分析与判断英语作文范文 第一篇

我可以建议把旅行推迟到8月份早些时候吗?

(1)Can I suggest that we put it off until early august?

(2)Would you mind if we we put it off until early august?

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Dear Chris,

How is everything going?

I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now bucause my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.

I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? I wish you could understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Joe

分析与判断英语作文范文 第二篇

I like reading. I like reading very much. When I was a little girl, I was very interested in reading picture books of science and history.

I entered primary school and began to read more books. Now I am a middle school student, I have a lot of lessons to learn. I have to finish a lot of homework every day.

I am very busy, but when I am free, I still want to read some story books. One day my sister brought me a book. You will read this book with interest.

I like monkey king a lot.

中文翻译：

我喜欢阅读我非常喜欢阅读当我还是个小女孩的时候，我对读科学和历史的图画书很感兴趣，我进了小学，开始读更多的书。现在我是一个中学生，我有很多功课要学。每一天我必须完成许多家庭作业。

我很忙，但是当我有空的时候我还想读一些故事书有一天我妹妹给我带来了一本书，你会很有兴趣地读这本书，我很喜欢孙悟空许多的。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第三篇

The rapid development of science and technology has brought about great changes to human great benefits brought about by this progress is hailed in every corner of the electronic appliances have made our life simpler than ever inventions have helped us to organize our daily job can be done and QQ have made it easier to communicate with other has enabled us to know and understand other culture and society better.

However,The disadvantages about this development should not be neglected .Some of scientific inventions have even caused great harms or disastersto example,advanced technology can be easily manipulated by irresponsible 'll be too dependant on technology fails,we are helpless

Sometimes,it affects our health and lifestyles(we'll be complacent and lazy.) The chemicals may be hazardous).What's worse,Science and tecnology may even destroy our simple and healthy life(Sometimes How we miss the traditional style of living!).In addition ,The appearance of new technology may invade our privacy.

To sum up,humans must be alert against the possible harm while enjoying the benefits from them.

分析与判断英语作文范文 第四篇

The advantages and disadvantages of the automobile is one of the most important inventions in human history. The automobile has improved our way of life in the past century. However, the global warming has brought about the serious impact of excessive use of the car.

This makes me feel that the car is helping or destroying human beings. It is impossible for us to face the life without a car. The same car brings comfort and there is no need for it Do you think you can arrange a weekly trip to the supermarket without the help of a car carrying your daily necessities? I don't think cars may have many advantages, but everything has its disadvantages.

Now the cost of driving will become very out of control. Insurance, oil, transportation, and even the price of buying a decent car are very expensive. Anyone who owns a car will know that one of the most annoying problems with cars is traffic jams, but driving can also be very dangerous.

You never guess when Where accidents can happen, but there's one drawback that's worse than all of them combined: global warming, reckless driving can only endanger yourself and some unfortunate passers-by, but overuse of your car can endanger the world as a result of global warming. In short, cars are very important to human beings, but their use is very important. They should help prevent climate change in a more limited way.

But it is hoped that with the new discovery of energy resources, cars will become more and more popular in the future.

中文翻译：

汽车的利与弊汽车是人类历史上最重要的发明之一汽车在最近一个多世纪里改善了我们的生活方式，但是，全球变暖带来了过度使用汽车的严重影响，这让我觉得汽车是在帮助还是在毁灭人类让我们面对没有汽车的生活是不会的同样的汽车带来了舒适感没有必要在公共汽车站等那些总是晚点的公共汽车，汽车可以把你带到飞机和火车根本无法到达的地方，你认为你可以安排每周去超市的旅行，而不用一辆载着你日常用品的汽车的帮助吗？我认为不是汽车可能有很多优点，但每一件事都有它的缺点现在开车的成本会变得非常失控保险，石油，交通运输，甚至是买一辆像样的汽车的价格都很贵任何拥有汽车的人都会知道，汽车最烦人的问题之一是交通堵塞，但是开车也会非常危险你永远不会猜猜何时何地可能发生事故，但有一个缺点比所有这些缺点加起来更糟糕：全球变暖鲁莽驾驶只会危及你自己和一些不幸的路人，但过度使用你的汽车会因全球变暖而危及全球。总之，汽车对人类来说非常重要，但它们的使用却很重要应该更加有限地帮助阻止气候变化，但希望随着能源资源的新发现，汽车在未来会越来越受欢迎。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第五篇

一、使用词典及注重阅读

词典是学习一门语言的工具，很多学生学英语没有经常查英语词典的习惯，这是不良的学习习惯,应该多多使用词典。有的语言学家认为甚至看一个学生使用什么样的词典就可以判断的的学习水平。我认为首选的应该是经济实惠的英汉双解词典，如：《郎文英汉双解活用词典》(LONGMAN ACTIVE STUDY ENGLISH-CHINESE DICTIONARY)(上海译文出版社，32元)，然后再过度到使用英英词典。当然，查名词通常需要借助汉英词典。在查英语词典的时候我们还应该学习的是词语的搭配。如：because of后只能接名词词组(做宾语)，because后只能接表示原因的从句。学习单词时请记住英语单词的词性。如bribe可以是名词，也可以作为动词来使用。如：The bank teller bribed his banker.(银行出纳员贿赂他的上司) The banker was charged with taking bribes from the bank teller.(银行经理被指控接受出纳员的贿赂)The government fights against the bribery(政府打击行贿受贿)。学习词的时候一般情况下不要孤立地学，否则容易忘记。尽量作到“词不离句，句不离文。”有的学生写作文的时候从英语词典里找到他们需要的词。这并不是明智的学习英语写作的方法。或者根据自己的汉语思维将要表达的意思写出来，写出来的英语往往给人感觉非常蹩脚而不自然。前提是他在写作文以前到没有大量的阅读中去吸取知识的养分，培养语感，就象蜜蜂不采蜜就酿不出蜜的道理一样。

