托福作文范文(篇一)

在托福写作中，很多都尝试着去写让步段，但大部分考生的目的并不是让文章逻辑更加稳固，最大的目的是凑字数。那么真正的托福独立写作的让步段应该有什么作用?托福独立作文让步段应该如何写呢?

托福独立写作中，一个好的让步段会让文章的逻辑关系更严密，论证更丰富，更符合学术文章的要求。然而，很多考生尝试着写让步段，却也有凑字数的目的，无法发挥让步段的最佳威力。

到底怎样写出好的让步段?写还是不写?这是个问题很多同学有疑问，在一篇完整的独立作文中，让步段是不是一定要写呢?可不可以不写呢?让步段不是必须要写的，考生们可以在作文里只提出支持自己观点的两至三个正面的理由，这样也可以得出最后的结论。比如说是否同意新的科技产品发布，过段时间购买比马上购买要好，我们完全可以只提出过段时间购买的两个正面理由：

一. 价格会更便宜;

二. 产品的性能会更优化，这样整篇作文的论点还是明确的。

但是这篇文章当然也可以加上让步段，过段时间再买的坏处，或是马上购买的好处。这样会显得这篇文章论证的逻辑更加严密和全面，我们确实是进行了优劣对比后，才得出自己的观点。

尤其要注意的是，如果作文题目本身的观点的反面并不能够被忽略，那么建议让步段是一定要写的，这样显得我们得出自己的观点才不牵强。

比如作文题目Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.。我们可以写正面的两个观点，即玩电脑游戏的两个好处，但是我们同样不能忽略玩电脑游戏的坏处，所以就要写让步段了，不然观点就会显得过于偏激。

怎么写让步段?这又是个问题重中之重: 让一小步，进一大步!

让步段的最重要目的是对让步内容地不断削弱，以退为进，先提出坏处，然后再否定它。但是要记住的是让步段与支持段结构一致，也是有主题句，然后要对主题句进行展开解释。所以常见的套路是：主题句(不可否认A也有坏处)+解释(进一步解释说明坏处是什么)+让步(但是呢，这些坏处可以被解决掉，或是不太重要)

1.让步段主题句写法让步段的主题句一般是这样的：不可否认的是，A可能会有一些坏处。这里我们尽量语气要委婉些，下面是一些会用到的词组表达：——Admittedly / Undoubtedly / There is no denying that / It cannot be denied that——May / might / possibly / probably——One / one or two / a couple of / minor / several——To some extent / to some degree【常见错误】很多考生让步段用although开头，但是although后面只能跟一个从句，所以后面主题句的内容就没有办法展开了。

2. 让步如何实现让步段的表述可以参考以下模式：•让步方的好处比支持方的好处次要，或者支持方的坏处比起好处来次要。However, the advantages of A are more important than those of B.让步方优点与支持方优点比起来较少，或支持方缺点与优点比起来较少。However, the advantages of A are far more than those / that of , the advantages of A outnumber those / that of B.对方的好处，我方也可以有办法得到;我方的坏处可以有办法消除。However, the problem can be solved by …However, the negative influence can be eliminated by …

3. 让步段范例赏析Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.

主题句: Admittedly, playing computer games does harbor several drawbacks.

解释： Some children are addicted to playing computergames and ignore their studies, thereby suffering from poor academic performance. Also, over exposure to computer games with high concentration will sooner or later cause the impairment of their eyesight.

让步:However, most children are able to control themselves to play games in moderation. Also, their parents can intervene and supervise as well. Specifically, they could set strict rules on how much time their children could play games everyday and on what conditions they could do so, therefore it is completely unnecessary to forbid them to play computer games.

托福作文范文(篇二)

Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them withmodern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

作文范文：

It is a controversial problem that whether a city should preserve its old,historic buildings ordestroy them and replace them with modrn people think that a city shouldpreserve its old,historic buildings because they are the witness of the past,others think that a cityshould destroy them and replace them with modern buildings because they take up a lot of far as I am concerned, I prefer the previous idea that the old,historic buildings should be preserved.

