邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,包含以下几个方面:   

1. 邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点;   

2. 与该活动有关的注意事项;  

3. 期待对方接受邀请,并可表示感谢。   

语言注意点:

邀请信叙事一定要清楚、明白。如写给朋友,可选用活泼、真诚的言辞;如写给长辈、上级、名人等,则语言应.正式、礼貌。

英文书信的基本格式:

(1)称呼:常用Dear…开头,顶格起写, 后用逗号。

(2)正文:主体部分。

(3)结束语:结尾客套话,末尾用逗号 常用Yours/Sincerely yours/Love。

(4)签名:在结束语下面。

Dear ____________,

  There will be a ____________(内容)at/in ____________(地点)on ____________(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.

  The occasion will start at ____________(具体时间). This will be followed by a ____________(进一步的安排). At around ____________(时间), ____________(另一个安排).

  I really hope you can make it. RSVP before ____________(通知你的最后期限).

  Yours sincerely,

  XXX

我们以(2020·山东烟台市·中考真题)进行感知:   

假设你是李华,你校将要举办“劳动实践周”活动。请根据以下提示,给你的英国朋友Scott写一封信,邀请他参加。

内容包括

1.活动时间:……

2.活动内容:校园环境美化、实践基地劳动、劳动主题演讲……

3.活动意义:……

要求

1.100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数);

2.包括所有提示要点,并适当补充,语句通顺,意思连贯;

3.信中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。

参考词汇∶Labour Practice Week 劳动实践周;practice base实践基地

Dear Scott,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

例文:

Dear Scott,

How's it going? I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news. Our school will have a Labour Practice Week. Welcome you to join it.

This activity lasts from September 1st to 7th. During the week, we'll clean up our campus completely to make our school more beautiful. What's more, we can work in the practice base. It must be really interesting. We'll learn to do lots of things, for example, doing some cooking, driving a car, even shooting. I can't wait to take part in it! Don't forget to prepare a talk, everyone has to give a talk about the activity at last. We'll learn a lot and open our mind in it.

We must have a good time together there!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读:该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍劳动实践周活动的时间、活动内容及意义。

2.写作指导:本文用第一人称来写作,时态采用一般将来时为主,介绍活动的具体内容叙述完整,条理清晰。

【邀请函写作必备词汇】   

邀请 invite/ invitation                                  做演讲 make/deliver a speech   

评委 judge                                                    感激 appreciate (vi. )/ be grateful   

荣幸 honor (v./n.)                                             欢迎 welcome (v./n./adj.)   

接受邀请 accept sb’s invitation                        代表学校 on behalf of our school   

我想邀请你做…… I’d like to invite you to...       

举办活动的目的是…… The purpose of the activity is to...   

活动的细节有…… Here are some details about the activity...   

如果……我将感到荣幸。 It’s my honor if...   

欢迎你参加。 You are welcome to...   

【邀请函写作必备句型】   

开头句 

1. 非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。   

  It’s my pleasure /a great honor for me to invite you to join us.

2. 我写信是想邀请你……

  I’m writing to invite you to... 

3. 我想知道我/我们是否有幸邀请你参加派对。   

  I wonder if I /we have the honor to invite you to the party.

4. 我们将……我们想邀请你……

  We are ...we’d like to invite you to...

中间句 

1. ……的细节如下。

  The following are some details about.../Here are some details about.../Some details about...are as follows. 

2. 首先,我们将……,此外,将会有许多活动,例如……这将……

  To begin with, we will...Besides, there will be a number of/various activities such as...which will... 

3. This will be followed by...

  这之后将会有……

4. 如果你……(时间)没有其他安排,能否赏脸来……?  

  If you have no other plans..., will you do us a favor of coming to...?

结尾句 

1. 我真心希望你方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。   

  I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient to you.

2. 如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加,我们/我将不胜感激。   

  We/I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early / earliest convenience. 

3. 请尽快通知我您是否能来。   

  Please keep me informed as soon as possible of whether you are able to come or not. 

4. 我们期待着您的到来。   

  We are looking forward to/longing for your coming.



