雅思范文解析(篇一)

  To commence, the freedom and flexibility that cars and motorcycles offer should be responsible for such reliance. As mass transit operates according to a set schedule and may even be unavailable in some remote areas, passengers have to either wait a long time at the station or transfer to another transit, leading to a longer travelling distance and more waiting time. By stark contrast, automobiles allow commuters to travel whenever and wherever they want based on their own timetable. Besides, cars also have an edge over public transit in terms of comfort. Compared with taking public transportation, by which travellers have to crowd into a bus or a metro, tolerating the cramped and smelly carriage, commuting by car allows people to enjoy the cosy environment offered by the equipped audio, air conditioning and seats.

  解析

  原因1：灵活性;原因2：舒适度

   mass transit n. 公共交通

   commuter n. 通勤者

   have an edge over sb. 比某人有优势

   comfort n.[U] 舒适度

   tolerate vt. 忍受

   cramped adj. 〔因空间不够而〕受限制的，拥挤的

   carriage n.[C] (火车的)车厢

  Solutions

  Considering the slower traffic flow, some schemes should be prioritised. Of all the measures, the best one is to provide the public with more options of transport that are accessible, comfortable, punctual and affordable. To this end, the government can better the public transit, such as opening more metro lines, optimising the schedule of buses and undergrounds, and upgrading the facilities of the stations and carriages. Additionally, more shared bicycles can be offered to motivate commuters who travel within a short distance, and to guarantee the safety of cyclists, roads should be redesigned with bicycle lanes added. Given more convenient alternatives, citizens are more likely to desert the current travelling mode, thus alleviating the tension of heavy traffic.

  解析

  解决方法：提供更多通勤选择：完善公共交通(长途)+提供自行车(短途)

   punctual adj. 准时的

   better vt. 完善

   optimise vt. 优化

   upgrade vt. 升级

   desert vt. 放弃

  Conclusion

  To recapitulate, since possible factors and feasible remedies have been enumerated, the issue of traffic congestion can hopefully be addressed with the aforementioned policies implemented.

  解析

  重申观点

   recapitulate v. 总结

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雅思范文解析(篇二)

Major cities worldwide are experiencing rapid growth which can cause many problems. This essay will discuss the problems specific to young people living in cities undergoing exponential growth, and suggest some solutions.

世界主要城市正在经历快速增长，这可能会导致许多问题。本文将讨论生活在指数增长城市中的年轻人所面临的问题，并提出一些解决方案。

rapid growth 迅猛增长

exponential growth 按指数增长

While a growing city creates a booming job market, young people are adversely affected by their lack of experience in the employment sector and the perception that youth equates to immaturity and incompetence. Furthermore, for many youth the ability to successfully gain employment is hindered by the sheer number of applicants seeking work. Moreover, a rapidly growing city also tends to incur a higher cost of living. Even for those able to successfully find work, their income is likely to be much lower than those with work experience. Their salaries may be insufficient in meeting the costs of living, and this kind of borderline poverty can exacerbate other symptoms of overpopulation, such as depression and stress.

虽然一个不断发展的城市创造了一个蓬勃发展的就业市场，但年轻人在就业领域缺乏经验，认为年轻人等同于不成熟和无能，这对他们产生了不利影响。此外，对于许多年轻人来说，成功就业的能力因求职者人数过多而受到阻碍。此外，一个快速发展的城市也会带来更高的生活成本。即使是那些能够成功找到工作的人，他们的收入也可能远低于那些有工作经验的人。他们的工资可能不足以支付生活费用，而这种边缘贫困会加剧其他人口过剩症状，如抑郁症和压力。

To alleviate such problems, governments can work with employers to enable them to hire younger staff. This can be done through incentives such as subsidies for these employers, and apprenticeships, where young people can learn and earn while on the job. Not only does this mean young people gain experience, making them more employable in the future, their employers also benefit from the fresh perspectives and natural affinity for tech that younger people bring. In turn, this creates further job opportunities for young people, where they are able to work in higher-paying jobs, thus alleviating financial burdens.

为了缓解这些问题，政府可以与雇主合作，让他们能够雇用更年轻的员工。这可以通过对这些雇主的补贴和学徒制等激励措施来实现，年轻人可以在工作中学习和挣钱。这不仅意味着年轻人获得了经验，使他们在未来更具就业能力，他们的雇主还受益于年轻人带来的新鲜视角和对技术的天然亲和力。反过来，这又为年轻人创造了更多的就业机会，使他们能够从事高薪工作，从而减轻了经济负担。

benefit from 从…中获益

It is important that governments recognise the problems young people face in growing cities, and equally, the value young people can bring to their cities. By creating opportunities and meaningful employment for young people, they, their employers, and society at large all benefit.

