分析英语高分作文范文 第一篇
Recently, more and more attention has been paid to the phenomenon that many people participate in talent shows / more and more people shop online. We can easily recognize its advantages. First of all, we can see its advantages.
In addition, last but not least, all the advantages mentioned above. In my opinion, for this phenomenon, if we do not take into account the second point mentioned above, its negative effects will far exceed my understanding. We'd better make full use of the advantages while minimizing the negative effects ring.
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分析英语高分作文范文 第二篇
三 考查another, the other, others, the others的用法
[考点解读]
●another泛指三个或三个以上的人或物中不确定的另一个,如例19?another还可以作形容词,表示“另一个的”
●the other指已知的两个人或物中的另一个
●others和“other + 名词”均泛指“别的人或物”
●the others指“一定范围内其余的人或物”,如例23?如果被指代的名词是不可数名词,则用the rest替代,
四 考查(a) little, (a) few, some, any的用法
[考点解读]
●few和little可用作代词和形容词?few和a few可以修饰或代替可数名词复数?few有否定含义, a few有肯定含义, little和a little可以修饰或代替不可数名词?little有否定含义, a little含肯定含义,?
●some和any表示“一些”,可用作代词和形容词?some用于肯定句,如例31; any用于否定句?疑问句和条件句中, some也可用于疑问句,如例32和例33; any也可用于肯定陈述句中,表示“任何一个”。
分析英语高分作文范文 第三篇
After several days of so-called mock tests, I think I will die very well. I think I am not the only one who thinks that Fasis will be defeated in the world in a few years. Putin held an international conference today to remind the world of this.
But in my opinion, he is only participating in some consultation activities. He does not really regret the loss caused by Fasis, but he just wants to improve Russia Ross's economic situation and international status, for example, fortunately, I still know what's going on outside the house. I'm moving my apartment tomorrow.
It's next to my school, but there's no Internet connection. I think I'll have to keep silent for the next week. Everyone emphasizes it to me in order to get high marks in the coming national college entrance examination It's a turning point in my life, and my mother has been mumbling to herself.
I think it's time for me to study hard. If I'm a person who only depends on the examination or a few days' examination, how can I become an outstanding person? You may say that I'm very cynical, but how can the examination affect one's life? Or can you imagine that God will curse it.
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分析英语高分作文范文 第四篇
With the wide spread of hamburger Restaurant, especially the McDonald and KFC, our children are exposed to these kinds of high calorie , some people worry that if our children eat too much hamburgers, then they would gain weight quite easily. Some people argue that hamburgers do no bad to children’s health. Standing on my point of view, I suggest that children shouldn't eat hamburgers. Reasons are listed below.
First of all, eating hamburgers leads to fat. It is known to all that all the hamburgers are junk food containing high calorie and high fat while low nutrition. If our children eat them often, then they will be gaining weight easily. What’s worse, they will be dystrophic so as to affect body development.
Secondly, eating hamburgers often will cause cancer. Most hamburgers are fried food. It is investigated that if we eat fried food often, then we will be easy to get cancer.
All in all, though hamburgers are popular around the world, they are classified into the circle of junk food because it will lead to fat and even cause cancer if our children eat too many. So, we shouldn’t take our children to eat hamburgers.
分析英语高分作文范文 第五篇
作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1、词数：100左右;2、参考词汇：房租―Tent(n.).
作品一：
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
作品二：
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport,see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。
作品三：
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
作品四：
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。
分析英语高分作文范文 第六篇
In the picture, there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream. Across the stream, a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the band for the fruit with a net attached to a pole. Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit.
The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one say of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. As indicated in the picture, if the man is willing to look for other possibilities, he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal. All he has to do is to turn around, cross the bridge and walk to the tree.
分析英语高分作文范文 第七篇
一、使用词典及注重阅读
词典是学习一门语言的工具，很多学生学英语没有经常查英语词典的习惯，这是不良的学习习惯,应该多多使用词典。有的语言学家认为甚至看一个学生使用什么样的词典就可以判断的的学习水平。我认为首选的应该是经济实惠的英汉双解词典，如：《郎文英汉双解活用词典》(LONGMAN ACTIVE STUDY ENGLISH-CHINESE DICTIONARY)(上海译文出版社，32元)，然后再过度到使用英英词典。当然，查名词通常需要借助汉英词典。在查英语词典的时候我们还应该学习的是词语的搭配。如：because of后只能接名词词组(做宾语)，because后只能接表示原因的从句。学习单词时请记住英语单词的词性。如bribe可以是名词，也可以作为动词来使用。如：The bank teller bribed his banker.(银行出纳员贿赂他的上司) The banker was charged with taking bribes from the bank teller.(银行经理被指控接受出纳员的贿赂)The government fights against the bribery(政府打击行贿受贿)。学习词的时候一般情况下不要孤立地学，否则容易忘记。尽量作到“词不离句，句不离文。”有的学生写作文的时候从英语词典里找到他们需要的词。这并不是明智的学习英语写作的方法。或者根据自己的汉语思维将要表达的意思写出来，写出来的英语往往给人感觉非常蹩脚而不自然。前提是他在写作文以前到没有大量的阅读中去吸取知识的养分，培养语感，就象蜜蜂不采蜜就酿不出蜜的道理一样。
二、善用词汇提高写作水平
句子是由词组合而成的。有的学生在写英语作文的时候，喜欢用生僻的词，认为这样可以得到高分。我觉得这似乎有些“为赋新诗强说愁”的味道。如I deem(我想)，而不用I think.一位美国的心理学博士Lois Gail认为：deem通常不可以取代 think. 因为 deem 是英语中非常正式的说法，包含了判断和权威。她用英语讲解：In current English, “deem” is very formal and almost connotes judgment and is not commonly used as a substitute for “think.” 用什么样的词要分场合。如果是一个非常庄严肃穆的场合，可以用deem, 但如果表达个人对某一问题的看法，还是要用think合情理些。
有的学生写作文的时候反复用一个词组，会给人枯燥的感觉。如：Every morning, I get up early, then go to do some sports. Doing sports makes me healthy and smart.作文中的用法都是正确的，但更好的则是：Every morning, I get up early to play basketball or go some jogging, which makes me healthy and energetic. 中国学生在英语作文中喜欢用的一个英语表达法do some sports(从事体育运动)，是从中学英语课本学来的。可是在现代英语里，这个表达法几乎没有人使用了。如果从事体育运动，就具体表达成：play basketball, play football.等等。
三、善用句型提高写作水平
写作文首先是从写正确的句子开始。一个句子从语法上讲是指由大写字母开始，由名词，动词或词组构成的一个陈述句，祈使句，惊叹句和疑问句。由句号，疑问号或惊叹号来结束。表示一个意思讲完了，它表示停顿和呼吸。音乐的乐谱讲“乐句，”一个乐句弹奏完了要停顿一下是一样的道理。 要注意的是很多(包括美国)学生在写英语作文的时候，不知道英语的句号要用在引号前面。正确的例句如：She said, “You are a good girl.”这一细节请注意。有的学生写英语作文喜欢用复合句，认为这样不容易出错。其实，很多学生连简单的英语句子都不能保证写对的时候，就写出来些错误的复合句。这就象一个小孩还没有学会走路就开始学跑步，肯定是要跌跤的。我认识一位美国的高中英语教师，美国文学学士Temple Sterling 女士认为将英语作为外语来学习的学生还是先学会使用简单句然后再学习复合句也不迟。
(一)尽量使用基本句型
英语句子结构的特点是：相对于德语，法语，俄语，英语“比较简单，自然，合乎逻辑思维的自然顺序。”(李赋宁《英语学习经验谈》147页)。要写好英语作文首先要掌握基本的英语句型：英语千变万化的句子归根到底都离不开以下这五个基本的句型。(《大学英语》：语法与练习 第一册第1页)通常情况下，一个句子的关键在于动词。有人提出的观点是：动词是一个句子的灵魂。
1. Mary is a (主——动——主补)
2. The flowers are blooming. SV (主——动)
3. I have a pen. SVO(主——动——宾)
4. The mother will buy the girl a bike. SVOi (间接宾语)Od(直接宾语) (主——动——间宾——直宾)
5. The parents consider the child a genius. SVOCo (主——动——宾——宾补)
英语中的系表结构也很常用。如：You look 与happy构成系表结构。
(二)活用英语连词
英语里有些短语就象水泥一样把整个段落的构连架连接起来。如：表示结果：as a result, consequently, therefore, etc. in contrast, however, etc. 递进：furthermore, in addition, etc. 总结：in a word, in brief, in short, etc. 转折：but, in spite of, etc. 原因：because, because of, 让步：though
(三)学会使用平行结构
平行结构相当于汉语里的排比结构，它是英美人喜欢使用的一种语言结构，即将相类似的词或者动词结构放在一起，这样不容易出错，并且排列整齐，营造出一种气势。根据一个美国老师的观点，如果一个中国人向英国或是美国的公司用写英语求职信，会使用平行结构的人将会被优先录用。
平行结构例句1，Mary is a kind, cute, clever, happy girl.
例2，Every morning, after I get up, I get dressed, make bed,brush my teeth, wash my face, have breakfast and go to school.(有下划线部分为平行结构。)
(四)运用语气加强情感
英语里有一些缩写，如I#39;m , he#39;s , she#39;s, I#39;ve, I don#39;t 等等，you#39;re 的读音与your 相同。所有的这些缩写形式都是英语里不正式的用法和语气。在正式语体中，如果给美国总统写信，就不可以用缩写形式，而必须要用 I am, You are, He is 等等。用He is hard-working 比he works hard.语气弱。(be 结构比动词的气弱要弱。)long for语气很强，一般只能在恋人之间使用。如英语一首情歌歌词：I am longing for you.
四、段落层次分明
一个典型的英语段落往往先点明主题思想，即(topic sentence)，然后再对该主题加以分析，论证，即(support)，最后是一个总结性的句子，即(conclusion)。(姚君伟《跨文化语境下的外语教学》188页)
例：(主题句：)Competition is common in every field of life.(展开部分：)(1：) For example, the Olympic Games is the most famous competition in the world. (2：)In the four hundred meter swimming race, the swimmers plunge into the water at the signal.( 3：)Each swings his or her arms and legs and tries his or her best to be the first. (4：)Also there is the competition for jobs, for promotion, for customers, and so on. (总结：)We can say ,in a certain sense, competition stimulating people#39;s interest in work helps society to go forward.
