续写故事范文(推荐十八篇)

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续写故事范文(篇一)

July 14th Wednesday rainyYesterday I came to the center of Chongqing with my mother. We came to a place named “toward the air door”. I think many people know it. The night view is so beautiful that we all don't want to back to home. I have a photo here. In the nine, we had to go back home. I didn't wash my face before I went to bed, I'm too tired. July 12th Monday sunnyHow tired am I! I went back from chongqing three hours ago. In the city I nearly lost the way. Thanks for the hot heart man and woman. They help us to find the way. Oh, don't think so badly, I'm fine. Because of my hard, my homepage is more beautiful than before, I'm very happy to see it. I love make homepage, if you love it, please let me know, we can take hours talking about homepage. Thank 9th Friday sunny,How happy I am. Yesterday I finished all the work very quick, so I have a lot of time to do myself. Sometimes finish work early is a good thing, we can have more interests to do the next work. Because of this, I write English dairy eight in the morning. But I wrote it in the evening in the pass day. Everyone, if you can finish the work quickly, not lazy, just try your 6th Tuesday cloudy;Ah ha, when I get up, it was time for lunch. But I really have a lot of work to do, I must write words and English dairy, then learned “Li yang” English, and then …… .Oh, my god, if I do it in the afternoon, I will ready to dead. So I wrote words, and now I'm writing my English dairy. Wish I could finish these works today. Bye!July 5th Monday cloudy Today I came back from a place named “he chuan”, it's a good place. There has some nice view like chang jiang river. I came there in o days ago. Our aunt is here. We had a good time in there. But I also write English dairy too. Because of the wrong puter, the message didn't here. I wish myself to live more better tomorrow.。

续写故事范文(篇二)

1、什么是续写

让我们先来弄清什么是续写。续写就是在原有故事的基础上,将内容继续延伸,成为一篇完整的。

续写,是一种比较常见的“给材料作文”,是把不完整的故事继续补充写完整的写作。它有助于培养我们合理想象能力,创造思维能力和语言表达能力。

2、续写的形式

从续写练习的形式来说,主要有两种:一种是给出故事的开头,然后要求续写故事的情节和结尾。在初中年级语文考试的试题中出现的续写大多都是这种方式。另一种是根据一篇的主要内容和基本情节接着写下去,这是一种读写结合的续写方式,往往要求写出一篇有所发展,情节不同的新故事来。如,阅读了《龟兔赛跑》后,续写《龟兔第二次赛跑》。新故事与原来的故事情节有一定联系,但是故事的中心变了,这次兔子接受教训,顺利获得胜利。这类续写,既要理解原文的主要内容和中心,展开想象,注意与原文保持一定的连续性一致性,还要有新意。

3、续写常用方法

(1)展开想象,合理推测原文内容。

展开想象,就是对原文故事没有写出的情节展开合理的推想,打开思路,多角度地去想象,想象出几种情况,几种结果,然后从中加以选择。譬如,有篇课文《雨中》,写的是在傍晚的雨中,一位姑娘将满载的一箩筐苹果翻倒在马路上,姑娘万分焦急。课文仅仅对傍晚雨中路上的情景,以及姑娘翻倒箩筐的情景进行了描写。许多同学根据这个情节续写出了不同的。有的续写出人们伸出援助之手的故事,赞颂了社会的文明之风。有的根据自己的生活阅历,写出了路人的冷漠,斥责了这种做法。还有的写出了姑娘为了不堵塞交通,忍痛放弃捡拾苹果的故事。这几种故事的结局都是合理的,这样续写的就会内容丰富而有新意。

(2)前后照应,防止自相矛盾。

续写要注意前后照应,防止自相矛盾。特别是给开头的续写,必须要与上文紧密联系,使上下文融为一体。譬如,《难忘的一件事》,给出的材料是这样的:

每当我看到下雨,脑海里就会出现一位叔叔的身影,而那件事也会浮现在我的脑海里,使我久久难以忘怀……

那是夏季的一天,放学时下起了滂沱大雨,我和一个小姑娘站在学校门口等人接。天色越来越晚,我们两个都焦急不安。这时,远处隐隐约约一个身影向学校奔来……

同学们的续写各种各样,大部分同学读懂了材料的内容,写出了叔叔是小姑娘的爸爸。经过合理推想写出这位叔叔看到我的焦急,就主动或步行、或骑自行车、或打出租车、或将自己的雨伞借给我等情节,吻合了前面的材料。但是有的同学写出了叔叔是一个坏人,我机智勇敢地与他进行了斗争,成功脱险的事情。仅看所续写的内容好像也是在情理之中的,但是结合已经给出的材料就会发现,续写的内容与题目和开头有些矛盾。这种与坏人斗争的事应该是惊心动魄或者是心有余悸的,而不大可能是久久难以忘怀的,你们说对吗?