(一)(2020·内蒙古乌海市·中考真题)

假定你是李华,你校将举办校园音乐节(music festival)。请给你的好友Alan写一封电子邮件,介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动,并邀请他与你一起参加此次音乐节。邮件内容包括:

Time

10 a.m. next Sunday

Place

school sports field

Activities for students

sell tickets, work at food stands… (all of the money will go to charity)

play the violin, piano…

sing songs, dance to music…

注意:

l. 词数90左右,开头和结尾己经写好,不计入总词数;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。

参考词汇:摊位  stand    慈善charity

Dear Alan,

How is it going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

例文:

Dear Alan,

How is it going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday on the school sports field. Knowing that you are fond of music, I'm writing to invite you to join us.

The festival will start at 10: 00 am and last about two hours. Students from my school will give fantastic performances, including playing the violin, piano, guitar and so on. Besides, we can sing songs and dance to music. Meanwhile, some of my classmates will sell tickets and I will work at a food stand. All of the money will go to charity.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读:该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据内容提示介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动。

2.例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动叙述完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点:

短语:hold a music festival;are fond of;and so on;sing songs and dance to music;at a food stand; look forward to。

句型:Knowing that…现在分词作状语的句子;and表示并列的句子;that引导的宾语从句。

(二)(2020·江苏连云港市·中考真题)

2020年6月,我市西游文化嘉年华(carnival)活动全面启动。为了鼓励同学们更好地阅读与理解《西游记》,你校组织了“我是美猴王”在线才艺展示活动。假定你是李华,请用英语写一封信,邀请外籍教师Nick参与评选。内容包括:

(1)活动名称及目的;

(2)时间地点:7月20日下午6:00前,学校网站;

(3)参与方式:观看唱歌、故事讲述、短剧表演等视频作品,投票选择“最佳美猴王”;

(4)希望他……

注意:

(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出;

(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

(3)作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

(4)参考词汇:《西游记》Journey to the West   才艺展示 talent show

Dear Nick,

The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

例文:

Dear Nick,

The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started. To encourage students to better read and understand Journey to the West, our school has held an online talent show called I am the Monkey King. I’m writing to invite you to vote for us.

You’re expected to visit our school’s website before 6 p.m. on July 20. There are not only videos of songs, stories but also short plays. You can enjoy paintings and speeches as well. We’d like you to vote for the best Monkey King.

I hope you’ll like these works and learn more about Journey to the West.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。要求以李华的名义,用英语写一封信,邀请外籍教师Nick参与评选你校组织的“我是美猴王”在线才艺展示活动。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。

2.例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一、二人称。书信第一段提出了活动的名称及目的,第二段提到了活动的时间及参与方式,第三段提出了希望;文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。

3.高分亮点:

短语:encourage…to…;write to;be expected to;not only…but also…;as well;would like sb to do sth;learn more about。

句型:1. To encourage students to better read and understand Journey to the West, our school has held an online talent show called I am the Monkey King. 2. There are not only videos of songs, stories but also short plays. 3. You can enjoy paintings and speeches as well. 4. I hope you’ll like these works and learn more about Journey to the West.

(三)(2020·辽宁丹东市·中考真题)

假如你是Peter,你们班级(九年一班)准备举行毕业晚会。请写份邀请函,邀请你的好朋友Tony参加。

时间:7月23日晚上6点

地点:九年一班教室

要求:30词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。

Dear Tony,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Peter

例文:

Dear Tony,

    I am excited to write to you. There will be a graduation party next week. It will be held in the classroom of Class One Grade Nine at 6 p.m. on July 23rd.

    We all wish you to attend this party.

Peter

【详解】

1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文,文中是彼得邀请托尼来参加毕业晚会,并告诉对方晚会的时间和地点。

2.例文点评:本文采用的第一人称和第三人称,时态主要采用的是一般将来时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强,句子通顺。

3.高分亮点:

短语:be excited to do sth做某事很兴奋;write to sb给某人写信;wish sb to do sth希望某人做某事。

句子:There will be a graduation party next week句中用的是there be句型;It will be held in the classroom of Class One Grade Nine at 6 p.m. on July 23rd句中用的是一般将来时的被动语态。




(四)【2019 ?湖北省黄石市】

假如你是国际学校的学生李华,你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排,请给

Tom回封邮件,告知你的计划,并邀请他来黄石游玩。

内容包括:1. 读几本好书;

          2. 参加社会实践活动;

          3. 帮父母做家务;

          4. 和朋友一起锻炼;

          5. 邀请Tom。

注意:1. 词数80左右;

      2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

      3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息;

      4. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

参考词忙:有意义的  meaningful      经典文学作品classic literature works

          社会实践活动social practice activities

Dear Tom,

I'm very happy to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【写作思路】

本文属于材料作文,写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.