如果 将段落的结构再扩展，就成为一篇文章的结构。美式写作结构的特点是：段落层次分明，观点阐述平行推进，直线思维，逻辑性强，行文如流水，简洁明了。(崔晓霞《大学英语作文应试章法》第7页)
五、运用口语培养英语思维
提高英语的作文可以从训练英语口语开始，口语是文字的先锋。“口头语言早在人类社会形成之初就已出现，至尽已经存在了几百万年，而书面文字的历史只有短短几千年。”(胡壮麟《语言学简明教程》133页)英国著名的英语教学专家格兰特在20xx年3月20日的`英语《二十一世纪报》增刊上谈到口语的提高可以促进英语作文水平。他在文中指出：“Oral skills are important both in themselves, and also because they help one to prepare for writing. The best oral activities often lead to written activities that benefit from them.” 还应该多与英美人交流，在实际的生活中了解他们的语言习惯与思维习惯，还可以学到书本上学不到的知识。
思维是写作的前提条件。著名语言学家王力先生曾说“中国的语言是人制的，西洋的语言是法制的。”所以他们的语言逻辑性强，人情味淡;我们的语言逻辑性差，人情味强。如：1)我的祖母还健在。英语：My grandma is still alive(我的祖母还活着).我想只有通过大量的阅读才能培养良好的英语的思维和语感，克服来自母语的干扰。话题又回到阅读上来，读多了就自然培养英语思维，就可以不再受母语思维的干扰。“英语思维在写作中的好处是可以用英美人习惯的言语来表达思想。”
分析英语高分作文范文 第八篇
The table below shows the results of a survey of visitors to four categories of tourist attractions in the UK. The pie chart compares the number of tourists from four types of tourist attractions and five different theme parks. It is obvious that theme parks and museums / galleries are the two most popular types.
Among the tourist attractions of that year, the proportion of tourists received by the beach of Blackpool playground was the highest among theme parks. Looking at the information in detail, we can see that some of the tourists surveyed went to the theme park Garden, where people go to museums or art galleries. In contrast, only in the sample, wildlife parks and zoos are the least popular of the four types of tourist attractions, with only theme park visitors, but almost half of the respondents have been to the Alton tower of Blackpool leisure beach Towers was the second most popular amusement park, followed by Southport's pleasant land, and finally, chesington adventure world and Lego and Windsor welcomed the visitors respectively.
中文翻译：
下表显示了一项对英国四类旅游景点游客的调查结果。饼图比较了四类旅游景点和五个不同主题公园的游客人数，很明显主题公园和博物馆/画廊是最受欢迎的两种类型在当年的旅游景点中，布莱克浦游乐场海滩接待的游客比例在主题公园中是最高的 更详细地看信息，我们可以看到，被调查的游客中，有人去了主题公园，其中的人去了博物馆或美术馆。相比之下，只有样本中，野生动物园和动物园是四类旅游景点中最不受欢迎的，只有主题公园部分的游客，但几乎一半的受访者曾去过布莱克浦休闲海滩阿尔顿塔楼（Alton Towers）是第二大最受欢迎的游乐园，其次是Southport的Pleasureland，最后，切辛顿冒险世界和乐高和温莎分别对受访游客表示欢迎。
分析英语高分作文范文 第九篇
The seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. Many people get there very early to xxxseizexxx a seat every day. So do I. One day a xxxspecialxxx thing happened to me. And I learned a lesson that I shall never forget.
It happened on a Wednesday morning last January, just before our final examation. I got to the reading-room very early to occupy a seat. I put a book on the desk and then went to have breakfast. But when I hurried back into the reading-room, I found someone was sitting on the seat which I had occupied in advance. I ran to him immediatly and shouted at him angrily, xxxGo away. It's my seat.xxx Everyone raised their eyes and stared at me unfriendly. My face turned red and I felt ashamed of myself. I took my book and fled helter-skelter before so many eyes.
I dared not go to the reading-room for several days. I learned a lesson in the reading-room. Since then I have been keeping the lesson in mind: To be polite to everyone.
分析英语高分作文范文 第十篇
形容词和副词
【考点分析】
1.形容词、副词的作用与位置;
①多个形容词作定语排列的顺序
②enough作修饰成分时的位置问题及形容词作后置定语
③形容词作伴随状语和原因状语
2.表语形容词的特点及连系动词+形容词作表语;
3.形容词、副词比较等级的用法;
①原级的用法
②比较级的用法
③最高级的用法
④形容词和副词前面使用冠词的情况
⑤由as/so组成的形容词或副词短语
⑥more /less than及其相关结构
4.容易混淆的形容词、副词的区别。
【知识点归纳】
形容词和副词是历年英语高考的重点。要复习好这一块知识点，考生不仅要掌握其基础知识，同时要牢记其中的重点和难点，也是高考的热点。
I.形容词、副词的作用与位置
1.形容词是用来修饰名词的，常被放在名词前作定语，或放在系动词后面作表语。而副词则用来修饰形容词、动词，其他副词或者句子，一般位于形容词之前，动词之后或句子之首。以下属几种情况，须牢记：
①几个并列的形容词作定语，其语序通常为：
限定语(The、A)+ 描绘性形容词 + size(大小)+ shape(形状)+ age(年龄、时间)+ color(颜色)+origin(国籍、来源)+material(材料)+ purpose(目的)+名词;
a heavy black Chinese steel umbrella,
the man’s first tow interesting little red French oil paitings
熟记口诀就可以顺利解题：限定描绘大长高，形状年龄和新老，颜色国籍跟材料，作用类别往后靠。
②形容词短语作定语，定语后置;
a language difficult to master,
a leaning tower about 180 feet high
This is a student worth of praise.
They will turn their motherland into a country, beautiful and modern.
③表语形容词(afraid、alike、alone、asleep、awake、alive等)作定语，定语后置;
a man alive：活着的人
有些表身体健康状况的形容词如well、faint、ill只作表语。sick既可作表语又可作定语，ill如作定语意为“bad”;
④形容词作定语修饰由不定代词one、no、any、some和every构成的复合词如anything、something等时，通常后置;
I have something important to tell you.
⑤enough、nearby修饰名词前置或后置，程度副词一般位于形容词、副词前面，enough修饰形容词、副词时，必须后置;
⑥else常用作疑问代词和不定代词的后置定语;
⑦几个副词并列作状语时，其顺序较灵活，但一般是：方式→地点→时间;
⑧频度副词如often、always、usually等在be动词后，行为动词前;
⑨副词作定语，定语后置;
The person there is waiting for you.
⑩复合形容词常用作定语，个别也可以作表语。
He was a 12-year-old boy.
He is good-natured.
复合形容词的构成：
▲形容词+名词-ed：kind-hearted好心的，white-haired白发的
▲形容词+形容词：red-hot炽热的，dark-blue深蓝的
▲形容词+现在分词：good-looking好看的，easy-going随和的
▲副词+现在分词：hard-working勤劳的，fast-moving快速转动的
▲副词+过去分词：hard-won得来不易的，newly-made新建的
▲名词+形容词：life-long终生的，world-famous世界闻名的
▲名词+现在分词：peace-loving爱好和平的，fun-loving爱开玩笑的
▲名词+过去分词：snow-covered白雪覆盖的，hand-made手工的
▲数词+名词 + ed：four-storeyed 4层楼的，three-legged 3条腿的
▲数词+名词(名词用单数)：ten-year 的, two-man两人的
2.形容词作伴随状语和原因状语
He spent 7days in the wind and snow，cold and hungry.
他在风雪中度过了7天，又冷又饿。
She stared into the distance, speechless for a long time.
她盯着远处看，好长时间不讲话。
Afraid of being caught，the thief hid himself under a bed.
因为害怕被抓，这个小偷藏在床下面。
II.连系动词与形容词
象get,grow,become,feel,appear,prove ,look,keep,smell,taste,sound,go,turn,remain等这些动词既可以用作为实义动词又可以用作连系动词，因而要根据上下文语境判断究竟是什么性质的动动词才能正确解题。
请看下面这道选择题：
▲We don't care if a hunting dog smells_____,but we really don't want him to smell_____.
A. well; well B. bad; badly C. well; badly D. badly; bad
第一个“smell”是“闻起来”的意思，是连系动词，用形容词。第二个“smell”是实义动词，用副词来修饰;此外well作形容词是表示人身体好、气色好，用在此句中不行，只能作副词用。答案是B。句意是：“我们不在乎猎狗闻起来难闻，但是我们确实不希望它的嗅觉力差。
III.形容词、副词比较等级的用法
形容词、副词有三个等级：原级、比较级和最高级，其构成形式如下：
规则变化：单音节词和少数双音节词，加词尾-er，-est来构成比较级和最高级
构成法
比较级
最高级
一般单音节词未尾加-er,-est
tall
taller
tallest
以不发音的e结尾的单音词和少数以-le结尾的双音节词只加-r,-st
nice
nicer
nicest
以一个辅音字母结尾的闭音节单音节词，双写结尾的辅音字母，再加-er,-est
big
bigger
biggest
“以辅音字母+y”结尾的双音节词，改y为i，再加-er，-est
busy
busier
busiest
少数以-er,-ow结尾的双音节词未尾加-er,-est
clever
narrow
cleverer
narrower
cleverest
narrowest
其他双音节词和多音节词，在前面加more，most来构成比较级和最高级
important
easily
more important
more easily
most important
most easily
不规则变化
比较级
最高级
good/well
better
best
bad/ill
worse
worst
old
older/elder
oldest/eldest
much/many
more
most
little
less
least
far
farther/further
farthest/furthest
注意：many,old和far比较级及最高级用法的区别
①如果后接名词时，much more +不可数名词，many more +可数名词复数。
②old有两种比较级和最高级形式: older/oldest 和elder/eldest。elder，eldest只用于兄弟姐妹的长幼关系。
My elder brother is an engineer.