Although the old,historic buildings would take up a lot of places and the modern society will need these places to building the new buildings such as skyscrapers,the old,historic buildings are thewitness of the is known that a modern city comes from the past history which had a valuable old,historic buildings could tell people what happened in the past andwhat was the past that,people could gain kownledge and experience to contribute to the modern society better.

The old,historic buildings could also be offered to can become the teaching basesfor is necessary for children to know the past,so that they can kown better about thepresent addition,children will be interested in the strange structure of the buildings andthe funny things in the buildings,which will promote the childern to study.

Finally,the preserved building would offer the important clues for archeologists to study the is more valuable to maintain them well than destroy them to build new ones.

In conclusion,the old,historic buildings should be preserved for the reasons is that theyare the witness of the past,then they could teach children something and last they are theimportant clues for archeologists.

托福作文范文(篇三)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specificexamples to support our answer.

作文范文：

Some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time, can laterbecome valuable experiences. I cannot agree with them more. There are numerous reasons why Ihold confidence on this opinion, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

Difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In the course of our life, we are going to facenumerous difficulties and obstacles, and each difficulty will help us grow up, and become avaluable lesson for the future. A toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows howto walk, and a child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. In addition,only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. We will never appreciateanything that comes so easy. Difficulties can make us feel stronger and be more confident for the future obstacles.

Furthermore, difficulties in our work can help us gain more experience and knowledge. Most ofthe times we can gain knowledge and experiences faster through experiencing difficulties in ourlife and trying to find a solutions to the perplexities that we face. There is a famous saying, nopain, no gain. For example, when we take on a new job that we do not have much experience in,the first few weeks can be extremely painful and we may feel enormous pressure and difficulties.

And we will try our best to adjust, to learn and to think, how to do this job better. The moredifficulties we feel, the harder we try to acquire the skills and knowledge to overcome it. Learningand this stage is extremely efficient and our problem-solving skills well increase. After weovercome more and more problems, we can become an experienced worker in this field and willbe able to take on more challenges. We will never fear that we will face the same kind of problemagain. This means that we have accumulated valuable experiences for the future.

In a word, a difficult experience is a gift that life gives us. We should appreciate it and take it as aprecious opportunity to gain knowledge and experience about our study, work and life.

托福作文范文(篇四)

Tips

1. Reading key

()Proposal: student opposing school’s plan of acquiring a new sculpture

()Reason 1: expensive, waste of money

()Reason 2: large, takes up too much space

2. Listening key

()The woman disagrees with it

()Reason 1: the school isn’t paying

() Details: a donor is paying for the sculpture, nice to have art on campus

()Reason 2: Paul is upset for not wanting to move

() Details: he and his friends are always on the lawn kicking a soccer ball, they don’t want to move, it’s sculpture vs. convenient for Paul

托福TPO1口语task3范文：

The writer of the letter opposes the university’s plan to acquire a new sculpture because the university’s financial condition is poor and the sculpture is so large that it’ll take up all the green space in front of the campus center. The woman in the conversation thinks the two reasons are totally unconvincing. The woman says it’s an anonymous donor who pays the bill of the sculpture not the university so there is no need to worry about the university’s financial condition. As for the point about the space, the woman thinks Paul, the writer of the letter,always plays soccer with his friends on the lawn where the sculpture will thinks Paul just doesn’t want to move to another place. For him, it’s convenience versus sculpture.

托福作文范文(篇五)

An age of popular entertainment stars, talk show hosts,hi-pop singers , or even the cyber celebrities from the populaceare the group who are enjoying great fame and fact to young university students , entertainment is even more prevalent and needed. But a question is how to entertain them better - performance by the student actors, the concert by professional musicians or a lecture by a professor? Based on the thorough analysis, the plan of students’ performance in theatre will be the first choice .

First , the plan of students’ performance in theatre, rather than the plan of concert by professionals and the one of lecture by professors ,will attract a wider range of students to engage in such an entertainment .

Second , my proposal rather than the counterpart ones will better suit students taste-more enjoyment will be hoped.

Last , considering the classical masterpieces needed in rehearse, my suggestions will cultivate the more genuine and deeper love for appreciation for aesthetic values.