政府必须认识到年轻人在不断发展的城市中所面临的问题，同样，也要认识到年轻人能够为城市带来的价值。通过为年轻人创造机会和有意义的就业，他们、他们的雇主和整个社会都能受益。

bring to 把…带给

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雅思范文解析(篇三)

Introduction

Behind children’s upbringing usually lie sundry factors, of which, from my perspective, the external impacts rather than parental ones make a larger difference.

解析：教育类老题重现，探讨教育者谁的影响更大。开头开门见山。

upbringing n. 教养，培养

Concession + Refutation

As an inseparable part in children’s life, the family does play a crucial role in their growth. This is mainly because children, especially when they are at an early age, are usually accompanied by their parents, whose personal examples and didactic manners will impact kids’ conduct. In other words, such is the instinct that young kids are inclined to imitate what their parents do, which naturally follows that children, to some extent, seem to be the miniatures to mirror what kinds of people their parents are.// However, does the family have the greatest influence? The answer may be “no”. Such impacts decay as children grow older, since they are less likely to be parasitic on the family as they used to be.

解析：让步：家庭的影响诚然对孩子也有比较大的影响，毕竟言传身教，但是这种影响会随着孩子年龄增长而逐渐削弱。

didactic adj. 爱说教的

miniature n. 缩影

mirror vt. 反映，反射

decay vi. （力量、影响等）衰退，减少

be parasitic on 寄生于

Argument

As a matter of fact, information derived from the outside world matters more. <总分展开> For starters, compared with parents, who themselves may not be well-educated, authoritative teachers tend to exert more influences on children’s nurturing, whether academically or morally. To illustrate, in class, knowledgeable teachers assume their inescapable responsibilities by imparting certain knowledge and skills into children’s mind; after class, it is teachers that figure out and correct students’ disciplinary problems when observing how children interact with their classmates.// Besides, with the cutting-edge technologies progressing, children are bombarded with mountains of information through digital gadgets on hand, which gradually facilitates them to foster their own values, with guardians who are often wrapped up in their work being less influential.

解析：细化外界因素，对比论证家长的影响如何减少：1.学校教育：老师无论在学术上还是道德上，都对孩子有影响，且相比较自己没有受过良好教育的家长更具权威性；2. 科技发展，孩子的信息渠道增多，而家长忙于工作，无法一直严格监管。

be wrapped up in sth. 把全部精力放在某事上（以至于没有时间关心其他事）

Conclusion

In light of the above, it is crystal-clear that the impacts from the family are overshadowed when set against those from outside the home.

解析：重申观点

雅思范文解析(篇四)

Describe a shop that just opened in your hometown

You should say:

Where the shop is

When it opened

What it sells

and how you feel about the shop

解析：

话题要求描述家乡新开的一个商店，你可以具体描述一下它是一个什么样的商店，比如文具店、玩具店、时装店、时尚精品买手店等等。描述时可以从它的装修特色、吸引的人群、自己是否喜欢这家店等方面展开。

Talking about the shop that just opened, the first thing came to me is a select shop opened last month in my hometown. It is located in the downtown business area where there are many fancy shopping malls and high-grade office buildings. Plenty of people pass by it everyday. In the shop, there are many luxury goods from different famous brands like Coach, Calvin Klein, Michael Kors etc, and there are also many goods with no names but good quality. There are many categories of goods like glasses, purses, bags and clothes, and all these goods are selected by the owner from different places. You can always find something you like there. So it is quite popular among white-collars who work in that area.

To me, this place is great. Its decoration is quite delicate and exotic. It has large French windows and the shop is divided into different exhibition parts. All goods are exhibited orderly on the shelf. Besides, I like the owner of the shop. She is a chic young lady who has a good taste. She has traveled to many different places in the world and selected all the goods by herself. She likes to share her travel experiences and understanding of fashion with her customers. So she is like a friend to me.

雅思范文解析(篇五)

上题：

Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think they should focus on academic study only. 