Mary is the eldest of the three sisters.
③far有两种比较级，farther，further..在英语中两者都可指距离。
在美语中，father表示距离，further表示进一步
I have nothing further to say.
分析英语高分作文范文 第十一篇
本周与同学们继续分享英语二图表作文的写作思路及语言，上周我们分析的是柱形图的写作思路和模板，这周我们继续进行表格的写作和模板的介绍，首先同学们要知道我们图表的写作是不同的图表有着不同的特点和写作的要点，而表格是近几年的考的只考过一次，但是作为重点考察的表格来说，同学们也要进行重点学习。表格体现的特点是数据的之间的差异，而这种写作的思路是要应用在文章中间得到体现的，那我们就来看一下针对于柱型图有什么写作的要点和写作的思路。首先我们一起来看一下20xx年的真题：
Directions: Write an essay based on the following table. In your writing, you should
1) describe the table, and
2) give your comments.
You should write at least 150 words.
Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)
20xx年的题目考察的还是类似的考察特点。拿到一个题目还是先要进行图片文字部分的阅读，本年的题目还是要求两个部分，同学们可以分为三段来进行写作：图画描述段、分析论证段和趋势预测段。首先第一段的写作思路遵循整体五句话的写作思路：直观评价、图表标题、主流趋势、最大变化和过渡句。首先直观评价是最简单的一句，可以说这是一个简洁又准确的表格等，同学们可以适当的更改自己的语言。第二句图表标题依然采用倒鱼钩的翻译方法，图表标题是某公司员工工作满意度调查，可以翻译为the job satisfaction of the employees in a certain company，主流趋势是表格的特点，即所有指数针对于同一个话题体现了不同的趋势，首先同一个话题是工作满意度，那所有指数是什么呢?我们可以看见这个表格体现的不同年龄段的员工对于工作满意度有不同的趋势或者态度，所以这句话可以说the employees at different ages show total different inclination towards the problem of job satisfaction。最大差异表现的数据中最有说服力最明显的数据，通过表格可以看出这个数据就是和, 在描述时描述的是该数据体现的意义。过渡句比较简单，直接说出上述现象值得我们更深一步的考虑即可。在第二段时注意分析上文最大差异产生的原因，这个图主要分析在40-50岁的员工中为什么员工满意度最低或者为什么不满意度最高的原因，可以从以下的角度进行解释：人到中年的职业发展前景并不是很好以及中年人有更多的责任，容易对工作不满意等等方面进行分析，注意将每句话写成整个的句子进行添加。最后一段进趋势预测，直接写这种趋势将会持续下去就可以了，那么基于以上思路，我们来看一下范文：
Here is a table chart, telling us an interesting phenomenon. There is no denying that the chart records the job satisfaction of the employees in a certain company, which successfully arouses our curiosity. As is clearly reflected by the chart, the employees at different ages show total different inclination towards the problem of job satisfaction. Especially, the employees in their forties show the most obvious inclination that 64% of them are dissatisfied with their jobs. Obviously, the inclinations, clearly reflected by the chart, should be given more consideration.
Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the trend that people in their forties show the most satisfaction, but for my part, the following two are of great importance. On the top of list is that the people face the heaviest burden of supporting children and aged people in their family. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that they are not open-minded towards success like people over 50 years old.
Taking into account what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that the current situation will continue in the forthcoming years. 上面就是整个真题的写作的思路和语言表达，考研不是一个人的旅程，在考研的漫漫长路上，中公名师常伴你左右!
分析英语高分作文范文 第十二篇
We have seen some famous movies, such as Harry Potter and Twight, both are hot sell novels. When we see the novels have been put into the screen, it is naturally that we will compare the original one and the adapted one, the latter is always being critical, I prefer to see the novels.
我们都看过了一些著名的电影，比如《哈利波特》和《暮光之城》，这两部都是热销的小说。当我们看到小说被放上屏幕的时候，很自然地，我们会拿原版和改编的版本来比较，改版的总是受到批评，我比较喜欢看小说。
The English novels are excellent, the first novel I saw was Twight, it is about a vampire named Edward and a human girl named Bella, they fall in love, but the different identities makes them hard to be together. When I read the story, I was so impressed, Bella’s inner voice is so strong that I imagine myself is her. While when I saw the movie, the plot happens so fast, Bella’s love is still strong, but for the audience, it is hard for them to understand. The long story is shorten, we have to finish the story in one and a half hour. The quick watch makes the audience hard to perceive the character’s inner world, so the strong feeling is weaker.
英语小说很好看，我看的第一部小说是《暮光之城》，这是关于一个叫爱德华的吸血鬼和一个人类女孩贝拉的故事，他们相爱了，但是身份的不同让他们很难在一起。当我读到小说时，我印象很深刻，贝拉内心的声音很强烈以至于我把自己当成了她。然而当我看到电影时，情节进行得很快，贝拉的爱依旧强烈，只是对于观众来说很难理解。长故事被缩短，我们不得不在一个半小时内看完。如此快速的观看让观众难以察觉到人物的内心世界，因此强烈的感情被淡化了。
So for me, I like to read novels, I can perceive the character’s emotion and be immerged in the novel world.
所以对于我来说，我喜欢看小说，我可以察觉到人物的感情，融进小说的世界。
分析英语高分作文范文 第十三篇
1. Scott Hahn, cofounder with Gregory of Rogan and Loomstate, which uses all-organic cotton, says hi 0 1. Scott Hahn, cofounder with Gregory of Rogan and Loomstate, which uses all-organic cotton, says high-quality sustainable materials can still be tough to find. (6月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主干为Scott Hahn says…。high-quality sustainable…find为says的宾语。which引导的非限制性定语从句which uses all-organic cotton修饰的是Rogan and Loomstate。cofounder with Gregory为Scott Hahn的同位语。
【译文】Scott Hahn与Gregory同为使用全有机棉的Rogan和Loomstate公司的创始人，他声称，高质量的可持续使用面料仍然很难寻觅到。
2. Most designers with existing labels are finding there aren’t comparable fabrics that can just replace what you’re doing and what your customers are used to,” he says. (206月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主干为Most designers…are finding…。there aren’t…used to为省略了that的宾语从句。that引导的定语从句that can just replace…修饰fabrics。what引导的两个宾语从句what you’re doing和what your customers are used to作replace的宾语。
【译文】他说，“大多数现有品牌设计师发现，并没有匹配的面料能代替你正用着的和顾客们已经适应的面料。”
3. Last year the influential trade show Designers & Agents stopped charging its participation fee for young green entrepreneurs (企业家) who attend its two springtime shows in Los Angeles and New York and gave special recognition to designers whose collections are at least 25% sustainable. (年6月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主干为… Designers & Agents stopped charging…and gave special recognition…。who引导的定语从句who attend its…York修饰entrepreneurs，whose引导的定语从句whose collections are…sustainable修饰designers。
【译文】去年，颇具影响力的Designers & Agents对参加其在洛杉矶和纽约举办的两次春季展览的年轻环保企业家们实行免费入场，同时给予那些作品中包括至少四分之一可持续产品的设计师们以特别表彰。
4. This week Wal-Mart is set to announce a major initiative aimed at helping cotton farmers go organ 0 4. This week Wal-Mart is set to announce a major initiative aimed at helping cotton farmers go organic: it will buy transitional (过渡型的) cotton at higher prices, thus helping to expand the supply of a key sustainable material. (2009年6月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主干为Wal-Mart is set to announce a… initiative。aimed…organic为后置定语，修饰initiative。冒号后的句子it will buy…prices即initiative的内容，相当于initiative的同位语从句。helping to…sustainable作伴随状语。
【译文】本周沃尔玛特打算宣布一大重要举措，旨在帮助种植棉花的农民走有机种植之路：它将以稍高价收购过渡型的棉花，以此帮助扩大一种主要的可持续使用面料的供应量。
5. Scientists have devised a way to determine roughly where a person has lived using a strand (缕) of hair, a technique that could help track the movements of criminal suspects or unidentified murder victims. (2009年6月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主干为Scientists have devised a way…。a technique为a way的同位语。where引导的宾语从句where…lived作determine的宾语。using…hair为现在分词作方式状语。that引导的定语从句that…victims修饰technique。
【译文】科学家已经设计出一个方法，凭借人的一缕头发便能大致确定某人曾经居住过的地点，这项技术可能能够帮助跟踪锁定犯罪嫌疑人或不明身份案件受害人的活动场所。
6. Todd Park, a local detective, said the method has helped him learn more about an unidentified woman whose skeleton was found near Great Salt Lake. (2009年6月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主干为Todd Park said…。a local detective为Todd Park的同位语。the method has…为省略了引导词that的宾语从句，该宾语从句中又包含一个由whose引导的定语从句whose skeleton…Lake，修饰的是woman。
【译文】当地的侦探Todd Park说这个方法帮助他了解到关于一具在大盐湖附近发现的不明身份女尸骸的更多信息。
7. He had a perfect résumé and gave good responses to her questions, but the fact that 07. He had a perfect résumé and gave good responses to her questions, but the fact that he never looked her in the eye said “untrustworthy,” so she decided to offer the job to her second choice. (2009年6月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主干为He had a…résumé and gave…responses, but the fact…said untrustworthy…so she decided…。从句that he never looked her in the eye为the fact的同位语。and连接He的两个谓宾，but表转折，so则表结果。
【译文】这位应试者的履历非常完美，并且对她的问题回答得不错，但是，他不敢正视她这一事实意味着“不值得信赖”，因此她决定把工作留给第二个候选人。