How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

(五)【2019 ?荆门市】

为弘扬中华传统文化,你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华,请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John。

要点:

1. 时间:5月16日下午2:30;

2. 地点:学校操场;

3. 内容:校长在开幕式上致辞;戏曲知识竞赛;师生戏曲表演等;

4. 感受:对传统文化有了进一步的了解……

要求:

1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;

2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;

3. 要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;

4. 词数:80—100 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。

参考词汇:戏曲 opera (n.)          开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.) 

          表演 performance ( n.)    致辞 make a speech

Dear John,

How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear John,

How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.

The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.

Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如be hold,on the playground,in the beginning,make a speech,at the opening ceremony,after that,in the end,put on,have a chance等。而we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera./ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

(六)【2019 ?四川省眉山市】

假如你是李华,打算邀请你们的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节,并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下要点,用英语给他写一封电子邮件。

要点:1. 端午节的时间(农历五月五日)、来由(纪念屈原);

2. 活动安排:学包粽子、观看龙舟赛(时间:下午两点;地点:东坡湖;赛况)。

参考词汇:农历 lunar calendar

注意:1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点,并作适当发挥;

2. 词数:80词左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数);

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。

Dear Jack,

The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. _______________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

本文属于应用文体,介绍端午节并邀请你的外教杰克来你家共度端午佳节。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

【参考范文】

Dear Jack,

The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. It’s a great honor for me to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.

Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals in China. It’s on May fifth in Chinese lunar calendar. Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.

We will make zongzi and watch the dragon boat race at 2:00 p.m. at the Dongpo lake which is not very far from my home.

If you are interested in it, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如it is a great honor for me to do sth, one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, a long history, far away from, hesitate to do以及which引导的定语从句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。


Writing 1

假如你是李华,你们班将举办一告场别初中生活的晚会,请你代表班级用英文写一封邮件,邀请你们的外教 David 前来参加。

内容要点如下:

1. 时间和地点:6 月 30 日晚上 7:00,本班教室;

2. 分享过去的幸福记忆,畅想未来的美好梦想;

3. 感恩老师关爱,感谢同学友情;

4. 同唱一首歌曲,互赠一份礼品;

5. 请补充一至两点与晚会相关的活动。

注意:1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

2. 词数:60~80;

3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;

4. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:share n. 分享 memory n. 记忆 present n. 礼物

Dear David:

I’m writing to invite you to our farewell party.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

We’re expecting your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

参考范文:

Dear David:

I’m writing to invite you to our farewell party.

The party will be at 7:00 p.m. on June 30th in our classroom. We have made a full preparation for it. During the party, first we are going to share our sweet memories in the past three years with each other. Second, we are expected to talk about our dreams about the future. Then we will give thanks to teachers who have helped us a lot. We’ll also thank our classmates for our friendship. After that we’ll sing a song together and send presents. Last but not least, students and teachers will take photos together.

We’re expecting your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读:该题目属于书信类写作,根据题目要求,承接文章开头,按照内容要求告诉收信人晚会的时间、地点、目的以及活动内容,活动内容可自行补充一点到两点,可以参考题目中给出的词汇。

2.写作指导:本文承接第一段点明来信目的;第二段,应用一般将来时介绍清楚晚会的时间、地点,分点描述活动内容安排;文章最后一段(题目已给出),期待对方到来。文章内容需要叙述完整,保证条理清晰。

Writing 2

假如你是李华,打算邀请你们的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节,并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下要点,用英语给他写一封电子邮件。

要点:1. 端午节的时间(农历五月五日)、来由(纪念屈原);

2. 活动安排:学包粽子、观看龙舟赛(时间:下午两点;地点:东坡湖;赛况)。

参考词汇:农历 lunar calendar

注意:1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点,并作适当发挥;

2. 词数:80词左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数);

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。

Dear Jack,

The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Jack,

The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. It’s a great honor for me to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.

Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals in China. It’s on May fifth in Chinese lunar calendar. Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.

We will make zongzi and watch the dragon boat race at 2:00 p.m. at the Dongpo lake which is not very far from my home.

If you are interested in it, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

本文属于应用文体,介绍端午节并邀请你的外教杰克来你家共度端午佳节。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如it is a great honor for me to do sth, one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, a long history, far away from, hesitate to do以及which引导的定语从句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

Writing 3

假如你是李华,你们学校将开展“非物质文化遗产进校园”活动,让学生体验剪纸艺术。你知道你校交换生Peter 对此很感兴趣,你打算邀请他参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动时间、地点、内容、以及需要为此做什么准备。

要求:(1)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数);

(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

(3)信中不得出现真实人名和校名。

Dear Peter,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

例文:

Dear Peter.

