高考英语作文好评范文初中 第一篇

Society Calls for Heroes

In my opinion, it is not so easy to be a hero. First,a hero must be brave. When he sees someone do a bad deed, he must be brave enough to catch him or to stop him. Secondly, he must be strong enough, otherwise he himself will be beaten to death. There are fewer heroes now because of several reasons. I think the most important reason is that people don't want to mind other people's business. Because they think it will do them no good. But I think society calls for heroes. Fighting against crimes is not just the job of the police. It's the duty of every citizen.

社会呼唤英雄

在我看来，它不是那么容易就可以做一个英雄。第一，一个英雄要勇敢。当他看到有人做坏事，他必须勇敢地抓住他或制止他。其次，他必须足够强大，否则他会被殴打致死。由于几个原因少英雄现在。我认为最重要的原因是人们不想考虑其他人的业务。因为他们认为它会做不好。但我认为，社会呼唤英雄。打击犯罪不仅仅是警察的职责。这是每个公民的义务。

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二篇

Recently, the news reported a fireman was retired and he handed in an application for his dog, which had worked with him for more than eight years. The fireman wanted his “brother” to go home with him, because the dog had also came to his time for retirement. The story moves so many people, the relationship between animal and human being is always the most touching. Dogs are men’s loyal friends, their affection to master is pure and true. In the movie Hachi, the dog spends all his life to wait for the return of his master. Everybody can’t help tearing when they see this scene. The fireman and his dog had been a team for many years and they are families. There are so many stories like them, animal are our friends, the harmonious environment will be built if animals and human beings get well along.

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第三篇

某校英文报社开设了一个专栏：experience . 本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“my approach to difficulties in learning” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。

My approach to difficulties in learning

As school students , we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning . Everyone has their own ways to deal with them . Here I would like to share mine.

When I am faced with a difficulty , I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages . In this way , I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself .

However , when it is something beyond my competence , I turn to my classmates or teachers for help . Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice . As a result , I have made steady progress in my studies .

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第四篇

假设你李华，你的美国朋友Tom 上个月来北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在搜集资料，语言运用方面遇到了困难。请根据要点给Tom 写封email 1. 询问Tom的学习和生活情况 2. 谈谈你的困难并请他帮忙 3.你打算比赛后去看他。

Dear Tom,

How time flies! You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month, during which you must achieved a lot .Well , how is everything going ? It is reported that the weather there is very hot and dry these days, which is different from that of your country . Have you adapted to it ? In addition, you once complained that the food served there is not to your taste. I hope that should have been improved.

I am glad to tell you that I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July ,which is not only an honor ,but also an opportunity for me to improve myself. And now I try my best to make preparations for it .However , I have some trouble in collecting the materials relevant and using the language. I would appreciate it if you give me a hand to solve the problems

After the contest , I am to drop in at your school to visit you. Please wait for my phone.

Yours ,

Li hua

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第五篇

自动门automatic

My dream house is a villa which lies on the coast. There are two yards in the villa. The front yard is a garden with many beautiful flowers an plants for the four seasons. There is a swimming pool in the back yard, as my family are fond of swimming. On the first floor, there is a big hall when you enter the gate. On the right of the hall is a sitting room, there we can relax, have a rest, watch TV and enjoy entertainments. On the left there is a puter room and a study belonging to me. On the second floor, there are six bedrooms with bathrooms. The villa will be equipped with the modern equipment, such as security alarms controlled by puters, vision phones, lifts an automatic doors. Well, that is my dream house.

我梦想中的房子是建在海边的一幢别墅。有两个别墅庭院。前院是一个有很多美丽的花的植物在四个季节的花园。后院有一个游泳池，因为我的家人喜欢游泳。在一楼，有一个大厅，当你进入大门。在大厅的右边是客厅，在那里我们可以放松，休息，看电视，享受娱乐。在左边有一个电脑室和一个属于我的书房。在二楼，有六间卧室和浴室。别墅配有现代化设备，如电脑控制的安全报警器，可视电话，电梯和自动门。嗯，那是我梦想中的房子。

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第六篇

As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.

I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.

There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.

Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第七篇

With the rapid advances of _____________ in recentyears，_____________（引出现象）However，_______ has______________，as____________（提出问题）As a result，_____has__________________（指出影响） The effects ___________ hasproduced on__________ can be boiled down to two major ones. First，_____________（影响一）More importantly，___________（影响二）I believe that we will see a___________（提出展望）/Nevertheless，I do not think we will see a______（或反面展望） There are numerous reasonswhy ____，and I would like to explore afew of the most important ones here. The first is that themore（比较级）_____，the more （比较级）______. In addition，we all agreethat______________（第二个原因）

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第八篇

Health is our most important possession, so we should do our best to maintain it. As we all know, good health is necessary to happiness and success. On the contrary, people who are in poor health are often pessimistic or depressed. As a rule, bad health means misery and failure.