8. When we begin to question our assumptions and challenge what we think we have learned from our past, from the media, peers, family, friends, etc., we begin to realize that some of our conclusions are flawed (有缺陷的) or contrary to our fundamental values. (2009年6月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主句为we begin to realize…，从句为When引导的时间状语从句When we…etc.。主句中包括一个由that引导的宾语从句that some…values，作realize的宾语。从句中包含了一个由what引导的宾语从句what we think，作challenge的宾语；而think后又带了一个省略引导词的宾语从句we have learned from…etc.。
【译文】当我们开始质疑自己的假设，并且向那些我们认为是从我们的过去、媒体、同辈、家人、朋友等那里学到的东西发出挑战的时候，我们就开始意识到我们的结论有些是有缺陷的，或者说与我们的基本价值是相违背的。
9. We need to train ourselves to think differently, shift our mindsets and realize that diversity opens doors for all of us, creating opportunities in organizations and communities that benefit everyone. (2009年6月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主干为We need to…。to后带了三个并列的不定式，分别是train ourselves to think，shift our mindsets和realize，而that引导的宾语从句that diversity opens…us则作realize的宾语。creating…communities作伴随状语，该状语中又包括一个由that引导的定语从句that benefit everyone，修饰的是opportunities。
【译文】我们需要训练自己用不同的思维方式去思考，转变我们的思维，并且意识到多元化的大门向我们每一个人开放，这样就能创造机会，使组织和社区中的每一个人都受益。
10. They only come in when a friend drops dead on the golf course and they think, ‘Geez, if it 010. They only come in when a friend drops dead on the golf course and they think, ‘Geez, if it could happen to him, …’(12月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主句为They only come in，从句为when引导的时间状语从句。从句中包含两个由and连接的并列结构a friend drops dead和they think…。‘Geez…’为think的宾语，该宾语的省略号里其实省略了与it could happen to him结构对应的it could happen to me too。
【译文】某个朋友在打高尔夫时猝死，他们会想：‘天啊，如果这能在他身上发生……’，只有这个时候他们才会来(医院)。
11. He believes most diseases that commonly affect men could be addressed by preventive check-ups. (月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主干为He believes…diseases…could be addressed…。that引导的定语从句that commonly affect men修饰most diseases。by preventive check-ups为be addressed的方式状语。
【译文】他相信，那些经常感染男性的疾病大多数都可以通过预防性的检查来处理掉。
12. Shoppers seldom complain to the manager or owner of a retail store, but instead will alert their friends, relatives, coworkers, strangers — and anyone who will listen. (年12月)
【分析】本句为复合句，主干为Shoppers seldom complain to…but…will alert…。破折号在这里起到强调或引起别人注意破折号后面要说的话的作用。在破折号后，who引导的定语从句who will listen修饰的是anyone。
【译文】顾客很少向经理或者零售店的老板投诉，相反，他们会转而向他们的朋友、亲戚、同事、陌生人——以及任何可以听到的人吐苦水。
13. This guidance eliminated the need for customers to circle the parking lot endlessly, and avoided confrontation between those eyeing the same parking space. (2008年12月)
【分析】本句为简单句，主干为This guidance eliminated the need…and avoided confrontation…。eyeing the same parking space为现在分词作后置定语，修饰those。
【译文】这些引导消除了顾客在停车场无尽地兜圈子的必要，而且避免了顾客之间因抢占空车位而引发的冲突。
14. Customers can also improve future shopping experiences by filling complaints to the retailer, in 014. Customers can also improve future shopping experiences by filling complaints to the retailer, instead of complaining to the rest of the world. (2008年12月)
【分析】本句为简单句，主干为Customers can…improve…experiences。方式状语by filling complaints to the retailer修饰improve future shopping experiences。instead of表示否定，其前后成分结构一致，complaining前其实省略了by。
【译文】顾客也可以通过向零售商投诉来改善今后的购物体验，而不是向全世界其他的人抱怨。
分析英语高分作文范文 第十四篇
A grain of Sand William Blake / see a world in a grain of sand, see a heaven in a wilderness, Hold infinity in your hand, and love your life forever in an hour Henry David Thoreau / no matter how mean your life is, welcome it, live it, don't run away from it, call it by its name, it's not as bad as you are, it looks when you're richest It is the poorest critic who will find faults in heaven and love your life. Although you are poor, you may have some pleasant, exciting and glorious time. Even in the poorhouse, the sunlight reflected from the windows of the workhouse is as bright as that from the windows of the rich house.
In the early spring, the snow melts in front of the door. I can't see it, but a quiet person may live there as contentedly and happily as in a palace. In my opinion, the poor people in the town tend to live the most independent lives.
In any case, they are great and can be accepted without hesitation. Most people think that they are above the support of the town, but they often feed themselves dishonestly, which should be more disgraceful. Whether it is a herb or a garden, it is a matter of bringing up a new subject, like a plant, but not a friend.
Things don't change. We change our clothes and keep your mind pure, bright and beautiful. It arouses our hearts when we are young, the impulse of silent prayer, the dream of love and truth, the longing after losing something, the cry of soul longing, the pursuit of good hope.
These things will never die. The timid hand reaches out to help a brother in need, in the dark time of sorrow This kind words prove the pity of a friend. When justice is near, he breathes softly, the sorrow of regret.
These things will never die, because everyone must find a job to do. Don't lose the opportunity to wake up love. Be firm, just, a light that never fades on you.
The voice of an angel says to you, these things will never die It will not die out. The life I hope for must be the stories of countless couples. The lifestyle it provides has a kind of family style elegance.
It reminds you of a quiet stream. It winds through the green pastures, under the pleasant shade of trees, and finally falls into the vast sea. But the sea is so calm, so quiet, so indifferent that you are a trout.
中文翻译：
一粒沙子威廉·布莱克/从一粒沙子看到一个世界，在一片荒野中看到一个天堂，把无限握在手心，永恒在一个小时内爱你的生命亨利·大卫·梭罗/不管你的生活多么卑鄙，迎接它，活出它，不要逃避它，直呼它的名字它没有你那么糟糕，当你最富有的时候它看起来是最贫穷的爱吹毛求疵的人会在天堂里发现缺点爱你的生活，尽管贫穷，你也许会有一些愉快、激动、光荣的时光，即使在贫民院，夕阳从济贫院的窗户反的阳光和从富人家的窗户反的阳光一样明亮。在春天的早些时候，门前的雪就融化了。我看不到，但一个安静的人可能在那里生活得像在宫殿里一样心满意足，思想愉快。
在我看来，镇上的穷人往往过着最的生活不管怎样，他们都是伟大的，可以毫无顾虑地接受。大多数人认为他们是超脱于由镇上供养的人，但他们经常会以不诚实的方式养活自己，这应该是更不光彩的。像花园里的草本植物一样培养贫穷，像圣人一样不要为获得新事物而烦恼，无论是衣服还是朋友，都要变老，回归主题。
事物不变。我们换衣服，保持你的思想纯洁、明亮、美丽，它在年轻时激起了我们的心，无言祈祷的冲动，爱和真理的梦想，失去东西后的渴望，灵魂渴望的呐喊，对美好希望的追求这些东西是永远不会死的，那只胆怯的手伸出来帮助一个需要帮助的兄弟，在悲伤的黑暗时刻，这句善意的话证明了朋友的怜悯之情，当正义临近时，他轻轻地呼，悔恨之心的悲哀这些东西永远不会消逝，因为每一个人都必须找到工作去做，不要失去唤醒爱的机会，要坚定，公正，一道不褪色的光从高处照在你身上，天使的声音对你说，这些东西永远不会消亡，我所希望的生活，一定是无数对夫妻的故事，它所提供的生活模式有一种家庭式的优雅，让你想起一条平静的小溪，在绿油油的牧场上，在宜人的树荫下，蜿蜒而过，最后掉进了浩瀚的大海，但是大海是那么平静，那么安静，那么淡漠，你就是一条鳟鱼。
分析英语高分作文范文 第十五篇
假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。
注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
分析：
第一步：审题：1.确定文体：题目中明确要求写邮件邀请Henry，所以用书信体格式。 2.确定时态：参加艺术展，还没有去展会也尚未开始，用一般将来时;此外介绍剪纸艺术应用一般现在时。3.确定人称：题目明确要求“假定你是李华”，所以用第一人称“I”。
第二步：扩展：题目中并没有直接告诉我们展览的细节，所以我们必须要将其展开。时间、地点自己来定，当然中国剪纸艺术展举办地点不能太“小”，选一个既大气自己又会写的单位，时间最好选在周末。此外，其它细节得自己来添加，否则字数远远不够。比如展会的门票收不收费，展会的内容有哪些，可不可以拍照留念等等。
第三步：结构：最好将整篇文章分成3~4段。
Dear Henry,
On behalf of our class, I am writing to invite you to attend an art exhibition on traditional Chinese paper-cutting. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the art exhibition is going to be held by the National Museum at 9:00 . this Sunday. Besides, the exhibition is completely free of charge so that anyone who is interested in paper-cutting can join in. Furthermore, all the paper-cutting works on display come from many top artists in China, including various animals, plants and people of all ages in different coloured paper. Laset but not least, visitors are allowed to take photos, so you can take your camera if you please.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评：1.对于应用文写作要简洁明了，直入主题。2.所给信息必须毫无遗漏地体现在作文当中。3.思维要发散，适当增加细节。4.字数在规定的基础上增加20-30.
高考作文写作，注意以下十点：
1. 在写作之前，首先对题目进行认真的审清，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的`，不会错的。
2. 写作中，多注意使用起承转合的过渡词，使文章更富有条理，层次分明。
3. 多注意使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯，遇到地名、人名最好用非限制性定语从句，强调唯一性。
4. 多注意使用副词、形容词起到修饰的作用，并注意切忌重复，多使用不同的表达进行转述。多使用高级词汇。
5. 多注意使用被动、倒装、虚拟语气及非谓语动词作定语这样的表达。
6. 学会替换，对不会写的进行替换，换一种说法表达清楚即可。
7. 长短句搭配使用。适当分段，切忌一段式作文。
8. 切忌使用Chinglish，改变逐字逐句翻译的不良习惯。
9. 文章中代词要指代明确，拿不准时，宁愿不用代词指代。
10. 英语单词不宜写得太小，卷面保持整洁，写错的地方只需轻轻划一笔就行，忌反复涂黑。
分析英语高分作文范文 第十六篇
应用文写作包括书信、通知和演讲稿，书信是较为常考的类型。
写应用文时应保证以下内容：
写作原因considering that……， I would like to invite you to …….
解释原因 with the intention of doing， I planned to….
提出邀请 If you could come， please feel free to contact me at any time.