二、善用词汇提高写作水平

句子是由词组合而成的。有的学生在写英语作文的时候，喜欢用生僻的词，认为这样可以得到高分。我觉得这似乎有些“为赋新诗强说愁”的味道。如I deem(我想)，而不用I think.一位美国的心理学博士Lois Gail认为：deem通常不可以取代 think. 因为 deem 是英语中非常正式的说法，包含了判断和权威。她用英语讲解：In current English, “deem” is very formal and almost connotes judgment and is not commonly used as a substitute for “think.” 用什么样的词要分场合。如果是一个非常庄严肃穆的场合，可以用deem, 但如果表达个人对某一问题的看法，还是要用think合情理些。

有的学生写作文的时候反复用一个词组，会给人枯燥的感觉。如：Every morning, I get up early, then go to do some sports. Doing sports makes me healthy and smart.作文中的用法都是正确的，但更好的则是：Every morning, I get up early to play basketball or go some jogging, which makes me healthy and energetic. 中国学生在英语作文中喜欢用的一个英语表达法do some sports(从事体育运动)，是从中学英语课本学来的。可是在现代英语里，这个表达法几乎没有人使用了。如果从事体育运动，就具体表达成：play basketball, play football.等等。

三、善用句型提高写作水平

写作文首先是从写正确的句子开始。一个句子从语法上讲是指由大写字母开始，由名词，动词或词组构成的一个陈述句，祈使句，惊叹句和疑问句。由句号，疑问号或惊叹号来结束。表示一个意思讲完了，它表示停顿和呼吸。音乐的乐谱讲“乐句，”一个乐句弹奏完了要停顿一下是一样的道理。 要注意的是很多(包括美国)学生在写英语作文的时候，不知道英语的句号要用在引号前面。正确的例句如：She said, “You are a good girl.”这一细节请注意。有的学生写英语作文喜欢用复合句，认为这样不容易出错。其实，很多学生连简单的英语句子都不能保证写对的时候，就写出来些错误的复合句。这就象一个小孩还没有学会走路就开始学跑步，肯定是要跌跤的。我认识一位美国的高中英语教师，美国文学学士Temple Sterling 女士认为将英语作为外语来学习的学生还是先学会使用简单句然后再学习复合句也不迟。

(一)尽量使用基本句型

英语句子结构的特点是：相对于德语，法语，俄语，英语“比较简单，自然，合乎逻辑思维的自然顺序。”(李赋宁《英语学习经验谈》147页)。要写好英语作文首先要掌握基本的英语句型：英语千变万化的句子归根到底都离不开以下这五个基本的句型。(《大学英语》：语法与练习 第一册第1页)通常情况下，一个句子的关键在于动词。有人提出的观点是：动词是一个句子的灵魂。

1. Mary is a (主——动——主补)

2. The flowers are blooming. SV (主——动)

3. I have a pen. SVO(主——动——宾)

4. The mother will buy the girl a bike. SVOi (间接宾语)Od(直接宾语) (主——动——间宾——直宾)

5. The parents consider the child a genius. SVOCo (主——动——宾——宾补)

英语中的`系表结构也很常用。如：You look 与happy构成系表结构。

(二)活用英语连词

英语里有些短语就象水泥一样把整个段落的构连架连接起来。如：表示结果：as a result, consequently, therefore, etc. in contrast, however, etc. 递进：furthermore, in addition, etc. 总结：in a word, in brief, in short, etc. 转折：but, in spite of, etc. 原因：because, because of, 让步：though

(三)学会使用平行结构

平行结构相当于汉语里的排比结构，它是英美人喜欢使用的一种语言结构，即将相类似的词或者动词结构放在一起，这样不容易出错，并且排列整齐，营造出一种气势。根据一个美国老师的观点，如果一个中国人向英国或是美国的公司用写英语求职信，会使用平行结构的人将会被优先录用。

平行结构例句1，Mary is a kind, cute, clever, happy girl.

例2，Every morning, after I get up, I get dressed, make bed,brush my teeth, wash my face, have breakfast and go to school.(有下划线部分为平行结构。)

(四)运用语气加强情感

英语里有一些缩写，如I#39;m , he#39;s , she#39;s, I#39;ve, I don#39;t 等等，you#39;re 的读音与your 相同。所有的这些缩写形式都是英语里不正式的用法和语气。在正式语体中，如果给美国总统写信，就不可以用缩写形式，而必须要用 I am, You are, He is 等等。用He is hard-working 比he works hard.语气弱。(be 结构比动词的气弱要弱。)long for语气很强，一般只能在恋人之间使用。如英语一首情歌歌词：I am longing for you.