As far as I'm concerned , there are three principal suggestions for us to follow. First of all, we should adopt a scientific diet, which provides the necessities for your body. The second one is that we are supposed to persist in taking physical exercise , especially the people working indoors. Last but not least, we are supposed to stay in a cheerful mood.

As for me, in order to keep fit, I force myself to keep away from the xxxjunk foodxxx although it usually tastes good. Moreover, I even form good habits of doing morning exercises, listening to beautiful music and reading good books, which always cheer me up.

All in all, only by carefully obeying the laws of health can we keep ourselves healthy.

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第九篇

Going to high school is my first time to leave home. I have to live in school from Monday to Friday. I like to stay away from my parents for some time, because I can make my own choice and be free to go anywhere. My friends and I like to spend the weekend in the countryside that near the city we live. It is the short travel that I can not only appreciate the beautiful scenery, but also learn to be independent. The things that nature teaches me are a lot. I can see from the color of the cloud to predict the weather and the sound of of animals have different meanings. All of these are hard to know from the books. I have my own thinking from these trips, and the way to take care of myself helps me to grow up.

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第十篇

假定你是李华，你们学校和一所美国学校签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英语老师是来自这所学校的Sue Wood 。 不久前她返回美国任教。请根据要求写封电子邮件。1.对她表达感谢之意 2.介绍她离开后自己和班级发生的事情 3.希望了解她的近况

Dear Sue ,

I’m LiHua ,one of your students in China .It’s almost a month since you left us . We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together .

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day . I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help . Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday we went there and watered them. The three you planted yourself is growing well ,and the whole class decided to name it Sue wood . Will you come back to see Sue wood ?

How is everything with you lately ? We hope to know more about you and your American students . Hope to keep in close touch .

All the best

Liu Hua

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第十一篇

Dear_______,

I am . (自我介绍) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(总体介绍). In the first

place,_________(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition,____________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感觉) to ___________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).

I appreciate it very much if you could________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第十二篇

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第十三篇

Dear Leslie,

I ’m more than delighted to write to you ,providing you with some information in relation to our next class,which will be attended in Room 301 of the university library this Saturday will last three hours or so from 8:00 to 11:00.

When it comes to the teaching plan,I ’ll spare some time to share Tang poetry with you. It is known to us that the Tang Dynasty plays a vital role in Chinese history,especially its economy and culture,both of which can create a deep impression on ’ll find it impossible to avoid getting to know Tang poems as long as you want to study Chinese well and broaden your a consequence, I ’ll put emphasis on analysing and appreciating poems of some distinguished poets,such as Li Bai and Du may as well collect some materials related to the Tang Dynasty ’s history in advance,which can help you to have a better understanding of Tang poetry.

I ’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第十四篇

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.

The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.

All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第十五篇

Recently the issue of whether or not______（讨论话题）has been in the limelight andhas aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major argumentsthat can be made for____（讨论话题）For one thing，________can bring ____to________（优点一）Foranother，it is widely hold that peopleusually ____when _________________（优点二） But we must not lose sightof the fact that there are also drawbacks to___________（缺点）For instance，it can bring __________to_________（举例说明）Inaddition，many people find it_______（形容词）to_______________（第二个缺点） When asked to __________，I tend to ________. This isbecause I ______（原因一）Furthermore，______________（原因二）Finally，______________（原因三）

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第十六篇

1.假设你是李华，打算高考完7月去伦敦旅游一周，现在就此事发e-mail给伦敦的朋友Bob,主要内容：

2.询问当地的天气情况以及你要的准备的东西2.询问当地的景点以及收费情况

3.请Bob帮你在宾馆预定一个房间

4.询问Bob当地的法规以防出错。

Dear Bob：

How are you getting on recently ? I will have a seven-day trip to London this summer and I'm writing to you for some information of London as well as your advice and help.

I'd like to know the weather in July so as to take some proper clothes with me. And what necessities should I take for my trip? Also I'd like to ask you to name some places of interest for me including the entrance fees in order that I can arrange my trip and have a budget in advance. If you have time then, I'll trouble you to book a single room in a hotel near your home. Its price should be ordinary , but there should be at least a computer in the room. I'm sure I can communicate with the local people but I'm afraid of making mistakes if I am not familiar with the low and rules there which may be foreign to my country's , so I have to trouble you ahead of time.

I would be more than glad if you could give me your earliest reply.

