商业英语作文模板及范文 第一篇

Tuesday

Dear Xiao Wang:

I wonder if I could borrow your electronic dictionary for a few days. Now I am translating some important articles. There are many new words which I have to look up the dictionary usually. I just have a paper dictionary but of course it’s not as convenient as the electronic one, which has a bad effect upon my velocity of my translating. So I think your electonic dictionary is more suitable for me to complete my work. I promise that I must be very careful of your dictionary and make no damage done on it. Thank you very much!

Yours ever

Sam

商业英语作文模板及范文 第二篇

Reports

Resource Planning Manager: Assessment ofSuitability for Home-based Working

Introduction

The purpose of this report is to assess the suitabilityof my position as Resource Planning Manager forhome-based working.

Findings

My working pattern and that of my colleagues variesfrom week to week. During certain periods a large proportion of my time is spent doingfieldwork. This is followed by office-based work collating and recording the data collected. Oncethe results have been recorded, I proofread the colour copies of all reports and maps.

As regards communication with colleagues, department meetings are held once a fortnight. Atall other times, the individual members of the team communicate either face-to-face or byphone, depending on their location. Apart from official meetings, the same results can beachieved whether I am in the office or working elsewhere.

Conclusion

It is clear that I would be able to undertake the same duties while working from home for a largeproportion of my time. Clearly, some days would be spent in the office for face-to-facecommunication with colleagues. It would also be necessary to use the technical facilities ofthe office at times. However, in order to be able to work effectively from home, I would needto be provided with a networked computer and printer.

Recommendations

I would suggest that I should be given the necessary equipment to work partially from homefor a trial period. After this time, further consultation should take place in order to reassessthe situation.

商业英语作文模板及范文 第三篇

The Importance of the World Expo

The World Expo is basically different from ordinary exhibitions for trade and economic promotion．It is the highest-class exhibition in the world．It aims to promote the exchange of ideas and development of the world’s economy，culture，science and technology, to allow exhibitors to publicize and display their achievements and to improve international relationships．Accordingly，the World Expo with its 150-year history is regarded as the Olympic Games of economy，science and technology．

The World Expo is a global event，huge in space and content. The Expo does not discriminate(歧视)against exhibitors on any basis，creating an opportunity for the host country to publicize itself and improve foreign relations．The exhibitors demonstrate their most distinctive，latest and most advanced products．The host city can also use the World Expo to accelerate municipal construction(市政建设)．During the World Expo，visitors from all over the world gather in the host country，which is advantageous for business and industry．It is such a large—scale international activity that countries compete vigorously against each other to win the host right．To date, a total of 24 cities in 13 countries have hosted the World Expo，including Britain，France，America，Germany，Belgium，Canada，Japan，Australia，Spain，Italy，Korea，Portugal and China．

世博会的重要意义

世博会与那些为促进贸易和经济发展的普通会展有着根本的区别。它是世界上最高级别的博览会。它以促进思想交流，发展世界经济、文化和科技为目标，使参展者能够宣传和展示他们的成就并改善国际关系。因此，有着l50年历史的世博会被认为是经济、科学与技术的奥林匹克盛会。

世博会是一项全球性的活动，在规模和内容上堪称宏大。世博会不以任何理由歧视参展者，为承办国创造宣传自己、改善对外关系的机会。参展者展示他们最富特色、最新和最先进的产品。举办城市也可以利用世博会加速市政建设。在世博会期间，世界各地的参观者聚集到东道国，这对商业和工业都非常有利。它是一场规模如此盛大的国际活动，以至许多国家都为拥有举办权而相互展开激烈竞争。到目前为止，共有13个国家的24座城市举办过世博会，包括英国、法国、美国、德国、比利时、加拿大、日本、澳大利亚、西班牙、意大利、韩国、葡萄牙和中国。

商业英语作文模板及范文 第四篇

Good afternoon .I am of great hornor to stand here and introduce myself to you .First of all ,my english name is ...and my chinese name is ..If you are going to have a job interview ,you must say much things which can show your willness to this job ,such as ,it is my long cherished dream to be .

and I am eager to get an opportunity to do...and then give some examples which can give evidence to .then you can say something about your hobbies .

and it is best that the hobbies have something to do with the job.

What is more important is do not forget to communicate with the interviewee,keeping a smile and keeping your talks interesting and funny can contribute to the success.

I hope you will give them a wonderful speech .Good luck to you !