四、段落层次分明

一个典型的英语段落往往先点明主题思想，即(topic sentence)，然后再对该主题加以分析，论证，即(support)，最后是一个总结性的句子，即(conclusion)。(姚君伟《跨文化语境下的外语教学》188页)

例：(主题句：)Competition is common in every field of life.(展开部分：)(1：) For example, the Olympic Games is the most famous competition in the world. (2：)In the four hundred meter swimming race, the swimmers plunge into the water at the signal.( 3：)Each swings his or her arms and legs and tries his or her best to be the first. (4：)Also there is the competition for jobs, for promotion, for customers, and so on. (总结：)We can say ,in a certain sense, competition stimulating people#39;s interest in work helps society to go forward.

如果 将段落的结构再扩展，就成为一篇文章的结构。美式写作结构的特点是：段落层次分明，观点阐述平行推进，直线思维，逻辑性强，行文如流水，简洁明了。(崔晓霞《大学英语作文应试章法》第7页)

五、运用口语培养英语思维

提高英语的作文可以从训练英语口语开始，口语是文字的先锋。“口头语言早在人类社会形成之初就已出现，至尽已经存在了几百万年，而书面文字的历史只有短短几千年。”(胡壮麟《语言学简明教程》133页)英国著名的英语教学专家格兰特在20xx年3月20日的英语《二十一世纪报》增刊上谈到口语的提高可以促进英语作文水平。他在文中指出：“Oral skills are important both in themselves, and also because they help one to prepare for writing. The best oral activities often lead to written activities that benefit from them.” 还应该多与英美人交流，在实际的生活中了解他们的语言习惯与思维习惯，还可以学到书本上学不到的知识。

思维是写作的前提条件。著名语言学家王力先生曾说“中国的语言是人制的，西洋的语言是法制的。”所以他们的语言逻辑性强，人情味淡;我们的语言逻辑性差，人情味强。如：1)我的祖母还健在。英语：My grandma is still alive(我的祖母还活着).我想只有通过大量的阅读才能培养良好的英语的思维和语感，克服来自母语的干扰。话题又回到阅读上来，读多了就自然培养英语思维，就可以不再受母语思维的干扰。“英语思维在写作中的好处是可以用英美人习惯的言语来表达思想。”

分析与判断英语作文范文 第六篇

Different people have different characters.

If we want to get along well with others, we had better learn their characters, so that we won’t step on landmines. For example, when we meet a person who is patient, we can show our opinions slowly.

But when we meet a hot temper person, we had better express our opinions as soon as possible and get away from him when he loses his temper. If we meet a person who is more bark than bite, we take the measure of sticking.

In a word, different people will accept different ways for communication. Analyzing personal characters help people get a good harvest in interpersonal communication.

不同的人性格不一样。如果我们想要与他人好好相处，我们最好了解一下他们的性格，这样我们才不会踩到地雷。例如，当我们遇到一个有耐心的人，我们可以慢慢地表达自己的想法。但当我们遇到一个脾气暴躁的人，我们应该尽快地表达自己的想法，并在他发脾气的时候远离他。如果我们遇到的是一个刀子嘴豆腐心的人，我们应该采取死缠烂打的措施。总之，不同的人会接受不一样的沟通方式。人物性格分析有助于人们在人际交往中取得好成就。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第七篇

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive

aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.

Just As a popular saying goes, xxxevery coin has two sidesxxx, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To

begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.

To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same

time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.

分析与判断英语作文范文 第八篇

One day my uncle was reading a newspaper and learned that birds were our friends. We should get alone well with them. He looked at his nice bird in the cage, and decided to let it fly back home-nature. He took the cage with the bird in it and went to a little hill near his house by bike. He went home with the empty cage. When he got back, he sat in a chair and had a rest. A moment later, to his surprise, he found the bird back in the cage.

【名师点评】

分析：该例四幅图画描述的是一位先生保护动物的故事，内容贴近考生的生活实际，有利于对考生进行保护生态平衡、保护地球环境的教育。内容要点是：

（1）看报（Let Birds Fly）；

（2）上山去放飞笼中鸟；

（3）提着空笼返家；

（4）惊奇地发现鸟儿重飞回笼。

通过观图、分析、判断，列出了要点，可写草稿，再进行润色，注意运用简单的、熟悉的句型结构，检查要点有无遗漏，注意拼写、词汇、语法及搭配上是否有误。

说明：看图作文是从直观入手，通过观察、分析、理解，运用联想，将图画语言转换成书面文字的写作过程。答题的思路和方法如下：首先，观察图画，弄清故事梗概。仔细观察每幅图画的内容，抓住图中的主要情节，把握关键的信息与联系，诸如人物、时间、地点、动作等。其次，明确信息，编拟提纲。经过认真的观察和分析，我们掌握了每幅图的主要信息。为了在表达中不漏要点，可为每幅图配上一个提纲性的句子，即用一句话表达这幅画的`大意，这几句话实际上就是短文的写作提纲。有了提纲，我们在写作过程中就能做到重点突出，有条理，不会离题。再次，依据图示、提纲，连句扩写成篇。连句成文时，要按照一定的顺序和图画间的关系，中间加上一些符合逻辑关系的过渡词、句，从而使所写短文层次分明，内容连贯，浑然一体。同时注意尽可能运用简单易懂、自己熟悉的有把握的句型结构。最后，结合要求与图示，复查所写短文。写完短文后要检查格式、篇幅是否符合要求，文理是否通顺，要点有无遗漏，词汇、语法、搭配上是否有误，单词拼写有无错误等。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第九篇

Now TV PK programs are very popular in China, attracting many young people. Some young people even give up their studies to participate in these programs, hoping to become famous overnight. Some people think that these programs provide more opportunities for young people to show their talents, while others think that it is not good for young people to participate in these programs.