例文评析【文题】

体育课上,八(2)班王军同学练习跳远时,不小心把脚扭伤了,不能动弹……

要求:

1. 根据提供的情节,联系自己的生活实际展开想象,续写一篇记叙文。题目《脚扭伤之后》。

2. 先确定作文的中心,把和中心关系密切的材料写具体。

提示:面对省略号,我们可以引发许多想象。可以想象王军当时痛苦的样子,以及师生的关心;可以想象师生怎样送他上医院治疗,怎样送他回家;还可以想象,王军休养期间同学们怎样探望,怎样帮助他补课;还可以想象不知姓名的司机,怎样帮同学们把王军送往医院;也可以想象王军休养期间不忘班集体,为班级出力量……可想象的内容太多了!同学们要抓住“脚扭伤之后”来展开合理想象,续写出一篇好。在想象时,一定要注意“合理”,也就是要切合文中所给情节的实际,切合同学们生活的实际。不合情理地“胡编”,会违背了练习续写的意图。

方法:选择怎样的材料是要以的中心来确定的。是要赞扬同学之间的友情呢,还是赞颂老师对学生的爱,或是要反映改革大潮中人的真情……中心确定之后,围绕中心去想象,把和中心有关的内容想具体,写具体就行了。

[续写]

脚扭伤之后

体育课上,八(2)班王军同学练习跳远时,不小心把脚扭伤了,不能动弹。只见他手指着右脚,咬着牙说:“疼……疼死我了。”几个身高体壮的男生七手八脚地把他抬出沙坑,小心翼翼地脱下他的鞋袜一看,啊,脚腕已经肿了起来,并且青里透紫地出现了淤血,王军也由于疼痛而汗珠直淌。大家一下子都慌了,有的说:“快送医院吧。”有的说:“快打电话通知他爸妈吧。”更有心急的同学,上前就要为他按摩,恨不得一下子把那个大肿包给揉下去。

就在大家手忙脚乱,心急火燎的时候,体育王老师却镇定自若。他制止了要给王军按摩的同学,对大家说:“刚刚扭伤,绝不可以乱动,大家听我安排:冯旭——马上去医务室请校医,并让她带一卷绷带来;肖鹏——你劲大,把王军背到水池边。”肖鹏在老师的帮助下,小心翼翼地把王军背到了水池边。同学们也一齐围了过来。

老师边用水池中的冷水冲洗王军扭伤的脚,边告诉我们,这是防止继续瘀血。一会儿,校医李老师来了,用绷带把王军脚腕上部缠紧。体育老师又告诉我们,这是不让肿胀再扩散。然后,他又叮嘱王军把脚架在高处,保证血液回流畅通。看着老师熟练的操作,听着那头头是道的讲解,再看王军减轻了痛苦的表情,大家都长吁了一口气,一齐向老师投去了敬佩的目光。这时,王老师又推来一辆自行车,让王军坐在后车架上,和校医一起把他送到医院去做进一步检查治疗。

这堂课上得可真有价值,不光锻炼了身体,还增长了急救知识。事后连受伤的王军都开玩笑说:“用我身体的疼痛为你们换来了急救知识,值——”从此,大家更佩服体育王老师了。

【评析】

[小结]

总之,续写既要注意原有故事情节,合理想象;又要敢于创新,写出新意。

续写故事范文(篇三)

Last weekend,Tom's famliy were very busy.

His father went back to his pany to take part in a meeting even it was Saturday.

His mother had to go the supurmarket to buy some grocery and made a big dinner for her family in the evening.

Tom played football with his friends all afternoon on Sunday.

They were happy as usual even though they were busy.