商业英语作文模板及范文 第五篇

1. Dear Mr. / Ms,

Thank you for your letter No. A-3 of 6th May, offering us 6 UI-4 Viewdatas.

We have passed it on to our Technical Department for their consideration.

We shall reply as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully

尊敬的先生/小姐

谢谢您五月六日标号为A-3的来信，该信向我们提供6 UI-4 图像数据。

我们已把该信转给了技术部，备他们考虑。

我们将尽快回信

你诚挚的

Mr/Ms,

We have today received with thanks information concerning transactions on the New York Wheat Exchange which will be made full use of by our research department.

We look forward to further cooperation with you.

Yours faithfully

尊敬的先生/小姐

我们今天收到了有关纽约小麦交易所的业务信息，非常感谢，我们的研究部门将充分利用这些信息。

期待与你进一步合作。

你诚挚的

商业英语作文模板及范文 第六篇

Thank you for your letter of 2 November. We are delighted to hear that you are to pleased with the refurbishment of your hotel. As your know .in our line of work, we depend on good ,reports about our projects to win further business. Our clients always shop around and look for references before committing themselves. With your permission, we would like to use your hotel as a reference when we discuss similar refurbishments in the hotel industry . Would you agree to our suggesting that future clients should call you? It would also be most helpful if we could occasionally bring a client to look at your hotel . We would , of course , stay overnight at ’ll call you next week to hear your reaction. Thanks again for you kind words.

从11月2日的来函得悉阁下对贵饭店的整修感到满意，此消息对本公司实是一鼓励。 设计行业重视声誉，客人在选择设计公司时必然会有所比较。如蒙允许，本公司欲请贵饭店作推荐人，证明有关整修的质素。未知可否让其他客户来电垂询? 此外，如获允准间或联同客户前来参观贵饭店整修，定必有莫大帮助。当然，本公司会预订房间，至少留宿一晚。

商业英语作文模板及范文 第七篇

Our country is known as “nation of the etiquette” the laudatory name, the advocation etiquette is our country people's traditional moral ancient times till now, our country's etiquette standard is the Chinese unique civilization symbol, is Chinese nation moral excellence etiquette, took one traditional moral excellence, has the historical inheritance, has vitality which does not fade.

The etiquette involves which in the commercial contact are very many, but from basic speaks between the human and human's contact, therefore we are used to the commercial etiquette limits art which associates for the commercial personnel.

As the name suggests, the commercial etiquette is refers in the people commerce contact the suitable etiquette standard, is in the commercial contact, by the procedure, the way which certain, is established by usage indicated respects opposite party the process and the ritual stems from vulgarly, popularizes for the commercial etiquette operationality, how is should do, how shouldn't in the commercial contact “restrains oneself, respects other people” to be able to cause the people with ease happily to only “considers for other people” is the commercial contact, also is between the human and the human the normal contact basic said the study and the correct utilization commerce etiquette not only is a person intrinsic tutelage and the quality external performance, also is in the human communication the suitable one kind of art, one human relations way or the human relations method, are in the human communication are established by usage show respect, the friendly custom on in the human communication communicates mutually certainly must grasp the commercial etiquette the from individual angle that, grasps certain commercial etiquette to be helpful in enhances people's own tutelage, beautifies own, the beautified can the very effective promotion social contact, the improvement interpersonal relationship, but also is helpful to the purification social , a smile, a concern all can give human's by mind in warmth, and may cause own mood to be also happy along with it, why not?

商业英语作文模板及范文 第八篇

收到一封信，收信人首先注意到的是信的格式。美观整洁的书信格式会给收信人留下深刻的印象。

标准的商业书信由以下三个部分组成：

1·信头

2·信文

3·信尾

信 头

在信和传真中，信头所占页面一般不超过三分之一。

1发信人地址

一般来说，商业书信的首页都使用印有公司抬头的信笺，抬头上标明公司名称、地址、电话和传真号码。传真也一样，信笺上印有抬头，并采用固定的信头格式。

传真发信人的'地址位于传真纸页首固定的信头格式内。

2发信日期

日期的书写有以下两种模式：“12 June 1998”[日-月-年]或“June 12, 1998”[月-日-年]

日期不能缩写，序数词不能使用缩写形式，月份也不能缩写。

3收信人地址

收信人地址包括收信的全名和职衔，以及公司的全称和地址。礼貌性的称呼要使用得当。

传真中收信人地址一般打在信头格式相应的空格内。

5指定收信人姓名

在商业书信和传真中，指定收信人姓名这一栏现已不常用。收信人地址的首行已经写明收信人姓名，因而不一定需要专门指定收信人姓名这一栏。

如果要使用指定收信人姓名这一栏，就要从页面左边空白处写起，在收信人地址下面空两行。

6称 呼

商业信件和传真常用以下方式开头：

·Dear Mr/Mrs/Miss/Ms Wang(表示写信人知道收信人的姓名和性别);