结尾 I believe the camp will be so exciting that you can never miss it
考生在写作中一定要注意格式规范、语气合理、交际感强，否则分数很可能会在12分以下。应用文书写不需要过长的句子，长度控制在两行以内。还应注意行文流畅，感情真挚，多用sincerely， from the bottom of my heart，使用be scheduled to do，with the intention of doing 等升级短语难度，但要避免通篇难词。另外需要提醒的是，书信应有称呼，有结尾，若开头结尾已给出，需要在答题纸上重新抄写一遍，否则会扣相应分数。
情景作文属于北京高考的常规类型，文体为稿件，主题是“传统文化进校园”。从体裁和主题的角度上来说，考生并不陌生。“传统文化”主题在应用文中出现过，其中一些场景“照相”在之前的模拟考试中多次出现，且关键性表达如“面团”“面人”等已经给出英文，学生相对容易操作。各位考生关注以下四个方面：
分析英语高分作文范文 第十七篇
With the approach of Shanghai World Expo，what has caused the public concern is whether the local government should follow Beijing to take strict measures to restrict the use of private cars during the Olympics to solve the serious traffic problems.
Shanghai experts have voiced different opinions about it，I hold that current traffic situation should be ，as more and more private cars flood into cities，city services and facilities have been strained to a breaking ，the host city of the Expo，has been exposed not only to the problem of increasing population，but to the problem of the overcrowded second problem is the physical growing number of private cars，whose exhaust sends huge quantities of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere，makes the air of cities unbreathable.
All the action the committee will adopt just reflects the theme of 2010 Shanghai World ExpoxxxBetter cities，better livesxxx.So，what’s your choice?
分析英语高分作文范文 第十八篇
作文题目
阅读下面材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
有的人看到已经发生的事情，问：“为什么会这样?”
我却梦想从未有过的事物，然后追问：“为什么不能这样?”
要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体(诗歌除外)，自拟标题，不要脱离材料内容及含义的范围作文;不要套作，不得抄袭，不得透露个人相关信息;书写规范，正确使用标点符号。
点评：
萧伯纳名言：“一般人只看到已经发生的事情而说为什么如此呢?我却梦想从未有过的事物，并问自己为什么不能呢?”这个题目是典型的哲思名言类题目，学生只要懂得对比一般人和哲学家的两种不同眼界胸襟即可，同样不要只纠结在个人学习生活，而是要上升至普世的心态及时代的未来。
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分析英语高分作文范文 第十九篇
一、指代方面的错误
在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。
如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。
可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。
误：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.
【说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。
二、修饰方面的错误
修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。
误：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.
【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。
三、一致方面的错误
在一个句子内部或紧邻的`两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。
误：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.
【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
四、平行结构方面的错误
这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。
1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)
误：A great change has been taken place since then.
正：A great change has taken place since then.
误：But it may occur some new problems.
正：But some new problems may occur/arise.
误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.
【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.
2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.
正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.
误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.
正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.
误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.
正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.
【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。
五、断句方面的错误
一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。
误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.
正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.
【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。
六、连词方面的错误
作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。
误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.
正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.
【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。
七、搭配方面的错误
学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。
1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.
2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.
【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.
由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。
八、误用方面
分析英语高分作文范文 第二十篇
英语写作的技巧
选择生动准确的词
词是语言的基本单位，人们要表达思想，就要选择适当的词语，这是写作的基本要求。
词可分为一般概念的词(general words)和具体概念的词(specific words)。表示一般概念的词含义模糊;表示具体概念的词含义明确，表达准确，生动形象。写作时合理地使用具体概念的词能够使句子表达的意思准确，内容生动，更富有感染力。试比较下面各组句子：
(l) A few houses were destroyed yesterday (general)
Five houses burnt down yesterday (specific)
(2)His relatives gave him two gifts(general)
His aunt and uncle gave hima watch and a Pen as the birthday gifts。(specific)
(3) Jack went to the window and looked at the crowd outside(general)
Jack tiptoed to the window and peeped into the room(specific)
分析英语高分作文范文 第二十一篇
Walking on the street, we may meet a foreigner talking with friends in fluent Chinese. We are surprise to find that there are so many foreign people speak our country’s language, Chinese is gaining popularity around the world, more and more people speak Chinese. Some argue that this is good for the development of Chinese, while other don’t, I agree with the former.
走在街上，我们总会遇到用流利的汉语与朋友交谈的外国人。我们惊异地发现很多外国人讲我们国家的语言，汉语在世界上越来越流行，越来越多的人讲汉语。一些人认为这对汉语的发展有利，一些人不这样认为，我同意前者。
One the one hand, the development of Chinese means our country is becoming stronger. It is the same with English, the reason that we learn English is that we need to keep pace with the world, because the developed countries mainly speak English. The importance of Chinese is on the rise, which means our country is becoming stronger.
一方面，汉语的发展意味着我们国家变得强大。这和英语一样，我们学习英语的原因是我们需要与时俱进，因为发达国家大部分讲英语。汉语的重要性与日俱增，意味着我们国家的强大。
On the other hand, with the Chinese speaking population becoming larger and larger, Chinese is endowed with greater vitality, which is very important for the development of a language. Language is changing all the time, so the language should keep pace with the time, now Chinese has been developed all over the world, it is good for the survival of the Chinese.
另一方面，说汉语人口的增多给汉语带来了活力，这对于一门语言的发展是很重要的。语言随着时间而改变，因此语言应该要与时俱进，现在汉语在全世界都发展，这是有利于汉语的保存。
In a word, the development of Chinese is a good phenomenon, it is a symbol of our country’s strong.
总之，中国的发展是件好事，这标志着我们国家的强大。
分析英语高分作文范文 第二十二篇
为了能更好更全面的做好复习和迎考准备，确保将所涉及的中考考点全面复习到位，让孩子们充满信心的步入考场，现特准备了中考英语作文被扣分的原因。
一：先看一下扣分点：
1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。
2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣，重复错误不计;
4. 标点错误：每4个扣.
二：加分点
除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。
只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分
很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。
分析英语高分作文范文 第二十三篇
高考英语试卷分析及命题走向
一、20高考试卷分析 ?
年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语试题(全国卷Ⅰ)保持了以往的命题思路和风格， 更加注重对考生实际运用能力的考查。试题从总体上看，既有利于发挥高考对学生综合素质 的考查，又有利于考查学生进入高校继续学习的潜能。?
1?整份试卷的难度基本稳定，但部分题型的难度较略有提升，如听力部分。?
2?更加强调英语知识的灵活运用，凸现语言的交际化。?
3?继续降低阅读理解部分对考生语速的要求，2004年阅读理解部分仍由5篇短文组成，短文 词量为1202个，明显少于20的1589个；阅读内容能够反映现实生活背景，非常贴近生活 ，甚至比较时尚。?
4?书面表达部分继续采用信件形式，但给出的文字叙述不多，英语写作功底不好的考生会 认为非常难写，难度较年有所提高。?
二、高考命题走向 ?
高考英语命题近些年基本上保持了稳定的命题思路和风格，内容更贴近生活、贴近时代，知 识覆盖面更广，更加注重对考生实际运用能力的考查。?
结合近年英语科《考试说明》或《考试大纲》，今后英语高考命题会：?
1?更加重视实际使用英语能力的考核 ?
现在的高考主要考查语言运用，即在实际生活中听说读写的能力。考试内容与教和学的内容并非简单一致。大多数人认为课本里讲什么就应该教什么，从而也就应该考什么，其实现在的高考并非如此，高考对语言知识是重视的。但它看中的是会不会在具体的语境下灵活运用，而不是理论说教。?
2?重视语篇的作用，在活的情景中考查 ?
所谓突出语篇的作用，即通过语篇考查听、读、写的能力，而不是孤立地、无上下文的分句式的考查。近几年的高考试卷，考听力是在对话和短文中进行的；阅读与完形的考核是以短文的形式出现的；写作也不是仅仅让你写几句话，而是要连贯成短文；改错是让考生在一篇小文章中判断；甚至单项填空也不是就那么一句话了。?
3?更注重对综合素质的考核 ?
实际生活中的.语言运用，即使是最简单的，都必然牵涉到语言能力之外的交际能力的运用。比如别人对你说：“How do you do?”，你该怎么回答，这绝不是仅仅知道语音、语法、词汇就能解决的。所以，语言运用需借助语言能力之外的交际能力。只不过所借助的其他交际能力有复杂的、有简单的、有种种不同而已。高考应用题中要求考生的语言能力之外的交际能力和对外国文化的了解，都是最普通的交际行为所必需的。?
4?阅读理解能力的考查力度加大 ?
5?强调基础知识和基本技能的掌握，试题向实用性、工具性的方向发展。
分析英语高分作文范文 第二十四篇
1、假设你和几位同学成了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期2个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一份英语发言稿。1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的活动2.谈谈你们开展活动的收获。
Boysandgirls,
TodayI’.
That’.
2、假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’sridebicycles”的英语演讲比赛活动。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容：1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞问题2.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保，有利健康等3.参考词汇low-
Goodmorning,everyone,
I’“Let’sridebicycle”.
Asisknowntoall,’slivingstandards,,.
H?AsfarasIamconcerned,’–’’smore,.
Therefore,let’!
Thankyou!
高考英语必背范文---如何保持健康4
H,.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,.
Asforme,inordertokeepfit,I“junkfood”.
Allinall,.
健康是我们最重要的财富，因此我们应该尽力保持。正如我们所知，好的身体是获得快乐和成功的必要条件。正相反，身体不健康的人多悲观或者抑郁。人们也常认为不健康意味着苦难和失败。
就我看来，我们应当听从三个重要的建议。首先，我们应采取科学的饮食，它能提供身体所需;第二条建议就是要坚持锻炼，特别是那些不愿出门的人;最后，我们应该保持愉悦的心情。
至于我，为了保持健康，我强迫自己远离“垃圾食品”，尽管它们往往很美味可口。另外，我甚至还养成了早锻炼，听美妙的音乐和阅读好书籍的好习惯，它们总能让我精神。
英语作文优秀范文5
1、Tenyearslater,I,',Ihaveahouse,carand,ofcourse,!