续写故事范文(篇四)

In the morning,I got up earlier and had breakfast went to the nearest bathhouse with my father. On the way back home,we bought plenty of fireworks and firecrackers. What I liked most was a set of fireworks called Xingguangcuican in was told that It was beautiful enough to pete with any other kinds of fireworks. At three o'clock in the afternoon, we had a big meal. All the family members got togerther around the my parents and me, there were my grandparents,my cousins and their were elven people altogether. During the dinner, we talked and laughed eight in the evening, we began to watch annual gala on CCTV. Needless to say ,everyone gave their ments on TV program.. The most exciting time came when it was half hour ahead of the middle night----the beginning of the new year. we all went out and lit the fireworks and fire crackers,which were exploding and lighting in the sky. It would bring us good luck and fortune in the new an unfettable day! It will stay with me all of my life The Spring Festival is the most important traditional one in China. As an important part of it, fireworks bring us happier atmosphere than usual. This Spring Festival, Dad bought lots of fireworks as last year. On the eve, he lighted them, and then they blossomed like flowers in the sky, with sweet sounds and brilliant light. How beautiful! I was deeply moved, though every Spring Festival I felt it. It brought me the beautiful feelings. At that moment I was buried in the sea of happiness. And also it made me feel more about the prosperity of our homeland. Meanwhile, However, I was worried about the fireworks. First, setting off firecrackers made a tremendous noise and caused serious air pollution. Also children's safety faced the crisis of getting burned or injured in the eyes. What's worse, many dustmen's valuable time was wasted for fireworks pieces after being set off dirtied the environment. So I thought some day we'll have to forbid making and setting off fireworks, though it's a Chinese custom for hundreds of years. Spring festival is on the first day of the first lunar month. Chinese people most like the Spring Festival. During Spring Festival, Chinese people like having meals with their families, playing fireworks in the open air. My sisters and I played fireworks on that day. We had many fireworks. They were very beautiful. They were running into the sky and breaking into pieces. They looked like flowers in the sky. We were very happy and excited. After that, I made a wish. I hope that, we can have a happy and healthy life next year and everyone in my family can be happy. I enjoy the festival very happy.。

续写故事范文(篇五)

第二章 编讲故事

第一节 编讲故事主要分为七种题目类型

第二节 命题编讲故事技巧 第三节 给成语编故事

第四节 编写技巧---为故事创造可信的人物

第五节 历年真题

第一节 编讲故事主要分为七种题目类

1、词语概念式,即以一个词语或短语为命题编讲故事。如:一树鲜花;

2、句子判断式,即以一个短句或句子为命题编讲故事。如:班主任今天没有来,突然停电了;

3、形象组合式,这是最常用的一种模式,即给出几个不相干的词语要求在故事中出现,不必分顺序。如:邮票、金鱼、台灯或改变、同桌、礼物。

4、给定材料式,这种模式的活动性很高,比如高校会给你一个故事提纲,让你把这个故事写出来。由于篇幅问题这里就不再列举

5、续写式。续写式包括短片、电视剧或成语、小故事之类的续写。如:南郭先生逃走之后

6、改写式。将成语、唐诗等改写为故事,在这种模式中改写与扩写是并重的。如:请改写“耶娘妻子走相送,尘埃不见咸阳桥

7、情节拼块式。如同小时玩魔方,有几个混乱的情节拼块,要把它们用你认为比较合理的顺序增加适当情节拼回原状。

编讲故事有四个要素:时间、地点、人物、情节。其中,人物要有冲突,情节悬念强烈,叙述要有画面感。

…… …… 余下全文

续写故事范文(篇六)

暑假里天气热得不得了。太阳炙烤着大地,知了在大树上“知了知了”叫个不停,小花小草也有气无力地垂着脑袋。在村东头的小河旁,几个孩子又在比绝招啦! 三胖挺挺大肚子说:“嗯——天气这么热,我们先比比游泳吧!”三年级下册绝招续写他们第三次比会怎样?100字

二福哈哈大笑说:“哈!就你的身材还游泳。”

三胖不服气翘起嘴,说:“怎么啦?人长得胖就不能游泳吗?一会儿就要让你们见识见识我的厉害!”

“哗啦!哗啦哗啦!”小柱子、二福、三胖都下了水,只见三胖那双有边的双腿在水中哗啦哗啦拍打着,一口气,他就游出20多米,把二福和小柱子远远地甩在后面。

二福边游边想:“咦!怪了,这次这个大胖子怎么游得这么快?”

游完泳后,二福不服气了,说:“你们看我的。”说着从腰间抽出一条双截楷,二福用手舞动着双截棍,双截棍像一条银蛇一样在二福手中翩翩起舞。二福刚表演到一半,伙伴们就不禁拍手叫好:“绝招!绝招!”

