题的时候就能做到游刃有余。

3、同义词

雅思写作对词汇考查的另一个特点，就是词汇多样性，即同义词，也就是说同一个意思必须要换用多种表达方法。

如果考生在写作中大量重复使用同一个单词，那么给考官的印象就会大打折扣。例如，写作中常用的“青少年”一词，就有children，teenagers，adolescents，youngsters，youth，the young generation，minors等多种表达方法。

再比如，提到“各种各样的”，大多数考生首先会想到单词总是all kinds of，但是这个词就显得非常口语化，而且会让考官感觉考生词汇量较少。

因此可以选用以下单词和词组进行替换：various，varied，diverse，a series of，a host of，a large variety of，a wide range of，a great diversity of，a dazzling array of等等。

外教雅思写作范文要求 第五篇

Standard IELTS essay phrase:

In conclusion,

, in my opinion,

Vocabulary and Collocations:

the workplace 职场

there is no doubt 毫无疑问

academic foundations of 理论基础

vital to 对……至关重要

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C)

though

also

, and that both

外教雅思写作范文要求 第六篇

A类大作文

作文题目 ：

Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems can not be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题材类别：环境旧题

参考范文：

Some people think that the environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that the problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take some actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age, individuals have a significant role to play in protecting the environment to ensure a prosperous future for latter future generations. Whether environmental issues are too large to be solved by individuals or citizens ought to take action to resolve these problems will be discussed.

From one perspective, individuals are tiny entities that only contribute to part of the issue when it comes to environmental degradation. In fact, government has a duty to define and set out legislation for industries and companies to follow. It can be argued that the abundance of carbon emissions is produced by large entities including factories and manufacturers. As a result, legislators are the only ones who are capable of limiting such heavy emissions through the usage of policies. Furthermore, government has the ability to make investments in the fields of clean and renewable energies to create greener technologies and constrict emissions in the long term. These actions cannot be solely completed by individuals and greater assistance is needed.

From another viewpoint, the day-to-day decisions that individuals make significantly contribute to the reduction of environmental degradation. For instance, if an entire population decides to save water, recycle unused items, curb electricity usage or even switch to using electric cars, it would make a huge positive impact on the environment. Additionally, certain individuals hold greater power over the amount of emissions that are being made. For instance, residents of poor nations tend to have a lower carbon footprint than citizens in developed countries. Furthermore, individuals who control factories, manufacturing facilities and companies that are heavy polluters can make decisions to reduce a more sizeable portion of emissions.

All in all, it is crucial for individuals to make choices to do their part to protect the environment. However, those who emit greater amounts of pollution or control the entities that are huge emitters are the ones that would make a larger impact on the environment.

（In total: 322 words）

外教雅思写作范文要求 第七篇

这一点对于希望像笔者一样短期内拿到写作高分的朋友来说毫无疑问是至关重要的，声望再高的中教，也毕竟是中国人，因为文化背景和生活习惯的差异，即便曾经在国外生活很长时间，也不能完全的理解到西方人的思维方式。而一个NATIVE SPEAKER就不同了，他的评判眼光和考官是站在同一角度的，如果你的这个老师还是以前的雅思考官的话，那么就更胜一筹。很幸运，笔者的这个外教从事雅思工作10年，多年担任雅思考官，而且在中国生活了10年，对中国学生写作弊病了如指掌，给的建议很有针对性。

而且能从考官的角度出发让我避免一些万人常用的句型和短语词汇，比如generally acknowledged,according to the chart(task 1),from the table we can see(task 1).按照外教的说法，这样的一些套句已经让很多考官开始恶心了，所以分数自然不会高。这也是我的外教极力反对我用10天系列作文书的重要原因。(10天可以说是中国雅思学生使用的最多的写作书，在我上强化班的时候看见几乎人手一本，obviously,大家都用的东西，自然滥的很快，所以，对于想拿高分的朋友来说，10天可以看，但是不要只看10天，否则很难拿到高分。考写作和口语有异曲同工之妙，都是人工评判，人就会带着感情色彩来评判，如果大家千遍一律，唯独你的题材新颖，遣词用句别具一格，如果还有一些是NATIVE SPEAKER的习惯用语，不拿高分都很难啊。)

回到外教批改作文的正题上来。我的作文中不说是每一篇，但是至少有100余篇是我的外教老师亲手批阅再还给我的。(这里我要非常感谢他的帮助，呵呵)其效果之然不同于普通中教批改的作文。这也是为什么我能从雅思零基础，在3个月多内作文练到7，除开自己的勤奋，找到一个合适的人给予正确的引导绝对是事半功倍的。

