雅思小作文考官高分范文 第一篇

题目：Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

考官范文：

People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits.

On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow the rules more carefully.

On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do

not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to drive, and this could be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test. Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. For example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly. Finally, governments or local councils could reduce road accidents by investing in better public transport, which would mean that fewer people would need to travel by car.

In conclusion, while punishments can help to prevent bad driving, I believe that other road safety measures should also be introduced.

雅思小作文考官高分范文 第二篇

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时常发现各位烤鸭们的备考资料实在太多，尤其是小作文，各种表格、各种范文，可是很多时候，看得越多，越是一脸懵逼，因为资料太多太乱了，而不会分类归纳和总结。

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雅思小作文考官高分范文 第三篇

第一段：复述文章主题+引出论点 典型的大作文文章开篇，中规中矩，不失为实战中最好用也是最稳妥的写法。

词汇学习：on the face of sth. 从表面看

句子学习：文中：It is true that many parents purchase a multitude of playthings for their offspring. “purchase a multitude” -可用来直接替换三俗词”have different views towards” 用法完全一致。

另文中：Whether or not this is a good thing for the child, is a moot point. “moot”一次解释为有争议的，悬而未决的。此处用法可以完美替代通俗句型whether … , is widely debated.

第二段：主题句+理由分析 此写法常见于各类考官范文，主题句直接清晰的点明此段论述主题，然后围绕此主题进行展开。玩具有助于孩子身体，智力的发展同时兼具教育意义

相关词句学习：optimum brain development 开发大脑

hand-eye coordination 眼手协调

colour recognition 颜色识别

sth. Is designed to be educational as well as fun 寓教于乐

speed children’s acquisition of numbers or the alphabet 加速孩子对数字和字母的认知

第三段： 主题句+理由分析 此段结构同第二段，依旧是常见的正文段写作结构。而且从篇幅上看此段为考官的立场所在，玩具的弊大于利。所以笔者在此在此强调，一般双边分析的文章建议大家以第三段来奠定文章基调。

理由整理：spoil their children 宠坏孩子

concentration span may suffer 集中力下降

too many tempting objects 诱惑太多

become targets of envy from classmates 被妒忌

be dangerous for infants to suck on or ingest 有误事的风险

词汇学习：multiple 许多，可替换“many”

detrimental 有害的， 可替换“harmful”

pitfall 缺点，可替换“drawback”

be perceived as 被认为，可替换“be regard as”

句子学习：文中：For one，wealthy parents might spoil their son or daughter by showering him/her with toys, resulting in a negative effect on the child’s character. 句中考官形象的使用了shower 一次写出了给孩子提供了大量的玩具。shower sb. with sth. 可替换“give sb. a large number of …”, 同时考官用了resulting in 一词的非谓语结构引导结果。此写法笔者在前几期的文章中反复强调的重点句型。

第四段： 陈述观点。

句子学习：It is clear then that this situation is not as straightforward as it first appears. 此句几乎可以算是万能句，表示情况并不如看起来那么简单。几乎可以用于各种雅思与论文中。

以上就是小站老师为雅思考生们带来剑桥雅思10G类写作考官范文解析，希望能给雅思考生们带来帮助，不过雅思写作的唯一提升方法就是多写哦。

雅思小作文考官高分范文 第四篇

Describe a shop you like to go to.

what shop it is

what it sells (or, what you usually buy there)

when you first started going to this shop (or, how you came to know about this shop)

and explain why you like (to go to) this shop.

前考官范文：

Well, it took me a few moments to decide on which shop to talk about, because I actually like going to quite a number of different shops around my hometown, but possibly my favourite is H&M, so that's the one I'm gonna describe.

Firstly then, with regard to what it sells, well I'm not sure if you're familiar with H&M, but it's basically a mid-end clothes shop which sells a variety of women's and men's clothing, mostly geared towards young adults like myself. And as well as clothing, the shop also has a small accessories section for women, with things like hair bands, bracelets and earrings, but the main focus is definitely on clothes.

Anyway, as for when I first started going to this shop, well to be totally honest with you, I'm really not that sure, but off the top of my head, I guess I must have first started shopping there two or three years ago, round about the time I was in high school, because I seem to vaguely remember one of my high-school classmates telling me about it, and how good it was.