当二福洋洋得意时,一阵优美的笛声传来。大家仔细一看,原来是小柱子在树阴下吹笛子呢。刚才还以为二福为中心的伙伴们立刻围到小柱子身旁了,二福气得直跺脚,可不会儿,他也沉浸在小柱子悠扬的琴声中了,枝头上鸟儿倾听着琴声,小河里,小鱼探出了小巧的脑袋也听着这琴声。

这时,老奶奶笑呵呵地从屋里出了,对小伙伴们说:“孩子们你们的绝招都各有特色,我觉得你们都是第一名。”

绝招续写10-23

续写故事范文(篇七)

Dear ,

I am writing this letter to inform you of my desion to resign from my current position.

I would like to let you konw hou much i have enjoyed my work for Designs & Fashions during the past , now i find that the work is not what i expected. My English proficiency is not of much use here ,while i lack some skills as an editor .What is more ,i feel it demanding to frequently work overtime.

I regret for any possible inconveniences this may cause you,and i would therefore appreciate it if you accept my resignation.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

续写故事范文(篇八)

“光阴似箭,日月如梭”暑假已经到来了。村东头的大树下,几个小伙子正在绝招呢。

三胖骄傲地抢着说:“这次比绝招,肯定我的绝招最厉害。”伙伴们个个不服气说:“那也不一定,要看看你的绝招是什么。”说完,三胖拿起毛笔在三秒钟之内,把一个字写得端端正正,漂漂亮亮,伙伴们看了,目瞪口呆。

二福迅速穿上轮滑鞋,飞快的滑起来,还变许多花样。不一会儿,他就滑得无影无踪了。回来时,来了个极速跳跃,把伙伴们吓得心惊肉跳。结果,伙伴们连声叫好。

小柱子开口道:“你们说一首曲子的名字,我就能吹出来。”“还要一音不走,这样,这次的冠军就是你。”三胖加到。伙伴们说一首曲子的名字,小柱子吹一首曲子。结果三胖大吃一惊,这次比赛的冠军就被小柱子赢走了。

要记住这篇文章哦:续写绝招300字(2),如果喜欢,可以经常来找我,我是你的“秀秀姐”。

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续写故事范文(篇九)

我们的学校座落在城市的中央,就像花园里一朵盛开的鲜花,神秘而迷人。

校园的早晨是寂静。天蒙蒙亮。人们都还在睡梦当中,一个人影,一点声音也没有,静悄悄的,好像它也在沉睡一般。

校园的早晨是美丽的。看那一盆兰花,像孔雀一样张开了红色的屏。大枫树像战士一位位一样直立在操场两旁。瞧,那一群勤劳的小学生正劳动,他们有的扫树叶,有的擦扶手,有的倒垃圾……一会儿校园就变得一尘不染。是啊,文明的行为就是最美的风景。

校园的早晨是热闹的。同学们背着五颜六色的书包,续续地赶到教室。听,教室里书声朗朗。“玲玲铃”上课玲响了,老师匆匆赶到教室和同学们开始了一天的紧张工作和学习。

校园的早晨真美妙!我喜欢校园的早晨。

续写故事范文(篇十)

1、什么是续写

让我们先来弄清什么是续写。续写就是在原有故事的基础上,将内容继续延伸,成为一篇完整的文章。

续写,是一种比较常见的“给材料作文”,是把不完整的故事继续补充写完整的写作。它有助于培养我们合理想象能力,创造思维能力和语言表达能力。

2、续写的形式

从续写练习的形式来说,主要有两种:一种是给出故事的开头,然后要求续写故事的情节和结尾。在中年级语文考试的试题中出现的续写大多都是这种方式。另一种是根据一篇文章的主要内容和基本情节接着写下去,这是一种读写结合的续写方式,往往要求写出一篇有所发展,情节不同的新故事来。如,阅读了《龟兔赛跑》后,续写《龟兔第二次赛跑》。新故事与原来的故事情节有一定联系,但是故事的中心变了,这次兔子接受教训,顺利获得胜利。这类续写,既要理解原文的主要内容和中心,展开想象,注意与原文保持一定的连续性一致性,还要有新意。