这个地方，我不想把我的外教交给我的一些地道用法和用句发上来，一是我想有一些朋友可能是知道的，二是我不希望我的此举成为把大家送进下一次考试的一个原因，因此，请原谅。但是有个方法绝对好用，而且能得到和我一样的知识，只是需要大家多花心思去做，那就是广泛的阅读写作教材，做到集思广益。笔者在考试前多次跟随老师前往不同的书店查询不同的写作书，了解不同的风格和用语，确实大有收获。说直白一点，咱们中国人最擅长移花接木，但是很多人因为手中的资料有限，写出来的东西总是容易让狡猾的考官发现破绽，但是如果能扩大知识库，相对来说，借用的东西就能不留痕迹了。

关于外教，其实很简单，能来考雅思的朋友，大多...

外教雅思写作范文要求 第八篇

雅思写作模板（建议高手勿用，以免失分）例如：说明一物的利弊1． AAA has improved the quality of our lives and are playing an important role in our daily life. The benefits AAA brings to us are far more than its disadvantages. However, we cannot ignore its ． On the positive side, AAA has enabled us to (1)此处填入AAA的优势之一。For instance,（2）举例说明优势之一。Besides, (3)AAA的优势之二。Nowadays, (4)举例说明优势之二。In addition,（5）AAA的优势之三。3． On the negative side, (6)此处填入AAA的劣势之一。For example,(7)举例说明劣势之一。 Besides,(8)AAA的劣势之二。

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雅思写作观点选择类型的写作模板：

模板一：

As for the question that which is better, A or B, different people have different opinions. A has its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many disadvantages.

In my point of view, I would prefer B. First of all, (1) 支持 B 的原因之一。

For example, (2) 举例说明支持 B 的原因之一。

Another reason is that (3) 支持 B 的原因之二。

The third reason, however, goes this way: (4) 支持 B 的原因之三。

So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that (5) 重申观点。

模板二：

Some people believe A, they point out the fact that (1) 人们支持 A 的原因。However, other people believe B. They hold that (2) 人们支持 B 的原因。

As far as I’m concerned, I prefer A. As we all know (3) 我支持 A 的原因之一。

I remember (4) 举例说明。

In addition, (5) 我支持 A 的原因之二。

On the other hand, (6) 从反面论证 A 的优势。

Last but not least, (7) 我支持 A 的原因之三。

As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A ，such as (8) 举例说明 A 的劣势。But these can be compensated by its advantages.

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雅思考试全程考试时间为2小时55分钟。其中，写作在听力，阅读部分之后出现，是笔试的最后一项。雅思写作考试要求在60分钟内完成两篇作文，即task1 和 task 2. task1 要求考生在20分钟内完成150字以上的文章。A类以考核图表为主。G类要求考生针对题目要求写一封信来询问某方面信息或阐释某种状况。 task2 要求考生在40分钟内写作一篇不少于250字的议论文。A类和G类在task2方面非常相似。考生可能需要对某个观点发表支持或反驳的意见，或讨论针锋相对的一组观点，或者解释某种问题出现的原因并提出相应的解决办法。关于雅思写作模板，现提供以下五条：

1. There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards the worship of money . A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents ranked getting rich as their top priority , compared to X percent only a few years ago . Why do people fail to realize that wealth does not necessarily bring happiness近年来出现了对社会有害的拜金主义倾向。最近的一项调查表明，X调查对象把致富作为他们的首选，相比之下，就在几年前，只有X人这样想。为什么人们没能意识到财富不一定带来幸福呢2. Some months ago , a friend of mine was killed in a tragic automobile accident involving a drunk driver . The incident was far from rare , and was in fact typical of thousands of cases involving people dricing under the influence of alcohol .几个月前，我的一个朋友死于一场与酒后驾车有关的悲惨车祸。这件事情一点儿也不罕见，事实上是数以千计的案件的典型，这些案件与在酒精作用下开车的人有关。3. I recently read a newspaper article on the rampant spread of child abuse . The deplorable problem of the widespread abuse of innocent children has aroused public concern nationwide .最近，我在报纸上读到一篇关于虐待儿童现象变得猖獗的文章。普遍虐待无辜儿童的问题令人深感遗憾，它已经引起了全国公众的关注。4. Should parents spare the rod and spoil the child Opinions concerning strict parental discipline vary widely . Some view strict discipline as nothing more than a form of abuse , while others argue it is an essential factor for instilling appropriate social behavior .家长应不应该闲了棍子、惯了孩子针对严厉的家教的看法大相径庭。有的人就是把严厉的管教看成一种虐待，而另外的人认为这是逐渐灌输得体的社会行为的要素。5. What do you think of the increasing openness accompanying the ongoing sexual revolution Do you ever fantasize Answers to these questions should be based on a determination between appropriate and inappropriate behavior .