托福作文范文(篇六)

Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities requirestudents to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.

托福写作满分作文范文：

The use of computer is increasingly popular in modern society. Some people think that thecomputer makes life more convenient and easier because they can compile documents, buy goodsthrough the Internet and do other works on the computer. Nevertheless, in my opinion, thecomputer makes life more complex and stressful. There are many instances supporting myopinion.

Before the computer was invented, people only need to learn the knowledge of mathematics,physics, chemistry and so on. However, today people have to learn how to operate the computer,to use a variety of software and if the computer does not work, people have to learn how to repairit. People have to learn not only the knowledge of software but also that of hardware. No endinglearning makes people exhausted and their life more complex.

The computer also makes life more stressful. The society in which we live is called "information society& quot ;. Thanks for the development of the computer, the rhythm of life are increasinglyrapid. The business men has so many meetings to attend, so many e-mails to deal with that theyhave no time to have his lunch. Some students have to work late on the computer to do the homework at night. There are more and more people struggling from the nervous sickness andcomplaining the "busy life".

The rapid development of the computer makes people feel stressful, too. The new generation of the software and the hardware, the update of them, all of these make people have to pay more andmore time and money on their computers.

Although the computer has become an indispensable part of our life, it can be concluded from theabove statements that the computer makes life more complex and stressful.

托福作文范文(篇七)

考试流程介绍

通常托福写作考试是接在托福口语考试后面，口语考试考完以后，会进入写作考试的界面。托福写作可分成两部分，即综合写作和独立写作：托福写作首先是综合写作20min，然后是独立写作30min。

考需要了解的问题：

综合托福写作的界面是什么?

独立托福写作的界面又是如何的?

左侧是给出的论述题目，右侧的空格输入内容，限时30分钟，300词，若提前答完并且检查无误以后，可以交卷。

考试注意事项介绍

综合写作

输入过程：

1.输入阅读部分

提升快速阅读能力，

首先文章主干(文章观点+论点)，其次理解阅读细节部分，

阅读技巧：开头段快速看背景，有利于理解文章观点，中间段看论点后细节部分，帮助更好理解文章论点

2.听力能力

捕捉听力文章主干(容易)，捕捉听力反驳细节(难度)，尽量的听到每一句反驳细节(更大难度)

3.输出文章

描述阅读和听力对应关系，描述听力内容，熟悉模版。描述过程中总结精炼阅读内容。

托福作文范文(篇八)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Throughout my life, I have been lucky enough to have a very good relationship with my parents. They have supported me, given me necessary criticism, and taught me a great deal about how to live my life. Parents can be very important teachers in our lives; however, they are not always the best teachers.

Parents may be too close to their children emotionally. Sometimes they can only see their children though the eyes of a protector. For example, they may limit a child's freedom in the name of safety. A teacher might see a trip to a big city as a valuable new experience. However, it might seem too dangerous to a parent.

Another problem is that parents may expect their children's interests to be similar to their own. They can't seem to separate from their children in their mind. If they love science, they may try to force their child to love science too. But what if their child's true love is art, or writing, or car repair?

Parents are usually eager to pass on their value to their children. But should children always believe what their parents do? Maybe different generations need different ways of thinking. When children are young, they believe that their parents are always rights. But when they get older, they realize there are other views. Sometimes parents, especially older ones, can't keep up with rapid social or technology changes. A student who has friends of all different races and backgrounds at school may find that her parents don't really understand or value the digital revolution. Sometimes kids have to find their own ways to what they believe in.

The most important thing to realize is that we all have many teachers in our lives. Our parents teach us, our teachers teach us, and our peers teach us. Books and newspapers and television also teach us. All of them are valuable.

托福作文范文(篇九)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

作文范文：

Although students stay with their classmates all time in school, parents are a more importantinfluence on a child’s success. I disagree with the statement that classmates are a more importantinfluence on a child’s success in school, because of the reasons as follows.

First of all, parents are the people who understand their own children best. They know thechildren’s good sides and bad habits. They can correct the children’s bad idea and make them giverid of the bad habits. So children can found a good base to get success in school. But classmatescan not do these work.