3、续写常用方法

(1)展开想象,合理推测原文内容。

展开想象,就是对原文故事没有写出的情节展开合理的推想,打开思路,多角度地去想象,想象出几种情况,几种结果,然后从中加以选择。譬如,四年级有篇课文《雨中》,写的是在傍晚的雨中,一位姑娘将满载的一箩筐苹果翻倒在马路上,姑娘万分焦急。课文仅仅对傍晚雨中路上的情景,以及姑娘翻倒箩筐的情景进行了描写。许多同学写出了不同的文章。有的续写出人们伸出援助之手的故事,赞颂了社会的文明之风。有的根据自己的生活阅历,写出了路人的冷漠,斥责了这种做法。还有的写出了姑娘为了不堵塞交通,忍痛放弃捡拾苹果的故事。这几种故事的结局都是合理的,这样续写的文章就会内容丰富而有新意。

(2)前后照应,防止自相矛盾。

续写要注意前后照应,防止自相矛盾。特别是给开头的续写,必须要与上文紧密联系,使上下文融为一体。譬如,文章《难忘的一件事》,文章给出的材料是这样的

每当我看到下雨,脑海里就会出现一位叔叔的身影,而那件事也会浮现在我的脑海里,使我久久难以忘怀……

那是夏季的一天,放学时下起了滂沱大雨,我和一个小姑娘站在学校门口等人接。天色越来越晚,我们两个都焦急不安。这时,远处隐隐约约一个身影向学校奔来……

同学们的续写各种各样,大部分同学读懂了材料的内容,写出了叔叔是小姑娘的爸爸。经过合理推想写出这位叔叔看到我的焦急,就主动或步行、或骑自行车、或打出租车、或将自己的雨伞借给我等情节,吻合了前面的材料。但是有的同学写出了叔叔是一个坏人,我机智勇敢地与他进行了斗争,成功脱险的事情。仅看所续写的内容好像也是在情理之中的,但是结合文章已经给出的材料就会发现,续写的内容与题目和开头有些矛盾。这种与坏人斗争的事应该是惊心动魄或者是心有余悸的,而不大可能是久久难以忘怀的,你们说对吗?

例文评析【文题】

体育课上,五(2)班王军同学练习跳远时,不小心把脚扭伤了,不能动弹……

要求根据提供的情节,联系自己的'生活实际展开想象,续写一篇记叙文。题目《脚扭伤之后》。

1。先确定作文的中心,把和中心关系密切的材料写具体。

提示:面对省略号,我们可以引发许多想象。可以想象王军当时痛苦的样子,以及师生的关心;可以想象师生怎样送他上医院治疗,怎样送他回家;还可以想象,王军休养期间同学们怎样探望,怎样帮助他补课;还可以想象不知姓名的司机,怎样帮同学们把王军送往医院;也可以想象王军休养期间不忘班集体,为班级出力量……可想象的内容太多了!同学们要抓住“脚扭伤之后”来展开合理想象,会续写出一篇好文章的。在想象时,一定要注意“合理”,也就是要切合文中所给情节的实际,切合同学们生活的实际。不合情理地“胡编”,会违背了练习续写的意图。

选择怎样的材料要先确定文章的中心。是要赞扬同学之间的友情呢,还是赞颂老师对学生的爱,或是要反映改革大潮中人的真情……中心确定之后,围绕中心去想象,把和中心有关的内容想具体,写具体就行了。

[续写]脚扭伤之后

体育课上,五(2)班王军同学练习跳远时,不小心把脚扭伤了,不能动弹。只见他手指着右脚,咬着牙说:“疼……疼死我了。”几个身高体壮的男生七手八脚地把他抬出沙坑,小心翼翼地脱下他的鞋袜一看,啊,脚腕已经肿了起来,并且青里透紫地出现了淤血,王军也由于疼痛而汗珠直淌。大家一下子都慌了,有的说:“快送医院吧。”有的说:“快打电话通知他爸妈吧。”更有心急的同学,上前就要为他按摩,恨不得一下子把那个大肿包给揉下去。

就在大家手忙脚乱,心急火燎的时候,体育王老师却镇定自若。他制止了要给王军按摩的同学,对大家说:“刚刚扭伤,绝不可以乱动,大家听我安排:冯旭——马上去医务室请校医,并让她带一卷绷带来;肖鹏——你劲大,把王军背到水池边。”肖鹏在老师的帮助下,小心翼翼地把王军背到了水池边。同学们也一齐围了过来。