So that's kind of how I got to know about H&M, and finally, regarding why I like shopping there, well I suppose it's really a combination of reasons, one of which would be that the clothes there, on the whole, tend to be quite fashionable and trendy, unlike the stuff I see in many other shops, and the clothes are pretty simple in style, which is exactly what I like. So that's one thing, and I guess another reason would be that everything there is really good-value, and just to give you an example, a decent pair of jeans there costs around three hundred yuan, whereas a similar pair at another shop would probably set you back a thousand yuan or so, and in terms of quality, well, there's really not that much difference between H&M's clothes and the higher-end brands, but you're paying considerably less.

So yeah, I would say these are, more or less, the main reasons why I like shopping there, and I would probably go so far as saying it's become one of the most popular clothes shops here in my hometown, and I just hope they continue to keep their prices as low as they are!

That's pretty much it then, so thanks for listening.

雅思小作文考官高分范文 第五篇

Describe your first mobile phone.

You should say:

When you got it

How you got it

What you used it for

And explain how you felt when you got it.

考官参考范文：

Ok right then, I’m gonna tell you a little bit about my first mobile phone, or at least as much as I can remember anyway, because I think it was about seven or eight years ago when I first got one, so my memory’s a bit sketchy.

Anyway, in terms of how I came to getting my first mobile, well basically, I had kind of been going on at my mum for quite a while to get me one, but she kept saying, quite rightly, that I was too young and didn’t really need one. But when I hit the age of about 15, I think it was, she finally relented, and took me to the shops to choose one.

So uh, yeah, I remember at the time that neither of us knew much about mobiles, so when we walked into the shop, we just asked the sales assistant there to recommend us one. And I think I’m right in saying that we ended up choosing the cheapest and most basic phone they had, simply because I wasn’t really interested in having loads of functions, you know, all I wanted to use it for was to call and text people.

So that’s how got I it, and um…what else is there to say, uh…. Oh yeah, as for how I felt when I got it, well, in actual fact, I didn’t feel overly excited or anything, you know, it was really just a feeling of, um… what’s the word, umm….. I guess you could say it was like, um, a stronger sense of independence that I felt, um, as well as gratitude to my mum, of course, for giving it to me!

And I took pretty good care of it, you know, I even spent, like, 200 rmb on a leather case to go around it, and it lasted a pretty long time. I think I used it for something like 3 or four years before moving on to a better one. And I think I’ve still got it stored in a drawer somewhere at home. So uh, yeah that’s it. Thanks for listening.

雅思小作文考官高分范文 第六篇

是的，所有剑桥后面的考官范文都是雅思写作最好的作文范本

范文如下：happiness is very difficult to define,because it means so many different things to different some people link happiness to wealth and material success,others think it lies in emotions and loving personal others think that spiritual paths,rather than either the material world or relationships with people,are the only way to true people interpret happiness for themselves in so many differen ways,it is difficult to give any definition that is ture for there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals then the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her course,factors such as loving relationships,good health,the skill to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be think an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving that i mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives(the welfare of our families,the quality of our relationships,making other people happy,etc.)and what is not(a problem at work,getting annoyed about trivial things,etc.).全是手工输入的哦，希望对你有所帮助

雅思小作文考官高分范文 第七篇

口语评分细则示例同样，在IELTS口语部分，考官也是按四项标准分别评等级分：流利度及连贯性，词汇、句式丰富性及语法准确性和语音。仍以一名获得口语6分的考生为例，他所对应的口语水准是：

(A）流利度及连贯性方面，愿意进行详细描述，但有时因重复、自我更正或停顿而造成不连贯，运用不同的连接词和语篇标记，但有时不恰当。

(B）词汇方面，尽管有时词汇运用不恰当，但词汇量足以详细表述主题，表意清楚，总体上能成功地变换措辞进行复述。

(C）句式多样性及语法准确性方面，混合使用简单和复合句式，但不够灵活；使用复合句式时经常出错，但并不因此影响理解。

(D）语音方面，总体能听懂，偶尔因发音错误给听者理解造成负担。

评分一直受质量监控

雅思口语实用攻略

为了方便广大考生更好的复习，综合整理了雅思口语实用攻略：考前如何调整状态，以供各位考生考试复习参考,希望对考生复习有所帮助。

雅思口语考试历来是中国考生最担心的一关，虽然时间短，但是考核的时候要面对面，这无疑会产生紧张的心理。以下是名师总结的在雅思口语考试中一些考生常会提及到的问题，包括雅思口语考试的高分技巧，希望这些总结能对大家的复习有所帮助。