·Dear Sir或Dear Madam(表示写给一位有具体职衔的人，如Sales Manager,

Chief Accountant等，而且写信人知道对方的性别);

·Dear Sir or Madam(表示写给一位有具体职衔而写信人又不知其性别的人);

·Dear Sirs (表示写给一家公司，没有明确的收信人)。

称呼中的第一个单词和其他所有名词的第一个字母均须大写。

7事 由

写明事由可以使收信人对信件或传真的内容一目了然。

信 文

全齐头式(full-blocked)书信，每个段落都从左边空白处开始写起，右边空白处必须尽量对齐，不能把单词断开。

在齐头式书信或传真中，信文也是从左边空白处开始写起，在事由下面空一行。

信 尾

传真的信尾一般都很简短(通常只有结尾敬辞和署名)，而书信的信尾内容则相对较长。

结尾敬辞

一般来说，书信和传真结尾敬辞都使用“Yours sincerely”或“Yours faithfully”。称呼为“Dear Mr/Mrs/Miss/Ms…”时结尾用“Yours sincerely”。称呼为“ Dear Sir/Sir or Madam/Sirs”时结尾则用“Yours faithfully”。

信末签名

写信人既可代表本人签名，也可代表公司签名。如：

Yours faithfully

For precision Airconditioning Co (Pte) Ltd

商业英语作文模板及范文 第九篇

Charm of intonation

Answering a phone in a clear and pleasant tone can show the speakers professional demeanor and amiable your partner cant see your face, your joy or irritation will come through your you call, your tone should be smooth, soft and serene. Then, if you can talk to each other with a smile, it will make your voice more friendly and chew gum or eat while youre on the phone.

Decent questions and answers

The call should be answered immediately after the second bell rings

When the other party should take the initiative to identify the company or the name of the Department and its name, should not pick up the phone asked: “ Hello, who are you looking for? ” also, to call people need to leave a message should be clear to report the name, unit number, and a message in simple end of the telephone conversation, usually made by the calling party, then politely said goodbye to each matter what the reason for the telephone call, the party shall be responsible for the redial.

Telephone Message

In business complaints, it is most common to fail to return calls in a timely order not to lose every opportunity to clinch a deal, some companies even make telephone calls to be within an hour of the provisions of the within 24 hours of the phone message to reply, if you call back, just in case the other party is not in, but also to leave a message, indicating that you have called you really cant call back personally, you should trust someone else.

Pay attention to jet lag

Before making a call, make sure the difference between the time difference and the working hours of each country. Dont make a phone call on the day off so as not to influence the rest of the not to call home even if the customer has told you the phone number at home.

Use the telephone properly

In America you can sell the goods to a person be strangers to each other by telephone, while in Europe, Latin American and Asian countries, telemarketing or on the phone for a long time to talk business on the best way to develop good business relationships is to negotiate face to face with customers, while the telephone is mainly used to arrange course, once the two

商业英语作文模板及范文 第十篇

Electronic mail,or e-mail for short,is an entirely new way of communication by means of fast,inexpensive,highly efficient and convenient,e-mail is so popular in developed countries that it is difficult to imagine modern life without it.

Nowadays, millions of computers all over the world have been connected to form a global network called can send or receive by e-mail a variety of information and documents such as letters,papers, video and audio files to anyone in over 170 countries in a short harriers are not a problem, because internet software is capable of translating your mail into whatever language you want. you can also store,,edit,compile and search your e-maih most importantly,e-mail helps us overcome space and time limitations in communication.

With the rapidly growing popularity of computers and the fast expansion of the information highway,wider and wider applications of internet e-mail will be developed and e-mail will soon become an indispensable means of communication.

商业英语作文模板及范文 第十一篇

Dear

Thank you for your comments.

A copy of your letter has been forwarded to the author for his response. I am sure you will be hearing from him in the near future. I am pleased that you found our article informative and hope that you will continue to read our publication. Should you have any comments or questions in the future,please do not hesitate to write to this office.

We value our readership and are proud to have you as a member of our family of subscribers.

商业英语作文模板及范文 第十二篇

Gentlemen：

This is to inform you that we are unable to make delivery on the above referenced purchase order on the date indicated.