Tenyearslater,maybeI',becauseI,I,.
Tenyearslater,IthoughtthatIwillbecomeadoctor,,IwanttogotoParistolive,,IwilllivewithI,atthattime,,,,,I,,IgoodanticipatedthatIthefuturelife,I!
十年后，我已经大学毕业了，也许有了个很好的工作。运气好的话，老板的女儿会看上我的，我有房子，有车，当然还有美女陪。我会赚很多钱给我的父母买好多好多他们喜欢的。我会活得很幸福!
译文：10年后，也许我会成为一个职业篮球运动员，因为我非常喜欢打篮球，我还会养许多动物，让一些繁重的事给机器人做。十年后，也许我也会成为一名警察，帮助人们抓坏蛋，打击犯罪，成为人们心中的英雄。
十年后，我认为我将成为一个医生，因为可以帮助到很多的人，我想去巴黎居住，听说那很美，我将和我最好的朋友住在公寓里，那时候，小孩不用上学了，他们在家里通过电脑学习，我的家里也有了机器人，可以帮我们干很多家务，我未来的生活中不需要钱了，因为东西都会是免费了，我好期待我未来的生活，我等不急了!
分析英语高分作文范文 第二十五篇
It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.
Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster. Accordingly, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!
分析英语高分作文范文 第二十六篇
1.原级的用法
表示双方在程度、性质、特征等某方面相等时，用“as+原级形容词/副词+ as”的结构;表示双方不相等时，用“not so(as)+原级形容词/副词+ as”的结构;表示一方是另一方的若干倍时，用“倍数+ as+原级形容词/副词+ as”的结构。
Xiao Wang is as tall as Xiao Yu.
This building looks not so (as)high as that one.
Miss Xu speaks English as fluently as you .
This room is three times as large as that one.
2.比较级的用法
①双方比较，表示一方超过另一方时，用“比较级+than”的结构表示;
This picture is more beautiful than that one.
注意：
▲比较对象的一致性
请看下面这道选择题：
The weather in China is different from__ __.
A. in America B. one in America C. America D. that in America
本题意为“中国的天气比美国热。”比较的是天气而不是国家，C不能选。A没有名词，后句成分不全，排除。B和D中，B中的one常用来代替可数名词，而that可车以代替不可数或抽象名词，所以选D。
▲要避免将主语包含在比较对象中
(错)China is larger than any country in Asia.
(对)China is larger than any other countries in Asia.
▲注意比较对象的省略或隐藏：有时省略或不点明被比较的对象，而是通过语境来暗示被比较的对象。
请看下面这两道选择题：
If there were no examinations, we should have ___ at school.
A. the happiest time B. a more happier time C. much happiest time D. a much happier time
本题将比较的对象隐藏在虚拟条件句中，即：与没有考试的时候相比。本题答案选D。
I don’t think this film is by far the most have seen____________.
A. better B. worse C. the best D. the worst
由前文“我认为这部电影不是最没趣的”可知，“我看过(比这部)更差的电影”，省略了than this one。本题答案是B。
It takes a long time to go there by train; it's ________by road.
A. quick B. the quickest C. much quick D. quicker
由语境可知，句末省略了than by train，用比较级。本题答案是D。
②表示一方不及另一方时，用“less+原级+than”的结构表示;
This room is less beautiful than that one.
③表示一方超过另一方的程度或数量时，可在比较级前加表示程度的状语，如even、a lot、a bit、a little、still、much、far、yet、by fay等修饰;
He works even harder than before.
注意：by far通常用于强调最高级。用于比较级时，一般放在比较级的后面，如在前面，应在二者中
间加“the”。
He is taller by far than his brother.
He is by far the taller of the two brothers.
④表示一方随另一方的程度而变化时，用“the +比较级(主语+谓语)，the +比较级(主语+谓语)”的结构(意为“越……越……”);
The harder he works, the happier he feels.
⑤不与其他事物相比，表示本身程度的改变时，用“比较级+ and+比较级”的结构;
The weather is getting colder and colder.
The girl becomes more and more beautiful.
⑥某些以-ior结尾的形容词进行比较时，用to代替than。这些词有inferior(劣等的，次的)、superior(较
好的，优于……)、junior(资历较浅的)、senior(资格较老的)、prior(在……之前)等;
He is superior to in chemistry.
⑦在比较从句中为了避免重复，我们通常用that(those)、one(ones)代替前面出现的名词。that指物,one既可指人又可指物。that可代替可数名词单数和不可数名词，而one只能代替可数名词;
The book on the table is more interesting than that(或the one)on the desk.
A box made of steel is stronger than one made of wood.
分析英语高分作文范文 第二十七篇
俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1.审题不清
如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误：my father and my mother is all teacher。
正：my father and my mother are both teachers。
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。
误：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。
正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。
误：the apples cheap. i'll take some。
正：the apples are 'll take some。
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。
正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into example,my friend in high school。
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。
例 one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。
(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误：when i get to the station the train leave。
正：when i got to the station the train had left。
10.综合性错误
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
分析英语高分作文范文 第二十八篇
亲爱的玲，
这些天，顾客，明星，总是出现在我的脑海里。我日夜不停地写着他的电影胶片。我写了一百封信给他，把他的名字写在一张卡片上，但没有写在上面。我知道有一天我会遇到他，他对我有同样的感觉。我不想再重复我的话，下个月我会有一个最终的例子。
我正在想办法解决这个问题。你能帮我解决这个问题吗？
你的，
1.地址(1)机构a .亲爱的，我不知道负责人是谁
英文作文的正文开头字母格式>:>;1.地址
(1)机构
一、不认识负责人
亲爱的先生/女士，亲爱的先生/女士，
了解负责人
分析英语高分作文范文 第二十九篇
“In places where the subway doesn’t extend (延伸到), where it’s difficult to change from one kind of transport to another, it’s so easy to get where you want to go with Mobike,” Hu Hong, 29, told AFP. She pedals (骑自行车) to her Shanghai real-estate (房地产) job.
“在地铁线路覆盖不到的地方，很难换乘其他交通，用摩拜单车去你想去的地方就简单多了，”29岁的胡红(音译)在接受法新社采访时表示。在上海从事房地产行业的她都是骑自行车去上班的。
However, the schemes have also led to problems such as illegal parking, vandalism (故意破坏) and theft.
然而，这一计划也出现了一些问题，如非法停车，故意破坏和偷窃等。
分析英语高分作文范文 第三十篇
How I Improve My Writing 我是怎样提高英语写作的
I began to practice English writing a year ago. Though I’m very glad to say that I have made some progress, I still have a long way to go. Some pen friends and my classmates asked me how I improved my writing. Here I’d like to tell my story.
When I began to learn writing last term, I made many mistakes in grammar and also in idioms. I often thought in Chinese and just translated what I had in mind into English. My English teacher, Mr. Sun, helped me. He pointed out my mistakes and told me that I should try to think in English, not in Chinese, pay attention to English grammar and idioms, and use simple sentences whenever I can. I did as he said. When I finished writing, I read it very carefully and checked it up. As soon as I found out mistakes, I corrected them at once. I have kept on doing this and found I am making fewer mistakes than before. My teacher says I have improved a lot and he encourages me to continue practicing. No pains, no gains. Through nearly a year of practice, my writing has improved. I’m very lucky that two of my short English articles have been carried in the newspapers. I have become even more interested in writing. I’m an ordinary girl and I’m not very clever. But I know it is very important to keep on practicing. Practice makes perfect. So I think three things are important in learning writing: first, we must be sure of ourselves; second, we sh ould pay attention to English grammar and idioms; third, we must keep on practicing and be more careful in writing. Do you think so?
分析英语高分作文范文 第三十一篇
In the past decades, the development of new technology promotes the increasing need of students and other customers, electronic dictionaries are becoming more and more popular. Despite these electronic dictionaries may have some minor disadvantages, comparing to their advantages, people are willing to use them.
在过去十多年里，新科技的发展促进了学生和其他顾客日益增长的需要，电子词典变得越来越受欢迎。尽管电子词典存在一些细小的不足，但是和有点相比，人们还是愿意使用它。
On the one hand, electronic dictionaries are extremely portable and light-weight, they can contain numerous words and messages, which may up to one million words, even more. If a paper dictionary contains the same messages, it will be very large and heavy.
一方面，电子词典非常便于携带和轻便，它们可以容纳很多单词和信息，达到一百万的单词量，甚至。如果一本纸质的词典包含同样的信息，就很变得很大，很重。
On the other hand, electronic dictionaries work very fast. When we want to check the words, we can type the words, and then the words will be found in no more than three seconds, how convenient it is! Just work as the computer does, it also safe us a lot of time. While with a paper dictionary, we have to go over the book, and then find the word amongst hundred words, this takes us a lot of time. Electronic dictionaries make students work efficiently.
另一方面，电子词典运行很快。当我们想要查单词时，可以输入单词，然后单词就会在三秒钟内找到，这是多么方便啊!就像在电脑上一样，也让我们节省了很多时间。然而对于纸质词典来说，我们要翻阅书本，在上百的单词中找到词语，花费很多时间。电子词典让学生提高学习效率。
Electronic dictionaries also have disadvantages, such as sometimes they give the wrong message, sometimes the message is not overall. But despite the flaws, people like to use electronic dictionaries, in the future, they are the students’ first choice.