How is it going?

Our school is going to hold an activity for students to experience one of the nonmaterial cultures—— the art of paper cutting. I know that you are interested in it. I am writing to invite you to take part in it. It will be held in the school hall from 2:00 to 4:00 next Friday afternoon. First, we will listen to a talk about the history of paper cutting. And then we are going to learn paper-cutting. If you would like to come, you should take a notebook to take notes and some colored paper and scissors to practice it.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读:本篇材料作文要求以Li Hua的身份用电子邮件邀请交换生Peter参加学校将开展“非物质文化遗产进校园”活动,邮件内容包括告诉他活动时间、地点、内容、以及参加活动所需的东西。描述即将发生的事情,用一般将来时。

2.例文点评:本篇例文层次分明,正文部分详细地告知了活动的时间、地点、内容、以及需要准备的东西;文句简洁,内容完整连贯。

3.高分亮点:

短语:one of…;be;interested in…;take part in;look forward to等

高分句型:宾语从句;一般将来时被动语态;if引导的条件状语从句。

Writing 4

假如你是李华, 打算邀请外教Jack 来你家共度端午佳节,用英语给他写一封电子邮件。包括以下内容:

1. 佳节时间(农历(lunar calendar)五月初五)、纪念屈原;

2. 学包粽子、观看龙舟(下午两点,地点:湘江)。

注意:

1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

2. 字数90词以上,开头部分已给出,不计算在总词数内;

3. 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Dear Jack,

The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. It’s a great honor for me to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.

Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals in China. It’s on May fifth in Chinese lunar calendar. Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.

We will make zongzi and watch the dragon boat race at 2:00 p.m. on the bank of Xiangjiang River which is not very far from my home.

If you are interested in it, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读:本文属于应用文,所以首先要注意开头和结尾的书信格式。第一段发出邀请,第二段介绍端午节的时间和由来,第三段介绍活动的时间和地点,最后表达对对方回复的期待。

2.写作指导:在写作时,要注意条理清晰。这是一封邀请函,所以首先要发出邀请然后再依次介绍端午节的时间和由来,活动的时间地点。本文应该用一般现在时和一般将来时态。用一般现在时介绍的端午节的时间和由来,用将来时介绍活动时间和地点。

Writing 5

初三中考最后复习阶段,同学们要学会调节并且劳逸结合,可以积极参加一些有意义的活动来丰富自己的生活。假定你是李磊,你的朋友 Frank 想邀请你与他共度周末,请认真阅读他写给你的邮件,根据邮件内容及你的想法用英语问复。

To: Lilei@163.com

From: Frank@Email.com

Subject: Weekend Activities

Dear Li Lei,

I’m happy to hear you have finished your exam. If you aren’t busy, would you like to stay at my place this weekend?

While you’re here, the Environment Club I belong to needs some volunteers. We could either help pick up litter along the river or plant trees in a park for a few hours. Which activity would you prefer? Why?

We have to wear old clothes and boots for these kinds of activities. I have an extra pair of boots if you want to borrow them.

What else do you want to do during your stay?

Best wishes, Frank


注意: 1.词数 90 左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;

2.回复必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Dear Frank,

Thanks for your invitation for this weekend.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I am looking forward to this weekend!

All the best,

 Li Lei

Dear Frank,

Thanks for your invitation for this weekend. I am very glad to have the opportunity to participate in environmental protection activities. I have been hoping to take part in an activity to make contributions to protecting the environment.

I prefer to plant trees in the park, because trees provide not only fresh air but also protect against wind and sand. I have some old clothes, so I don’t have to use yours.I want to go to visit the old people in the nursing home, talking with them during my stay.

I am looking forward to this weekend!

All the best,

Li Lei

【详解】

1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时先表示我很高兴参加保护环境的活动;第二段介绍更喜欢在公园种树;最后我期盼这个周末。

2.例文点评:例文采用三段式;用第一、三人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时为主,介绍我喜欢在公园种树的原因,叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

3.高分亮点:

短语:participate in;take part in;make contributions to ; prefer to;protect against; look forward to。

句型:because引导的原因状语从句;so连接的并列复合句。



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