For me, I prefer the latter view. It should be admitted that young people like Li Yuchun stand out in many PK programs, but this does not mean that participating in PK shows is a good success for young people The following reasons can support my view. Firstly, TV PK programs breed agitation and induce young people to pursue fame and wealth at all costs.

Secondly, TV PK programs will subvert the values of young people. They think that participating in PK programs is a shortcut to success. Therefore, they may eventually despise the way to success through hard work.

If young people fail in these programs, they will not be able to do so, They will suffer from psychological imbalance. Entering TV PK program is not a good way for young people to succeed. I suggest that young people should think twice before deciding to participate in PK program.

中文翻译：

现在电视PK节目在中国很受欢迎，吸引了很多年轻人。有些年轻人甚至放弃学业去参加这些节目，希望一夜成名。有些人认为这些节目给年轻人提供了更多展示才华的机会，而另一些人则认为参加这些节目对年轻人没有好处对于我来说，我更倾向于后者的观点，应该承认像李宇春这样的年轻人在众多的PK节目中脱颖而出，但这并不意味着参加PK秀对年轻人来说是一个很好的成功途径以下原因可以支持我的观点首先，电视PK节目滋生躁动和诱导年轻人不惜一切代价追逐名利第二，电视PK节目会颠覆年轻人的价值观，他们认为参加PK节目是通往成功的捷径，因此他们最终可能会鄙视通过努力获得成功的途径，如果年轻人在这些节目中失败了，他们会受到心理上的不平衡，进入电视PK节目不是年轻人成功的好方法我建议年轻人在决定参加PK节目之前应该三思而后行。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第十篇

一、使用词典及注重阅读

词典是学习一门语言的工具，很多学生学英语没有经常查英语词典的习惯，这是不良的学习习惯,应该多多使用词典。有的语言学家认为甚至看一个学生使用什么样的词典就可以判断的的学习水平。我认为首选的应该是经济实惠的英汉双解词典，如：《郎文英汉双解活用词典》(LONGMAN ACTIVE STUDY ENGLISH-CHINESE DICTIONARY)(上海译文出版社，32元)，然后再过度到使用英英词典。当然，查名词通常需要借助汉英词典。在查英语词典的时候我们还应该学习的是词语的搭配。如：because of后只能接名词词组(做宾语)，because后只能接表示原因的从句。学习单词时请记住英语单词的词性。如bribe可以是名词，也可以作为动词来使用。如：The bank teller bribed his banker.(银行出纳员贿赂他的上司) The banker was charged with taking bribes from the bank teller.(银行经理被指控接受出纳员的贿赂)The government fights against the bribery(政府打击行贿受贿)。学习词的时候一般情况下不要孤立地学，否则容易忘记。尽量作到“词不离句，句不离文。”有的学生写作文的时候从英语词典里找到他们需要的词。这并不是明智的学习英语写作的方法。或者根据自己的汉语思维将要表达的意思写出来，写出来的英语往往给人感觉非常蹩脚而不自然。前提是他在写作文以前到没有大量的阅读中去吸取知识的养分，培养语感，就象蜜蜂不采蜜就酿不出蜜的道理一样。

二、善用词汇提高写作水平

句子是由词组合而成的。有的学生在写英语作文的时候，喜欢用生僻的词，认为这样可以得到高分。我觉得这似乎有些“为赋新诗强说愁”的味道。如I deem(我想)，而不用I think.一位美国的心理学博士Lois Gail认为：deem通常不可以取代 think. 因为 deem 是英语中非常正式的说法，包含了判断和权威。她用英语讲解：In current English, “deem” is very formal and almost connotes judgment and is not commonly used as a substitute for “think.” 用什么样的词要分场合。如果是一个非常庄严肃穆的场合，可以用deem, 但如果表达个人对某一问题的看法，还是要用think合情理些。

有的学生写作文的时候反复用一个词组，会给人枯燥的感觉。如：Every morning, I get up early, then go to do some sports. Doing sports makes me healthy and smart.作文中的用法都是正确的，但更好的则是：Every morning, I get up early to play basketball or go some jogging, which makes me healthy and energetic. 中国学生在英语作文中喜欢用的一个英语表达法do some sports(从事体育运动)，是从中学英语课本学来的。可是在现代英语里，这个表达法几乎没有人使用了。如果从事体育运动，就具体表达成：play basketball, play football.等等。