We should have our merchandise ready to ship within 10 days of the original delivery date and we hope that you can hold off until that time.

We did want to inform you of this delay as soon we were advised in order to give you as much time as possible to make alternate arrangements， if necessary. We can assure you， however， that if your order remains in force we will expedite delivery to you as soon as we have received the merchandise.

Please accept our apology for this delay and thank you for your understanding.

商业英语作文模板及范文 第十三篇

Dear Mr Zampieri

With reference to your letter dated 14 June, in which you requested information about A Cut Above, please find enclosed details about our company and the services we offer.

Our aim is always to provide our clients with the best possible combination of food, entertainment and location. By choosing A cut Above, you can relax and enjoy your special occasion while we do all the work. Events catered for by A cut Above include corporate functions such as conventions and Christmas balls and also family celebrations such as birthdays, weddings and anniversaries.

A Cut Above offers a variety of services from simply providing a gourmet menu to helping you choose the right venue and organise entertainment. We specialise in using our experience to meet your nees. To help us achieve this aim, we always arrange a meeting with a new client well before the date of any event in order to discuss the various possibilities.

As you can appreciate, we are unable to give quotations before our initial briefing with a client as price per head vaires with choice of menu.

To arrange a meeting or for any further information, please do not hesitate to contact myself or Elena Polidoro on 0123 4578.

A Cut Above look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Sinead Walsh

商业英语作文模板及范文 第十四篇

Good morning, Dear Professors:

It’s my honor to be here to introduce myself to you. My name is , I come from ,the capital of Province. I graduated from the Mathematics department of Zhengzhou University in July , was born in an ordinary family, and my parents are f . My is a teacher , working in university of Technology .

My family were delighted with my becoming a fresh man in September I had a wonderful time at the Zhengzhou University in the next 7 years. Luckily, I obtained the bachelor and master degree , and my ability of self-learning , logical thinking and logical reasoning have been greatly improved at the same time.

In the past years, I’ve worked at college as a teacher. During my work career, I found my professional knowledge gradually sneak away from I have to go back to my study. Now I realize my specialty and what I really ’s the place where I can make my dream come true. Thank you very much.

商业英语作文模板及范文 第十五篇

文体介绍

人员出访，常常需要事先与要见面的人或公司进行预约。这类预约e-mail较易写，只要做到清楚、简洁、礼貌就行。它一般包括下列内容：

（1）请求约会并说明原因。

（2）建议确切的约会时间和地点等。如果你的时间比较充裕，预约时可给出你可接受的时间由对方决定。

（3）请对方答复并进行确认。

回复这类电子邮件可分为接受和拒绝两种。接受的内容一般有：表明来信收悉；表示接受；重述具体时间、地点等；表达希望会晤或感谢的心情。拒绝的内容一般包括：表明来信收悉；说明拒绝的.原因；致歉。

当要变更预约时，应说明变更的原因，同时致歉。

实用范例

（1）

subject:

dearmr。smith

。s。，。

。，。，-mail。

sincerelyyours，

lilei

主题：请求约见

亲爱的史密斯先生：

我预定这个月底出差赴美，希望届时能到贵公司访问你。

我预计在8月20日或其前后抵达华盛顿，大约停留1周。若方便的话，望你能挤出时间在8月22或23日与我见面，我将十分感谢。假如这两天都不行，请以电子邮件回复并告知其他日期。

先在此谢谢你的大力协助，期待不久在华盛顿与你见面！

你真诚的

广州贸易公司

（2）

subject:urgent-

dearmr。zhang，

’sfactoryonaugust2，。

i’-minuterequest，:00am。，-mailasap?

。thankyou。

商业英语作文模板及范文 第十六篇

Dear

Everyone here at [name of firm] was saddened to learn of [name of employee] sudden illness.

We know that this came on without any warning and while the proceeds from the group policy insurance coverage will defray a substantial amount of the medical costs， you may have need for some additional financial assistance to see you through this difficult time.

Please do not hesitate to call on us if you need our assistance in this area. We consider [name of employee] to be one of our most valuable employees and a fine individual as well and would be most appreciative if you will let him know that we are all thinking of him

商业英语作文模板及范文 第十七篇

We assure you that we will always provide you with the best service. We will do our best to serve you. We will be happy to serve you at any time.

We hope you will forgive us for the trouble we have caused you. We are sorry for the trouble. We believe you will forgive us for the inconvenience.