Yours, Li Hua

译文：你最近怎么样？

今年夏天我要去伦敦七天，我写信给你，想了解伦敦的一些情况，以及你的建议和帮助。

我想知道七月的天气，以便带些合适的衣服。我该带些什么必需品去旅行？还有，我想请你列出一些我感兴趣的地方，包括入场费，这样我就可以提前安排我的旅行和预算。如果你有时间的话，我可以麻烦你在你家附近的旅馆订一间单人房。它的价格应该是普通的，但是房间里至少应该有一台电脑。我相信我可以和当地人交流，但是如果我不熟悉那里的低级规定，我怕犯错误，那里的规定可能对我的国家来说是陌生的，所以我必须提前麻烦你。

如果你能尽早给我答复，我会非常高兴的。

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第十七篇

I like to watch movie, I had watched many movies,Jackie Chen is my favorite male actor.

When I was small, I watched Jackie Chen’s actionmovie, he can beat many guys at the same time, heis many teenagers’ hero.

In the last ten years, Jackie Chen has aimed at the foreign market, he took many movies andcooperated with foreign stars, he has achieved great success.

Jackie’s success teaches us a lesson, the secret of achieving success is hard work.

Jackie got wounded when he shot films, he has many scars on his body.

Now he is over 50, but he is going on his playing, we are happy to see Jackie Chen’s movie.

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第十八篇

A tiger is a kind of catamount animal. It looks like a cat, but much bigger than a cat. A tiger is very ferocious and it eats mainly meat. It has yellow and black streaks all over its body and it looks very beautiful. Its tail is long and strong and it can hit its quarry dying.

Tigers live in the thick forests and small animals in the forests are tigers' food.

During the past years, many forests have been cut down and the living conditions of the tigers are becoming worse and worse. There are fewer tigers left in the world now. Tigers are the animals of the world, and they should have their own living spaces. We must do our best to protect the tigers and their living environment.

老虎是猫科动物的一种，它看起来像猫却比猫大很多。老虎非常凶猛，是肉食性动物。它全身是黑黄相间的斑纹，看起来非常漂亮。它的尾巴又长又有力，能够打死它的猎物。

老虎生活在密林里，以森林中妁小动物为食。

在过去妁几年中，许多森林被砍伐，这使者虎的生存环境越来越糟。现在世界上老虎的数量非常少。老虎是世界性妁动物，它们应该有自己的生存空间。我们必须尽全力保护老虎和它们的生存环境。

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第十九篇

健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。

提示：

1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车;

2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳;

3.饮食要健康;

4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要求：

1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑;

—100词左右;

3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

【例文】

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

【翻译】

亲爱的爸爸(妈妈)，

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二十篇

Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow.

I’m very grateful to my give me so much love and spare no efforts to support still remember once I was seriously ill,they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole night. Now I’m in Senior for me, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging give me enough personal space,which I appreciate so I should do now is to study hard.

When I grow up,I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二十一篇

学校将举行以“turning a bad mood into a good one“为题的作文比赛，请按以下要求完成 1.发生的具体事件 2.对你的心情有何影响 3.你如何应对

Turning a bad mood into a good one

It is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood , you will be happy with everything in the world . Most importantly, you will have an optimistic effect on the people around you. We all will live a harmonious and happy life .It is good for your health as well.

However , sometimes when you meet some difficulties , when you quarrel with others or when you fail in doing something , you may have a bad mood. If so , you should get rid of it as soon as possible. As we all know , everything has two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passing by . Remember : only you can make yourself happy.

I hope that everyone has a good mood every day !

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二十二篇

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The Reason why I like him are following. To begin with, that made many peopleharvest knowledge and make progress. secondly, He encouraged people to accept ownparter. What's more, he was one of the many famous people, and each other equally to everyone he was worth learning.

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高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二十三篇

Dear Tom,

I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you next week , which I have promised .I feel sorry for about it and want you to know what happened .

Just now ,my cousin , Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year , informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family . You know , we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year .

I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me . I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing .Once again,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二十四篇

Good afternoon, everyone.

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

Thank you for your listening!