The other reason is that parents have experiences on a lot of matters. If children have problems,parents can give them their experiences to help them solve problems. If parents have no similarexperiences, they still can give their children some advice and make them avoid the wrong

directions. Classmates can also give children some help, but they do not have more experiencesthan parents. So their influence is less than that of parents.

Parents also have other important influence on their children’s success in school. Parents mayanalyze something in different ways and have different opinions from children. Classmates alsocan have different opinions on one thing, but they are at the same conditions with each other,their opinions may be similar or narrow. Children can learn more comprehensive knowledge abouton thing from their parents.

So, based on the above discussion, I think it is clear that parents are a more important influencethan classmates on a child’s success in school.

托福作文范文(篇十)

In the reading passage, the author raises that reading less literature has caused unfortunate effects on the reading public, the cultural general and literature itself. On the contrary, the professor strongly contradicts with it.

To begin with, according to the reading passage, the author mainly talks about reading less literature cannot provide readers with intellectual stimulation. By contrast, the lecturer disagrees with it and she reasons that a book doesn’t have to be literature to be intellectually stimulating. Science books, history and political analysis aren’t literature but they are often of high quality and some of those books are just as creative and well-written as novels and poems. So don’t assume that someone who isn’t reading literature isn’t reading a good book.

To be followed, the reading passage indicates that the culture is in decline. However, the speaker holds the opposite opinion and she says that people are not just spending less time in literature and they are spending less time with books in general. However, today, there are many culturally valuable material that isn’t written such as a brilliant song and good movie. People are not wasting their time when they listen to good songs and watch good movies. Those non-literal activities will not lower the culture. Even some of those creative forms can speak more directly to contemporary concerns than literature does.

Lastly, the writer in the reading part says that it is the readers’ fault to lead to the less support for literature. By comparison, the listening material presents a totally different opinion that it is the authors’ fault because today’s literature is intended to be difficult to understand. So don’t assume the earlier’s generations of readers would read a lot modern literature today.

满分托福综合写作范文

In 1990, new rules and guidelines were adopted in the United Kingdom that has changed the whole field of Archaeology in that country. The new guidelines improved the situation in all there areas discussed in the passage.

First, the new guidelines state that before any construction project can start, the construction site has to be examined by archaeologists to see whether the site is of archaeological interest or value. If the site is of archaeological interest, the next step is for the builders, archaeologists and local government officials to get together and make a plan for preserving the archaeological artifacts, either by building around them or by excavating and documenting them properly before the construction is allowed to proceed.

Second, an important part of the new guidelines is a rule that any archaeological work done on the construction site will be paid for by the construction company not by the government. The construction company has to pay for the initial examination of the site, and then for all the work carried out under the preservation plan. This is a whole new source of financial support. The funding from construction companies has allowed researchers to study a far greater range of archaeological sites than they could in the past.

Last, the new guidelines provide a lot of paid work for archaeologists, work that didn’t exist before. Expert archaeologists are now hired at all stages of the process to examine the site for archaeological value, then to help draw up the preservation plan to do the research in a professional scientific manner and finally to process the date and write reports and articles. The increased job and career opportunities in Archaeology have increased the number of professional archaeologists in Britain, which is now the highest it’s ever been.

托福作文范文(篇十一)

Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place wouldyou prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

托福作文满分范文：

I grew up in a small town and then moved to a big city, so I have experienced the good and badsides of both. I never thought that I would like living in a big city, but I was wrong. After ten yearsof living in one, I can't imagine ever living in a small town again.

Small towns and big cities both have some problems in terms of transportation. In a small town,you have to own a car to ensure a comfortable living. You can't get around without one becausethere isn't any kind of public transportation. Big cities generally have heavy traffic and expensiveparking, but there you have a choice of taking public transportation. It's not free, but it's oftencheaper than driving when you consider gas and time. Especially if you don't have a car, you'rebetter off in the city.

I love the excitement of big cities. Small towns have a slow pace. Large cities mean you have toadapt to a variety of situations, like finding a new route to work or trying a new restaurant. I enjoythat challenge very much. Another pan of the excitement of city living is the variety of culturalactivities available. There is a wide assortment of theatre, music and dance performancesavailable in big cities. These things are rare in small ones.