We hope you can forgive us for the trouble I believe you will ignore this trouble. We are very sorry. Please forgive me for the trouble I have caused you in this matter.

Please forgive the inconvenience caused by this clerical error. We apologize to you. We ask you to accept our regret for the clerks' mistake.

We apologize for the inconvenience caused to you by this mistake. We frankly admit that we are at fault, and we are eager to make up for the consequences.

中文翻译：

我们向您保证，我们将始终为您提供最好的服务我们将竭尽所能为您服务我们将很高兴随时为您服务我们希望您原谅我们给您带来的麻烦我们很抱歉给您带来的麻烦我们相信您会原谅我们的不便，我们希望您能原谅我们的麻烦，我们希望您能原谅这样的麻烦，我们相信您会忽略这一困扰，我们非常抱歉，请原谅我在这件事上给您带来的麻烦。请原谅这一笔误给您带来的不便，我们向您致歉。我们要求您接受我们对员的错误的遗憾，我们对您造成的不便之处我们对这个错误给你方造成的不便表示歉意。

我们坦率地承认我们有过错，我们急于弥补后果。

商业英语作文模板及范文 第十八篇

Dear Mr. XXX,

You are recommended to us by Bank of China in New York that you are one of the leading sportswear dealers. Right now, we are particularly interested in importing various ranges of sportswear.

We are large dealers in textiles here and believe there is a promising market in our area for moderately priced sportswear.

It would be helpful if you could send us your latest catalogue and price list. If the quality of the goods comes up to our expectation and the delivery date is acceptable, we can probably let you have regular orders.

We are looking forward to your earliest reply.

Sincerely,

商业英语作文模板及范文 第十九篇

商务英语考试证=中，掌握写作技巧，可以帮助自己在商务英语中级作文考试中拔得头筹。下面介绍商务英语中级作文范文，希望可以帮助到大家。

Dear Sirs,

We have received your letter dated April5 and very much regret the difficulties you are having with the electronic counters supplied to your order No. 865

All our counters are made to be identical in design and performance and it is difficult to understand why some of those sold to your customers should have given trouble. From what you said it would seem that a number of the counters included in the latest batch escaped the examination we normally give to all counters in our inspection deparment, where each counter is individually examined before being passed into store.

We understand your problem, but regret that we cannot accept your suggestion to take back all the stock unsold from the batch about which you complain. Indeed, there should be no need for this since it is unlikely that the number of faulty counters can be very large. Of course we will be glad to replace any counter found to be unsatisfactory, and we are prepared to allow you a special discount of 5% to compensate for your trouble on this particular batch.

We trust you will accept this as being a fair and reasonable solution of this matter.

Yours faithfully,

Peter Wood

商业英语作文模板及范文 第二十篇

Thanks for seeing me off at the airport. I really appreciate it. No problem, it's my pleasure. I am glad you had a chance to visit our headquarters, and hope you can come back soon. We should be back in about three months. We'll have another corporate meeting next quarter. Will you be in the area at that time? I should be.... Remember to let me know when your flight is coming in when you come. I'll come and pick you up at the airport. You're too kind. Here we are at the terminal, what airline are you flying with? Um...Let me look at the ticket. Oh, that's right, China Air. China Air is in terminal B, this is the international terminal, so all you have to do is walk straight through those doors and turn to your left, you should be able to see the check-in counter. Thanks again for all your help. If you're ever in the Michigan area, be sure to look me up. Yes. Let's keep in touch

您来机场送机，我感激不尽。不客气。我很高兴您有机会来拜访我们总部，希望不久以后您能再来。我们大概三个月后会回来。下一季度我们还有一个公司会议。那时候您会在公司吗？我应该在公司。您来时请务必让我知道您的航班时间。我将在机场接机。您太客气了。我们到航站楼了。您是坐哪家航空公司的航班？嗯，我看一下机票。是中国航空。中国航空在B号航站楼。这是一个国际航站楼，所以您需要一直走至穿过那边的门，然后向左转。到时您就能看见登机台。再次感谢您的全部帮助！ 如果您去密歇根，请务必来找我。好的，保持联系。

商业英语作文模板及范文 第二十一篇

Good morning, my name is jack, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview, I would like to answer whatever you may raise, and I hope I can make a good performance today, eventually enroll in this Pstigious university in September.