大家下午好。

今天我演讲的题目是“做一个好听众”。

善于倾听，能表现出尊重，增进理解，增进人际关系。

许多人认为父母应该多听他们的孩子，这样他们就会更好地理解他们，并发现很容易缩小代沟；教师应该多听他们的学生，然后他们可以满足他们的需要更好，并把自己在一个良好的.关系，学生，学生应该多听他们的同学，从而他们将帮助和相互学习，和友谊可能会形成。

我想强调的是，我们每个人都应该听从别人的要求。表现出你的尊重，从不停止别人的谈话，表明你对一个支持性的沉默或是一个微笑的微笑很感兴趣；对不同意见的人持开放态度，即使你不喜欢他们。用一个词，好的听力可以使我们彼此接近。

谢谢你的聆听！

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二十五篇

火爆的家教市场

When talking about the career of being a teacher, a lot of people will speak highly of it, because this career enjoys a good reputation, and the most important thing is having rich extra income. Many teachers gain their income by giving students extracurricular tutoring, which can earn much more than their salary. The news reported that Chinese tutoring market has great potential, because the parents are willing to pay more money on their children’s education. It seems that being a teacher means earning money easily. Actually, a lot of teachers are tired on their work as they need to supervise the students, so even on holiday, most of them choose to take a break and refuse to do the tutoring work. We are easy to be misled by the untrue news, and sometimes even misunderstand the career.

在谈到教师这个职业时，很多人都会表示赞扬，因为这份职业享有不错的声誉，最重要的是有着丰富的额外收入。许多教师通过给学生课外辅导来增加他们的收入，这些收入比他们的薪水还高。据新闻报道，中国家教市场有着巨大的潜力，因为父母都愿意在孩子的教育上支付更多的钱。看来，当一名教师意味着容易挣钱。实际上，很多老师在他们的工作中都是很累的，即使是在在期中他们也需要监督学生，所以大多数人选择休息，拒绝做辅导工作。我们很容易被一些不真实的新闻误导，有时甚至误解了别人的职业。

广告的利与弊

With the development of advertising, ads have been connected with people’s life. Is it good or bad? We had a discussion. Some people think advertisements don’t tell the fact about the products advertised. Also, they take up too much time on TV and the radio, and cover too much space in newspapers and magazines, which waste a lot of paper. What’s worse, there are some false advertisements that cheat people into buying their things. Therefore, they believe advertisements should be stopped.

Some other people think advertisements can help us make better choices about what to buy by offering us the latest information about various goods. Moreover, many well-done advertisements are popular and entertaining, which appeal to the consumers. However, too many advertisements can be annoying. So we should develop advertising properly.

In my opinion, ads is like a two-side sword. Anyway, we can be wise if we are able to distinguish between fiction and fact.

随着广告业的发展，广告已经与人们的生活联系在一起。广告是好还是坏?我们进行了一个讨论。有些人认为广告没有告诉关于这个产品的实际。同时，广告在电视和收音机上占用了太多的时间，在报纸和杂志上也占用了太多空间，浪费了很多纸。更糟的是，一些虚假广告欺骗人们去买他们的东西。因此，他们认为广告应该被取缔。

其他一些人认为广告通过提供最新的各种各样的商品信息，可以帮助我们做出更好的购买选择。此外，许多好广告很受欢迎很有娱乐效果，能够吸引消费者。然而，太多的广告会让人讨厌。所以我们应该采取正确的方式发展广告。

在我看来，广告就像一把双刃剑。无论如何，如果我们能够区分小说和事实我们就会是明智的。

Many years ago, the movie about the youth became very popular, every year, we can see many hot movies about the protagonist’s passed youth. People like to recall their passed youth, which makes such movies sell good. But I find the common things about these movies, all the protagonists’ youth are about fighting, love and other negative things. I understand the directors’ intention, they want to tell people youth is not perfect and having pities. Of course movie is exaggerating, the real youth is about studying, at least, most people have worked so hard to get into their ideal colleges. What the movies describe make up some people’s youth, for which they don’t have the chance to experience. We should not be misled by these movies, for the teenagers, their job is to study, so that they can have a bright future.

【翻译】很多年以前，关于青春的电影很受欢迎，此后每年，我们都可以看到很多热门电影是关于主人公逝去的青春。人们喜欢回忆他们逝去的青春，这才是让这类电影好卖的原因。但是我发现了这些电影的共同点，那就是所有的主人公的青春都是关于大家，恋爱和其他消极的东西。我明白导演们的意图，他们想要告诉人们青春是不完美的，存在遗憾。当然电影是夸张化的，真正的青春是关于学习，至少，大部分人是如此努力的学习，为了进入理想的大学。电影所刻画的弥补了一些人的青春，对于他们没有机会去体验这些东西。我们不应该被电影误导，对于青少年来说，他们的工作是学习，这样他们才能有一个美好的未来。