老师边用水池中的冷水冲洗王军扭伤的脚,边告诉我们,这是防止继续瘀血。一会儿,校医李老师来了,用绷带把王军脚腕上部缠紧。体育老师又告诉我们,这是不让肿胀再扩散。然后,他又叮嘱王军把脚架在高处,保证血液回流畅通。看着老师熟练的操作,听着那头头是道的讲解,再看王军减轻了痛苦的表情,大家都长吁了一口气,一齐向老师投去了敬佩的目光。这时,王老师又推来一辆自行车,让王军坐在后车架上,和校医一起把他送到医院去做进一步检查治疗。

这堂课上得可真有价值,不光锻炼了身体,还增长了急救知识。事后连受伤的王军都开玩笑说:“用我身体的疼痛为你们换来了急救知识,值——”从此,大家更佩服体育王老师了。

【评析】

[小结]

总之,续写既要注意原有故事情节,合理想象;又要敢于创新,写出新意。

续写故事范文(篇十一)

本课是一篇生动形象而富有情趣的童话故事,教学本文时抓住小骆驼、小红马的具体表现,激发学生自主阅读的兴趣,诱导他们主动地掌握相关的动物常识,自觉地感悟故事蕴涵的道理,形成和提高健康的审美情趣。同时,结合本文的特点,引导学生学习积累课文语言,培养和发展他们的想象能力。我在教学中作了一点尝试。

童话故事的教学,要善于凭借课文所提供的语言材料,引导学生丰富、充实课文的内容,拓展课文的空间,深化、升华课文的主题。“沙漠旅行结束了,小骆驼又见到了那匹小红马,他会怎么说,怎么做?”这道题明确地提示我们,在学生抓住了课文的主要内容,掌握了有关动物常识,品悟到故事所蕴涵的道理后,还应该让学生“续写”。续写的指导还是从课文内容出发,引导学生设计有趣的合理的场景,紧紧围绕小骆驼的驼峰、眼毛、脚掌的特点和作用来展开,拓展延伸寻求合理基础上的自主、创新。

续写故事范文(篇十二)

柱子一握拳:“就在今年暑假,同意的举手。”

话一出口,三胖、二福立即举手,“我愿意!”“我愿意!”二福心眼多,忙问在什么地方比,小柱子说:“就在这个地方”。

此后,小柱子利用业余时间学画画,三胖利用双休日练习除法,二福则捧着书,专拣智力问答和脑筋急转弯看。

暑假到了。一天,小柱子把二福、三胖约出来比绝招。小柱子说:“谁先来?”三胖说:“我们猜拳。”他们仨一起伸手:“石头剪子布!”第一次,二福赢了。小柱子和三胖又猜了一次,结果,三胖领先,小柱子只得押后了。

二福胸有成竹地说:“你们出题我回答。”三胖眨了眨眼睛说。“太阳生的孩子,打一字。”“星星的‘星’字。”三胖抓了抓后脑勺又问:“什么样的废品制造起来最方便?”“废话!”三胖没招了,连在一边的小柱子都竖起了大拇指。三年级下册绝招续写他们第三次比会怎样?100字

该三胖了。小柱子问道:“1098除以6等于多少?”“183”。三胖不假思索地回答。二福立即拿了根树枝在地上算,果然正确。

“你们随便出个题,我画一幅画”。小柱子有些等不及了。“那,就画一个村庄吧。”三胖说。小柱子立即取出画纸和水彩笔画了起来。只一会,一幅和谐、美丽的乡村图呈现在大家眼前。三胖、二福见了,眼前一亮。

“哈哈哈——我们各有各的绝招了!”三个孩子相互拥着、叫着、笑着三年级下册绝招续写他们第三次比会怎样?100字

续写故事范文(篇十三)

My diary

I had a good time this weekend.

On Saturday morning,I did exercise with my the aftrenoon,I did my had a boring day.

On Sunday morning,I went to the library .I read an interesting the afternonn,Iwent to the flew the kites with my

flew very felt very happy.

What a wonderful weekend!

My weekend

This weekend, I went for a trip with my are many great places for us to have fun .Finally,I decided to Wu is a beautiful is some water around the can take bus to go 'not far from visited many old are many interesting things in these old also went boating.

If I have a chance ,I will go to Wuzhen again.