电子词典也有不足，比如有时候会给予错误的信息，有时候信息不全面。但是尽管存在缺陷，人们还是喜欢用电子词典的，在将来，那将会是学生的第一选择。
分析英语高分作文范文 第三十二篇
1.说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ---------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
分析英语高分作文范文 第三十三篇
河南省高考英语试卷分析
关键词： 年英语试卷 内容分析 指导教学
一、试卷结构（ 试卷分I卷和II卷两部分，总分值150分，考试时间120分钟）
二、试卷总体特征
2013年河南英语高考试卷更加突出语用，多元化地考查了考生语言的实际运用能力，注重题材、体裁的多样性，文章内容贴近生活，贴近实际，具有时代感，体现了高中英语新课程的理念。整体难度不是很大，和20难度基本持平，稳中有变、变中求稳，这些是今后命题的基本原则和趋势走向。
三、具体题型分析
第I卷
（一）听力
该部分着重考查了学生的听力理解能力、敏捷的反应能力和准确的推断能力、判断能力。生词较少，语音较清晰，语速中等偏上。学生在解题过程中，有些题目受干扰项影响，判断能力较弱，容易选错；有些材料信息量较大，学生对文章中的信息获取模糊，容易导致判断失误。但该题只作参考，不记总分。
（二）单项选择
近三年来，单项填空以冠词、动词的时态、语态、非谓语动词、动词短语、动词辨析、三大从句：定语从句、状语从句和名词性从句、冠词、特殊句型、常用句式等知识为必备考点和考查重点。2013年该部分的创新是第23题考察help用法，属旧词新意，Try not to cough more than you can ？摇 ？摇 since it may cause problems to your lungs. 空格后表示的是原因，由此结合各选项的.词义可知，help为“控制、抑制”，常与情态动词can/can’t 连用，符合语境。难度较大的是第25题，考察副词用法，Tony can hardly boil an egg， still ？摇 ？摇 cook dinner. 句意：“托尼几乎连蛋都不会煮，更不用说做饭了”，A 项与still 构成固定搭配still less，“更不用说、更何况”，符合题意。希望教师在平时的教学过程中，围绕这些考点帮助学生建立结构框架，提高学生应用知识的灵活性和准确性。
（三）完形填空
分析英语高分作文范文 第三十四篇
五 考查something, somebody, someone, anything, anybody, anyone, nothing, nobody, everything, everybody的用法及它们与else的搭配
[考点解读]
● 由some和any构成的不定代词的用法和some和any的用法基本一致?
●nothing和nobody/no one表示全部否定?
● 无论在肯定句?否定句还是疑问句中, everything和everyone (everybody) 都表示“全部,所有”?
● 不定代词后跟else时,表示“另外的,其他的”;形容词修饰something/anything/nothing时,应置于不定代词之后?以上不定代词连写时,不和of连用,every one可和of连用。
分析英语高分作文范文 第三十五篇
1、语言准确
小作文的语言要求并不高。不需要语言过于华丽和复杂。只要意思表达清楚，做到准确就可以了。所以同学们在写小作文时，要注意自己单词拼写以及句子的结构。同学们经常犯的错误，比如时态，单复数，主谓一致等问题。在写的时候，一定要细心。此外，还要注意标点符号，尤其是逗号和句号的使用。
2、格式正确
书信的格式有两种齐头式和缩进式。同学们对于缩进式很熟悉。所以这里主要说一说缩进式。用缩进式写作文时，首先顶格写称呼，写完称呼后，之后加逗号。下面是正文部分，写三段。每一段开头向里缩进4个英文字符的距离。写完正文之后，最后是结尾部分。结尾部分包括礼貌用语，可以写Sincerely yours，最后再写署名。
3、语域恰当
所谓语域，就是对于不同的写信对象，需要使用恰当的语言。在这里，统一要求同学们用正式文体写。使用正式文体时，需要注意尽量不要使用表示命令的语气，例如表示命令的祈使句和must、should。还有尽量不要使用缩写。
4、信息完整
信息完整指的是各类书信所包含的信息要点要完整。当然书信的类型不同，所包含的信息要点也不同。所以就需要同学们总结好每类书信的写作思路以及语言表达。
分析英语高分作文范文 第三十六篇
The phenomenon of aging will bring many adverse consequences. With the medical care of the elderly becoming the primary problem, more and more elderly people enter the old age, and the proportion of the population in the main labor force drops sharply, so that the traditional social welfare system can not function normally and effectively. However, the transformation to a modern and more scientific social security system may need a relatively long time At the same time, in addition to irreversible health decline, mental harm may constitute a more serious problem.
中文翻译：
老龄化现象将带来许多不利后果，随着老年人的医疗保健成为首要问题，越来越多的老年人进入老年，人口在主要劳动力中的比例急剧下降，从而使传统的社会福利制度逐渐不能正常有效地发挥作用然而，向现代和更科学的社会保障制度转型可能需要一个相对较长的时期，在给老年人自身带来希望和痛苦的同时，除了不可逆转的健康衰退外，精神危害可能构成一个更为严峻的问题。
分析英语高分作文范文 第三十七篇
The general age of college students are between 18 to 25 year. From the psychological point of view, it’s in the medium of youth. Some people say that the college students are adults that they handle well with psychological problems. However, the rest argue that college students are not so mature when faced with psychological problems. I agree to the latter and i think it’s necessary to open a psychological lesson to the college students because of the following reasons.
大学生的一般年龄是在18到25之间。从心理的角度来讲，这是青年中期。有的人说大学生是成年人了，能够很好地处理心理问题。然而，剩下的人认为大学生面对心理问题的时候没有那么成熟。我同意后者的观点，我认为向大学生开设心理课是必要的。原因如下。
Firstly, in recent years, there are more and more college students drop out from school due to psychological problems. Growing , homicides and other unusual serious incidents are reported from time to time. Now, the social attention to college students’ mental health has reached to climax. Secondly, college students are in a perplexed and contradictory age. On the one hand, they have to study in school to enrich themselves and to get a diploma. On the other hand, they think they are mature to live an independent life, but most of them still depend on their parents. In addition, study challenge, employment pressure and life stress could produce psychological problems.
首先，近几年，越来越多的大学生由于心理问题而辍学。越多自杀，谋杀以及其他不正常的严重事故时不时有报道。如今，对大学生心理健康的关注已经达到了高潮。其次，大学生处于一个困惑和矛盾的年龄。一方面，他们认为自己已经成熟了，能够独立生活，但是大部分仍然依靠父母。而且，学习压力，就业压力和生活压力也会产生心理问题。
To sum up, college students are adults but they are still faced with many pressures causing psychological problems that they can not deal with. Therefore, it’s very necessary to open a psychological lesson to college students, helping them get through this period smoothly.
总之，大学生是成年人，但是他们仍然面临很多他们不能解决的引起心理问题的压力。因此，向大学生开设心理课程是有必要的，能够帮助他们顺利度过这一时期。
分析英语高分作文范文 第三十八篇
代词在近几年高考试题中的复现率为100%，每年至少测试一道题。测试代词常用对话形式，构成特定语境，考查考生灵活运用代词的能力。代词指代的范围、作主语时主谓一致的用法、易混不定代词的细微差别都是高考的必考点。其中不定代词one，the one，ones与that，those，it的用法区别。
考查one(s), that, those, it的用法
[考点解读]
●one泛指一个人或物?其复数形式为ones?one和the one作同位语时,如果与其同位的词语是特指,则用the one;如果是泛指,则用one,?
●that指代前面提到过的名词,常有后置定语?that的复数形式是those?that可指代单数可数名词(= the one), 也可指代不可数名词,或指代前面提到过的一件事?
●it可指代前面提到过的一个名词,如例7;指代一件事,如例8;指代不明性别的婴儿或不明确的人,也可指代时间?天气?距离等0?
二 考查all, both, either, neither, none, no one的用法
[考点解读]
●both表示“两个人或物都”,具有肯定含义; either表示“两者中的任何一个”,如例13; neither表示“两者都不”?
●all表示“全部”,指三者或三者以上的人或物,;all也可笼统地表示“一切,所有”, none表示“三者或三者以上的人或物的全部否定”,在与of连用或回答how many/much的提问时只能用none, no one表示“没有一个人”。
分析英语高分作文范文 第三十九篇
My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. With her eyes,she observed my mood, gave me courage and made me strong. Therefore, I could face difficulties.
When I was a baby learning to walk, my mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes smiled with praise. Later as I grew up, I met with more difficulties. But whenever I was frustrated, my mother's eyes always
gave me hope and encouragement. Once I failed in exams, my mother encouraged me to find out the reasons. Instead of blaming me she pushed me to do better. At last I overcame the difficulty. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mother's eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.
分析英语高分作文范文 第四十篇
Do you agree or disagree: money is the most important aspect of contemporary social work. Whether money is the most important aspect of work has become a hot issue. People's views on it vary from person to person.
Many people think that money is very important because it must meet our daily needs. But some people who hold the opposite view think that interest and social responsibility are other factors It is also an important aspect of work. As far as I'm concerned, I'm sure money is not always the most important thing.
中文翻译：
你同意还是不同意：金钱是当代社会工作中最重要的方面，金钱是否是工作中最重要的方面已经成为一个热点问题人们对它的看法因人而异许多人认为金钱是非常重要的，因为它必须满足我们的日常需要，但另一些持相反观点的人则认为，兴趣和社会责任等其他因素也是工作的重要方面。就我而言，我确信金钱并不总是最重要的。
分析英语高分作文范文 第四十一篇
Different people have different characters.
If we want to get along well with others, we had better learn their characters, so that we won’t step on landmines. For example, when we meet a person who is patient, we can show our opinions slowly.
But when we meet a hot temper person, we had better express our opinions as soon as possible and get away from him when he loses his temper. If we meet a person who is more bark than bite, we take the measure of sticking.
In a word, different people will accept different ways for communication. Analyzing personal characters help people get a good harvest in interpersonal communication.
不同的人性格不一样。如果我们想要与他人好好相处，我们最好了解一下他们的性格，这样我们才不会踩到地雷。例如，当我们遇到一个有耐心的人，我们可以慢慢地表达自己的想法。但当我们遇到一个脾气暴躁的人，我们应该尽快地表达自己的想法，并在他发脾气的时候远离他。如果我们遇到的是一个刀子嘴豆腐心的人，我们应该采取死缠烂打的措施。总之，不同的人会接受不一样的沟通方式。人物性格分析有助于人们在人际交往中取得好成就。
分析英语高分作文范文 第四十二篇
1、假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东MrsWilson不在家，你准备外出，请给MrsWilson写一留言，内容如下：1.外出购物2.替房东还书来电话留言：1).咖啡屋（BoltonCoffee）见面取消2）.此事已告知)尽快回电
MrsWilson,
I’mgoingoutshopping,andwon’tbebackuntilabout5:’clockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’.