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二十六篇

十句作文法

十句作文法，意思是写英语作文，十句话就够了。

十句话就能拿二十多分，实在是太赚了，太赚了……

这十句，自有其排布的规律。本篇主讲议论文，别的文体有机会我们再聊。

真正的英语高分选手，是能把英语议论文作文答成填空题的，怎么说呢？

文分三段。

第一段记叙，写对题目中对你要求的东西，写背景，写事件。需要2句话。

第二段议论，是一句总起句，加三句论点，每一句论点后面加一句论据。

第三段升华，大约是1-2句的篇幅。把文章提升至世界/社会/国家，或者个人成长的层面。

如此，共十句。

阅卷老师阅卷时会看哪些东西呢？他们会看：你文章的开头与结尾，然后是第二段的第一句话，你文章中用到的一些逻辑连接词。最后大略地看看字数、拼写、语法等细节，打分。

你按照那样三段的格式写，对阅卷老师也是一种友好，他觉得你懂行，这样一个基础分就有了。

当你有了这么一个详细大纲，就可以继续往下写。

怎么写？

答，套用万能句式+套用逻辑词+填空。

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高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二十七篇

My mother is the person I respect plays an important role in my life，not only as a mother but also as a friend.

As a mother，she takes good care of the family and she is never upset about works hard in the 's always warm-hearted and ready tohelp sets a good example to have learned to work hard andrespect people a friend，she knows a lot about me and gives me helpwhenever it's necessary.

My mother has a great influence on me and I respect her most.

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二十八篇

又是个星期天，我们要上泡泡英语课喽！今天和往常很不一样，因为第一节课我们要做sandwich！我不骗你，那可是真的！上一节课，Tina老师让我们准备了许多做三明治的材料：面包片、生菜、果酱、火腿等等。

你们知道我把这些好吃的放到哪儿了吗？告诉你们吧，我把它们放到我的食品篮里！我的`食品篮可漂亮了！因为我给它垫了一个粉色的丝巾，丝巾是妈妈送给我的礼物哟！

我高高兴兴地拎着篮子出了家门，来到了泡泡英语课教室，我看到我们班里的同学都带了很多好吃的。除了面包片，同学们带的酱五花八门，有的带的是芝麻酱，有的带的是草莓酱，还有的带的是沙拉酱，Tina老师带的是酸奶，因为她和瑞达老师都想减肥！我觉得Tina很好玩儿，她一点儿也不胖，减什么肥呀?

看到这么多好吃的，同学们都忍不住了，接二连三地问什么时候开始做呀？因为有些同学知道要做sandwich，都没有吃早饭呢，早就饿坏了！Tina哈哈大笑！终于，可以上课啦，同学们一片欢呼，像老虎一样！

开始“工作”啦！我先把一个面包片放在盘子上，然后，把切好的火腿片放在面包上，接着，再放一片生菜，抹上一勺果酱，这是第一层；我又放上第二个面包片做第二层，这次，我放上了一个煎鸡蛋，又加上一片生菜；最后，把第三张面包片放上，这下就可以开吃啦！妈妈说我做的是一个“巨无霸”！其他同学做的也像“巨无霸”，太好玩儿了！

大家都做好了，你尝尝我的，我尝尝你的，Tina说这叫“分享”（share)，我们都觉得很有趣，很快乐。这是一堂“好吃”的课，妈妈说这就叫“DIY”（do it your-self),我非常喜欢“DIY”！

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第二十九篇

【例文】

Tourism in China

Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

【译文】

中国旅游

最近几年，在中国的趋势，旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为，约47%城镇居民定期作出旅行，28%的农村居民，也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示，更多的人在旅游有兴趣，并会在将来加入军队。

面对这一趋势，我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方，随着改革开放政策，对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是，它相信，人们现在更积极的态度，旅游业，把它作为一种生活方式。此外，旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如，交通运输发展迅速，许多景点都已经上市。

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第三十篇

Dear Sir or Madame：

I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.

I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 20xx Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.

It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?

Thank you very much.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

高考英语作文好评范文初中 第三十一篇

Jan, 1st, 20xx

Dear parents,I know it’s a bit hard/difficult for you to accept my choice to apply to Tsinghua University (for further study). You have been taking good care of me during the past 18 years and in your eyes I’m a good boy who is always willing to follow your advice. But this time I do hope that you can allow me to make my own University, one of the top universities worldwide, has appealed to numerous excellent applicants. Not only do they admire these distinguished scholars but also they can share the advanced teaching facilities and reference resources. In addition, graduates from Tsinghua are bound to have more chances to find rewarding jobs. In this competitive society，I can prove myself an outstanding talent and make great contributions to the development of our know you are worried that I can’t look after myself if I go to Tsinghua. However, this will enable me to learn how to live independently and stand on my own feet. I really hope you can understand me and support my decision, which will benefit my future.

Yours,

Xiao Er Wang