三、善用句型提高写作水平

写作文首先是从写正确的句子开始。一个句子从语法上讲是指由大写字母开始，由名词，动词或词组构成的一个陈述句，祈使句，惊叹句和疑问句。由句号，疑问号或惊叹号来结束。表示一个意思讲完了，它表示停顿和呼吸。音乐的乐谱讲“乐句，”一个乐句弹奏完了要停顿一下是一样的道理。 要注意的是很多(包括美国)学生在写英语作文的时候，不知道英语的句号要用在引号前面。正确的例句如：She said, “You are a good girl.”这一细节请注意。有的学生写英语作文喜欢用复合句，认为这样不容易出错。其实，很多学生连简单的英语句子都不能保证写对的时候，就写出来些错误的复合句。这就象一个小孩还没有学会走路就开始学跑步，肯定是要跌跤的。我认识一位美国的高中英语教师，美国文学学士Temple Sterling 女士认为将英语作为外语来学习的学生还是先学会使用简单句然后再学习复合句也不迟。

(一)尽量使用基本句型

英语句子结构的特点是：相对于德语，法语，俄语，英语“比较简单，自然，合乎逻辑思维的自然顺序。”(李赋宁《英语学习经验谈》147页)。要写好英语作文首先要掌握基本的英语句型：英语千变万化的句子归根到底都离不开以下这五个基本的句型。(《大学英语》：语法与练习 第一册第1页)通常情况下，一个句子的.关键在于动词。有人提出的观点是：动词是一个句子的灵魂。

1. Mary is a (主——动——主补)

2. The flowers are blooming. SV (主——动)

3. I have a pen. SVO(主——动——宾)

4. The mother will buy the girl a bike. SVOi (间接宾语)Od(直接宾语) (主——动——间宾——直宾)

5. The parents consider the child a genius. SVOCo (主——动——宾——宾补)

英语中的系表结构也很常用。如：You look 与happy构成系表结构。

(二)活用英语连词

英语里有些短语就象水泥一样把整个段落的构连架连接起来。如：表示结果：as a result, consequently, therefore, etc. in contrast, however, etc. 递进：furthermore, in addition, etc. 总结：in a word, in brief, in short, etc. 转折：but, in spite of, etc. 原因：because, because of, 让步：though

(三)学会使用平行结构

平行结构相当于汉语里的排比结构，它是英美人喜欢使用的一种语言结构，即将相类似的词或者动词结构放在一起，这样不容易出错，并且排列整齐，营造出一种气势。根据一个美国老师的观点，如果一个中国人向英国或是美国的公司用写英语求职信，会使用平行结构的人将会被优先录用。

平行结构例句1，Mary is a kind, cute, clever, happy girl.

例2，Every morning, after I get up, I get dressed, make bed,brush my teeth, wash my face, have breakfast and go to school.(有下划线部分为平行结构。)

(四)运用语气加强情感

英语里有一些缩写，如I#39;m , he#39;s , she#39;s, I#39;ve, I don#39;t 等等，you#39;re 的读音与your 相同。所有的这些缩写形式都是英语里不正式的用法和语气。在正式语体中，如果给美国总统写信，就不可以用缩写形式，而必须要用 I am, You are, He is 等等。用He is hard-working 比he works hard.语气弱。(be 结构比动词的气弱要弱。)long for语气很强，一般只能在恋人之间使用。如英语一首情歌歌词：I am longing for you.

四、段落层次分明

一个典型的英语段落往往先点明主题思想，即(topic sentence)，然后再对该主题加以分析，论证，即(support)，最后是一个总结性的句子，即(conclusion)。(姚君伟《跨文化语境下的外语教学》188页)

例：(主题句：)Competition is common in every field of life.(展开部分：)(1：) For example, the Olympic Games is the most famous competition in the world. (2：)In the four hundred meter swimming race, the swimmers plunge into the water at the signal.( 3：)Each swings his or her arms and legs and tries his or her best to be the first. (4：)Also there is the competition for jobs, for promotion, for customers, and so on. (总结：)We can say ,in a certain sense, competition stimulating people#39;s interest in work helps society to go forward.

如果 将段落的结构再扩展，就成为一篇文章的结构。美式写作结构的特点是：段落层次分明，观点阐述平行推进，直线思维，逻辑性强，行文如流水，简洁明了。(崔晓霞《大学英语作文应试章法》第7页)

五、运用口语培养英语思维

提高英语的作文可以从训练英语口语开始，口语是文字的先锋。“口头语言早在人类社会形成之初就已出现，至尽已经存在了几百万年，而书面文字的历史只有短短几千年。”(胡壮麟《语言学简明教程》133页)英国著名的英语教学专家格兰特在20xx年3月20日的英语《二十一世纪报》增刊上谈到口语的提高可以促进英语作文水平。他在文中指出：“Oral skills are important both in themselves, and also because they help one to prepare for writing. The best oral activities often lead to written activities that benefit from them.” 还应该多与英美人交流，在实际的生活中了解他们的语言习惯与思维习惯，还可以学到书本上学不到的知识。

思维是写作的前提条件。著名语言学家王力先生曾说“中国的语言是人制的，西洋的语言是法制的。”所以他们的语言逻辑性强，人情味淡;我们的语言逻辑性差，人情味强。如：1)我的祖母还健在。英语：My grandma is still alive(我的祖母还活着).我想只有通过大量的阅读才能培养良好的英语的思维和语感，克服来自母语的干扰。话题又回到阅读上来，读多了就自然培养英语思维，就可以不再受母语思维的干扰。“英语思维在写作中的好处是可以用英美人习惯的言语来表达思想。”

分析与判断英语作文范文 第十一篇

In the past, when people buy SIM cards, they don't need to show their ID cards or register their ID cards. In addition to some SIM cards designated for specific groups, no matter what kind of SIM cards, how many cards you want, you can almost get what you want. All this is obviously so simple and convenient.