The final thing I like about large cities is the diversity of the people. The United States is made upof people of different races, religions, abilities, and interests. However, you seldom find such avariety of people in a smaller town. I think that living in an area where everyone was just like mewould quickly become boring.

Of course, security is a concern, and that's one area where small towns are superior to big cities.Still, I would rather be a bit more cautious and live in a large city than to feel secure but bored.

托福作文范文(篇十二)

托福综合写作25分范文一:

In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for four-fifths (80 percent) of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option. The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work. Hiring more staff to ensure that the same amount of work would be accomplished would not result in additional payroll costs because four-day employees would only be paid 80 percent of the normal rate. In the end, companies would have fewer overworked and error-prone employees for the same money, which would increase company benefits. For the country as a whole, one of the primary benefits of offering this option to employees is that it would reduce unemployment rate. If many full-time employees started working fewer hours, some of their workload would have to be shifted to others. Thus, for every four employees who went on an 80 percent week, a new employee could be hired at the 80 percent rate. Finally, the option of a four-day workweek would be better for individual employees. Employees who could afford a lower salary in exchange for more free time could improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time with their families, pursuing private interests or enjoying leisure activities.

托福综合写作25分范文二:

Irrigation, the artificial watering of land for agriculture, uses water from a number of sources: direct rainfall, direct stream flow, water stored in lakes and reservoirs, high-quality groundwater, brackish surface water, and even seawater. Water for irrigation is diverted from rivers and lakes or pumped underground. Different crops have different irrigation requirements, so there are many forms of irrigation and types of irrigation technology.

Various methods of surface irrigation deliver water to a field directly from a canal, well, or ditch. The surface technique of flooding large fields is widely used because of low capital costs and long tradition. Furrow irrigation, practiced since ancient times, involves digging numerous U-or V-shaped open furrows through irrigated land and introducing water into them from a channel at the top of a field. As with other surface techniques, water collects into ponds on the field. In surface-pipe irrigation, the water is piped to the field and distributed via sprinklers or smaller pipes.

Border irrigation is a type of surface irrigation that involves flooding land in long parallel strips separated by earth banks built lengthwise in the direction of the slope of the land. Water flows from the highest point in the field to the lowest. Basin irrigation is similar to border irrigation but includes earth banks constructed crosswise to those used for border irrigation, dividing a field into a series of basins that can be separately irrigated.

托福作文范文(篇十三)

Disagree

Most people are so busy that there is occasionally too much to do, so they must work on several projects at once. In fact, there are actually many advantages to working on two or more projects simultaneously as opposed merely to doing them one at a time.

Nowadays, there is simply not enough time to work exclusively on one project, so people must often take on two or more tasks together. Indeed, by doing several projects at once, a person can actually save time. For example, once I had to write an article for my school newspaper and study for a Chinese decided to do them both together, so I listened to my Chinese lessons on a CD while writing the did well on the test and submitted the article on time. Sometimes, one can save time by doing activities together and still do them well.

By working on several things at once, I find that I can focus more on the tasks at hand. This serves to enhance my performance, thereby letting me do work better and quicker. Last semester,I had to study for two tests and write a paper on the same was worried about all this work, so I concentrated solely on my turned off my cell phone, shut down my computer, and stayed in my room until I had completed all those tasks. Being focused exclusively on those projects enabled me to ignore the unimportant things and focus on what was crucial.

Lastly, while doing several things at once can be stressful, doing so successfully can be rewarding. By showing you are capable of multitasking, you can prove you skills and abilities to others. For instance, I volunteer at my school's library. The librarian once asked me to do two things simultaneously; catalog all the new books and complete a plan for a reading project for children. I managed to finish both jobs on time, which impressed the librarian so much that she recommended me for a summer job at the local library. Showing people you can do good work will always benefit you in the future. In conclusion, doing several projects at once can save time, enhance one's performance, and be rewarding in the benefits one receives. While multitasking might not be for everyone, I have found it to be an enjoyable and beneficial experience.