一、虽然雅思口语考试在听说读写四项中是最短的，只有10-15分钟，但是很多中国考生依然经常把它看成最大的障碍。主要原因是什么？

答复：大部分考生在口语考试里面临着如下问题：

1. 心理过度紧张，缺乏自信。

有些考生性格内向，不善交流和表达，面对临煞有介事的考官会大脑短路，语无伦次。

2. 英文能力有限，准备压力大。

07年以来雅思口语新话题层出不穷，考官第三部分的谈论愈发灵活，如果考生不懂得将话题化繁为简归类总结，会感到复习范围无边无际，从而忐忑不安。

3. 错把口试当成背诵考试，适得其反。

很多考生会把口语预测话题写成段子死背硬记，结果考试时不懂得与考官交流，只管猛背答案，往往是答非所问，难逃低分命运。

雅思小作文考官高分范文 第八篇

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

lt is no doubt true that the majority of people would like tobe happy in their the personal nature of happiness makes it difficult to describe, there do seem to besome common needs that we all share with regard to experiencing or achieving happiness.

Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual person. Nobody can fully understand or experience another person's feelings, and we all have our own particular passions from which we take pleasure. Some people, for example, derive a sense of satisfaction from earning money or achieving success,whereas for others, health and family are much more important. At the same time, a range of other feelings, from excitement to peacefulness, may be associated with the idea of happiness, and the same person may therefore feel happy in a variety of different ways.

Although it seems almost impossible to give a precise definition of happiness, most people would agree that there are some basic preconditions to achieving it. Firstly, it is hardfor a person to be happy if he or she does not have a safe place to live and enough food to eat. Our basic survival needs must surely be met before we can lead a pleasant , the greatest joy in life is usually found in shared experiences with family and friends, and it is rare to find a person who is content to live in complete isolation. Other key factors could be individual freedom and a sense of purpose in life.

ln conclusion, happiness is difficult to define because it is particular to each individual, but l believe that our basic needs for shelter, food and company need to be fulfilled before we can experience it.

雅思小作文考官高分范文 第九篇

1. 剑桥雅思真题

剑桥真题集答案部分是有官方范文（MODEL ANSWER）跟学生写的文章（就是之类的，就是学生写的）

官方给到的范文是非常具有参考意义的，可以用来积累词汇等等，同时官方给学生打了分的文章，大家可以拿来跟自己写的进行对比，看看自己的水平在哪。

2. 前雅思考官Simon 整理的范文

先说说Simon是谁，Smon是雅思前资深考官，在中国地区担任过雅思考官，考官嘛，肯定是非常了解雅思考试的备考技巧跟评分标准的，加上在中国当过雅思考官，自然对各位在写作中的问题很清楚，也知道高分范文需要的是什么，所以他的写作范文参考性极大极大极大！

个人觉得Simon的范文，文章不会用很多的高级词汇跟长难句，观点表达非常清晰，而且是从观点落到细节都非常的自然，说得直白一点，就是看完就是觉得这个人写的东西有道理，说服力强。

我非常建议冲击写作高分的朋友可以好好分析Simon的写作范文。

3. 顾家北手把手教你写雅思写作

这本书的话，我个人觉得比较适合小白去积累范文中的好词好句，分清楚写作的话题，跟构建框架，但是我不是很建议已经具备冲击写作高分基础的同学看这本书，怕你们看多了形成固定的思维模版了。

自学党们注意了，除了以上提到的带范文的资料外，我建议各位可以通过参考一些免费的公开课，私戳助教就能领取资料，获取已经整理好的写作范文，跟写作词汇等等，记得找助教领取完整的资料包，里面还有剑桥雅思真题，口语题库等等，领到就是赚到，还节约大笔时间在整理资料上面，别错过哦。