LIHua
2、假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speechcontest），希望附近大学的外籍教师Smith女生来做评委。请参照以下通知给她写一封信。
英语演讲比赛
主题：人与自然
时间：6月15日下午2：---5：
地点：501教室
参赛选手：10名
联系人：李华（电话44876655）
I’mLiHua,thechairmanoftheStudents’UnionofYuCaiMiddleSchool,’“ManandNature”..
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Withbestwishes
LiHua
分析英语高分作文范文 第四十三篇
【试题回放】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。
为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系
谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，……
老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，……
同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，……
怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。)
注意：
1、 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2、 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
【名师点评】
分析英语高分作文范文 第四十四篇
The Huang Mountain is a place of interest. here are lots of tourists seeing sights every day. Years ago, some of them paid no attention to environment protection. They threw about waste paper, plastic bags and tins. Besides, they killed animals, caught birds, destroyed trees and flowers. Worse still,
they often made a fire to cook in the forest. That was dangerous. Changes have taken place now. When tourists leave, they take away rubbish with them. They no longer hunt animals. Plants are also protected. All the tourists carry their lunch in order not to start forest fire. We must sing high praise of the good deeds.
黄山是一处游览胜地，每日有大量游客。几年前不注意保护环境，现在大有改观。请根据下列内容写一篇英语报道。
几年前少数游客的行为现在游客的表现乱扔废纸、塑料袋、罐头盒带走垃圾杀害动物，捕捉飞鸟不再打猎破坏花草、树木爱护植物在林中生火烧饭自带午餐，以防森林火灾
高考英语作文常用句
1 首先，尤其重要的，最重要的 above all
2 偶然，无意中 by accident
3对(于)…很积极 be active in
4合计为 add up to
5承让错误 admit one’s mistake
6接受某人的建议 take / follow one’s advice
7就…提出建议 give advice on
8建议某人做某事 advice sb. to do sth.
9后天 the day after tomorrow
10毕竟;终究 after all
11违心 against one’s will
12在…岁时 at the age of
13实现目标 achieve one’s aim
14在空中;悬而未决 in the air
15在户外，在露天里 in the open air
16在机场 at the airport
17火警 the fire alarm
18满腔怒火 be filled with anger
19因某人之言行而生气 be angry at sth.
20生某人的气 be angry with sb.
21通知 make an announcement
22相继地，按顺序地 one after another
23相互，彼此(三者或三者以上之间)one another
24相互(指两者之间) each other
25没有回答 give no answer
26为…而担心 be anxious about
27急于做某事 be anxious to do sth.
28分开住 live apart
29除了 apart from
30因某事向某人认错或道歉 make/offer an apology to sb for sth.
分析英语高分作文范文 第四十五篇
题目：
你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：
1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往;
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意：
1.词数不少于50.
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Joe
考点：考察提纲类作文
写作指导：
本文属于应用文中的书信，要求写信给英国朋友Chris说明取消计划的原因并建议推测旅行至8月份。以第一人称为主。
要点：
1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往;
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【一句多译】
我可以建议把旅行推迟到8月份早些时候吗?
(1)Can I suggest that we put it off until early august?
(2)Would you mind if we we put it off until early august?
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How is everything going?
I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now bucause my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.
I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? I wish you could understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Joe
分析英语高分作文范文 第四十六篇
there was a little boy with a bad temper. his father gave him a bag of nails and told him that every time he lost his temper, to hammer a nail in the back fence.
the first day the boy had driven 37 nails into the fence. then it gradually dwindled down. he discovered it was easier to hold his temper than to drive those nails into the fence. finally the day came when the boy didn't lose his temper at all. he told his father about it and the father suggested that the boy now pull out one nail for each day that he was able to hold his temper. the days passed and the young boy was finally able to tell his father that all the nails were gone. the father took his son by the hand and led him to the fence. he said, xxxyou have done well, my son, but look at the holes in the fence. the fence will never be the same. when you say things in anger, they leave a scar just like this one.
you can put a knife in a man and draw it out. it won't matter how many times you say i'm sorry, the wound is still there. a verbal wound is as bad as a physical one. friends are a very rare jewel, indeed. they make you smile and encourage you to succeed. they lend an ear, they share a word of praise, and they always want to open their hearts to us.
分析英语高分作文范文 第四十七篇
It gradually turns cool. The sunlight is no longer so strong and the cicadas have stopped crying. The hot summer went by at last. The favorite season in the year is coming.
Everywhere we can see the scene of bumper crops: on the fields is golden rice,on the trees are ripe fruits. The farmers faces are full of smiles. They are now expecting a good harvest through a summers hard work.
The autumn evening is especially beautiful. When the setting sun goes slowly down to the west, the sky over the mountains is covered with red rays of evening sunlight, which shines upon the blue sky and floating clouds, just as the maple leaves fall onto the sky.
It is getting cool at dusk. The wind blows, the moonlight shines on the ground,the frogs croak and insects chirp in the fields. Such a situation will make you forget all the unhappy things in the daytime.
I love the beautiful season.
分析英语高分作文范文 第四十八篇
⑴话题关注度
考研英语作文通常并非最热点，因为最热点也最容易被押中，对考生来说具有投机取巧的嫌疑，并不能真正的测试出考生的水平;此外，考题被押中也是命题的失败。所以一般来说考研写作的话题会是当年的次重点，可能和最热点有关系，也可能没有关系。
⑵写作前身
英语二是从20xx年开始设置的一门考试科目，但事实上它的历史并非如此短暂，它的前身是MBA，一提到这个很多人，尤其是学经济的小伙伴肯定都很熟悉了，有的人想多练练手，就把MBA的真题找出来做，但事实上MBA的真题并不需要做，因为事物的发展是一个逐渐成熟，逐渐发展壮大的过程，早些年的MBA的考题太过简单，不过建议大家，可以练习下MBA试卷的写作部分。
⑶图表作文考什么?
众所周知，英语二的写作就是以图表作文的形式出现，那图表作文侧重于考查什么内容呢?在英语老师看来，大纲要求上表明了主要考察考生观察数据的能力。但在分析的时候，只抓住最有特点的数据进行分析就行，面面俱到就没有意义了。
⑷图表难易度
我们都知道，英语二考查的图表主要分为四类：柱状图、饼状图、线形图和表格图。其中，又以表格图为最难，饼状图最为简单，而柱状图的写作方法和线形图较为类似。
⑸段落安排
英语二的大作文都是essay，所谓的“essay”，不是散文，也不是随笔，而是短议论文。一般将其分成三段，而且遵循议论文的写作风格，按照提出问题、分析问题和解决问题的思路去行文就可以了。
⑹词汇
很多人觉得词汇就是在阅读部分的啊，只有认识单词就能看懂阅读，会做题了。写作部分也需要记单词吗?对于这个问题，考研英语老师的回答是肯定的。因为如果你不会写这个单词，又何谈遣词造句呢?所以，在日常的学习备考中，将写作中所会用到的单词都记住并掌握，不仅是重要的，而且是必须的。
分析英语高分作文范文 第四十九篇
高考英语写作就要“拽”写作方法分析
1。高考写作的实质——变相的考察句型与词汇的灵活应用
英语写作不同于语文作文的写作，如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈，那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。我之所以这样来形容，是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式给定大家了，内容方面，不需要学生进行发挥，大家所需要发挥的就是给这个不变的内容不要老去穿毫无变化的校服(简单句)，而要去穿一些不一样的衣服，让它显得不那么单调，让判卷老师能看到不同，而那些所谓的衣服也就是多变句型与词汇。
2。写作的评分标准——怎么去迎合评卷老师的胃口
我了解到目前很大一部分学生的作文都处在15分左右，写作满分25分，15分也就是个及格分，而很多学生都是为了提分才来到了，那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?这个问题很容易回答。15分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但是全都是很简单句子的一个堆砌，没有任何的亮点。而20多分的作文句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的句子穿的衣服已经不是校服，而是李宁、耐克，或者是阿迪，所以让人觉得很“拽”，而高考英语写作要的.就是这种很“拽”的感觉。
3. 写作提分的三要素——句型，连词，高级词汇
句子是我们写作文最大的单位，有了漂亮的句子，用好的连词将其连句成段，在加上一些如星星般亮点词汇的点缀，一篇好的高考英语作文就有了。而这三个因素中最容易把握的是句子，最难的是高级词汇，限于大家的词汇还比较有限，一篇文章中出现那么一两个就够了。我们应该把重心放在句型上，因为这个最容易把握。
但是大家又有这样的困惑，学校里老师也给了我们很多的句型啊，动辄成五十上一百句的，大家背的挺多，但是面对考试的时候，发现背的那些怎么也用不上。其实不是那些东西没有用，而是它们太干了，就好比一根干骨头，大家嚼起来很没有味，也不知道该把他们往哪里放。
在这里我给大家提供一种比较切实可行迅速提高的练习方法，在接下来的时间里只要大家按照这个方法来，就一定会有收获。找见历年真题，一周只需要写两篇，但是要这么来写。
1. 把你要写的内容要点用九到十句的汉语表达出来。
2 。逐一地进行翻译，不是用简单句，而是要刻意地去想 。
(1)可以用什么样的复杂句。
(2)怎样去避开不会的表达，转义。
例如：
这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。
1)This book was so interesting that I read it again and again。
2)This was such an interesting book that I read it again and again。
3)This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again。
4)So interesting was this book that I read it again and again。
这四句译文当中无疑评卷老师最欣赏的是第四句，因为它用了倒装。
再例如：
如果征收门票，需要建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象。 这句话中肯定“收”那个动作很多同学不会表达，那能不能想一个转义的方式，既避开了“收”这个动作还能表达原句的含义。
A wall and a gate have to be built if there is an entrance fee, which doesn't help the image of the city。
这个译文中用一个大家很熟悉的经典句型there be句型化险为夷。
4。如何备考
其实这种思维大家都有，但是没有成为一种思路，让它能在考试中起到作用，那是因为大家练得少。英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地，一方面大家要分数，但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇。毫不夸张地说，有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文，所以练习是很重要的，要是现在不练而把高考当练习，那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了，到那时你不要骂评卷老师不公平，而是应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不多练几篇，时间都是挤出来的，希望大家可以挤出时间来练写作。
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