The ease of use of SIM cards also has its disadvantages. The most annoying is the proliferation of spam information and phone calls The reason for harassment and fraud is: it is difficult to track anonymous callers or senders with a mobile phone number that does not provide useful information. When purchasing SIM cards, many users will abandon their SIM cards at will, resulting in a waste of resources.

However, since SIM cards can identify the identity of users, users will feel trapped when sending spam mail or conducting phone fraud. Therefore, the above problems are easy to solve. In fact, the above problems are easy to solve Their SIM cards contain confidential information related to personal interests, which makes people think twice before they act.

From now on, real name registration is officially implemented in China. When consumers buy mobile phones, they must hold certificates to handle life. Old mobile phone users have to submit personal information.

In the past three years, your class has discussed the real name system. The advantages and disadvantages of the discussion are as follows: boycott and reduce the use of mobile phones Restriction and management of criminal activities.

中文翻译：

以前人们在购买sim卡时，不需要出示身份证，也不需要登记身份证，除了一些为特定人群指定的sim卡外，无论什么样的sim卡，想要多少张卡，几乎都能得到你想要的东西，这一切显然是那么的简单方便，sim卡的易用性也有其缺点最烦人的是垃圾信息的泛滥，电话骚扰和诈骗的原因是：一个没有提供有用信息的手机号码很难追踪匿名来电者或发信人，很多用户在购买sim卡时，往往会随意弃卡，造成资源浪费，但由于sim卡可以识别用户身份，用户在发送垃圾邮件或进行电话诈骗时会感到被困住，因此上述问题很容易解决事实上，他们的sim卡中含有涉及个人利益的机密信息，这让人们三思而后行，从即日起，我国正式实行实名制注册，消费者购买手机，必须持xxx生活，老手机用户要提交个人信息近三年来，你班对实名制进行了讨论，讨论结果的优缺点如下：抵制和减少通过手机进行犯罪活动的制约和管。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第十二篇

In recent years, the Internet has been popularized at an alarming speed. Some people think that the Internet has brought us a lot of benefits. On the other hand, many people strongly advocate that we should not ignore its shortcomings.

It is understandable that people with different backgrounds have different views. People who think that the Internet has many advantages first give us such reasons: the Internet has brought us a lot of advantages For example, we can e-mail our friends in other countries in a few minutes, while sending a traditional letter takes at least a week and is expensive. Second, we can make friends with people from all over the world.

It overcame geographical barriers and made the world smaller. In addition, the Internet has accelerated the flow of information and spread education around the world. However, on the other hand, we can easily and quickly access the latest information from all over the world.

One side strongly opposes that the Internet has many weaknesses. On the one hand, it can easily lead to psychological problems. A person who goes online tends to be isolated, self-centered and uncommunicative.

On the other hand, the number of cyber crimes has risen sharply, and financial crimes such as money laundering have increased rapidly. In addition, the number of Internet related crimes has increased sharply Being light on people also has negative effects, because there are a lot of obscene and violent contents on the Internet. I think these two arguments are reasonable.

I fully agree with the latter view, that is, the Internet does more harm than good. It causes people's psychological problems and leads to various computer crimes. Moreover, it is harmful to the growth of young people.

Measures should be taken as soon as possible to protect people from the negative effects of the Internet.

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分析与判断英语作文范文 第十三篇

俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1.审题不清

如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误：my father and my mother is all teacher。

正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。

误：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

误：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

正：the apples are 'll take some。

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into example,my friend in high school。

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。

例 one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。

改为when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

误：when i get to the station the train leave。

正：when i got to the station the train had left。

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第十四篇

As time goes on, people are getting richer and their life is getting better and better. As a result, more people are ready to buy cars for their own use. But different people have different ideas about whether they should buy cars for personal use.

Some people hold the belief that buying cars for personal use can help develop motor industry in our country. With the help of cars, it will be convenient for them to go to and off work. Besides, cars can make their life more colourful and beautiful.

As we all know, every coin has two sides. Some people think that more personal cars will make roads more crowded and produce more dirty gases. In addition, more cars will use more resources. Therefore, too many cars will make energy supply more demanding.

As far as I am concerned, I think it necessary for people to buy their own cars as long as they are able to.

分析与判断英语作文范文 第十五篇

Bus: you can take a bus to almost any place you want to go. There are thousands of routes in the city. You can choose anyone according to your needs.

The road is cheap and convenient. The buses are getting more and more crowded, depending on the traffic conditions. You may be late.

The buses are too crowded during rush hours. When you need to be far away from home, it is cheaper to take a train than to take a plane. You have a lot of space on the train.