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

-- 题目分析 --

题目分析：

Type: Discuss & Opinion (Agree with both 'in equal measure')

Body 1: Work focus

Body 2: Academic focus 

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -

-- Essay Analysis 范文解析 --

-- (1) Introduction --

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question:

Some people believe that = There are those that think

university education = universities

focus on = concentrateon

the skills of employment for the future = preparing students for the labor market

they = these institutions

only = exclusively

universities = post-secondary academic institutes

Standard Phrase for the “Discuss and Opinion” type of essay:

There are those that think

; whereas, others feel

In my opinion, I believe

In equal measure 同等的；同样的

Words showing Cohesion (C&C):

; whereas

-- (2) Body 1 --

Aspects that must be referred to:

university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future

Standard IELTS essay phrase:

One of the primary purposes of ... is to

This means

雅思范文解析(篇六)

  For one thing, good education does have its edges. To start with, it enables students to lay a firm theoretical foundation for academic development. When receiving formal schooling, students can not only polish their knowledge and sharpen their wits but also cultivate the vital ability to carry out empirical research, both of which are the bases of obtaining research findings. Besides, good education also helps to build up sound personal qualities conducive to academic achievements. No one comes into fame overnight. Without characters of resilience and diligence, students who fail to withstand the frustration brought by repeated failure are less likely to win the honourable titles with flying colours.// However, as those theories are so abstract and obscure, students with ordinary learnability may thus lag behind.

  解析

  教育的重要性：(1)学术层面：打磨知识，培养学术能力;(2)性格层面：韧性、毅力等塑造

  polish vt. 打磨;润色

  empirical adj. 以科学实验[经验]为依据的

  research findings n. 科研成果

  conducive to adj. 对…有用的

  come into fame overnight 一夜成名

  resilience n.[U] 韧劲

  diligence n.[U] 勤勉

  with flying colours 成功地

  lag behind vi. 落后

  Body 2

  For another, individual ability also matters a great deal. To illustrate, as such honorary titles are few and far between and thus hard to come by, the competition for the few positions available each year is extremely intensegiven the sea of applicants applying. Therefore, those who have a facility for academics tend to have a flying start in the rat race, as it is easier for them to understand those obscure theories and sophisticated experiment steps. // However, it is a commonplace that some with a faculty for academics finally fail to stand out in academia owing to either the lack of formal schooling or the absence of character nurturing.

  解析

  个人能力的重要性：天赋是基础

  few and far between adj. 少之又少

  come by v. 获得

  intense adj. 激烈的

  given prep. 考虑到

  facility n.[C] 天赋

  a flying start n. 好的开始

  obscure adj. 晦涩难懂的

  sophisticated adj. 精密的

  faculty n.[C] 天赋

  Conclusion

  In a nutshell, well-educated people with scholastic aptitude have the most potential to achieve academic success.

  解析

  重申观点

  scholastic adj. 学术的

  aptitude n.[C] 天赋

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雅思范文解析(篇七)

Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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雅思范文解析(篇八)

Some people think the government should ban dangerous sports and some others think it is a freedom to choose the activities we want to. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 有人认为政府应该限制危险性的运动，有人认为人人有权利选择自己喜爱的运动。讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。

【原创范文】：

{首段｝：背景介绍 + 作家立场

Such is human nature to explore the unknown. A trend is that numerous people are keen on embarking on challenging sports events such as mountain biking, rock climbing or scuba diving , especially among those dynamic young adults. My stand is that we should pursue excitement and sense of refreshment in the dull routine daily life. After all, life without risk is no life at all.

【解析】：Life without risk is no life at all 人生没有冒险就不能称其为人生。

{二段｝：正方观点的展开：

Granted, many virtues could be gained via undertaking those risky sports activities. Primarily, the extreme adventures can be taken as an effective way to help players relieve their pressure and vent their negative emotions, for the occupied modern life often deprives one’s right of seeking relaxation. The popularity of bungee jumping accounts for risky sports’ significant function in terms of reducing stress. Imaginably, one’s working efficiency could be highly enhanced after doing his or her favorite sports events. Moreover, not only can the extreme adventures exert wholesome impacts , but it also could foster one’s skills, chasten one’s tenacity and forge one’s frustration toleration. Some extreme adventures, such as rock climbing and surfing, requires high techniques or much stamina . Ultimately, the extreme adventures could be developed into tempting tourism items, which could generate immense economic value.

