高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第一篇

Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms,all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the café drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool,which is open all day and free of charge.

All are wele!

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二篇

读后续写：阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afermoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove me up to his farm in Pecos.

His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. xxxThe day starts at dawn on my farm,xxx he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper,xxx Uncle Paul cried, xxxand keep to the track so that you don't get lost!xxx “OK!xxx my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late aftermoon sunmixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven ( 编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

满分范文

Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the 1eft to avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, Hoid on! All of a sudden the horse began to run My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.

We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第三篇

写作内容：

1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名( ratings)进行消费的现象；

2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

写作要求：

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3.不必写标题

评分标准：

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

满分范文

Possible version one:

As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.

There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.

Possible version two:

Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay

for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第四篇

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

满分范文

Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.

On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.

In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.

Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.

At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第五篇

假定你是李华，在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?

写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陈述自己的理由 3.提出至少2条建议。

范文： Hi, TigerMom ,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .

So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第六篇

1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain);

2. 活动的过程;

3. 你对于这次活动的评论。

注意： 1. 词数120左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.

It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第七篇

My weekendLast weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第八篇

New Year's Day is one of important days for many people in the world during the year. Most people spend the New Year's Day in hotels. January 1st is considered as the New Year's Day. Most companies, shops, school, and government offices are closed during that time. People prepare for New Year's Day from late December.

First, people spend a few days to clean their houses completely. Some families then put up some new painting from November to be sent in January. The New Year's meal is also prepared from the end of December. During the New Year's Day, people usually do not cook and relax at home. On New Year's Eve, it is common to have a bag dinner with family members or friends at home or in hotels and hear bells which informs us of the coming New Year. On New Year's Day, people greet each other.

Some people wear new coats and visit temples to pray for happiness and health through out the New Year. Children are busy with getting the gifts from their parents and relatives.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第九篇

In recent years,Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Many people express themselves, exchange ideas and deliver information by Wechat.

There are a number of reasons for Wechat to be known. To begin with, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication,which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. Next,Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. Furthermore, convenience also accounts for its popularity. It is available everywhere and at any time.

However, problems exist meanwhile. Firstly, our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat. As a result, we can be in trouble. Moreover, it may make communicating with others face to face less. To make the matter worse,relationship could break down. Last but not the least, our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study.

That’s all. There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第十篇

Last Friday，all the students in our school were organized to visit the exhibition on China＇s achievements. We watched many of chinas outstanding achievements over the past five years. While visiting, we were excited and proud of what our nation has achieved in the last five years. Fuxing, FAST, the supercomputer and QUESS impressed us deeply.

After visiting the exhibition, we had a class meeting in the classroom. We worked in groups and delivered a short speech in turn, sharing our thoughts on what we had seen. Both the exhibition and the class meeting are memorable experiences, which encourage us to work hard and make contributions to our country.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第十一篇

Dear Ieslie：

As scheduled, we will have a Chinese lesson next weekend .Considering our students are preparing for their final exam,I suggest we have the lesson in the park near our school.

The mainly course of our class is to learn the poem of Tang 's universally acknowledged that the poem of Tang Dynasty is one of the solid foundations of our culture. A large number of talent poets showed their view about the society and expressed their satisfaction with the beauty of our motherland. You can broaden your horizon and have a better understanding of our colorful culture through this study.

Knowing the history of Tang Dynasty is better for you before having class. It's the society that creates the brilliant poem.

Yours

Li Hua.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第十二篇

I went on a gathering with my friends last weekend, and it was a fantastic experience.

We arrived at the gathering site early in the afternoon, when it was still very hot. We walked through the bushes and looked for fruits and vegetables to gather. I competited with my friends to see who gathers with the most speed and quality. In the end, all of us not only gained many fresh and tasty fruits, but also learnt efficient ways to gather crops.

Personally, this was a very meaningful experience and I had a lot of fun. I had a great time with my friends.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第十三篇

Ways of making friends Everyone needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. First of all, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you always sure to get a smile in return. You should think more of others than of yourself and try your best to make a stranger fell at home. Think as you are in his position. Try to remember others' names, which will make them fell that they have made an impression on you. If you don't agree with others,don't argue but discuss with them. Finally,don't believe those who leave their friends when they are in trouble because “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”

交友的方式，每个人都需要朋友，所以如何结交真正的朋友对任何人都很重要。首先，你必须对别人友好。对别人微笑，你一定会得到微笑的回报。你应该多想想别人的想法，努力去做一个陌生人在家里。认为你在他的位置。试着记住别人的名字，这会让他们觉得他们给你留下了一个印象。如果你不同意别人的话，不要和他们讨论。最后，不要相信那些在遇到困难时就离开他们的朋友的人，因为“患难的朋友才是真正的朋友”。

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第十四篇

Different Job Outlooks

Nowadays university graduates have different job outlooks. For most of them, to find a job with satisfactory pay is their most important wish while majority want to be self – employed. However, a certain number of graduates are not in a hurry to hunt for jobs. They are just waiting for better chances.