You can play with your friends as you like. If you need to spend the night on the train, sometimes it will be noisy to sleep. There may be a thief train on it You can also enjoy the beautiful sea or river at will.

The boat can go to some places that the train can't go. The boat often goes slower. When the ship shakes with the waves, you may feel sick.

The plane can also take you to the place you want to go in a short time. The service on the plane is very good. You can eat delicious food and even watch videos.

The airport is usually far away from the city center and it will take you some time to get to the airport. In addition, aircraft are often delayed or cancelled due to bad weather.

中文翻译：

巴士：你可以坐公共汽车去几乎所有你想去的地方城市里有成千上万的线路，你可以根据你的需要选择任何人。这条路便宜又方便。公共汽车越来越拥挤，这取决于交通状况，你可能会迟到，上下班高峰期公共汽车太拥挤了当你需要离家很远，坐火车比坐飞机便宜，你在火车上的空间很大，你可以随心所欲地和朋友们一起玩如果你需要在火车上过夜，有时睡觉也会很吵，上面可能有小偷火车：你可以你也可以随意观赏美丽的大海或河流，船可以去一些火车不能去的地方，船经常走得慢一些，当船随着海浪晃动时，你可能会感到恶心飞机：飞机也可以在短时间内带你去你想去的地方，飞机上的服务非常好，你可以吃到美味的食物，甚至可以观看视频。

机场通常远离市中心，你需要一些时间才能到达机场。此外，飞机经常会因恶劣天气而延误或取消。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第十六篇

Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their spare time. I think surfing the Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages. For example, if I encounter difficulties in my study, I can look for more useful information on the Internet, and I can make more friends on the Internet.

Some of my classmates said that when they chat with more friends who have similar hobbies, they will feel very happy. However, the Internet will also bring some problems. If you spend too much time on the Internet, you will become lazy and unable to concentrate on your study, which will be fair.

What's worse, if you think you can't live without the Internet, so we must be careful when using the Internet.

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分析与判断英语作文范文 第十七篇

Advantages :have a good rest/spend more time …with …Disadvantages:…cause a lot of trouble…/be crowded everywhere…In 20XX， ‘May golden week’ was canceled， but this year people have discussed the problem whether we should renew ‘May golden week’ or people think the 7-day holiday is very important.

Firstly， we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work.

Secondly， we could spend more time staying with our family.

Thirdly， we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign ， other people hold the opposite view. They think it causes a lot of problems.

It may lead to traffic jam and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are a student， I prefer a 7-day holiday. Not only can I sleep well and do exercise， but also I can read some interesting books. How I wish a 7-Day holiday would come soon and we will have a 7-day holiday then!

分析与判断英语作文范文 第十八篇

⑴话题关注度

考研英语作文通常并非最热点，因为最热点也最容易被押中，对考生来说具有投机取巧的嫌疑，并不能真正的测试出考生的水平;此外，考题被押中也是命题的失败。所以一般来说考研写作的话题会是当年的次重点，可能和最热点有关系，也可能没有关系。

⑵写作前身

英语二是从20xx年开始设置的一门考试科目，但事实上它的历史并非如此短暂，它的前身是MBA，一提到这个很多人，尤其是学经济的小伙伴肯定都很熟悉了，有的人想多练练手，就把MBA的真题找出来做，但事实上MBA的真题并不需要做，因为事物的发展是一个逐渐成熟，逐渐发展壮大的过程，早些年的MBA的考题太过简单，不过建议大家，可以练习下MBA试卷的写作部分。

⑶图表作文考什么?

众所周知，英语二的写作就是以图表作文的形式出现，那图表作文侧重于考查什么内容呢?在英语老师看来，大纲要求上表明了主要考察考生观察数据的能力。但在分析的时候，只抓住最有特点的数据进行分析就行，面面俱到就没有意义了。

⑷图表难易度

我们都知道，英语二考查的图表主要分为四类：柱状图、饼状图、线形图和表格图。其中，又以表格图为最难，饼状图最为简单，而柱状图的写作方法和线形图较为类似。

⑸段落安排

英语二的大作文都是essay，所谓的“essay”，不是散文，也不是随笔，而是短议论文。一般将其分成三段，而且遵循议论文的写作风格，按照提出问题、分析问题和解决问题的思路去行文就可以了。

⑹词汇

很多人觉得词汇就是在阅读部分的啊，只有认识单词就能看懂阅读，会做题了。写作部分也需要记单词吗?对于这个问题，考研英语老师的回答是肯定的。因为如果你不会写这个单词，又何谈遣词造句呢?所以，在日常的学习备考中，将写作中所会用到的单词都记住并掌握，不仅是重要的，而且是必须的。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第十九篇

The advantages and disadvantages of blog have been widely used in the world. However, it has also led to many problems. Blog has its advantages and disadvantages, which enables people to communicate with each other.

By providing a platform for people to publish and comment on their lives, it also damages people's privacy. Nowadays, many lecherous men and girls track people through blog. The advantages of blog are far away Greater than the disadvantages, so people should use it, but also be aware of the potential risks.