【解析】：

extreme adventures can be taken as an effective way to help players relieve their pressure and vent their negative emotions. 极限运动是一种很好的方式去帮助运动者缓解压力，释放不良情绪。

2. It also could foster one’s skills, chasten one’s tenacity and forge one’s frustration toleration. 极限运动同意可以培养人的技能，磨练人的坚韧，铸造人的挫折忍受能力。

{三段｝：反方观点的展开：

Nonetheless, problems invariably ensue. One possible downside is that some perilous sports activities might become the roots of injuries and agonies. There exist high levels of injuries, which sometimes disables players and even ruins their lives. Another adverse aspect is that some intense extreme sports are merely an excuse for violence. To illustrate, boxing involves excessive violence and bloody contents so that it adversely influences adolescent Television viewers, namely, it might arouse their sadistic impulses.

【解析】：

1. Some intense extreme sports are merely an excuse for violence. 一些极限运动也许会成为暴力的借口。

2. It might arouse their sadistic impulses. 极限运动也许会诱发一个人施虐的冲动。

{尾段｝：再次亮明观点 + 提出建议

Personally, I encourage the extreme adventures, for it symbolizes freedom, so it is citizens’ elementary right to opt for his or her favorite sports activities. Attempts should be made to ensure risky sports events are thrilling, amusing and profit-making, however, to prevent accidents and injuries is highly recommended(328)

【解析】：

Attempts should be made to ensure risky sports events are thrilling, amusing and profit-making. 我们应该做出努力去保证极限运动是刺激的、有趣的、盈利的。

雅思范文解析(篇九)

Some people think technological development can reduce crime, while others think it actually encourages crime.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

高分范文及解析

01

02

(让步)It must be conceded(承认)that in many ways technology aids in crime prevention and forensics(法医学;辩论术). Security systems such as surveillance cameras and financial tracking databases discourage would-be criminals from breaking the law, as they are aware of the ease with which they may be tracked, caught, and prosecuted(起诉). Also, new breakthroughs in DNA testing and computer simulations have made it easier to reconstruct crime scenes and identify criminals. (转折)However, the issue with this argument is that not all criminals are dissuaded(劝阻) by the knowledge of these systems, and while they do increase the likelihood of catching people who have committed crimes, these technological improvements do not necessarily prevent the crimes themselves from occurring.

03

04

雅思范文解析(篇十)

No,I don’t think is true that some expensive products often feature premium manufacturers can’t fully guarantee the functions of those products can suit the needs of all ’s cost-effective to get a cheaper counterpart.

不，我不这样认为。一些价格高的产品的确质量很不错，但是生产商不能绝对保证他们的产品功能就符合所有消费者的需求。有的时候，买个便宜货性价比更高。

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雅思范文解析(篇十一)

As a matter of fact, such practice can bring more benefits in various aspects, especially in economic growth. For one thing, as the newly-tapped energy can directly alleviate the energy shortage, which will to some extent guarantee a country’s industrialisation a promising prospect, both economic and technology development will be spurred, offering better prerequisites to resolving environment crisis by exploring new alternatives. In contrast, the lack of feasible approaches to energy scarcity will undoubtedly bring both economic growth and technology advancement to a standstill.// For another, the locals in remote areas can also be benefitted, as such a policy must provide them with more job opportunities, by which their life quality will be bettered.

反驳：(1)开发能源 → 满足能有需求 → 保证经济发展 → 有资金探索新能源替换，长远看，某种程度上弥补之前可能带来的环境破破坏;(2)偏远地区更多工作机会

alleviate vt. 缓解

spur vt. 刺激;促进

prerequisite n. 先决条件

bring sth. to a standstill静止(状态); 停顿，停滞

Conclusion

In the light of the above, the final verdict is quite crystal-clear. Environment problems as such a trend may cause, the disadvantages of tapping untouched regions for energy pale into insignificance when set against the advantages.

重申观点

verdict n. 意见;结论

pale into insignificance 使显得不那么重要;使相形见绌

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雅思范文解析(篇十二)

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雅思范文解析(篇十三)

  Moreover, the effect of government action is much more extensive, as it can utilise its legislative and political power with which other parties are not equipped. Corresponding policies can only be issued by the administration to target diverse circumstances, such as imposing additional tax upon residents owning several houses and setting public rental housing for low or medium income citizens.

  解析

  进一步论证：政府的影响更为广泛，且具有其他方不具备的立法权，还能根据不同的情况出台相对应的政策，比如：多房征税、公租房等。

  extensive adj. 广泛的

  target vt. 以…为目标

  public rental housing n. 公租房

  Conclusion

  In light of the above, only the government can tackle the housing shortage despite the minor efforts of other parties.

  解析

  重申观点

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