千万不要用模板我是这么想的， 遇到懂模板的老师你就can了。 分——不等别想上6我是XDF学出来的， 记住 一定要自己写东西不是Say 和Demonstrat e 而是 Produce！

你好，很高兴为你解答： 雅思写作应注意一下几点： 1、注重写好文章的框架 我曾经问过我们世纪雅思的外教老师， 外国人看文章最注重的是什么， 他告诉我说是文章的framework. 即一篇文章好不好， 首先看的不是他的句型， 词汇， 或是论点等。 而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚，我们不能老是采用大三段的形式-开头，经过， 结尾。我们可以多用用连接词， 例如：first of all, morever, secondly, lastly等，另外可以多分自然段， 给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章， 看看他们的写作模式， 我当初写文章的时候， 用的就是我看到一篇国外文章的模式，我觉得可以套用， 我最后介绍给大家。 2、句型的多样化 如果一篇文章， 从头到尾， 永远用的只有一种句型， 那么这篇文章一定拿不到高分，我们可以适当的改换一下句型， 我给大家一定建议，希望给大家有点帮助。 3、基本句型包括 Ⅰ．主谓句；Ⅱ. There be；Ⅲ. 主系表结构的句子；Ⅳ. 被动语态（我看到一张帖字说， 不要用被动， 我不这样认为， 国外的文章， 用被动的也比比皆是。） 4、复杂句型 包括 Ⅰ. 并列句；Ⅱ. 从句（定语，状语，名词性，非谓语） 5．词汇的Variety 说实话做到这点真的很难， 首先你要有庞大的词汇量，第二你要用的恰当，不出错误。我自认做不到这点，所以我用的词汇有时候会重复。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇，例如：激烈的竞争 fierce competition等 6、多举EXAMPLE（重要） 大家不要小看这点， 我认为对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说， 这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都在讲道理， 你有这么多话要说吗？而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候你就用例子来表明你的观点。我认识一个朋友， 可以说她的英语基础很差， 但她的文章也拿了6分， 我问她怎么写的， 她告诉我说就是拼命的举例子。就这点我也曾问过外教老师， 他曾是IELTS的考官， 他说考官欢迎考生多举例子。 7、建议： 1）、写文章最关键的就是审题千万不要出错误， 不然就前功尽弃了。 2）例如我积累的句子： Cultivate independence Develop a strong sense of responsibility Enhance social awareness Build up one’s confidence and offer one’s a sense of achievement—realize ones value and capacity Widen one’s horizon and sharp one’s character 这些句子比较常用， 而且在口语考试中也可以派上用处。最后给大家介绍一种写作模式，我觉得很不错： With unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die. On one side of the debate are those who say that…… On the other side is the view that…… In my mind, I completely agree/disagree the later . There is no denying that ……has many positive effects. To begin with,……Secondly, …… Finally, …… However, every coin has its two sides. ……is no exception. Many opponents say that …… To conclude, ….. 祝你取得理想雅思成绩！！！