懒的写了

续写故事范文(篇十四)

大家好!你们有没有看过一个童话故事——《狐狸和乌鸦》,但我相信你们都看过,不过,我们今天可不是读《狐狸和乌鸦》的故事,而是要续写……

自从乌鸦被狐狸骗了之后,就再也不相信狐狸的话了。

过了很久很久。这次,乌鸦又叼了一块肉,它不是普通的肉,而是一块里面有毒的一块大大大大大……的肉!乌鸦飞到树上,假装大吃特吃……狐狸看见了,就飞快地跑过来,说:“亲爱的乌鸦,你好吗?我想和你玩游戏,可以吗?我带了一大串葡萄,想和你分享!”乌鸦突然想起这块肉是有毒的,所以开口说了一个我很……肉就掉了下去,狐狸说:“哈哈~哈哈~这次的肉……又归我了!哈哈哈哈哈……”狐狸笑得躺在了地上,突然,手一滑,手上的肉扑的一声,掉在了狐狸的嘴里,狐狸嚼了嚼,说:“嗯,这次的肉好好吃!”“啊~我的肚子!好难受啊!乌鸦!你为什么要害我!”狐狸大叫。就这样,狐狸被毒死了。

狐狸的孩子说:“下次,我要为爸爸报仇!”

续写故事范文(篇十五)

按照下面故事的开头,展开合理的想象,把故事写完整。

小猴病了太阳快要下山了,小猴捧着一个大西瓜,从姥姥家回来了。因为天气闷热,走到半路,小猴中暑了。正在这时,树林里走出一只小白兔和一只小狐狸……

怎样续写这个故事呢?

首先要弄清这个故事的开头写了些什么,接着根据开头的内容展开合理的想象,然后连贯地把故事写下来。这个故事的开头,讲了小猴在回家的路上得了急病,正在这时,小白兔和小狐狸来了。狐狸和小白兔见小猴病了,他们会怎样做呢?这就是故事要续写的内容。我们可以这样想:1、小兔见小猴病了,连忙背小猴去医院,小猴的病好了,把西瓜送给了小白兔,表示感谢。2、狐狸不但不关心小猴,反而偷吃了他的西瓜,小白兔批评了狐狸,狐狸认识了错误,把小猴送回了家。3、小兔和狐狸一起把小猴送进医院,凑上两人的零花钱,为小猴付了药费,并把他送回家,小猴用西瓜招待了两位小伙伴。不论故事按照什么情节续编,都要注意围绕一个明确的中心意思。如果是赞扬小白兔,就要突出小白兔助人为乐的好品德;如果想批评狐狸,就要突出狐狸见困难不邦,反而害别人的行为。总之,一个故事一定要表达一个中心意思。续编故事,还要注意与开头部分紧密相联,展开想象的部分一定要合情合理,符合整个故事的意思。

续写故事范文(篇十六)

能出来不容易,,记着加分呀1\\As the captain of China,Beijing has been the most popular city of china。

So more and more people want to visit think the best time to visit Beijing is spring ,for the weather of that time is very fine ,neither too hot nor too cold . The warm wind will make you fell people visit Beijing for it's beautiful sence and cultural inheritance .If you want to have a enjoyable journey ,I suggest you to pay a visit to the Great Wall,the Summer Palace ,the Olympic Park and many other you feel tired after one day's journey ,you can taste the "Zha Jiang Mian",a kind of traditional food in are many other things you can do in Beijing,as shopping in the big shopping mall,visit the different kinds park ,visit the"Si He Yuan"and so hope you can have a happy time in Beijing. 2\\Hello, Everyone! Today, I am going to tell all of you about my invention which is the a time machine as it 's been my dream in my life. Time machine allows people to travel back in time to prevent disaster to happen. It also allows people to tavel into dinstant future to find out solution for Incurable illness including cancer and aids. However, this machine may be abused by people to create chaos in our world or even pletely change our history. Therfore, security features are essential for my invention. The future invention of time machine will definately bring more advantages for human 's all, thank you!3\\I like reading,so I love many different kinds of books very much,because they not only broaden my horizons(视野)but also give me inspiration(灵感). Up to now I have read a lot of books,for example,magazines,novels and storybooks and so one of the books that I like best is "Harry Porter" . The story is very long but I am interested in it. Harry was such a brave and clever boy that he dared to fight against powerful enemies. His Z-shaped scar and magic stick brought me into a magical world. In fact, the fiction story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it. I think it's the best book I've ever read. 4\\My Favourite ProgrammeThere are thousands and thousands of wonderful programs on TV everyday. Of these, news program has always been my favorite. Almost everyday, I turn on TV at 6:30 . and wait early for the news program. This has almost bee apart of my lifeNews program contains a large amount of latest information from the most serious international political affairs to the most enjoyable football games. The most important feature of the program is its fast rhythm. Because of this fast rhythm, it can contain so much information in such a short like this program because I think this program is more than just a TV program itself. In fact, it is a way of munication. From this program, people can be well informed about the affairs both at home and abroad in time. The world is developing fast, but if you watch this program everyday, you will feel that you are always in pace with the development of the \\dear teacher: I am just writing to say thank you for teaching us things we need to learn, thank you for being there for us when we have any problems, thanks for your devotion and willingness to help us, thank you for the love you've shown to us. I am lucky to have a teacher like you. and no matter what kind of person i will bee, you will always have your influence on me. You taught me how to study, how to live and even how to be a man. From you I learned what kind of person i want to be and what should i get from life. this means everything to me. my dear teacher, no matter what you will always have a special place in my heart and i will remember what i have learned from you and carry the knowleges through my life! I will make good use of the school, teachers would also like to be able to impart a better learning methods, such as English will be able to make progress there is a greater interest in education teachers and thanked the ex Thank you! 6\\Dear students In some parts of our country, there are many children out of many students are too poor to go to don't have enought school things and student should have the right to go to shuold help them as possible as we can,such as we can send them some hope that they can have chance to get knowledge as the same as we doThanks for your joining! Students' Union。