Toward this point of view, some experts warn that it is not wise to be just waiting. They advise that graduates should find a regular, full-time job as quickly as possible so that they can earn money to support themselves and get working experience, which will help to find a better position later. Moreover, it might be more difficult to find a satisfactory job next year.

【译文】

不同的工作观

如今大学毕业生的就业前景不同。对于大部分孩子来说，要找到一个令人满意的支付工作是他们最重要的希望，而多数是希望能够自我-就业。但是，一定数量的毕业生不急于寻找就业机会。他们只是在等待更好的机会。对这一观点，一些专家警告说，这是不明智的只是等待。他们提醒毕业生应该找到一个正规，全，兼职工作，以便尽可能快that they可以挣钱来支持自己和get工作经验，这将有助于找到更好的位置，以更高。此外，它可能更难以找到一份称心如意的工作明年。

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第十五篇

讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为

40％的同学认为

1．不应该收门票

2公园是公众休闲的地方

3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象

1．应收门票，但票价不要太高

2．支付园林工人工资

3．购新花木

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。

2．词数：100左右。

3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee

Dear editor

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第十六篇

Dear Sir or Madame：

I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.

I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 20xx Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.

It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?

Thank you very much.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第十七篇

As is known to us all, Micro-blog is a new tool in the era of mass media, and the status of micro-blog in people’s life is more and can’t be replaced today. Many people tend to take advantage of micro-blog to describe their everyday experience, and through the network to share with their friends. Moreover, through the micro-blog we can quickly understand the various news. Indeed, to some extent, such as efficient as a fashion.

However, micro-blog will inevitably have a negative impact on some aspects. Micro-blog on freedom of speech, some of the information was distorted and misleading. What is more, some people in micro-blog release some fraudulent information, and this brings certain threat on people’s property safety. In addition, some unhealthy information on Micro-blog, to some extent, affects the healthy development of young people.

As far as I am concerned, we can’t deny that micro-blog plays an important role in our lives more grade. On the other hand, indulged in micro-blog will do harm to our study and life. Therefore, we should use micro-blog reasonably, and let the micro-blog serve us better.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第十八篇

Dear Manager,

I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint.

Yesterday I bought an electric fan in your shop, but when I got home and turned it on, it didnt work. So I took it back and talked to the assistant about the problem. To my surprise, instead of helping me solve the problem, the man, in a rude manner, refused to examine it.

Generally, your shop is well-known for good service and that is why I bought the electric fan in your shop. I was really upset to find that such a thing should have occurred in your shop.

I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第十九篇

There is no consensus of opinions among people about whether young people should live with their parents.

Some people are for the view that they prefer to live with their parents. While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that they need independent life. As far as I am concerned, the latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.

First of all, we should make a living by ourselves and live independently.

Furthermore, we can seek greater freedom and get a place of our own, in which we can do whatever we want. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, we have enough chances to face the society by ourselves, no matter what kind of experience we will have.

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that living alone is necessary.

【译文】

关于年轻人是否应该与父母一起生活的观点，人们没有达成一致。

有些人持更喜欢与父母一起生活的观点。然而还有一些人持有相反的观点，坚定认为他们需要独立的生活。就我而言，后者的'观点从多种意义上来说更可取一些。理由很明显。 首先，我们应该独立谋生，独自生活。另外，我们可以获取更大的自由并拥有我们自己的空间，做自己想做的事情。在所有的支持论据中，有一个是最有力的。那就是我们可以有足够的机会来独自面对社会，不管我们会拥有什么样的经历。

根据以上所述很自然得出结论，那就是独立生活是有必要的。 2015年高考英语写作答题模板及范文——提纲作文

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二十篇

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.

The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.

All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二十一篇

Every year, there are tens of thousands of people looking for a job. For a successful job search, job interview is the most important part. But how to prepare for the job interview? Here are some important tips.

Firstly, find a company you want to work for. Then, your understanding of the company will make the interviewers know that you value this opportunity so much and let them employ you. Secondly, review your resume and imagine what the interviews may ask you.

Then think about how you should answer the questions. Thirdly, carefully pick out what to wear. Since the job interview is the only time to sell yourself, you ought to make a good impression on the interviewers. Wear tidy suits and keep your shoes clean. Last, have a good sleep before the night of the job interview, because no interviewers will like an interviewee who looks tired and exhausted.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二十二篇

Dear Sir or Madam,

How are you doing? I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager, who is crazy aboutdifferent cultures around the world. Recently, I learned in your officialwebsite that a volunteer is needed for an exhibition of Chinese traditionalpainting in London. So I am writing to apply for this position.

Here are three main reasons why I am the best choice for you. First andforemost, having lived in London for half a year before as an exchange student,I am undoubtedly good at EnglIsh; as a result, it is a piece of cake for me tointroduce everything to international friends. Besides, I learned Chinesepainting for more than ten years in my childhood; therefore, I do know a lotabout this great art form. Last but certainly not least, as vice monitor of ourclass, I am kind, patient and always ready to help others.

Hopefully, this wonderful chance would be offered to me. I have theconfidnece that I will have a great time. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二十三篇

1. 外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)

2. 象征意义

3. 价格

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials.

hey look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!