外教雅思写作范文要求 第九篇

雅思小作文写作万能模板1、通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that 、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: 、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to 、目前，共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, 、(图表所示)_____，就像许多其他事物，被____更加喜爱，然而这一观点正被________所抨击，一些人认为_________，他们指出_________________________, just like many other things, are preferred by being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that according to the chart“`2 the date lead us to the conclusion that“`3 the date show“`4 the tree diagram reveals how“`5 the figures show“`6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of“`7 the pie graph depicts“`8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding“`9 the table shows the changes in the number of “` over the periodfrom “`to “`10 as is shown in the table “`11 from the table ,we can clearly see that “`12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from “` to ““13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in“`14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of “`15 over the period from “`to “`the“`remained in the year between “`and “`.17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through the number of “` remained steady from “`to ““.19 the number sharply went up to “`20 the percentage of “` stayed the same between “` and “`21 the percentage remainede steady at“`22 the percentage of “`is sightly large than that there is not a great deal of differece between “`and “`24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of “`25 “`decreased year by year while “`increased there is an upward trend in the number of “`27 a considerable increase occurred from “`to “`28 from “`to “`the rate of decrease slow from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the“`reaching a figure be similar to “`be the same as31 there are a lot similarities between “`and “`32 the difference between X and Y lies in “`雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释，说明信息的能力，这些信息通常体现在图解，表格和插图中，这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候，也可以作为参考材料。1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of…over the period from…to…该表格描述了在…年之…年间…数量的变化。2. the bar chart illustrates that… 该柱状图展示了…3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding…该图为我们提供了有关…有趣数据。4. the diagram shows (that)… 该图向我们展示了…5. the pie graph depicts (that)…. 该圆形图揭示了… is a cure graph which describes the trend of…这个曲线图描述了…的趋势。7. the figures/statistics show (that)… 数据(字)表明…8. the tree diagram reveals how…该树型图向我们揭示了如何…9. the data/statistics show (that)…该数据(字)可以这样理解…10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…这些数据资料令我们得出结论…11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table…如图所示…12. according to the chart/figures… 根据这些表(数字)…13. as is shown in the table… 如表格所示…14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in…从图中可以看出，…发生了巨大变化。15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that…or it is clear/apparent from the chart that…从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到…16. this is a graph which illustrates…这个图表向我们展示了…17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from…to…该表格描述了…年到…年间a与b的比例关系。18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in…该图以圆形图形式描述了…总的趋势。19. this is a column chart showing… 这是个柱型图，描述了…20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of…如图所示，两条曲线描述了…的波动情况。21. over the period from…to…the…remained level.在…至…期间，…基本不变。22. in the year between…and… 在…年到…期间…23. in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998…1995年至1998三年里…24. from then on/from this time onwards… 从那时起…25. the number of…remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year).…月(年)至…月(年)…的数量基本不变。26. the number sharply went up to… 数字急剧上升至…27. the percentage of…stayed the same between…and……至…期间…的比率维持不变。28. the figures peaked at…in(month/year)…的数目在…月(年)达到顶点，为…29. the percentage remained steady at… 比率维持在…30. the percentage of…is slightly larger/smaller than that of……的比例比…的比例略高(低)。31. there is not a great deal of difference between…and……与…的区别不大。32. the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of…该图表表明…的数目增长了三倍。33. ..decreased year by year while…increased steadily.

外教雅思写作范文要求 第十篇

你好，很高兴为你解答：雅思写作应注意一下几点：1、注重写好文章的框架我曾经问过我们世纪雅思的外教老师， 外国人看文章最注重的是什么， 他告诉我说是文章的framework. 即一篇文章好不好， 首先看的不是他的句型， 词汇， 或是论点等。 而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚，我们不能老是采用大三段的形式-开头，经过， 结尾。我们可以多用用连接词， 例如：first of all, morever, secondly, lastly等，另外可以多分自然段， 给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章， 看看他们的写作模式， 我当初写文章的时候， 用的就是我看到一篇国外文章的模式，我觉得可以套用， 我最后介绍给大家。2、句型的多样化如果一篇文章， 从头到尾， 永远用的只有一种句型， 那么这篇文章一定拿不到高分，我们可以适当的改换一下句型， 我给大家一定建议，希望给大家有点帮助。3、基本句型包括 Ⅰ．主谓句；Ⅱ. There be；Ⅲ. 主系表结构的句子；Ⅳ. 被动语态（我看到一张帖字说， 不要用被动， 我不这样认为， 国外的文章， 用被动的也比比皆是。）4、复杂句型 包括 Ⅰ. 并列句；Ⅱ. 从句（定语，状语，名词性，非谓语）5．词汇的Variety说实话做到这点真的很难， 首先你要有庞大的词汇量，第二你要用的恰当，不出错误。我自认做不到这点，所以我用的词汇有时候会重复。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇，例如：激烈的竞争 fierce competition等6、多举EXAMPLE（重要）大家不要小看这点， 我认为对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说， 这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都在讲道理， 你有这么多话要说吗？而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候你就用例子来表明你的观点。我认识一个朋友， 可以说她的

大作文写作——说明文模板model ctoday, there has been growing public concern about whether ______________________________________________________________________________. personally, i think __________________________________________________________-for three principal reason for my view is is evident that___________________________________________; therefore, ________________________________________________________________. in other words, _________________________________________________________________________. for instance, reason for my view is _____________________________________________________. specifically,it is generally accepted in my country that _____________________________________________________;thus, ________________________________________________________. after all, ___________________________________ , which means , seems to methat ___________________________________________________________. this is due to the fact ____________________________________________________. by that i mean sum, for these reasons, i tend to believe ________________________________________________________________________. and overall, it seems_______________ should _________________________________________________________________________________________________________