续写故事范文(篇十七)

暑假到了,几个小伙伴又在大树下比绝招了。

要记住这篇文章哦:续写绝招300字,如果喜欢,可以经常来找我,我是你的“秀秀姐”。

姐姐给大家讲述:【续写绝招300字(2)】

三胖换了绝招,是做饺子,只见他左手把饺子皮往空中一抛,右手把饺子馅也紧接着向空中抛,饺子皮和饺子馅在空中会和,转眼的功夫,碟子上出现了圆鼓鼓的饺子,三胖做的饺子不但好吃,而且鲜美,小伙伴们都竖起了大拇指。

二福来了个猴子爬树,小伙伴们都连声夸道:“这真是太绝了,真是一个好绝招啊!”二福开心地向大家举了个躬。

然后,大家都把目光集中到了小柱子的身上,大家的眼睛似乎都在替小柱子加油。小柱子说:“我的绝招是,只要你们说出英语书上的中文,我就可以马上说出英文来。”三胖和二福不约而同地说:“今天是星期二。”小柱子脱口而出:“Today is Tuesday。”接着其他小伙伴也说了好几个中文,小柱子都一一答对了,真的跟英语书上一模一样。大家又像上一次一样称赞了小柱子。

从此,三胖、二福和小柱子成为了最好的朋友。

续写故事范文(篇十八)

故事的开头没有头绪,寥寥草草,蓦得想写上几句丁点可怜的话,却又不知从何讲起。

文笔流流畅畅,故事断断续续。如果书有语言,它会告诉你:“有些事,一旦开始,就回不了头。”

一本书,按厚度,概是三百多页,几小时的游光,晃过了笔者几年的闲情。

所以,才会有人每天去铺边偏僻的小书店里,去格调高而又开放空调的图书角,去人人都能欣赏找出仪式感的藏书会,去一路高高低低向着阳的精神世界寻找支柱,去满载喜悦的丰收谣里寻求慰籍……

轻点,当触摸细腻的软壳纸,怎也不忍,慢慢低头深吻,连绵却带温度。因为明白吻下的不是古板的字体,而是一个个带有幻彩的梦灵。时有欢笑,时有凄楚——对书,爱的狂烈!

“无数次,彻夜难眠,唯书君相伴,方可得安。——2021年1月28日。”

故事可以没有开始,但笔者总也不会落下在点点滴滴中无故画上不怎么圆满的句号。“如果生命变成只能用‘很多年过去了’来形容,还不如成全这个故事的结局。”

不论哪一场情节,哪一方的情感,纽丝牵挂。透过简短的一行,我能看见那位灵魂的舞者忘我地倾注,连笔尖的字符都欢喜的雀跃。

年少幼稚,读书似读一位先行者,他历经过生活的挫折与沧桑,却用笔续写勇敢与无畏;他收获过生活的成功与喜悦,但用笔续写坚持与向前!

一本书承载过往,一支笔书写深情。

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