Yours,

Li Hua

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二十四篇

某校开展xxx研究性学习xxx，要求学生设计一下未来的居室。下面请以xxxMy Dream Housexxx为题，描述你设计的居室。内容要点如下：

我梦中的住房将是建在海边的一幢别墅。前后有两个庭院，前面是一个四季都开满鲜花的花园，后面是一个游泳池，因为我的家人喜欢游泳。

第一层进门有一个大厅，大厅的右边有一个客厅，平时大家可以在这里放松休息，看电视，娱乐等。左边有个电脑房，还有一毡属于我的书房。

第二层有6间卧室，每一间卧室都有浴室。

别墅配有现代化设备，如电脑控制的安全报警器，电梯，可视电话，自动门等。

参考词汇: 书房study 安全报警器security alarm 可视电话vision phone

自动门automatic

My dream house is a villa which lies on the coast. There are two yards in the villa. The front yard is a garden with many beautiful flowers an plants for the four seasons. There is a swimming pool in the back yard, as my family are fond of swimming. On the first floor, there is a big hall when you enter the gate. On the right of the hall is a sitting room, there we can relax, have a rest, watch TV and enjoy entertainments.

On the left there is a puter room and a study belonging to me. On the second floor, there are six bedrooms with bathrooms. The villa will be equipped with the modern equipment, such as security alarms controlled by puters, vision phones, lifts an automatic doors. Well, that is my dream house.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二十五篇

As we all know, most of us middle school students feel somehow nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. There is no doubt that exams are important to us students, but it’s more important to have a right attitude towards them. As a matter of fact, exams are no more than a means of evaluating, therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results. Only studying hard very day and making good preparations for exams can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.

我们都知道，大多数的中学生都会感到紧张，每当我们参加一个重要的考试。毫无疑问，考试对我们学生来说很重要，但是对他们正确的态度更重要。事实上，考试不仅仅是一种评价手段，因此，不必过于担心结果。只有努力学习，做好考试的准备，才能避免了考试的压力。

We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise before exams. Besides, having enough sleep can make us full of energy and make it possible for us to perform well in the exam, A hot bath or a cup of hot milk before going to bed night help you have a sound sleep.

在考试前，我们最好出去散步或做一些户外运动。此外，充足的睡眠能使我们充分的精力，使我们有可能表现良好，在考试中，一个热水澡或一杯热牛奶睡觉前的晚上，有助于你有一个健全的睡眠。

So, my suggestion is: don’t worry about exams, try to relax yourself.

所以，我的建议是：不要担心考试，尽量放松自己。

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二十六篇

As is often read in the newspaper reports, wild life especially the rare species is threatened with extinction. Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for a big profit., which, of course, results in a sharp decrease in the number of animals. So it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them.

First of all, it's quite necessary for every citizen to realize the importance of animal protection. Only by knowing its importance can people develop a sense of responsibility. People will surely take it for granted to have the duty to prevent any killing of wild animals. So a national publicity campaign should be launched, thus giving animals a good living environment. In addition, the government should pass some laws to forbid any hunting of rare animals. We don't expect anything harmful to wild life to happen again.

If everyone is involved in the protection of wild life, we're sure man will be a good friend of animals rather than their enemy.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二十七篇

A new park for children has been set up to welcome' the coming of Children's Day,

The park is in the south of our city, covering an area of 500 mu. Entering the park you can see statues of children in different races, hand in hand,which is the symbol of the world peace. In the middle is a lake, around Which are all kinds of trees and flowers. There are many boats on the take and some children are boating happily, To the south of the lake is a hill with a lot of monkeys on it. The Children's Pa]ace lies to the east, in which all kinds of exhibitions are on show. To the west of the lake is a place for children to play, where there are many recreational facilities.

I'm sure the children in our city will have a happy festival this year

【译文】

一个新的儿童公园已经成立，欢迎'的儿童节的到来，

该公园是在我们的城市南部，占地500亩。走进公园，你可以看到来自不同种族的儿童雕像，手挽着手，这是世界和平的象征。在中间有一个湖，周围是各种树木和花卉。上有需要，有些孩子愉快地划船，要在湖的南方许多船只是一个有很多山猴子上。儿童的王牌在于东部，其中各种展览展出的。为了在湖的西面是儿童玩的地方，那里有许多娱乐设施。

我敢肯定，在我们城市的孩子有一个快乐的节日!

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二十八篇

In recent years, the forests have been getting smaller and smaller for more and more people cut down trees for money. As trees grow naturally, people don't need to invest anything on them. But cutting down trees has destroyed our nature. We have already seen the bad consequence.

For example, we always suffer from the flood and drought disaster; many animals are facing the danger of dying out, because their habitats have been destroyed; deserts are expanding, and sandstorms are emerging. Our environment has been changed from bad to worse due to the reduction of forests. Thus, the government should appeal people that cutting down trees breaks the balance of our nature. Those who continue to cut down trees should be punished severely.

高考英语作文阅卷版范文 第二十九篇

Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her.

With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done.

I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.