说个话题（打个比方说跳槽的利弊）switch jobs(变换工作）skip from job to job(不断跳槽）chronic job-hopper(经常跳槽的人）continuous movement（持续工作的人）job transition（工作调动）short tenure（短的任期) employee(员工）advantages and disadvantages（优势与劣势）benefit from（从……收益）headhunter(猎头）lifer（一辈子不换工作的人）high mobility(高度的灵活性）job opportunity（工作机会）broad range of work experience(丰富的工作经验）varied job experiences(不同的工作经历）constant refreshment(不断的更新）job satisfaction(工作的满足感）long for challenges(渴望挑战）adapt to(适应）abandon the old things(抛弃陈旧的东西）high adaptability（高度的适应性）social relationship(社会关系）make frieds with different people(和不同的人交朋友）increase professional skills(增加职业技能）move upward(升迁）heep skills fresh and up-to-date(使技能不断更新）tell off ones boss(炒老板鱿鱼）contaminated reputation（名誉受损） negative image( 负面形象）live a wonderful life(过着美好的生活）1 Job hoppers refer to those who constantly skip from one job to another.(跳槽者指的是那些经常换工作的人）2 The wave of job switching and job transition has long existed among young workers.(跳槽和调换工作的风潮在年轻员工由来已久）3 Young workers are generally attracted by high mobility and flexibility in job opportunities.(年轻员工通常会被工作机会高度的机动性和灵活性所吸引）4 To them,job hopping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant refreshment(对于他们来说，跳槽意味着丰富的工作经验和人生阅历以及持久的新鲜感。）5 Because of young peoples excellent adaptability,job hopping brings more freshness and opportunities than difficulties and pressure.(因为年轻人非凡的适应力，跳槽带给他们更多的是新鲜感和机会，而不是困难和压力。）6 Despite all the advantages, the drawbacks can not be neglected.(尽管有这些好处，其弊端也是不可忽视的）7 One of the potential problems is that constant job transition can not secure them a stable and bright job prospect.(一个潜在的问题是频繁的跳槽不能保证他们有一个稳定辉煌的职业前景。）8 It is also possible that they may fall into financial difficulties if skipping between jobs too frequently.(他们可能因为过于频繁地跳槽而陷入经济困难）9In the eyes of employers, the fondness of job seitching reflects, to some extent,their disloyalty and lack of commitment to jobs.(在老板眼里，喜欢跳槽在某种程度上反映了他们不忠诚而且对工作缺乏奉献精神。）10 So employees are advised to make careful considerations before switching from a job.(所以建议员工们在决定跳槽之前要仔细考虑）可能有单词拼写错误，但是已经尽力了）

大作文写作——说明文模板model ctoday, there has been growing public concern about whether ______________________________________________________________________________. personally, i think __________________________________________________________-for three principal reason for my view is is evident that___________________________________________; therefore, ________________________________________________________________. in other words, _________________________________________________________________________. for instance, reason for my view is _____________________________________________________. specifically,it is generally accepted in my country that _____________________________________________________;thus, ________________________________________________________. after all, ___________________________________ , which means , seems to methat ___________________________________________________________. this is due to the fact ____________________________________________________. by that i mean sum, for these reasons, i tend to believe ________________________________________________________________________. and overall, it seems_______________ should _________________________________________________________________________________________________________

慎小嶷的10天突破雅思写作里有很多模板我看过觉得结构很好那些关联词很值得学学但是最最最最最衷心给你的建议是他那本书很多人看过（几乎每个人吧）所以大家都会用不说我跟我朋友看过之后最切身的体会就是思维被框死也不知道为什么照着模板写作很多本来应该很容易想到的点都想不到因此作文也被打折扣了不过还是给你提供一个argument的模板第一段：nowadays,……has been increasingly concerned. weathere we should….or not is…..第二段：first of all,…….which means(举例). moreover….. in other words(举例).further more…..specifically(举例) 这一段你是倾向的观点第三段：by contrast…..跟上一段结构差不多 也是观点然后举例 不过是你比较不倾向的观点第四段：结尾 in conclusion, althrough…..i still……差不多就是这样 我上个月考完了 差不多都不太记得了= =不过还是希望能帮到你咯~！

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外教雅思写作范文要求 第十一篇

正式语言也就是 formal language 这种文体格式通常带有学术性的写作口吻，常见于学术课本大学论文中。此外在学术类雅思写作考试中广泛使用。

当正式用语应用于写作中时，句子通常较长较为复杂，也应严格遵循语法规则。正式写作中通常较为客观，经常使用it这样的非人称代词和动词的被动形式。使用时应尽量避免缩略语和缩写单词的出现。

正式用语除了常常使用“更庞大”的词汇，如compensate, ascend之外，还常常使用单个动词，如establish来代替简单的短语动词，如set up。此外，要尽量避免俚语和口语的出现。因此想要作文更学术一些，就要多积累雅思写作词汇对备考会很有帮助。