Now I will introduce myself briefly,I am 21 years old,born in Heilongjiang province ,northeast of china,and i am currently a senior student at Beijing XX major is packaging I will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in the past 4 years,I spend most of my time on study,I have passed CET4/6 with a ease. And I have acquired basic knowledge of packaging and publishing both in theory and in practice. Besides, I have attend several packaging exhibition hold in Beijing, this is our advantage study here, I have taken a tour to some big factory and these I have a deeply understanding of domestic packaging industry.

Compared to developed countries such as us, unfortunately, although we have made extraordinary progress since 1978,our packaging industry are still underdeveloped, mess, unstable, the situation of employees in this field are awkward. But i have full confidence in a bright future if only our economy can keep the growth pace still. I guess you maybe interested in the reason itch to law, and what is my plan during graduate study life, I would like to tell you that pursue law is one of my lifelong goal,I like my major packaging and I won't give up.

I can not describe it well, but I know I am optimistic and confident. Sometimes I Pfer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but I am not lonely, I like to chat with my classmates, almost talk everything ,my favorite pastime is

volleyball,playing cards or surf online. Through college life,I learn how to balance between study and entertainment. By the way, I was a actor of our amazing drama club. I had a few glorious memory on stage. That is my pride.

商业英语作文模板及范文 第二十二篇

A number of employees clearly suffer from a lack of motivation as a result of dissatisfaction in one or more areas of their work. The key findings are outlined below:

Staff feel undervalued by the company, both on a financial and a personal level. It is generally felt that the companyˇs competitors offer higher levels of remuneration. The perception that the managers are unappreciative of staff efforts is particularly noticeable in the Sales Department.

Certain employees feel under-challenged. The company is clearly not exploiting its human resources.

There appears to be a breakdown of communication in the Production Department. The confusion and resultant ill-feeling towards managers has the potential to disrupt the production cycles.

Recommendations

We strongly recommend the following measures:

An evaluation of job profiles throughout the company to assess whether skills could be utilised more efficiently

A review of the current salary structure involving the comparison with similar organisations

It is also essential to investigate and take action regarding the communication in the Production and Sales Department.

商业英语作文模板及范文 第二十三篇

Look at the letter below. Rewrite it as an individual letter to a customer - which would certainly be necessary if the customer had ordered ten items at this price and not just one.

The first lines are done for you below.

Dear Customer：

We regret that your order is being returned to you due to the reason(s) checked below. Unfortunately， prices of equipment are constantly changing and these changes are often not reflected in our advertising due to the months between preparing advertising copy and its publication.

Shipping and handling are also variable， so please include the proper charges if that is the reason that your order cannot be processed. It is always best to call us when more than one item is requested， to obtain exact shipping costs for your order.

From time to time items are discontinued and， though this is beyond our control， we will be happy to suggest products which are suitable. Please give us a call on our inquiry line (304) 739-8723.

Thank you for your patience， and we hope to serve you when the problem with your order noted below is corrected.

(_) Item requested is no longer available.

(_) Item requested is not yet available

(_) Invalid credit card number. Please check your card.

(_) Insufficient postage and/or handling. Please add $____ for shipping.

(*) Price change. The new price is $

(_) Other：_________________________________

Additional notes： The product has been upgraded - the new version performs better than the original version， which has been discontinued.

Begin your letter like this：

12 April 19——

Dear Mr Stafford，

Your order #767 999 for ten CX 99 processors

I am sorry to inform you that we have been unable to process this order and I am returning it to you for your attention.

商业英语作文模板及范文 第二十四篇

你是一家国际大公司的人力资源部经理。你刚刚任命弗朗西斯卡女士为公司总部的销售经理。

给总部的全体员工写一个字数为40-50的备忘录：

（1）宣布对弗朗西斯卡女士的任命。

（2）说明她开始工作的具体时间。

（3）要求总部员工准备欢迎她。

老师建议：

首先，我们要了解一篇memo的基本格式：

MEMORANDUM

From: Olive HR Manager To: All staff

Date: 12 June, 20xx Subject: Appointment of Francisco

Here we announce the appointment of Mrs. Francisco as our new Sales Manager of the Headquarter. She will be starting her job next Monday morning. There will be a small welcome party by 9:00 that day so everyone please be on time.

其次，写一篇作文，我们说任何形式的BEC作文，都要考虑如下因素：

Who is going to read my memo?

What has the reader already known about this?

What does the reader need to know?

How is the reader going to respond my memo?

第三，memo尽量使用短句，这样表达清晰，结构紧凑。

第四，字数超，memo使用词汇要简短干练，确保大家都看得懂。

第五，写memo前要考虑清楚字句的组织，用精练的语言，有头有尾地把memo完成。