中文翻译：

博客的利与弊在世界范围内得到了广泛的应用，然而，它也导致了许多问题，博客有其优点和缺点，使人们能够相互交流，通过为人们提供一个平台来发布和评论他们的生活，这也损害了人们的隐私现在许多好色的男人和女孩通过使用博客跟踪人们-博客的优点远远大于缺点，因此人们应该使用它，但也要意识到其中存在的潜在风险。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第二十篇

Nowadays,it is universally acknowledged that (主题) plays a more and more important role in not only the improvement of the living standard of people but also in the development of the society.

However,when it comes to (主题), the opinions concerning it vary from individual to individual. Some people are in favor of (主题)， while others are against such choice.

Those who are in favor of (主题) believe that it has following advantages: 优点一，二，三， (To begin with, in addition, lastly)

On the other hand, it also causes some problems, which can not be ignored by us. 缺点一，二，三。

Like everything else, we are all aware that ( 主题) has both favorable and unfavorable aspects.

But I believe that the positive aspects carry more weight than the negative ones.

There must be some measures taken to hold back the disadvantages.

Therefore ,if we make all our efforts to avoid the disadvantages and make full use of the advantage, surely, we will benefit from (主题)

分析与判断英语作文范文 第二十一篇

Dear mark, I have read your letter. You said that you have encountered some difficulties in English, but you don't know how to deal with these problems, so I will try my best to give you some suggestions. On the one hand, your grammar is very poor.

I personally think you should buy a book that summarizes and summarizes English grammar atically, and then you need to study it very patiently. On the other hand, you think your spoken English is not very good, you can't express your meaning clearly in English, and you don't know how to say something. In this case, I think you need to practice speaking English every day.

Rome is not built in a day. You should pay more attention to English. You can get up early and read English aloud, because practice makes perfect.

You must find the best way to do it Third, you can read many English related magazines and newss and recite some useful sentences. I hope you can overcome the difficulties of English as soon as possible. Your sincerity, Tom.

中文翻译：

亲爱的马克，我读了你的信，你说你在英语方面遇到了一些困难，但你不知道如何处理这些问题，所以我会尽力给你一些建议，一方面，你的语法很糟糕，我个人认为你应该买一本对英语语法有系统总结和总结的书，然后你需要非常耐心地学习它。另一方面，你认为你的英语口语不是很好，你不能用英语清楚地表达你的意思，也不知道如何说一些在这种情况下，我认为你需要每天都练习说英语，罗马不是一天建成的你首先应该多注意英语，你可以早起大声朗读英语，因为熟能生巧，你必须找到最好的方法来记忆新单词第三，你可以阅读许多与英语有关的杂志和报纸，背诵一些有用的句子我希望你能尽快克服英语的困难你的真诚，汤姆。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第二十二篇

We can say that the world can't live without China. Everyone knows that China is a very big country in the world. It has a long history.

There are many interesting places here, such as the great wall and the summer palace. Every year, many people come here to visit it. It will be held in, and it will become more and more beautiful people living and working on the land that makes up the total population of China Especially in these years, China is a big country with a history of 5000 years.

It is located in Asia, on the West Bank of the ocean, covering an area of square kilometers.

中文翻译：

我们可以说，世界不能没有中国，每个人都知道中国是世界上一个非常大的，它有着悠久的历史，这里有许多有趣的地方，如长城、颐和园等，每年都有很多人来这里参观，它将在年举行，它将成为越来越多的美丽的人们在组成中国总人口的陆地上生活和工作，特别是在这些年里，中国中国是一个有着五千年历史的大国，它位于亚洲，位于大洋西岸，面积平方公里。

分析与判断英语作文范文 第二十三篇

【试题回放】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系

谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，……

老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，……

同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，……

怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。)

注意：

1、 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone.

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

Thank you for your listening!

【名师点评】

分析与判断英语作文范文 第二十四篇

Advantages and disadvantages people have different views on advantages and disadvantages. Some people think that some people support me. I agree with the latter view because its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

There are more than a dozen reasons behind my belief. First, the second reason is that everyone can see. For example, from the above, we can easily see whether it is beneficial to yes / no, which has been a controversial issue for a long time The question is whether some people think that, while others point out, as far as I am concerned, the latter view has more weight on one thing.

For another matter, now, after careful examination, it is not difficult. Therefore, it is concluded that as a college student, we should have a / B now. Therefore, some people are worried about AB, but I don't think their worry is necessary because a first of all It has some unique advantages over B.

However, B goes further. For example, last but not least, a and B are opposite. In short, a, B and a have some advantages that B does not have,.

中文翻译：

利与弊人们对利与弊的看法千差万别，有人认为，有人支持我，我同意后一种观点，因为它的优点大于缺点，我的信仰背后有十几个原因，首先，第二个原因是每个人都能看到的例如，从上面我们可以很容易地看出，是否有利于是/否，长期以来一直是一个有争议的问题，即是否有人认为，另一些人则指出，就我而言，后一种观点在一件事上更有分量，对另一件事来说，现在，经过仔细审查，这并不困难因此得出结论，作为一个大学生，我们现在应该a/B，因此，有些人担心AB，但是我认为他们的担心是没有必要的，因为a首先比B有一些独特的优势，然而，B更进一步，例如，最后但并非最不重要的，a B是相反的，简而言之，a B，A有一些B没有的优点，。